【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* p# C0 l7 L/ R/ S5 H+ ^. ]I already loved you with all my heart
8 s) H2 w3 U, j0 VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 Z( p, E" [% U' B1 H# [I would probably know how you feel
- `- G6 F) l4 f6 ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* V9 j; n4 v* _I want to confess that I love you,
. @" a# R! ^3 W  zBut I never did
! [1 ^+ d; T, n7 z6 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 D  [' \6 \2 ?6 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 _" P- }- @* S; x# o6 GCan I entrust it to you?
7 r% H- C& j2 ^' x( GEntrust my love within your heart
6 F" V5 Z; m6 g" d: L/ nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. x6 G, G6 l( a' D4 T# T1 |3 [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  g: R) k( C; K. k5 TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ m8 k  c0 x# z0 J, i) QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; f9 P; e0 E6 G* D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 t1 a) m9 a. [- u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 W# B. t. Y/ \! |! X9 ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( o" ^* Q5 I2 d$ x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  y9 E, |& @- F/ b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# |  v2 A7 S$ \; E, v4 B$ B9 x0 T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  S0 X; D" t. \% v. \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- Y+ Y. ?6 d$ v5 H0 U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( N7 S$ E, W" F9 P6 A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ I! y; s. e, b; O2 ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& H$ m- H- v3 B; s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ]- t4 o1 M+ u# v4 K7 ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( S; ~+ v$ U3 w* c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" G- X6 {2 M9 |# t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  L: O5 w0 M: i2 D/ r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 R6 K5 z2 l" D  g  L% K3 K" v8 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 P' G9 l7 Q8 M3 B4 y5 T0 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, B+ D  ^8 I0 X% i* T: B) ~( a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" _8 z: ~/ v- e9 ]& V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ C) _: W/ {' S& e* Y5 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& R5 z8 S, Y7 p3 x6 a' ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% k1 H% W+ C' ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) c# y4 w) C9 M1 O<P>但我不会 </P>
* y. J; P& d+ g) P8 i, C* ?) B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 W6 Y) ]8 B" f- c5 ~* a0 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  s+ B) X& K7 y: m/ I+ M3 _( F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* q8 `! r9 k! k# K# \* F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 u* G* h3 f( y) x/ b8 B, m1 K9 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ K8 h, W  f, W# {7 T% ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 D* T$ k# v4 ?; k+ K. R/ @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 C5 u* R1 `. ~/ v: ?0 O: j  V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

8 |3 |1 a" f# ?# A1 k2 M+ l& }<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ]& ?8 R* n( L/ v0 n( w/ S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. X$ v+ A8 x  f7 u5 n* x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>