【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 K6 E: Y$ H  V) W2 R我另将歌词附在此。
2 ]" {6 @1 e0 \$ ^& _7 SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% O2 O6 V: T, KI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" Y0 ~, P9 ^9 C8 P" ?) TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' r* [, b) }$ _8 m1 Y/ vBut I never did
5 w! q( S/ {" o1 `+ qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 U& o' S: ^7 r- k, z# n8 gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! v5 c  b( G+ A9 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, q% \! P% n6 b& A: tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  s! s! O+ w9 ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ T* C( D( P. h+ A+ yI want to confess that I love you,
" a+ y# U. ?' R6 dBut I never did
6 j1 X" j: w- P7 }9 m0 V. z4 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 i  W9 U2 G. WIf today isn’t too late,
. e  d5 X& W) I$ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: W/ L5 h  a- i: G- v; FCan I entrust it to you?
. S3 t/ g' E0 E( z" P" XEntrust my love within your heart
4 R1 C& r3 _& U, J9 @Can I entrust it to you?
8 x6 t7 j7 `$ @/ ^' m, j: OEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! |5 G. I% F) ^/ Q7 z( l, |* R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  i4 A7 \4 x6 b9 Y& C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: C8 x8 c) \; l! z# d( ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ p, L1 y! Z- e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 y+ F+ q7 ?+ Y) _  e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ m  H; v* }* {6 \5 K; k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! \0 g* \- u$ r& K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% V5 }- U3 |# l4 w1 j# A2 X, u/ `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 S2 f5 ?3 y' R$ I<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" I! E' u5 y/ P2 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  [+ K6 M, ?& H+ B) i+ }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ {' N' V8 V7 V7 ]7 }; [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& T% h: U# Y) _+ p$ n7 X# a" O: c6 z# \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; B7 p6 V, d: Y) T* k5 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 w# d6 K$ g8 J3 `; d0 j. f# g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! d1 ?; H2 n. I2 n+ W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) P/ u( Y9 R7 ^: z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ v& M8 B! w/ Q/ [6 g4 [! v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' i' w3 z. ^; i0 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 P( m* {. w0 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# I( q  M# o9 x6 R( }! Q& Q) H6 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ f0 B: F- N3 S1 n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% V8 [- a7 ^: W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 ^; i+ s1 g3 n  \* G  T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 V' |6 }# n/ n7 L5 M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 n. G- t  s. Z5 x3 B3 M+ q4 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>