【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) [. \$ ~" ~/ ~5 ~2 ?5 z% TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ p& q. k9 g- `0 TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 ^4 |/ m+ Z% @3 y7 E( dI would probably know how you feel
: h0 B9 d0 }4 n6 j  A: U6 L0 J* kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 ^4 ^) Q  ~. z4 w' o, }1 ^I want to confess that I love you,
7 u& y- Q9 Z( @; k1 v: o3 v" P' V- J* cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 X9 V) ^# F2 \* [If today isn’t too late,
% ~1 |  x+ b1 m. LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. w1 n, ]' `. M$ W5 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, q# d; R8 W* P$ m& ]' @# k# rEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ o$ f! a# l4 w# M* o3 xI want to confess that I love you,
) a; Y% L  j' O1 rBut I never did
2 W7 {  j$ y8 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' [6 c3 s" B7 A" HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; F( r8 n  j5 Z+ P+ iEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 Y2 F, }. x) \: O$ w5 k6 K4 EEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 }& B$ c" V3 o; G8 B6 ~: D# a+ I+ \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( F1 S7 k6 ~, ~+ P; e- N: ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 L: v* N' i: W  j8 [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! ~, ]0 H: u& q  w9 Y, v1 J2 `2 d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' _# X' j0 r2 U+ @2 q4 ^7 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ d; T+ @% F9 ]6 T- B/ V) O. c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 |  I/ K' f1 n3 F% }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 l0 V; L: v% I* M- d  T4 Z5 h) C' b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) K  ^4 y3 h$ m# h/ j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 ?; ~5 O+ U3 [( i- h4 w2 q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  p+ d  b* F7 P$ I* N. B$ C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ `. n; f/ M) b$ F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 h4 ^; v0 p0 Q9 E$ {. E5 |: m<P>但我不会</P>
& s# J. A- d5 P- b3 ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- t$ }9 G, @2 u0 }0 [4 A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 u- a7 E1 g! s* Y) B+ N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 g: t1 s3 @4 F2 ~) P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 }6 m* c) A  Q, I+ l# n! n* t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! a0 \" P- l% J& S. m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- n+ U6 x0 R- _3 |$ }# K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 [4 W+ ], P: J8 f3 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ ^4 O0 i1 g/ k, Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, l. Z8 H- ]  Z<P>But I never did </P>
9 V5 {* J& ]* h& S# K! R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 W4 d7 o' d8 r$ T: {( x& H, K' @: w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# O: \2 G% n4 f5 I$ O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 x; m4 B: o* `& a3 g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 k2 e4 ~5 B5 F1 I) \" ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 u/ K: I0 `8 q- O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, A2 j, D# L( B4 F/ ?$ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 D7 U2 B/ ^  [: b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ ]- P- u- w# {6 l& m. p9 Y' O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 j5 a& i- [- }. j0 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- w" E, H) R) n( \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' z* C5 E  ^$ t: E3 S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>