【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ I9 j6 R0 h$ O& r/ u7 \+ SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: ]) T  O& ~" G- VI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 ^" R6 T* Z$ N& R6 |) wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. c/ e1 J+ _. b! q9 W2 ~1 R; RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ^+ O1 T- X1 n. C' A" w) GIf today isn’t too late,
4 E# J+ s0 H0 w9 a8 V! q1 N! n* RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 z4 D6 W2 |% v$ S8 d/ ^( LEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' w" I% Z/ ^6 T! NWhy is it so difficult to express?
# u' X' S) J/ [) A0 G8 pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- T7 L9 Z2 t6 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. ]# e- Q& C( BCan I entrust it to you?
/ t) P( t( H# Q5 t4 X) B9 cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( ~0 s: h4 g' h. o8 B3 x6 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! F5 G9 t0 F: T+ Q4 r) d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 D& c0 }2 P! \" m: e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 Y9 X" Y7 H8 X. L' ?" Y, U5 L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 _1 Y- `) F. T* [' L5 E3 z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  u! L( X6 Q+ ]0 C8 z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' Y5 U9 L0 X& x& @" k7 P% y# l6 E" g<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 w' d. S; W; Q1 V* x$ w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) D4 S/ |2 ~: g  A3 l/ ~4 x# O<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ b0 W- O8 h3 d' Q3 u<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: _7 Y" q' H* j7 A9 d% ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% |+ B: _0 a! T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: \3 M5 Q/ L  d6 k+ V1 ?7 O1 V! H# I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ ]. m& N. F2 v<P>但我不会</P>
  j4 B. H3 ]$ Q8 ]- p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) b% \1 E8 t8 ^/ V7 M2 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( @. Y. a* E6 ]1 W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 I* [' H% {- f0 I- F! [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 P" V. I7 C: C9 |$ l" }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( S2 Y& @! k, n1 d  K/ R! C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. n( {/ e# f( m" y( G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. k6 _5 Z. [( e6 }6 r3 Z) z7 [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. M! o) t3 a" X3 I<P>But I never did </P>
- e6 J' L5 G6 o" G" r5 d* n/ t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 j& E3 T( m. w5 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. g. k5 e' B/ O$ c# _( U" y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' X2 f* {" a) u3 Z( r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 ~3 o" p+ ^& }+ z; t% B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ W' a4 y) U0 @" G$ B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ Z4 Y$ O/ `0 k1 H9 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>