【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! @1 L% \4 O  b3 E! d: F. J& j我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. `; L: x6 r0 \% DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, d5 u4 i7 t7 s$ U6 k9 n) IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) \7 `! J; r' k% r6 S7 OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 i! W' `, f+ n! \: OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 [4 t3 C8 i, z/ [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# s% Y9 g1 l1 C/ I. \% Y4 aI want to confess that I love you,
5 p- k# t. f% c# S( XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 u# B0 O. J8 z5 J& o, k& |If today isn’t too late,
5 r6 `- l& p, x! w0 D/ eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* A, N  T8 Y: \& `  hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 w3 ~0 \, C  t( K  k3 FEntrust my love within your heart
- u& R- n+ K6 V* GLove… just the word love
. Q; a+ u! _, `1 ?( T  i! J; RWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 @9 l) c4 C7 [3 t& @I want to confess that I love you,
! X0 F5 D' O0 G0 V' e1 N* m* O: q. eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* D* n1 A) F0 U/ HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 n  j4 X0 {4 H# R7 K8 c8 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' ?. r& Y$ t7 }/ `$ a- RCan I entrust it to you?
: Q% F& r% i8 k8 ?Entrust my love within your heart
! U, [) p5 {  {Can I entrust it to you?
# H; l1 Y. s) d. Y, VEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 S6 U/ |7 h2 _  M7 K+ Z* P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# w' W' M9 P. h5 v$ W, Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 M; M5 s6 p' w% T0 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" D( |4 t% N* i" n4 B, ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 H3 N8 s' D: y$ i$ _- P0 D- ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- h, [9 u" E6 u9 ^+ l7 @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 j3 Y" m8 Z' A% e4 }% \0 d* {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 [' U* H: ~7 K0 p- \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, J8 z' i$ q0 d- x+ w2 ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 @* J# `/ a1 g% \$ D! N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: Z. B! N4 K" U. \3 w. l; F* H5 R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" F8 Q+ ?0 j, h: l! g2 I( a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 h+ T- _0 \" `0 D. l<P>但我不会</P>
2 ?# |# _8 _2 B+ s0 h( f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: r- \# X0 o4 B0 |: Y  C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' T; E- d- \/ S% q8 b# F/ s! ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 W* L! i1 L; j; ~7 m# O% R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 \. R: k3 G' r1 b/ V, {: c5 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  N+ r$ {* F; Z1 m" D; v6 h) F5 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 B5 k7 ?$ C/ J9 U. v" g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( o; G* `/ b5 Z# O8 L/ O+ L( g1 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) q$ |( E; U# x: Y9 R& e, [' {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 X( s- L; P: n( a+ [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 ^6 d  x) B/ Q! S4 p, `7 k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; s$ H+ z/ W' n( X/ X# D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# I9 \& F* i! R+ M3 N* j* w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 B% a. R4 @. i$ [7 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' d2 u4 {' K& }/ _; s( D1 r! ]$ p( @# h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 ^+ R+ |) q% r$ H& n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) n+ m; d) e: a; {( K/ Y5 c& _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 y2 M. E$ f7 s<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 v1 T* x; N+ J3 Y/ P. K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>