【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 A6 k$ [: _( K9 \) x我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& p% q6 g, K9 a" A1 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 Y0 z7 j1 s) Y9 f7 N9 wI already loved you with all my heart
) Y3 S3 [' y( I7 RWe meet and talk everyday,
5 a$ T3 k# m3 ?4 UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* L4 A* T, |3 r- }$ ~+ g6 e7 {I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# u" ~, B9 @1 F5 [; [: Q/ WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' P' E. _& m! X( PIf today isn’t too late,
! A% g/ [$ T1 S* E& \+ m  }. mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' u& Y' o. I8 Y8 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ a; y1 C% Q( `+ ~  `' qEntrust my love within your heart
% z, Y) N0 v* n8 n- B3 C/ }7 F7 X! WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ h2 e+ \6 }* [3 Z( X9 iBut I never did
8 A$ B9 U0 M  s3 J8 V7 P7 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% U5 n3 q! h" r' q& ]' [% jEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ y5 A  b7 i( e; LEntrust my love within your heart

1 a! c/ G! v$ B, O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 P0 I/ e9 V2 B6 d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- t: M. ^* ?5 ]' I1 {. I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 l! k& T, b( S9 B# s. q9 m5 g" U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 U8 J  m+ Z3 v8 \# y1 A$ v6 ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ H8 O2 m  n; p& H5 R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 d. h. e4 S9 j8 [2 L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# t! x3 x& B1 ?5 N+ E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: `1 L# a& ?- J( e6 D( S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& s7 l6 j' T+ U3 s. L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ ?" e/ X/ ^1 \% U1 |) x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 c: p. T8 m9 |% X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" \9 A, n) E. J! f. o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 {. Y3 N1 b2 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 O5 M, c" P8 S/ C$ _2 ^* |<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ ]* Z- Z6 A/ d& n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* ^3 j3 M! T) R/ t( f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 L/ r/ _  c' l$ p1 \  |% V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 _( c! E; v3 y/ ]& m6 u, y7 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 d0 m6 {4 V; M6 X8 o( k/ G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* {" m& c- ~! b  Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 U5 I  m6 K* E1 t% e9 d5 Z4 g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x4 u7 P7 L3 @" L6 u% b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( q3 ?5 o- j2 F<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ p0 u7 Y" o" B+ l2 c: n3 f2 n; w<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. p% o& u* x7 o$ H: l  g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- `& G- s( j2 S# v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" ~, o) c5 X% m% }) ]" w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" ^# ?- w, n, l8 b+ {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ B1 N* ]8 b1 [% U5 I2 q1 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  J) w5 ~! E0 b( }$ E" h, O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( z$ r) X, v+ m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! f: o. S& ~: k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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# M6 `" L& i# v7 S( v! g5 e0 Z6 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 a4 @- a7 \0 X' x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>