【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 o+ x8 Y  [2 F# l9 u  o5 i9 LFrom the first moment we met,
" N# w1 _8 _( P* ^I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ |% |! [5 H$ w; s* S  j- F) EBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 x5 Z5 D' [, KLove… just the word love
, z+ Y& c6 v5 b0 I. F- `Why is it so difficult to express?
# n/ W" K) w7 E; E) l# y( uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 E3 N+ W$ S1 L, \0 {  bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 O4 q1 n+ ]* hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% R. ^( e& Z. H: \3 n3 R+ E' aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! ~3 G! d' ?7 g0 W2 H5 h. ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: n7 d' B8 {& Q6 G/ }3 LI want to confess that I love you,
: P- m$ J; f% W( n* ^But I never did
# c, L& r  Q, s( {5 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! S0 o6 o" A1 ^6 P+ ?. H# sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 n8 s1 _9 l5 T6 m4 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 H: T9 z$ N& }4 @Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 d8 i( p, S- \* U1 ~. H& i/ HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ y/ B6 [; [4 }( f* p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& S* I. i* C5 T7 l, u% {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 R$ j8 Z9 q3 o0 j' y0 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 Z5 i  E% V0 F# U; A/ Z; g9 F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 k0 L- |' Y4 M) H) J% M! i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! }: s" Z( G5 D5 l0 Y4 H! D& l: ?8 n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 J3 s( Q  @4 b2 H" q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) t6 B* d/ R( F% I. B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: F. @) N$ P- p( W& l1 t0 I" }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' j0 ~. ]4 t; \3 a) X# @0 w/ ?1 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 z3 ~* k0 F; y' {* w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) c2 y' u& d3 J7 b) j2 L- v9 A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' Z: l% |+ E4 ]3 m1 ^! ]; s- ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 l& R5 a& I- R; X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 h4 ]8 G: ?% ~! f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ @7 N: D! T) Z- {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* H! G' C/ x  d7 A7 `7 I" m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 h9 O; E; M1 D. Q, S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; A- N2 R5 P2 P$ B0 `# @( Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  Z' X0 x+ {6 h3 @6 U5 B9 _/ [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 b- k. J! H6 p, \1 S$ @" f9 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; p3 y1 D3 B" {/ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, {- Y. p6 i' \" y: ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 N! i% H4 g% b& q& `, V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 s- r4 K2 |5 I* Q$ D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  j; R% C% Q; O<P>But I never did </P>
9 z8 v2 R, y3 F. G: N  M<P>但我不会 </P>
, C: A0 {0 ~) v# t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, N2 i! B( x# A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& h! |+ z- j- ]- P% U0 ^* m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  U- l0 t& c, p  y; S$ C  h* r/ I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" N- p/ F% ~, T% R7 y0 ^/ l! t$ f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( @7 E) F0 Y- R3 _$ K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" U% t' ~8 P6 a  e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" x: I, m7 ]  N7 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 P6 f) H8 e& }1 R3 Y4 Z' {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 t4 a: V: T8 f8 A8 N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 H1 {9 E/ ^+ y- w3 o) c- C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  C$ n$ t4 Y3 `" k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>