【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: t+ U4 Y) Y+ W2 s; o/ gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 X3 y, q6 o4 S- `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- `  U% X0 C; y- A" ^I would probably know how you feel
( E  n3 `2 i' Z2 c$ B8 l8 l. tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 {& t2 _( G6 I  qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& Q+ ^+ h: q  r: _. ~7 q3 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: j4 I9 L1 _: \  e2 EEntrust my love within your heart
$ [9 Q$ }4 J9 \) i7 C( O- u# o) sLove… just the word love
8 I! G9 Z, A" E6 j$ V9 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 W  f3 E9 N; U) E3 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 {& U7 X. z9 T9 Y* W! E7 z- V5 t( XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 j- K2 F3 q1 i6 H" n9 J% K; Z2 y( OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* a( t2 Z& R" Y( A7 I9 H. bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 x/ R& p" Y2 N! I" p5 h& p) j4 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, t, q& r0 _- q; u4 i# I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% V* p. h4 f$ K7 s+ ~6 K1 u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: H7 X9 Y( f( Q# f! m* i- n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( d: i/ I+ J1 Z, ]4 c9 h4 |9 }" n7 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ L/ a' T' O3 `: H- u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% i! E, j  b* ?  X" F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 T& I0 \' a; s+ V: F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ r/ _5 F0 H2 R; M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 R% r4 @5 n" \7 O1 c! d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# \9 t/ l+ \6 [3 e/ |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 F5 o! t# w$ ?- Z! M9 [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" y' h/ @; v  W7 }' k/ C7 K  p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ w8 l; `! S  {0 U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ V+ z+ |3 x4 c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 S& i) y9 K4 d) _9 c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 p. M, v! d7 i9 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& K5 a3 {9 R! Y# z2 W4 n9 |4 J  W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' [$ \  g6 f# V4 s& Z/ E8 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 s0 ]- t7 W' C5 b; w5 e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- [' e1 i  W& y6 ?/ q1 ?; ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ s- ?' h  c6 Z) l2 p5 b: S+ s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 B5 h( q5 a+ _0 y( Q4 O" a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( I' g6 j) Y* D& _/ Z4 X, Y1 H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! R& C7 N, P1 p1 d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 }0 n$ b; l4 l; C$ A: s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' k9 _8 Y+ Q/ @- U1 q- F% v& C. \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ h  P5 t/ B1 o' b" F/ C* ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 w; A$ ^, r: ]4 _  ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ {/ c- }7 R+ D+ x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 T: f, J1 w, k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 p' Z1 P$ W( }' J. j' y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 t/ Z' k% ]0 G$ ^! _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>