【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
* h3 W4 M* J( f5 `  yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 M7 O3 w  T$ p! Y$ }7 O5 TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; S9 U3 {4 _" A8 A7 u9 xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  _2 v0 l7 O& b0 z1 T6 pI would probably know how you feel
0 j( q8 M' x7 S/ P, l) k) RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, v2 q' P* e' `# ?3 p$ I0 YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! W5 U2 {1 e, X9 B2 Q& c5 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& f9 }8 ]& ]8 E0 a4 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ^1 w' g/ z0 Z# z& pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 H3 u# y3 f* \Can I entrust it to you?
( T8 y/ s% j2 Y- s+ _5 A  [Entrust my love within your heart
" L1 I. P/ f( ?& G6 TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: a8 c6 [4 o/ v* e# sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 ?5 t: k# f3 p4 }, W3 i* j& POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* y5 D% t- o1 j  }7 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. ~' G# ~, \( D+ L! LCan I entrust it to you?
0 z/ r4 v- `& ?) Y# d* Z4 cEntrust my love within your heart
  v5 u; E# \7 V8 T3 r3 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 E# _. U* k, I( l: L% ]. g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! a& T2 b( e; T& H7 M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 j; t0 K* ]: a2 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! N2 u3 r) b. V( ]% D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, \5 `6 L& `% T0 y* v% r/ e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" G/ ]+ w4 Y! b8 B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 N: M6 u$ y2 H1 {0 R/ A# j# D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) [0 O8 ^6 t8 N! A% |, n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' c) B5 W% l$ a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% B$ p' I. I: T- T. b4 F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: l1 s$ i' r4 r" D0 a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 p- Z& K. A4 U<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" C0 t' Q4 c! h+ b* ?. S- Z7 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! N5 z. N0 N& {  f; J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 S7 B# @0 H6 H6 f( B# a" d0 \) D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 N$ g7 t: Q6 W6 L1 Q: N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ h" `" k4 s9 T( o# A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 o' B" G0 K, j2 ?# y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; y5 U" ~: e& U' o  M! o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: ?: m2 |. p8 ?! P! {7 v: g5 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 x0 N9 w  X2 d" X; g; N) L<P>But I never did </P>
" e6 _1 F$ o5 j2 N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& X" O9 w! o4 w, `) l7 n: g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 P$ {4 j( ^4 N6 V, F/ n1 S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 S- v4 C  H' u0 v0 N, w& b0 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( n9 M3 A, t. L0 M7 ]( e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 j7 _; ]1 V; F" Q5 i2 j! i: U4 _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- T3 G, o  x" \2 c7 j0 p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! p. i! `- K7 h7 u( @/ S8 n# }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 B+ E6 |5 h, c8 k- B! @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 a4 t" z( b" H$ S! O- t; I0 @$ A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 S7 _( ~, ]$ f% M& p2 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 I7 L- l9 _. h' ?* F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ {2 F# K: [" x6 r5 y2 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>