【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# M' {  X( n6 l! Z2 Z% YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: |3 T& s' ^+ J) nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 J- {# @( d& jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 }( X1 l' G0 G' g% ]3 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* s3 s/ U+ j7 H% jEntrust my love within your heart
. m0 N  g/ {8 _- n7 ]0 r1 l' zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 q" b6 `$ z/ lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 P: z  D; m" v2 q$ @" L' u+ pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# y& ~, ?# J) n3 C! F6 o- _/ ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; p' Q) k6 {$ G, [( y1 Y# ?: KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ a$ l1 p# f: `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 G" ~' Y& Z$ @4 Z. I* Q' M; SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; x, _: `5 E/ F% `! w+ R$ q- G' J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 U0 `  E5 F& d& p- V7 D0 s) ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 b. B" p: Y& _) H, ]  L8 i( t8 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- X' e7 h9 O! C' ~" I) l& m, b  B, r' N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 D' r4 o( w/ h$ V% ^( B5 W- X: v) S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 {* N0 H- Q5 @" H2 u8 ^4 p( C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ [- N+ j5 |) f  R, t. g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- Q& Y) c. p: y- o0 z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ F6 r7 D) Q" @) L8 H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) ^" y$ }. A0 X( F2 g, Z, M7 v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 C3 K; E' R: h6 [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 v1 J& E( `/ `8 p  [9 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* o! u7 b9 `& z1 [, v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- W3 @- B1 E% t0 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  {6 g6 [  X" ^; |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; b6 X  }$ o' ^, {. S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) `' q% b: K, Y* }) |2 m  L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ Q! W2 G7 v; ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ W! P- ~( ]6 T8 D2 M! }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: T4 E. f1 ~  r9 G7 K0 l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! j2 s7 m9 q) @& S% T) l2 |  w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 n: V+ g2 w) T. B- {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- ~, ^( D3 c4 {& v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 _; X" e/ s. K/ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 o0 U1 r; E' R& L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; L. Q! b1 K; F4 [4 L8 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- e1 V1 I: k+ h% ?' d/ F6 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. O7 G" i" f/ ?/ c! x7 I9 E5 @) D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' ]7 y# k$ W( [8 R; t$ p7 R3 f. w9 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' ?, x) e% g9 ~5 m$ j: S/ t<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" @1 B# P$ f" F! V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  O, G$ y2 z" T) w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

6 ?4 J* b% n* F- F2 A% \4 }8 K<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>