【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) m- N  e- [: z0 J; A1 z7 H, ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 d' ?: B4 r) `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 Q# }% O6 |/ d1 q8 h+ G0 ]) TFrom the first moment we met,
3 d0 h- v( m/ mI already loved you with all my heart
. ]5 N* M3 D- W0 s3 p- P! }) ?We meet and talk everyday,
- y$ l/ H2 L6 C1 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 g) h+ ~* F$ W% }4 i, j' FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; X; r8 L( P. KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 k3 k9 {- W8 Y; W0 u' YI want to confess that I love you,
( B) p" O. K, `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* G: ]; g/ s2 [7 SCan I entrust it to you?
1 H) o, _& l$ e9 g- oEntrust my love within your heart
* J) j; z3 s5 Z& A2 g5 o+ CLove… just the word love
6 s; S1 T' A+ v! i: M( gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ F8 h* L9 l, v5 [  u  vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ Y/ Q* _: T8 b& j& z! f8 `2 a+ j0 rIf today isn’t too late,
$ l% I$ o( E2 e3 D5 A- O8 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( f; k) W2 }' V/ e' D6 d) m% }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 c  T  J! q7 v, ]9 [) g) GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, _2 G% i0 v+ A9 t/ [( aEntrust my love within your heart

# m& m% v( D3 X$ y5 X0 W8 F6 _/ I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: K+ |' f% K' ~' j1 ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( Y; o- q! {& J) s4 Z1 C! D& s5 ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) _% @6 [7 Z( m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. }9 D9 e; G5 T% b0 U+ E<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ ^& T) \6 `$ Q* A/ g+ F& C; W5 x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ f$ Y2 l8 \4 w5 g6 T# r0 i" f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. P& J( c# X, ]5 c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& @( A+ @+ L! H! `3 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- [8 @. e/ F. Y" z2 i. y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( j: u/ W3 Y) l! F7 b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' Z4 E, T9 ~5 S0 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, O9 |, G" q( Y# z3 w6 z; n( M/ E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 R0 ?% s6 j. R4 B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* u# Q* S8 m9 g, Q+ k4 U+ _) v. @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  {' F; T% E; r* o7 W2 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ ~. h$ I$ N" i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 r. b* R3 d+ E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: V! q% Y$ q1 i! a* Y0 ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% ~/ t+ V$ e+ ^% ^! C<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; j, e+ H' `; o3 _& k) I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' D/ B9 i! t2 B3 B! P8 \( C, l1 n$ o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 z. l& W4 S( E. E2 }! a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 e+ n" x* G5 a& F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; I  ]! ]; n* s8 q0 |5 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- ^) }- {  ~' h8 e0 |3 T; ?; d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ ]5 \6 N) R: T+ y) Z; I9 F# v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! h  ~' g  b% u1 |9 K, }- l6 n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 S; d& c  u$ f' X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! p& X3 m  ?1 B/ W- s: j7 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! s( T* c; m" s/ r  J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 `! j; u4 s; c0 v: C1 \<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 B/ ^1 X' }" B6 G9 ?5 L: u0 t$ J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 w; d1 k3 ]/ J9 m" i; V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>