【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 r7 `3 ~2 c% B# B. f9 W% }( y# t" ^1 }. w我另将歌词附在此。
) o2 O! g1 S8 i+ S8 XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! z" q) v$ @; D) RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 o/ o; i+ W3 D* vWe meet and talk everyday,
- h  ^3 V+ N4 e1 |. u. BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! J! A7 E! r* F$ A8 IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 H3 E( i* m4 e8 ?/ s" v! s6 `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& H" M: C0 ~6 h: U6 J3 T; i( KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& m8 G  ^5 Q, X0 Z( C1 `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ M, p  u# l% C, KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 w; k( G9 y/ q) zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 Y, C9 C8 T$ VI want to confess that I love you,
6 [& I+ T+ d0 a9 WBut I never did
4 j: I4 Q. a. H6 c2 I0 }) u5 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 y: T; I; K( x1 \/ DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' i7 l; m( P- B2 X$ hCan I entrust it to you?
3 `# q) x9 l3 Z; u1 P9 ?5 QEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 f- Y9 [* D# Y% n0 g( P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 B% Q" _( Q- O  i1 R$ p: A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ x9 f! T) Q* b+ S: D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, s" C$ Y7 L! o7 _% ?7 U$ o6 `8 b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( B3 c& [' z  V" O# ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' H+ _4 f9 e5 H* k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& J! z2 L8 J( Y5 \" t* J3 j. y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' d+ m: e9 i' D$ G! T' v( s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 B2 ]# P1 q. |) |2 I2 j# m$ E  s, Y9 _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 U4 A; \" s8 Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ }5 O8 x3 \! E4 O; M0 N: j5 U# A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 A+ J- U# D0 z" R9 V, B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" U7 X, b- C7 K( q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( D  c9 a# i7 q. m7 i; Y6 E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% w  }0 \% E' v' ?! F& J; u6 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 E0 L6 R5 K7 @/ I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 `% \) g3 P) [* z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  j4 w4 S+ o" C; [+ h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) T( e- f) {7 C- f8 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 _% v* z9 E, \0 p4 e" ]<P>But I never did </P>
" y: {7 \1 D6 x* ?5 c<P>但我不会 </P>
3 e3 D. D' x" \+ j6 n. H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 C6 P+ g) q0 D- S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" D' h/ p$ r# U7 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' C. T  ?* S$ s, u' Q! d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- Z  m. k6 R3 i. A4 ?+ t1 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 e6 j1 \3 x! J; v& `5 o+ Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" j& y3 \' U+ R' \5 K. N$ u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ?) }2 c7 t2 m; H2 G8 a: U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 R0 B) @  M& G5 q# `5 Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>