【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( c) k6 s/ X. ]* ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 b/ f: Y4 a1 K2 G, aI already loved you with all my heart
- D, M9 B. Z6 G4 t$ Z4 _We meet and talk everyday,
, M9 F' Q% @5 ]6 M. TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; p5 U5 {" z% yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 T' z. N+ r6 y: l$ ^I would probably know how you feel
/ \' |$ \3 P3 H, |. t* Z8 CLove… just the word love
, k4 A0 P; v; _+ a* _- Z3 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ ?  r0 o. L- R6 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) l( A# W4 \3 E8 |! }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- L5 L! F1 c2 S' ?; YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 J  H) Q/ S) C: `/ \6 OEntrust my love within your heart
, S* _( F( ^# Z# s$ mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; M; S$ D- w% [6 H9 nBut I never did
% u/ q: `! W: J% n5 f6 B4 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& ^1 Y# I' `. M# @! V" b5 l7 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% l* f9 Q& U; W, z9 mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ M$ M- L' y! ?) u& T9 k  cEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 F& d# G$ g" G% u/ Y
6 w5 Q6 X( h2 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% a2 C' |5 e- j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 @" R/ U# J  G+ Z. V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' E; [) j  J+ }3 R& ~( ~% y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) _- E* O$ S6 B6 X" O( W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. K- A' Z$ L' B8 f" _" r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# i- V* v2 v2 M. P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 Q! ~$ a7 z9 F5 R0 o+ ^, i  [! J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. i9 u& o5 F) `& A/ }$ B  C* w% M5 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" A& {5 \5 C9 T* t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 p3 a! M: ?1 t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 l3 Q3 _, \/ n% x$ q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 w9 \7 \+ K: p' O3 W+ L1 \" [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 t3 Y8 U3 B0 T, k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 v3 ?$ \' \! `8 O" Q. H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! |5 g& Z4 c2 L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' k) j$ A7 Q6 l. z1 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" N: P7 J& v5 q5 b* h' E8 e! L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 y" F; ]0 c" @* {' o5 I* `; l$ W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 W% H: D; P4 J# f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 r  F$ g1 ]% N2 N. N/ n4 h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& o- H! e1 t* q- r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; J2 M$ R6 _* Y- c- Y; _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# [0 T3 W, I% S" }0 I" I0 K<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 k2 S2 I( ~' F7 F5 |+ C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& {4 ]5 V/ y0 ]. Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; i/ Q& E4 c; O" A6 }5 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" T! v: k* w' ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ g# \! d1 `2 j& G& k6 k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; c, w/ ]8 `9 x- Z' v8 I( G$ B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 g( U% |+ G& r( J; N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 g, m( Q: A& Z5 n* r" O% M3 p4 B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( |1 m/ e. c) O4 I/ D* y6 T( j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" k% e& Q& {& j) a3 b/ t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>