【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: U+ \$ k) y3 `' T  \+ R  O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 D2 J; p5 o+ z. z! r9 p3 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: m, @5 C: e+ a# g5 R& r. Z) m0 E- QFrom the first moment we met,
/ W2 i2 [: E& E8 iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- B& v8 u! s4 b0 q+ Z2 Z; TLove… just the word love
( }0 b- l- Y4 ~. I0 M- JWhy is it so difficult to express?
" b! W7 e- U1 [3 lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( r: w& F6 S: B) e' kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, P; L5 V9 P9 v9 f8 Y: v- _If today isn’t too late,
0 j' {7 n: `" E1 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% [+ ^, _$ S5 ]: {4 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, d# ^0 d$ i% i( vEntrust my love within your heart
  n$ V% N/ U4 L' T: Y/ yLove… just the word love
2 v0 S  q; _* D, b. h. uWhy is it so difficult to express?
* z/ w( U% w, L7 A  L8 XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 J' d, ~5 i0 T- {# ?7 H- M. |$ ^If today isn’t too late,
6 O; o* e# I  J: ]4 z8 G# NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( h; I3 c* y( i4 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! w8 y: P: V. {5 s( VEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 i9 I; G7 o1 k2 m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% f. Y8 _& ~3 J4 {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 k! L5 ~+ g9 J9 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 ]* w; m0 }0 `, u# J1 P2 i0 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ V" S1 w2 Z# S; J$ u" Y2 d; ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ C; e7 M( p! [% h& l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 h8 a5 E: ~" V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: {$ h+ V6 V; B% S6 m+ ]$ x1 m% n+ w2 ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- D1 [& O3 j& G- Z<P>但我不会</P>
" s7 x: _! e" p/ f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* G# f+ U3 B4 c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  Q  x4 }; K6 |+ r+ _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 Q- v( I  J4 ?; x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ |9 D$ k: V1 n/ K' ?+ F- W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' o3 Q- k) S9 M( g! R" f" |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. G& L3 ]1 |2 `  x8 n5 Z- D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' ~, O* H5 U3 Z* W! H1 G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 v4 n+ y# D7 u% `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% Y& ~4 E/ A8 I3 \; i# j) {" n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& z1 [" _+ A6 f- i. J+ m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 I' J$ U! s( C5 P) O3 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. E( f. N" ?: Z5 O/ B$ Y- n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& g7 P: N/ I# W' |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ [! n/ d/ b0 C% l3 E2 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. j, |* w& v$ Q6 a2 k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ Y) V0 y! i& f& r# {2 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, }( ~2 `0 P/ r$ Z4 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& M* r% a% H% [  K/ p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: v5 P% Q# q% a" o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>