【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
( ?# n# E2 n- G$ I) X  m. J$ n. D6 v
# P( M! r" |0 f0 u8 y  n: ~0 |
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

0 B8 \& z- o2 D3 p8 \9 G. [
% y& A6 d9 I9 ^) i7 a% E2 v我另将歌词附在此。
* _  f3 k$ M! j+ }0 s7 R5 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 N% a* S/ A6 v0 R- q! mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" f* r9 G' g0 L" M: ]4 pFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 X  N8 e; L+ ~6 d- N, LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: ^. S2 e2 t9 S1 q, |- vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; T# X, M$ T0 E8 ?+ N/ [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; k3 i0 Z5 k9 X& k$ AI want to confess that I love you,
' d% D; z+ E+ h' C9 U. J" hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% o5 G4 v6 F, mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; {2 u4 F- n- W. I$ R( V# QCan I entrust it to you?
4 M/ O$ I1 K! f+ w. k2 `2 NEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" s5 S9 o) l& F+ N" y6 P3 d% c! KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. W: Q* R9 O' {2 D% hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ |* U' x$ i6 Y/ ~If today isn’t too late,
9 j6 T7 f, K; o1 ~$ k" M5 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 y0 v9 O0 c8 {7 S; }7 k8 I  X9 PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 z7 q* E& K& b* bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 c5 U2 S# K. ]+ f/ ]Entrust my love within your heart

3 m8 B6 i  w& M+ c9 V5 l: @3 q! D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 a. n' W  d, g! \$ ^3 U: D
$ V+ u; l$ ~5 O% o" R- B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. V; E/ C6 M& U; J% N8 s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' e" n  }, W4 W$ z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& h9 T: G5 F7 q9 J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 ]8 S- g$ M4 \* A/ F  B  t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 d  r6 f) N3 I1 O6 i" _' w9 E: K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: ]  k( a$ x: J6 [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, V6 N  ~+ w, e% L1 u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! z1 o9 R7 D( a. I- k" v1 e# X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; \! ?, z/ k! ~+ J' T6 ]- M  M2 M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: ^+ }+ p# T; F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 J+ S, p" ?" b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) l& \9 M& u: q4 j- ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# i5 r( b% |& F: }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% F7 R7 O$ z8 M" S) _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 c9 G  F; p4 u* D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" [: a4 l$ b1 V: y# Y9 r6 N1 P) q7 M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 y+ J% M4 e6 Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 p9 B7 \" _; S2 P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% N" d  j3 I* X' ?1 z2 ^<P>But I never did </P>
- h# v+ R5 x& A3 W; R<P>但我不会 </P>
) P, k7 U' |4 ^6 g3 J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" g( [* p% p' n# ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 g- ^0 k/ N8 ?' V% q6 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' a1 D6 k- _7 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# z" ?2 i" z- H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; Q9 v' i$ H# e' ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ u- E) n$ J7 q5 O& K: w6 z% a: M
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
9 [: N: e" F+ T5 }6 y0 L
) F7 ^" h1 R0 ~( q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 E5 Q3 e0 D: M9 X$ e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

' |- |0 H- X7 p* E9 a
<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
  Q  P3 G, z) n* g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>