【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 d- B/ F: r% \/ X) t+ s我另将歌词附在此。
3 y. P6 d5 W1 \) P/ ^0 tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% E) C$ K5 V6 [. x+ b- }* f3 F  dThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( {+ T# `+ o9 R/ Y" T  R: iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 \! I+ `% {8 b" sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- z' e) S( {" I+ ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& w4 T- q/ n5 d6 ?. PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- `& x* W  G" Z- [& @) [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 g, T8 i- v' R' U2 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 M" w5 e8 y; {Why is it so difficult to express?
0 O7 P% d6 E" i7 s& C# E- yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 H5 u0 X1 w5 H9 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ T" W4 |8 F8 ?- f9 M1 jIf today isn’t too late,
( K: x$ C* z) |8 j, o5 P. o3 SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% S2 B1 t# @4 R6 t6 fCan I entrust it to you?
! |- Q. |  K; XEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% }7 d/ S1 e; A  L. A) K- F* B$ w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 t' Y" q  X: @4 k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 M* |) ^; a" P6 t9 Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 h# H. u( w1 r3 ^0 e9 R' \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 p4 Q  P" e& ^6 I0 V$ H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 |; A$ t; X( p# w4 z1 `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 c; z  j0 H, \& {, i  Q# O1 S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. u+ l7 a( s! |7 S& G- m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 i# {# \9 D( r) f- P0 {" Z* d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ M0 |5 s( C1 D8 N6 d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 h  m) T- f8 s& @0 x7 b& r9 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' j' n+ O# J" P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ D( Z, ?0 U# r# X% S" W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) c5 [; ~4 l, ~* n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: \" \! B; Y* c  S$ K) }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 R6 ~, G8 E6 C% ^" T) g, V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 _4 i# l6 j) J5 v! l% p5 h5 R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 P! a% P& `! {( [7 ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# D: l  F0 n$ t; l; \2 _) H# K2 ~6 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 s. r7 R' B9 ^2 B) G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 U% {: U6 `' C% w: a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# E/ Q1 ^% n+ E% P5 m, V% \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 i# }3 t. n( Q+ m/ q0 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: b- t$ Q# q; M5 C, w. G# a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 N& i& @, V$ Y  F8 J& s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' Z1 m& e" y- Q! }  o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 [  z$ A7 S: T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 O  I$ `  B! L0 L9 X0 Z9 S) D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' X  E; Q2 }& C- {+ x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 e- k5 W1 J. {" `# _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>