【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& k; z0 y+ i6 n$ a2 K6 g1 v% GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ A5 e9 J& F! h/ {4 I1 D+ `" iWe meet and talk everyday,
8 d7 p) T( r* b! R( V. yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- M+ p4 u( i3 d1 d# ~I would probably know how you feel
) H7 n* |3 O) h! eLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 b$ w* \2 e3 P" g- g/ pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  l5 @! u& S& B- Z- W: _9 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 v3 s6 c* ]$ [6 r# H$ j$ m4 PCan I entrust it to you?
3 b0 K1 W0 k$ _$ B9 dEntrust my love within your heart
4 m; U1 Y' v9 h! y+ q+ Q- u, ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ q) h' _  h+ Y5 \. U) A# T7 _I want to confess that I love you,
# V0 S; l9 E. \& i+ e% Z* YBut I never did
# `7 q: I' E+ Z( a& i6 G* ?9 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# @9 {$ F# J/ c% P8 {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- Z) t' N! v: L0 b- YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, A! m# o$ w, q8 o9 HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 @2 q$ }" E) X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* S/ x5 S+ M/ v- i( ]% O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( l0 c/ r# W. j' K- D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. W1 I: K# b* a6 b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 j& n; W7 S6 n1 `4 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, b# Y% v2 `+ L1 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 U' y6 N1 d: M. C  w' f! {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ Y$ J; @0 ~( J& w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  T, K8 X$ ?0 G* j4 r( c: J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- S8 z8 F7 z- R- Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 B2 X4 o, k# V<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: B7 S3 \. y# p8 z: t, P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 N3 c" {3 w9 Y9 ]! i; k4 p8 n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" M$ Z5 J7 @; G  t: {4 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ k- X0 r, z+ D0 b4 o" T' i) n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 x) t+ D9 @8 r; g5 }0 r- U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 V. e+ ~% d& n' S9 J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ D! M  p& O. C- m- J% F, i7 n* g. d% l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( f- f7 D7 A8 h: k! N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* d& ^$ G8 V1 G/ B7 V6 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 f5 U9 c% E1 v( D, `7 ~( Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 P& O0 d8 p+ ]" F! p$ b5 C( k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, i; Z4 v- i( m3 H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; W6 A- m8 L3 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 a* @+ ]* K7 U4 U# v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 n0 G2 Q! ]. E; i8 M, e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) B2 }" O7 F" r& L2 z7 \8 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 \7 F2 Y2 J7 ~$ }! i- i$ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 S& C' ^3 W1 W* g6 A4 e 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>