【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ o0 N0 D2 y* f, IFrom the first moment we met,
3 j- D1 B3 V( V/ F, @I already loved you with all my heart
8 w2 e  l& o1 n: [& wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ W! a- ]; n* UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* u: I9 b6 L+ n% o: ^. t$ Z- }/ i& pI would probably know how you feel
6 O" \9 ^) @" I, {+ {Love… just the word love
2 `( i3 }/ E" Q, F/ ]1 C: ~5 }Why is it so difficult to express?
6 f) s6 @* e1 @! m- FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: l+ b( T0 B. Y% ^  }7 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 m6 z! c+ }, t* LEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 p& @2 o' n0 m$ ~. W9 ~+ cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" h# q( |) s3 V' z5 A2 S) nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 E( [9 V7 L5 C: XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 n- L2 Z8 ~# C+ J+ w* ~* bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ G/ d$ w7 s) m  G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% \! L: g( r) U% G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. }& y# `8 L' R: [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; O9 u/ I7 r  I+ S  T! b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- Q& I' s' K* {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ T1 Q  P/ C# C2 S3 m3 `6 O( ]' z. G& U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! K5 A# [$ m% |4 ^% B: [4 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* u2 a( }9 {  n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ |6 q' [7 i! _- M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 z6 u  [7 g# U% V# L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% y3 d& B8 e6 I5 ]# T; N* b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ C8 V" g9 z) Z0 @# ?- B; E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: q7 l4 n4 l4 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. r2 R# s: u6 ~- M1 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" O* p/ v( i" m2 c6 t  L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! F4 n) j4 P# C$ g3 j1 v  `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& C  t; ^/ x6 a7 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- U8 }  q: Q' k+ G  l, C) u: E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 w. R2 W4 H1 X0 ~  X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! A, P& Z' j$ p: c2 M4 S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; }' x9 Z+ C$ Q. p1 ^* f. ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 b" j9 ]) O1 @3 f) x% D, ]1 k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ t! @6 v2 C3 S; U  ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% k9 X. O0 C" M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 `8 j/ q$ C0 F2 q1 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# L$ l& E, F' w: r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 G3 q. ]+ }6 I" Z5 n, G: z; j9 i' Y- ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' {1 \% h# |5 e/ L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ _+ L4 W* |5 [4 }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- [2 o+ y4 U1 |6 m; z2 [% g; D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 D6 ^* P: f4 Z. a2 c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>