【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' h) I0 r& h8 v我另将歌词附在此。
+ D5 d; a- Q# J7 W$ \0 T1 Q9 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( d* H* O7 C3 K% x$ L8 |+ i/ N$ Z9 bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 P6 g3 r; a% OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  H' C6 H& U5 n  {1 QI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 ?+ ~  m) x( L$ C' m# [3 Y5 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 y1 ?% G) }+ Z5 _  s0 _But I never did
; v) `" h, A6 c0 w, n0 s9 L- tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 G: O+ |$ v/ j( c' ^( }) eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! A3 [: ~& O6 o- ^% c: xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 W  T# g3 F' X5 t$ j( c& c* tLove… just the word love
0 m& [0 K, h0 ~; C3 a  dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- z( k2 i& [: |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- t, q6 d" c) ~/ k: {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# d; U% y9 W; x9 _Entrust my love within your heart
/ T2 z7 r& F( z- UCan I entrust it to you?
6 Y; [6 J1 F9 X( QEntrust my love within your heart

' _4 \6 D* |7 g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 Q  Z  N" P( Z5 H7 N1 c5 \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 T0 r7 i  S$ |# ~5 f! O+ L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% B7 d6 U" E, t' j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 q, ~& K: F2 L: {8 }% D" S5 C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; X6 T% p7 A$ I3 k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# l$ g* B1 E# D" i* E) l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% C+ X( C- Y/ ~, M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ S4 U# F5 m, C5 ~4 e% N5 ^( q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. k+ {9 Y3 W  O1 n  H* C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# g7 n, d" o8 v4 L( O. _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 m: n/ T# L2 @% u" o# x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 {5 ~4 ?/ x1 U1 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( D; M( Z/ @/ G  t8 m7 Q! P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 o. z) P  @0 j: \* v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 V8 G, `5 }- Q- V1 z+ X7 R# U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, K1 q0 C: ~7 p; X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 x9 Z6 \. A: g1 e' H0 v. Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 H0 }/ r; Y) M( ]$ Z$ _9 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# F- y; l) L. r; e; i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( j0 K$ X$ Q, Z! U" H9 y<P>But I never did </P>
) V; K/ @. [! K; n4 p. M+ F, @<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, }! j: V6 ^8 T  a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 d- n! I% j$ B' a) H# }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 D4 }4 @  ^0 t/ U" G! V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ b6 @/ M4 S) K9 P8 M$ a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( F0 ^# P) _7 i3 E1 X/ [' J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 S" S5 I$ t, f# k# S" Q- {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% f% [6 x; R! R3 }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( E. m1 [; o% J- }, |5 k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>