【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
' j( X' _/ R) U( S) ?, k3 rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 E7 h; O3 t3 A+ s; |2 T4 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& H+ a0 v" f+ y: b* X9 w3 cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 u4 h. f+ j% q# HWe meet and talk everyday,
) [, a) [6 w2 x7 G! ~. VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# M, U4 P5 w2 kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; a, j" r8 m! b/ S, B2 ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: i7 R9 F: Q- U# O; W% I* sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" e0 B( j2 |) a# pEntrust my love within your heart
# \+ V0 g& j9 |7 e- D8 nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* I2 v& Y  k9 i. K7 l6 CI want to confess that I love you,
0 h! y3 c8 M% }9 D- ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 s9 W  J1 t& _# W" y: P' mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ?  [' M$ M# U  G2 ~' J( qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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" l; w0 ~; y( ~' g) v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; r2 d# r: K' z  F( _3 j9 \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 |* @5 P& ?( @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% A7 V3 Z% T2 Z1 L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. O0 Q! {, D2 I0 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% T+ h" D$ i0 e9 p$ }8 \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! I: Q! a7 Q( ~8 i<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ D0 O3 @* Q8 R0 z; V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) `! E* y$ S8 w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- W% _, _0 a' S8 y  z) q8 b7 r, u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; _& w$ b6 e% \( m, Z9 U7 [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% c% e8 j+ Z% g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 [3 I3 r$ j6 _. O* o& {5 A<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! _- s: q+ e9 p2 F& z( f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 h5 j2 s* @: ^, H: i; t$ V- h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 g0 c/ D9 @0 h+ L8 B- J/ }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 B! K2 W; @) G3 f" o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 @  p+ g4 ^! G5 A9 W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  E( v9 r+ m1 F$ m0 Z1 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 c( m* f/ \( z9 g2 V# k% T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ }% _& s" u: z<P>但我不会 </P>
1 M! D! y* W8 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 K5 y- J7 }5 g: Z% W2 ]& `2 D2 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 l% T. s3 K' ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 Z8 G7 a& Z% V/ Z4 Q! a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* j2 p4 w! B5 A) X: t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ d0 T3 J1 F7 }' A8 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& I) p/ K: e; E4 D# L# f4 z4 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: K5 J( H0 d- H4 o! i4 z' W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( ~) }- m3 q- G  D& J8 Y0 v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* `: g3 G9 t& Z) ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>