【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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) u$ V3 W. A8 R6 Y5 T我另将歌词附在此。
+ O/ C4 P- Y6 t, wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ F- x0 X3 `9 N) q* c4 wFrom the first moment we met,
# ^; F) E# U! }/ \5 L7 Z, y" HI already loved you with all my heart
+ F- p6 _; ]+ U/ G4 q4 _0 ]- y3 W. ]We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; X; G5 B# Z# N- W3 y5 Z1 gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- Y! V1 T3 U9 II would probably know how you feel
! c1 I6 |; Q  ELove… just the word love
) }" O2 e( V  TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 R# l! `% M$ D- ]! d5 yBut I never did
0 G; ~% q+ D' e  B. eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ n/ V% N/ _8 J( DIf today isn’t too late,
/ p3 G+ t* ]* K2 E& N* WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 T/ N- R8 N8 R/ a5 J- \Love… just the word love
- `+ X8 c6 J0 u( {* T0 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 Z# J7 [$ J- a6 fBut I never did
+ ^& c  n$ D2 {; UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 K" J. v* n- o2 |, aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# h2 q. f" L' P0 eCan I entrust it to you?
9 k% P2 Q! l- sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% q" T0 C. q1 O# k# qEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 M' Y% n0 S0 Y8 {! j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" f3 S8 x3 c# w: `) Q+ R+ E+ x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 P0 f! R( a5 S1 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 C; b  d& P# ]' ~3 z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 R5 K" K! E' ]: r  a$ u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. i: V- x) W+ n1 ^- z; s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ l" v) g7 h6 v3 {' i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 _; @1 ^9 z9 s3 L$ I2 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: ]2 b" F* }0 F  c0 N! g& e% _! p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( {' T! u& F7 P) j+ m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& z  P- K! k- `% g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ s5 P6 @5 @5 u) d3 O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- a9 ~5 \/ F# N" M* y1 o) `! R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- n$ ?7 p/ }) q' T  o, ~$ ~# w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 r" X0 u) ]* N4 y' e2 _2 R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( J/ v1 h! g2 L7 q% U5 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 D) {, d* b! Q0 j( x4 [) t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ]# N9 `; H# {9 j; i8 `2 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 F7 d) A$ M6 i, g5 c# S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 B. ~# k4 k* q) u2 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 a$ J5 \% H' {0 `3 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 e* H. c3 B/ d6 M2 ]6 [<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& M$ @. \7 D! J2 @- o0 B) {0 D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 D5 p2 T, C/ f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" e& B& t9 |# L3 z! p<P>但我不会 </P>
+ G  J# x, ]6 M" z5 A( N9 r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 ?  l9 U1 H+ @% ^3 {1 Q2 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 |% b  I) i+ t$ K5 V2 ~' W9 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 w6 L* `. Q! v& Y$ B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 K  K2 S) \5 m- o$ f& @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ ~7 ~- j, N, ~# u& }+ ?) b$ n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  D0 D+ I  {3 I) `5 ]/ L" n; n3 } 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# ^+ ]  I7 V' p5 k& }) a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# w) P/ A& ~5 e; u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>