【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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. v& s- B3 t' L+ S1 v* A. |我另将歌词附在此。
; x( l2 I  w) A! bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 x/ ?. h4 K2 g* K. OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# u3 T9 H2 N5 H6 V, |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 G# u' c& R% I/ k9 GI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 P# i; f2 Q( x+ L( @# KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 q/ \- G: _7 {; X  D& JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ x" f4 }! ?# }  ], qIf today isn’t too late,
, e) q8 y% P: u! U& O3 j# dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 ^% O4 Z1 l& R! E1 s* D( gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 b1 a+ a8 Y  NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# ?% O" h! p, k* m. t/ l! _Why is it so difficult to express?
% Y7 C$ f6 t* z' x+ e& z$ r% L7 ~, @I want to confess that I love you,
1 l5 i$ A, }( r0 X/ j3 o. uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& Z) W! i8 y5 l* M0 Q  uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 N$ L3 k1 g$ M! \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: T. ?) k2 I/ U0 }* D3 N: }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ @0 g; \+ w/ ~5 d& [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 d1 S+ R2 A: a0 o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( i6 }! R) B# H9 n' o& q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( d, D- @# L% X( w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. e, P0 O  U* @4 O! i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 u) x/ w9 g: y% v3 k% @$ I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- K& c1 \! `" E7 V) t' U0 j" T; F  H1 P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) o% N) Y" _1 I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  m7 \7 D2 E7 }8 F. n3 h0 i0 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 P4 G2 u& R1 T& D3 L6 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 z6 I1 }1 A' E$ }9 f9 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ ^' O/ @3 ~4 _' u! z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# H& B! F0 {! B' G# o" U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# u2 Z5 C& j6 J+ r" |9 V$ x% g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 C0 Q# G7 u1 D' v4 u4 U& {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, r* `8 K* G  q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 b4 J6 u+ Y1 y& f! I  `3 O( p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 A4 ?2 h' |2 [1 l+ `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 {- j. _/ a# q6 o0 g1 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ E2 Q6 L, t9 I9 C7 K1 b3 P<P>但我不会 </P>
- [8 {* L+ S9 \/ {. X+ l' G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' t; A- n9 `% k1 i( p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' q9 Q4 c7 e4 D: ?9 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  G/ f( f, T6 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ `+ ~, \4 b0 K+ v  q9 \  [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# ?& A& ?7 S. h1 f! N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- h( V! Z) C. \. I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. `% \7 k$ B! \/ n- m! f9 V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( O3 e' w& E) G8 i$ m' e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>