【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# a/ F$ d# V' t; r1 F1 [' k我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 P& a* \* ~2 v) q# _7 J5 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 g+ K  Z( x/ f* }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" D  A' u' K  q" B% p+ R) rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 p) m. J: o# G: G1 a5 yI would probably know how you feel
) N! l; z. T; B) H8 Z* ^* ^6 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 `, U, N: o' Z6 d5 QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' n  F2 A2 I) yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" ^8 t' v9 `4 o' O/ ]2 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% |# _' q* v9 e5 s! o  zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ h) t" ?% V0 |) E/ uBut I never did
' w+ a2 t" Z# t  VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: o* c' W* a2 u+ l" L% d* Q$ VIf today isn’t too late,
$ @: w2 a6 u) [8 L; AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 b5 B8 w5 D+ U9 [- Q' oCan I entrust it to you?
$ B2 K4 j2 @, ~! a. C" ~# c: F9 [Entrust my love within your heart
  `+ x) x: g7 W$ {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 B3 g( Q0 A+ v! ]0 l" E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' Z3 L- k( U: j+ K% x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 u* Q/ o. C* ]$ R* q# C1 I& v3 M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 z% ^4 W3 L% q' P: [8 K. |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  T! ^$ |! V; b3 E) E1 W, h; @7 ~  Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) T0 D/ P' ?. q* E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* k/ B3 z0 C8 q! W* A) `) r# {$ ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( @0 M2 w. W* i0 ~7 o% _) b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ p. v$ I2 \5 b! [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 w* V) w' r7 u9 d8 r2 w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 V7 Y9 {: z, t5 A, u1 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% ~* J* s9 R0 ?1 f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 n+ S* x: p# z  A/ E/ U8 F7 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( H: g* R  Y  ]+ \# E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 g% z" h+ S- T0 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" K  ~0 X2 E3 N1 p# ~' \( i& O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% X9 Q3 Q. a  G$ S0 N- A; _: z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) y: `& r* j4 K  O1 F+ q# M8 J4 @5 B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 }1 |6 I! _$ ?6 O" V4 ?4 k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& ~- E1 }! D5 V4 N8 U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' g0 I7 ]! \$ d! ^+ G<P>But I never did </P>
* {2 c( }) d8 a$ |# a<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 H8 V8 s$ W' i9 w+ X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 `' x( H5 s4 Z3 \8 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 R7 y1 j3 y  f4 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! Y3 R1 B5 c1 b2 D6 v0 u/ L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 v9 K* Z( r# a. S 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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) i* v! K+ Y6 c4 w. q; Y. a<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  p  B2 M8 L; Y& f5 Q- l; z7 w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ M8 Y* V- o6 t( u6 J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>