【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) i6 {* d; t+ U  \5 KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: p) T# X) H2 A5 M; s9 dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) h; u! T  j7 R  p& R+ `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: j  u. r1 X" l1 n& yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 L0 q* N- \7 Y/ X: o# L4 Y; tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 i3 I% W4 w/ {$ PIf today isn’t too late,
! @9 o& h: V1 P1 E* z; C( s4 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ \( U( i$ N9 o3 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 _: ?5 W8 M5 q0 c8 q6 P! j+ P9 T9 O: qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: Z( ?% L1 l4 O; j3 M; [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; V/ r2 T& q. \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- b6 v$ Q/ `/ \8 X" B3 g, ~Can I entrust it to you?
# D% e* l- D" ^7 l  Z2 ~0 ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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, q0 n0 e+ ~/ D& o% K% f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  [% g0 s' x3 L! y, W% N7 M& M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, l6 {, W# M, }& k( ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ ?# C# r% R" L: M9 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' h1 P" r$ }- P6 s0 `! O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( ?4 O5 C. D  T; J- l, ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 H0 s- m+ ^  u1 G( J( |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 V3 j+ ^9 U/ O+ E% K6 b  x6 i, K* P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 ]4 ]$ j! G* T1 D! d<P>但我不会</P>
3 n- {: y& E8 [# H) I. X' t4 m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' v) [) J( D1 }/ K) Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 X6 ]2 X3 q9 Z% ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) q! W" E5 f; S: x+ g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' h+ \4 @, T0 X$ ~1 ]5 Q8 g  E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; ?: a' _; p, k1 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 A/ z) L- q) g7 F" K. o, |2 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! h  ]! a( b. O% \- q' Z6 R% r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) X; i" ?& o" f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 H" ?' S' }- D! x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: i* T0 W; U2 w) T3 f* F5 w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: l1 b: V( |  N7 ~9 J9 S/ m& K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 r) y# _; I. K7 ~; t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ S$ X+ B3 |  l! \& r  h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 D$ k. {2 z8 y+ i) {* y6 v0 s( g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 A( M* `/ j+ n7 c& W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. s7 c/ V8 n- w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& E. Z1 U/ g/ r, |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) z8 v' n0 A, L0 j- V- a+ Z- c; Y! z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% r: W0 L) Y& Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 {, {8 f4 T* y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>