【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& f: H7 L4 O9 _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  p* F/ K, @) E& n7 y* i4 NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 u  O! k  V' g/ n' q& fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) e0 ^- M) Q# H* C9 b5 K' GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 H5 D1 x$ Y8 M) u- G& JI would probably know how you feel
- n8 U8 ^) o" m7 e8 u1 ^8 x' M7 S- ~Love… just the word love
. q0 I" _+ [4 e+ D. kWhy is it so difficult to express?
* {. l4 Q' r9 u1 V, h) bI want to confess that I love you,
, k/ k2 H3 G: f) t; MBut I never did
5 e* i2 p7 I8 v# j) R2 MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* _, k/ T* x$ X4 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& V: q( r/ }3 v8 o" UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 W( s# f/ P* I" DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: l( g! r" Z/ l& z6 K" BI want to confess that I love you,
' Z: ^2 ]' p$ MBut I never did
5 g+ E. \8 Q6 S" X' j' R$ m! ?0 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, G! s% w: I" I0 r# AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% n' w6 e' V- T* }- XEntrust my love within your heart
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+ K2 x4 A' n$ K  U$ S. u* A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& e6 M6 U! ]0 A/ N( [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 j/ c& J3 Z% |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  f; Y/ b% @' L2 n5 g8 r" s7 d, W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ K- k+ i6 t( d% E<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 f( e9 A& o- z# }. ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* ?9 Z% d8 a! o! O; w7 {' U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( ^; V5 H7 V( \' Z% z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 a" o( r# a; {6 O# l$ q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) {: m: k- W0 l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 v: M" z8 r8 i0 d8 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! s: n* Y! p2 D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 P( T; x- D" q; u4 c# _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 k7 l/ a- Z7 b# o  Q  @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 C" H8 k! {" h" H2 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 r; t6 S2 k. y  M$ u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# ]/ B/ l, K2 m7 ]/ ]5 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: ^' Y8 t* i) C2 v) M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 N& M' h# B! S4 U% f% O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  h5 ~% R; I; o, f- N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' B/ K7 \+ O; H" y<P>但我不会 </P>
9 K: i# J# |5 R. j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 E6 U- s  U+ g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( Z6 {  I3 N: i( {# N4 b' |2 r- k. x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, N( J2 m! V7 s- {& z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 Z& m! f; `+ @- Q; ~! \# b4 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# F* o9 o+ Q+ C8 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) X/ p! }. j; o- o: T5 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ a# Q! ~8 ?; p8 |7 }7 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 H. i) ?' `1 s! w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. W! X6 s" @6 w9 Z8 m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( {$ p$ L0 O( f1 [& C<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& E) h# U- J' u7 w8 l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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