【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 ?7 ^2 O, f6 m1 f- s# E3 z我另将歌词附在此。
8 B) U) a# [8 VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* ]2 ]4 O* }6 }: d& ?: [$ I9 O/ |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( W! C4 C6 a; j2 q9 tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* I) m4 m" e# z& i; n/ `. ABut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 v0 K5 d2 A) A6 k7 _6 OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 g* f% o$ Q5 f4 b& A& X: V; BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 g) P! b2 ~( ~5 }6 s# JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ q' f5 Y% [) o* u6 q* o3 `- w. qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& N0 [' L* f- ^) Z" cEntrust my love within your heart
" A4 {. s5 B% a2 qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 w" m  N4 h) ]" B7 j9 UI want to confess that I love you,
4 b) |, e  W) ^9 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 q' K* \5 `( ~8 U, {$ AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: b  J8 [+ [6 G+ P' gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 y6 [: A/ h1 x# SEntrust my love within your heart
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8 C! n' E! P7 ^) n9 o) @7 J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- [8 n5 j+ Q( @2 B- D' z- H# D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 K6 O+ `$ a) R3 k7 i' d8 M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 [1 P; a1 |* l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: p5 C# X2 G3 ^8 |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 o3 q; t4 }6 K  d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- l& `) h: o- I* G8 c" f6 f7 c: V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 T# Q8 s3 Z( B/ ]8 @/ S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! n1 c6 h& i/ O+ x# V+ S5 S4 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 l; }6 ~2 T8 V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 ?: R; Z6 ]% r+ e1 o7 Y# g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- a( F6 T$ q- Y3 k4 V' U0 T" D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! X3 v$ ?5 t, n( i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- f7 A( E  i4 `+ l. Y' S. C8 ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, _+ _- C1 _7 @" Q<P>但我不会</P>
2 x8 x# _, [4 n; X; y  o- N+ c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: k- |- F# x. D7 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ P- N( v" G/ `  Z+ u+ T* P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 B) r! C, Q; K8 ~# a9 J0 t, i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 d! J' @: v& o0 Y0 \9 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ?! H0 F7 H" e0 [" q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 \  T! E- r5 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; `8 d* D2 z5 k" Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ M  U3 X2 c5 R+ x, p- d5 L+ b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  D, D4 V. l9 H# C# ^/ h( z* R" ^<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 X. _( Z+ k  [" I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 d6 q) G7 ]% Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 c7 i0 O! W+ I3 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 t7 u( w* Y( i6 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ ?0 \! b) D8 ^" ]. j$ w1 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% d* d' c% {; O. j) @; Y% m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! `! `+ _; s$ |% F" A8 Y0 _( v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>