【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 `5 k: u  ]4 E* `, HFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 m9 D) e; A. n! |: Z' P  LWe meet and talk everyday,
$ v4 u4 ~* Y+ g; |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 [. m0 @6 i! z3 m- z2 Q! ]Why is it so difficult to express?
8 C) x* [8 B/ P# x" I6 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ `2 I! I% v8 |' V; ]If today isn’t too late,
1 W. R" w0 I( M5 Y% DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 n! M2 N7 {; r6 n- fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( s# U  r0 ^8 r: p; HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. K3 E2 U6 ~' m& Q3 MIf today isn’t too late,
7 n6 x* O1 p, ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 C. L: r5 B. E) w2 MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 G, l9 S/ f, }! nEntrust my love within your heart
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, C0 [0 H8 c$ P- W4 v1 a0 B* o; e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 Q% r' y: M5 c! R1 }& W+ v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 O% x9 w( [' k0 m$ s8 |2 m. O/ Q% a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  K! W: R. ]8 Y+ g5 j<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, ~( z. S$ P$ B9 L2 @  ?% \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' g/ s' g: e2 q: a7 J8 P; J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, o+ Z5 ^4 J, o! P4 ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- {) F* J; h+ v/ R5 f# i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& g, D& P4 m4 @8 d* s* z9 s# z4 C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  m( u9 a* F) O$ O; Y* X8 \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* b' T( N1 R% F2 G+ l3 I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% ?" d! A: u7 q2 A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 B- ~/ Z8 p+ A+ x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 h1 L, Q9 O# n4 h& E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 J0 E, V8 q$ x4 t& ^# G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( u% ~# a6 Y* B% n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ i* \# [' ^3 F5 G: `/ W- h% o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! a0 L+ V: g1 i+ R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# t* o1 Y! ^* R8 w& K+ h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ t3 c- r: q5 K) h: Y# C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! G# |/ k5 @" r! W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; m! j0 r; _, R+ o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 V! x$ L% C! b1 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ ?1 H$ E1 v& K7 I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; z/ u% j+ w5 ~0 K, p6 u& Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# {5 G- v3 S) m5 T  q5 S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 B+ @  i6 E7 H% z, c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  B. q, Y. l0 `  }9 f6 q$ a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 m7 _. p4 T3 u3 c9 H) z- I% z6 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ c1 n- |- f. }4 G: x! f<P>But I never did </P>
7 l& b3 Q, I$ @9 R! @  J<P>但我不会 </P>
& o; v" v2 J$ O6 `+ H3 J9 h7 u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, T6 Z9 B% D# H) T9 l, D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 i/ Y" ~% t2 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 g+ S7 y# T& K  D: s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 E0 o  b- D! y/ F' M3 y0 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 f  z5 w; ^# [2 Q1 U8 m! H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 b. @; |2 M8 q/ T) @- ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- L0 |' y0 D* W# B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& |/ Z$ n9 j- `; g/ p. E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# M/ K7 L9 W; V4 A' s$ t' ~; q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 H1 N# F$ g) y. ~* q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>