【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" n' }) y+ m" |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% [+ J6 e5 p4 K8 z+ ]1 Z1 CWe meet and talk everyday,
0 l! y/ `$ ?8 Y; }4 ?% A( [9 mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- Q( A0 i8 P) VWhy is it so difficult to express?
  L$ C7 H5 K( ]5 Y! qI want to confess that I love you,
" K  A7 \  d7 ]" N+ l& jBut I never did
& |( o" R  A( a( s; l; ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 h2 P2 S& Z; H! e* ^- V+ k' {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ o  f! Q$ \* r7 O, ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ a) t4 B* Q' E) q4 n/ O7 g8 ]Can I entrust it to you?
: [6 F& n1 k" j- KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# D! `+ V0 A, ~: lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  F' f6 t3 s  p0 W" [& W& ~7 d# \If today isn’t too late,
  s  ~2 ^! G4 ?% X! hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' G+ P7 [9 v# c% eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- q% A# J- U1 u5 |Entrust my love within your heart

! I( Z+ e( d- G0 H" S[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; m- ]$ e+ `/ P! O/ h2 Y2 e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ }9 |3 E# Z$ x2 j& R5 h! {. B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( @- T$ S8 a; a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" U8 k7 \8 Q0 p7 u* K; n+ Z& U: X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* J, w$ `/ D3 S& r: E9 s6 ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% N, Y1 C0 u2 h# N" Q4 w<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 e3 M* u% `5 A; k1 C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" ]- _8 f: o9 I( N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! n1 N3 I% [( x( }( P' d* J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ Z  d3 o& x$ s) Q. d) ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* @7 V( A  i7 v" C' u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, h2 s& S; A" p2 h; B: a* I/ z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 u- s/ d5 G: L% S<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) ]9 k4 E! J  g+ g. e: U<P>但我不会 </P>
; P- C1 p& N" N: Y4 V( x" t% k7 B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ |6 N, Y/ i) g( c* i8 [5 O  z: D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  }; ?9 n) D' i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% \3 Y$ ^: Y& f# S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- u  m; D7 ^3 E* o2 u9 `8 _% n+ w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, @/ N: V9 n9 h/ Y% r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 v2 l5 R0 q4 O3 D( W) V0 J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ `( X$ d- a! t0 C4 O8 w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ \, P) n- o7 o, V' ~2 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>