【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 Q/ D. p1 I& G9 k5 ~" x  ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 Y6 [" z% q3 ?/ b% {From the first moment we met,
# K' F+ ^. g+ U6 ~2 g5 U4 r* QI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 Y* ~# x. Z% Q4 i$ m" |! hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 P& o; N, \! ^: h& }9 L5 u  d7 hI would probably know how you feel
7 _4 Q5 g1 }' w2 }6 l# ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 {/ F8 |7 W6 W4 hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 K3 s9 p' ^) S+ ?% K/ E$ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( ]+ {9 E4 j3 ~0 E2 HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) W1 l  ^2 s) U  }) n$ |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& W6 U; |- P* j+ J( wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* y' @0 \* }" P& F4 e+ L1 {4 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 {5 D4 r; w5 X. r& j% o8 T5 d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; q* z1 q# @3 V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, l6 M) k; O3 k4 D: X" P3 ]: U. F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 X: q2 C# ^$ ?# _  ^. g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" d( G8 \, j, U' t. r; d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- o! L6 a. t! k( A- ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ E2 u7 s2 y0 l# f7 N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ ]( ~1 n5 ]! L: L: H  W, T# i2 ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 h: s+ ^! Q/ ]& A% P, M. y3 j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ R6 F8 }8 S! U. n/ i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 @0 s5 }. W' c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 c* B3 o/ ?4 F6 \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. {! N) \# c- U9 e0 s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 ?$ V+ R9 }) o; n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 {; V, ]( a1 w6 w( s: z( O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# B! s5 t8 k5 r& T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 Q1 \$ B4 f* J, u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 Z- {; G: j* F; y4 Q/ W  M! o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 D, ^: T1 r$ Z8 C) e' v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 _2 W/ Z+ f7 ]3 i; V+ o" B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& o; {0 P, _; T" ~  @5 M6 C( L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 E8 B/ g% a$ B  T$ d  z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) ]# B# D' v4 w8 B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* b2 H3 g/ [& t$ m  ~! z! Q% m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) a+ Q8 h% }& C" T* C2 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% f5 [# v+ W( H- k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ J0 u' s1 z. h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* S" ^; \7 C- B2 j% E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 Q/ _# l% \# G7 F1 O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% r( F& k+ e& }7 t+ N$ z& ~. e  V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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, q. ]+ l. l! r. T, T1 `<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! X) d  b# U( L8 [" }- r+ p( B) [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>