【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
  ?: Q/ G5 V' `& S6 A) UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. c: `5 L' `, j" e! BFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& t; [6 o& H& N" F! YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' B( N! N- }  d* L5 IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 u) n# N& g2 o2 H9 WLove… just the word love
; V. T) t& }" d# V! E7 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
% V" L9 K3 @: v, r/ fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 P; A6 V) i6 B$ rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. g5 |7 n+ Q8 u5 v& e" ?3 wIf today isn’t too late,
& @7 u  X3 z1 T  Q, I) rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Y( ~" u1 n$ W: fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  V3 s/ Y* l7 ?) \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, x' i0 }/ m; D! S) P8 h$ bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( u% J# a+ q- e" y7 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. n' d' ]. a' ]" F/ uIf today isn’t too late,
6 S) ~( }0 K# z+ c0 O, p! MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% X( B; z; Y! @& h0 R2 S+ ZCan I entrust it to you?
6 g6 h6 i8 ~; BEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: b2 R; G, K$ T+ V& T% JEntrust my love within your heart

9 s# u5 h# o( `2 Q; k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 v! f! \( F+ [+ @7 M& i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ x6 F8 |3 x! |6 e: W<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 [" M2 x: V4 o, U. I3 h- X& t* n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 F: g7 m/ r6 I6 f) G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 Z+ ?# ]6 d5 _) W9 g" |. P- ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ V- I* y# S) Q) Q% P3 F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ Z/ W) Y2 K) [! G5 ~0 j* k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 P5 Q! `- c6 L" N+ o- v<P>但我不会</P>
  ^0 a/ p4 c4 E: X% c$ k: o& b/ J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 I# h" A+ ^( \( h7 b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; W' o/ a( U* `" d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, }+ ?' D) C: }  f7 _: x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( Y9 Q2 m! C, F  U$ a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* q$ e- n8 |$ _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: ~2 X2 P% i0 R) |0 s/ @7 g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ l( W9 i+ ?# a4 n8 y( k% \7 K<P>但我不会 </P>
$ w# s2 h- [4 r. ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  _& W; o' p4 m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 R3 e$ g; C$ P, ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* w! r+ w5 M; I! S2 i4 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 m9 U0 V& F5 l( M6 r# N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ F+ @$ f) x- {) ^8 Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& E% W$ ~- G' \7 N6 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>