【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
2 _+ x, w4 }4 P0 ^+ E! V& VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 X' k5 t5 h2 P; [: TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& @; M, n/ S- ~1 b0 ^+ YI already loved you with all my heart
3 k3 W6 ?8 S4 Z. U2 ~8 I. [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' K" [6 c# q/ i) v. tI would probably know how you feel
. N1 p5 v8 z3 |/ C$ r( I; TLove… just the word love
) \2 Z8 _2 w6 k( f* @3 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! O' J7 M0 b! Y; U+ {3 @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ h- S$ b. _( N, Z! P+ r- H3 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& E( o1 l; m5 {& t4 {! g- rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 K- f8 y4 B( e3 `! c5 u/ ^# u; bEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; n- ?: ]' F) X6 Y; JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 [' |$ D/ ~6 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ ?1 ^2 I$ ?; r6 T/ tEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, M( Q# W; H) m2 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- I5 G8 W. ]0 U, [0 x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# t8 |+ [6 n6 w3 G" x- i& a# Q) o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( ?- l1 @$ ]6 M3 |2 o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 u) v, n+ F/ v. P' b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 [. S( v5 q9 Z; ]% }' l4 I6 C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( `. X% _7 n1 U' ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 `" c3 g" I' R: ^4 c6 h/ p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 U0 O% W" R; B8 C8 S- x$ Z- \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ |6 @4 n' f6 F/ e( E! d( L" X4 ^& m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 x- r! s7 O- I0 X0 j2 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: X4 _1 [4 }/ h0 t# L8 t8 }* ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' C8 Y3 ]. O+ W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 v5 Q5 Z* y  w: X" l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  [# _& ]! @5 R% D/ l  C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" `+ d9 t6 D# R$ N/ o6 }1 a, i* ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* z4 Q  o! z* Q2 |  t<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# }9 j$ Y4 X2 C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% A8 I$ u* l! e" @; J# ^1 C7 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 \: [9 G4 {4 k1 q' a# C7 Y; Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 F$ D0 U! ?0 o- ~- I9 \0 s: l; t& ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 Q5 i+ Q. F$ F6 o" Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 s# }  ]7 i" a5 j  m! @, J5 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( H3 G7 L1 G  ]( _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ N$ b! l' W6 \8 E5 f) M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ \' J# m( h: O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. q$ A6 P( b: p, o1 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 U5 H; f! I8 w; q) ^  ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 n7 L) {, p! X6 C+ C% f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>