【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" F( I- X$ r8 z8 P8 Q/ KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 U. c7 u% ?& n. n, {( ?+ C# I  @We meet and talk everyday,
3 D6 Q" V! G* P2 a: ~& jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. K: i0 j( J" i3 a/ L8 z$ R6 C$ _8 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
  _8 T; u: d& v# c; tI want to confess that I love you,
3 m- B# Z. A& X! h5 FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 y; b! @. \9 b. l( ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 \+ S' u+ G* h; yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# s, v% F5 P& l' R% tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; r. G7 r& c& @( Y7 a3 R% ~" vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ d$ |! S. D: B; a& lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ ~1 F$ s* C: cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ g) G& f! h' W' H2 y  n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ W4 G5 S; A1 t3 V4 b& H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; b& a7 ?* {4 a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* l% a2 R6 z4 z, N$ P/ c7 l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 C8 ?$ ?- v' }6 q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 A, j, h2 X& e# T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 T0 M7 @! w  {7 u$ O  `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  M! n9 }1 }+ {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, F9 `+ c( t- x9 `; y% Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; J$ ]# z* t. I+ T4 |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ R: j5 p: Y6 ^6 w  }: }4 k. R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 F& q; e* U1 t/ P0 n7 l4 w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! B2 L! ]+ f! r) S* m: a% f: G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 K& g1 c! @; _! }: T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) `# |2 x5 x% ^' M  g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& N! s- t  B0 c" s* G: {6 c1 o1 W" i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  r2 l0 v! T+ j8 @5 O. `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* _. X  u1 b7 P1 z* T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: Z8 {8 I( ]2 v" ?* G8 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% d8 D6 @0 o% W8 A5 K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) \/ T0 `, u2 l1 o( a& P+ r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- Y. V  K* @* Y) ?  w. o<P>But I never did </P>
, s- V3 d5 J3 {. [) s5 P* z. ]* V<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 h  b1 Q+ O9 m5 v7 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& v' E* p3 c9 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 l3 M# Y9 J% J  @8 J2 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" V) B) K4 g/ {* r( O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 x" r- |% H2 F( [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% A6 I0 K9 A8 E  `0 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 v) g5 M7 Q* ^: H: B! }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# i6 e8 n) }2 L) C. o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( U# c8 ^, q4 I# P2 n. n) S8 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' X# \  d' B$ B, i8 o! l' k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ H4 c8 D- Q( t$ v. s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 y( E7 z1 p" v1 C: @0 c5 _. K+ W( P! Q  |. [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- m! ]( c* N- s" ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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