【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% @' D& @. A2 j( q5 Q我另将歌词附在此。
) T4 D9 K, M+ e  s- oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 y) }" q% d3 e0 l8 O" IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 z& a: p& m4 J- O7 RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ s! k2 u/ e# g5 c# cI want to confess that I love you,
1 z1 {& n% _7 P8 R1 pBut I never did
% ]% r: A" U4 Y5 x& LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) W- ?0 E% [" J$ F9 \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: O- f& q5 g" u% r9 h4 CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 D: ~2 s. r  O9 K2 D' m6 M; zI want to confess that I love you,
- Y7 w* ~4 V8 l; Z2 g1 K$ N0 B6 pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  w; U: W8 N- WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 u2 z( _: ^$ OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 U4 e! h% |; }) ^/ _0 U( xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 B8 S9 ~) m1 p* C) Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ s/ ^" s3 P! z3 I$ x# i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 U) y: E' R4 ]  q% T6 l( }+ Q$ }8 [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 @' |4 j5 ]; E1 J0 E. n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- ]2 ]- c; ?9 M, w1 P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- ]5 w" b* j; q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 N$ [+ I# b6 L' ]) B; {7 r2 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 j% t, v' s0 b- |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 o* e7 y1 W5 Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& [- w( y) ?  M0 J" `: H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! {. v" U! n0 s( e5 z& N& a( H* }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# l3 ]7 J- l$ }: c# m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& B) `; H+ T# [3 K7 h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" i7 H) g. u1 P% @0 X! S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 S) C( }. \) V  C2 |9 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# o' z) q7 J" Z! y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. ~$ y8 E2 ]* f5 h6 ~+ M% d+ W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% i' h  E) j/ S/ g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, j0 o* T3 F+ o& e$ x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. D. q0 @' ~+ w8 M0 ?: o, j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: ^4 W1 R6 y6 a3 J  v7 D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ I; N. z! j) J$ Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 t. b- F  S0 h$ u<P>但我不会 </P>
& {. F7 i- r& t( ?5 o( N; V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 F4 d! }7 I8 ~, R# P+ g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' W; w& T) G# U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: n7 \: H0 J8 @9 }9 ^- K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) F+ y$ b9 f1 t7 G: G' _- X) R+ H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- P, w! n' F6 v; a+ Q! O# g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( x  R  }/ F. E! g$ V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 r- U; R$ U# |" M) s# Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 Y: n+ c# R/ B  M+ { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 T3 |# s/ P4 W+ Y% y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ g) o' ~; k  V! `: d4 t) `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>