【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# C' h* R7 ^  X9 k! }3 S# K5 ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' ]- r. f$ k* P- u" v  ~9 mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ }+ w4 I. O3 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% T% l0 N( T# R7 N4 I; KCan I entrust it to you?
! ^" i6 t2 w* h, ?  nEntrust my love within your heart
$ u$ A7 }& i1 u( q) c% Z( ULove… just the word love
5 W$ w& S/ y: h5 e8 P9 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ C) f( z1 [# S2 \5 h- yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. {( P; {+ }+ g% W- i$ G  E9 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 Y- c" X5 x6 K3 }! U3 YCan I entrust it to you?
3 {! `7 P8 I: V: n0 p% j5 O: A/ S0 UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( x: w' e7 E9 WEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: ]+ _, A' ]7 o6 N1 v: X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ i) I1 W" p) W" S2 ~/ \  ^( i- R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, n6 Y5 d& x( r, c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 a) D( u. _& W. n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% H, m' b7 c& j+ P$ t  C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) `& ]4 I5 M/ ]! f$ d8 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ c. _$ \% Q3 ?( {* J; r; y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 m) x+ V' |' Q# ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. z. A# t% a5 q% a6 Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* u, v4 M; z7 e4 U4 D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 R- {" ]1 B. e3 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" D! J) D. j$ T4 B- k% H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ I+ Z' R( h& Z$ j& @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ W* t; ?1 b" B1 I, g* N; c7 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( X) }" C) _8 w+ k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 C& u5 N# }8 i: w: [6 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# u3 u. T8 }9 G+ w3 j+ {9 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: o3 r9 u6 r1 m  s1 _( O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 x, m- c- \  Z8 g0 F( l; q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 T  h& q( U$ L/ M5 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 k6 U: C/ U1 M* s# B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 K5 A5 g- ]( ^3 E9 q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; q6 F# G" d  x2 x& p! Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 G8 N  L" g8 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. f/ W$ f$ Q1 F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 w, O  w+ x$ }. z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 h6 r: _) ?' A* W0 ?- t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, C. i! C* m/ Y$ u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- X0 p  Q9 x; Q" L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 d  i, U* F2 h2 S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>