【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; `. J0 d' o0 N; D" z; O% r我另将歌词附在此。
2 @+ C" ~. j* O: Z5 m. K( UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 M# u8 X; s0 J% H4 |I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; W5 X: ]' M2 `6 _, V: z" {, f; w7 {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  Y$ W! A1 e  J: @9 z, f  p% n% ~I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  \7 G& d$ H% M  x7 uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" g9 @% g; c; T8 d- X" y! dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% Q7 w1 U4 E9 s' p3 Y1 w* mIf today isn’t too late,
/ s1 n7 D, @$ ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* L  p# c! D# E- BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' ?3 i. g6 t* ^4 H3 r, `. g) B8 ^But I never did
, q, T: F4 e5 A) D0 z, ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 ?! p7 R! S$ \5 I5 _5 z8 E! MIf today isn’t too late,
' A: o5 F3 `' @1 u; ]( U! A. P% yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 ^+ K% W$ n* W9 x8 O: oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 ]9 |8 z+ i9 o; f$ G+ j" IEntrust my love within your heart
, c/ E/ `0 h2 w% c' K( ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" h4 ?  ]+ K+ z7 w9 i3 @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* y  r* W/ W) B" Y7 R! Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, _: M3 O9 Q; F' ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 |( p$ S5 W* o2 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 X( F: t  k' Q* E# Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: ]) D8 G5 v8 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: }' Z8 S% K: t. J4 Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% P  q9 |# U$ L! n$ T9 m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. P5 o. D9 U+ q, d- p5 e" e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% v7 m8 ]/ \! V4 u  U& T& B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 F" `2 l0 q, i+ @% ?8 r8 a/ E; E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; D; H2 M8 T8 X/ s+ l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 ]7 g$ j% Y5 s7 t9 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% l7 z8 u8 N5 \7 K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 n1 M7 Q" y+ x: j9 I% Q" h. \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: Z4 o9 i/ Q& k<P>但我不会</P>
! v2 ]# o5 [- @; O% ^* i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& I. v* Y* ?' p& a$ L- x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* K) u, k: o/ u* ~, l2 |6 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& j9 P  D1 Z. t* Z! G* z9 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" ?# M3 C) W4 G( q) t" k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ @! @0 T( {3 Y6 S' l( O/ n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 ~! F1 u' x9 I, \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ K  Z6 t% F% v) H/ c4 W( Y# }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 t: J0 h7 M7 }: D; I! c' u<P>但我不会 </P>
0 p2 Z. s. B" e; {; ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ @/ ^+ H2 H+ a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& Y4 ~! `: Z5 F8 m* S4 X$ _0 M. I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% L! a: M$ F; ~, p2 [' N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; I' E" g) p. _' a/ x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! v4 q3 b; }/ j$ k1 E. y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ Y4 y1 U  b& }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ z2 @* N! U- l; L2 {: I  M( r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 _9 U% w5 f: |8 q; P$ {5 T' H0 m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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9 N2 s. c# `2 ^" g7 g/ k" X  {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>