【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 u' m& l0 ~+ H$ EFrom the first moment we met,
3 i7 }) f" Y4 {0 I6 X( zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, K8 j( e% J' i/ l% JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 E7 _$ V: A0 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# {% v) c3 F2 G& q! m4 TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# }- @6 A  ~( ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: e" d* R: i5 c0 u# A7 I+ |) e7 `4 T7 D5 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
- I  p8 w7 {7 n2 Q# O1 qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ O- K  c7 B9 m: X- W# dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. k; Y% p; ~, `; O5 {9 r. W2 n% \" H( w! kCan I entrust it to you?
& y3 L" y* _0 a0 m  O+ ~3 ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 g# E; W2 u- ], l8 }  ?7 HEntrust my love within your heart

* U! M2 O$ `$ D- e( I  u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 H* g% Y* m0 D5 q4 t( W7 Q# E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# X& e0 ^! p, N6 I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ R+ s7 {2 D2 F( V( @. D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, W" d* B* u& ?/ o8 n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- m* s. o) W9 m% G6 Z1 b  V0 T/ r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 I- A" w8 `5 ~$ ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' k9 M" o, d' `3 o! }- F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- E, r5 D' ^: j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ {7 T& p: b- E& n- |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 A, G$ Q1 f# |" i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 n/ p' u) I( n$ e. n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" |8 X/ O- A( e  [% R/ J6 ?7 Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 a: d0 h. X8 y2 T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 @, W' `* {/ A# _5 K$ g2 q5 y0 {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 w5 U' k4 n" P; ?<P>但我不会</P>
3 Y6 X9 u+ d, k3 o# a4 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 b! Q2 p$ p  ^7 M, k' s# k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, h5 R0 E6 w8 [- r  s& M3 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: W8 J- H8 h! d3 @9 r0 s  M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 [' m6 _. Q, w8 g: A: x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( P1 j+ x  a$ S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) J; a3 A4 [6 ^/ K. a7 q0 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' m% v& f: \$ u" @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' D8 {% I0 g7 p3 v2 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 b+ d% P* d8 q" F" m: u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- E" F, s1 i0 E" x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( W/ e; p" {" E/ a) ~/ m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( @+ n; l$ \3 X* X) x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 D3 t' v, G2 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. b. c* w; e5 K& E9 b  c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% |  G7 H2 l- k( \! c! s% u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ G4 b. p8 ?6 I8 y# O1 Z5 V. l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ z; J; i. J! ^9 i; Y; M9 n+ M; y# w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 }1 b6 X+ y& h' {6 `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; q% d: y0 T% Y% M+ D! \- y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 i. U' ?* a( s$ v8 A; B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' d( N7 d2 k1 p' M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* S' f" {' m$ t, @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>