【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- y2 E1 l7 L* q0 U; uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- n2 F# i' B& R2 I/ Q3 VFrom the first moment we met,
' P. p, h  ^5 t! }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 K* t- Z: e. g: ?, e: w. _I would probably know how you feel
7 C; v8 d$ W% F% ]6 tLove… just the word love
1 U, k) `/ S4 s2 K. S1 E1 i! @+ N( oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- a; z5 i6 P( f; h5 U3 Z2 tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 @7 w( N/ j! K0 YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; X  n) P3 n6 w/ M" m& q+ \Love… just the word love
! Y5 j3 b  e" k* fWhy is it so difficult to express?
! ^' c) c4 U0 s& a' S7 {; c8 }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 m* r, R9 ]( e0 f6 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 T  z4 M+ t, ?Entrust my love within your heart
: n# G& I3 F% y0 D, _  y! cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ S5 G# K9 [0 y0 w( o% G+ t6 R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. ]  J. j3 K! Z+ p4 k- {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" m$ x2 Z9 m, |0 @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 {7 u; u4 h7 ]% P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ }9 E0 N) T1 x7 g% D4 a& E% C+ o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 B+ h+ U# z* S0 p' \  f$ e& A  z4 J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! n7 ~" ?1 i) t5 g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( X: j% j  E% L% b% s. g+ ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" Q7 T: R# J0 f9 j1 r/ @, e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 N! \1 v8 u0 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 E1 m. C/ |6 s: e+ M1 b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 s- @9 e0 T; m" S2 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( e/ q' @+ N$ Y2 `" O, ~0 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, F, r: }% j0 ~4 p# t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' M' g6 B" w' M( K6 @  o5 h- e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 Q. @$ w$ P7 H5 T# F6 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 U0 a( a9 h. A5 h2 d2 x$ Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, @% _" ^, c' g" P+ ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 ~; W- i, [% }& y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 L, S  d7 F& s) S; ]1 p; e' d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ ~0 o: L, o/ _: q! A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' e  o# `2 H$ U2 d8 {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ W8 q1 D7 }% z) c* U, Z9 c& X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; u7 ?" x5 L! ~, X<P>But I never did </P>
5 S7 B0 ]) B& g. R<P>但我不会 </P>
* }9 {9 `" A0 X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* @0 \0 t$ M+ |0 s) ?+ P$ @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ e) ^5 }$ u6 Z9 d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 L& a7 O; ?1 V+ M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# _' f. v' [; l! R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, N6 K& J& Q" i+ X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 ^+ w% l4 D; c8 K" C- y& \. l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 [, D& p' s( H) U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 O' _- N" c+ ^# |+ A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, N3 `; @) M, C/ X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>