【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
/ ~! b/ v  n2 j! ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" Z1 [, l$ j9 y1 X5 y2 TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" d7 O. f) z4 @+ t. g6 \: xWe meet and talk everyday,
" Q/ A% E6 a9 ~( K5 FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) |. ?' N$ ~+ K' \$ B  J! ~5 s5 A$ vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% j& E, Y& z, II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 R/ B7 ~. ^& V; _/ t: zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 w9 b1 c( }4 M; gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ n8 b! ^7 f9 |! M% w7 w6 {Entrust my love within your heart
$ J  o6 Z8 X% m, ?. V, }8 OLove… just the word love
5 K. s. ?4 e/ I9 A4 A' LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 d, c* k! p* j0 X9 E, d% GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  `) Y5 }" ^; o% W5 mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! k# p5 |! r0 M7 U& nEntrust my love within your heart
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! l+ W( U* v$ ^  C6 J6 o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& D( A* V2 y! A4 \3 X# H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' q4 R% P& c# E* H$ O/ ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) I) O5 S$ r' O" G8 K4 T2 b, w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ h/ V5 |) b$ R8 L) o7 _; I2 d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: A, A6 l# T# D1 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  q% p2 \: u; w7 n3 v; ]- d' Z9 F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ Y6 R* j9 e  k  r- q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 q( i) e. n2 c5 ]6 m* [6 i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ [9 J+ d1 @8 k7 s8 ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. M2 g6 |& g" O' N5 v% m$ E" b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 w) z( {; w- Q4 O) T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 \! e" H  b& x% s% K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 X1 S- q- L' I, S# t. x<P>但我不会</P>
! K& I1 h- A7 X8 T7 n5 }3 L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& A4 J0 o, c  x- e2 `2 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- ?( x' y( p7 {8 T- G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, E, `/ ^% s( b4 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 ], X/ Q3 b- O6 h& ?% [2 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 W+ {  e( _0 {6 @, }6 E- n' l+ w$ ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& x1 J5 B) u& B& }; B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' U. w( E) D: ?3 ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. L, P) P1 Z; c<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: j5 k' |, i& P/ U' O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( ~! ~6 e/ H4 n0 G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# E9 L. f6 d: N' S+ }7 n& {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# i2 x7 l) @$ r0 O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# I; G# j7 R' s$ a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) n0 {( P% P$ C) b$ E% M: H& R  T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. r+ I9 u1 ~* W- N# V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( }6 L$ _! n% m5 F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>