【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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  n) _$ G% O. r1 x9 Y6 M$ ]我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# d, L7 K  p/ h8 U- W3 m8 eFrom the first moment we met,
4 g+ ]8 ]& F% |" z4 @I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 F7 u" F2 b  _0 |) f  }% ^4 BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) D' ]* G( R8 [# u8 y1 vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 l/ R% A3 i1 B! e3 g  x. h3 ~( aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" u$ P1 E1 I+ N& m" Z1 N1 KEntrust my love within your heart
, t* M) {: d5 y; e6 zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% d) u$ K1 O) w1 P# k& ~0 HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: u! G% C/ S( j) L# O8 b/ FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  ?( s2 K  }9 }# P6 x, ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ |. t0 j6 z0 {9 }* }: f- XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 N8 f$ U" J! e+ s7 ^2 |, UEntrust my love within your heart

. d. T( V- l- _0 I- b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: c  @+ M; K) n& E: m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 N- j1 W6 _, m  O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* _. Q$ f' h( m9 O9 j/ N9 Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 \& m( b; ?1 J& B! S5 {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: g6 }# C* K) S1 \  ^6 E7 Q1 y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- z% n. \: t; _2 |6 a  I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ J1 f& ]2 h' j: d& w( v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! z/ r" X# T2 U$ P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ h  }4 d7 k5 D) R% E! c, J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. T- o8 e7 j: a6 ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 u/ b# n) ]) T) d5 @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 [& m* {9 T1 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ M6 G' w. m8 g: E4 X: T' E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% `% B( M/ a% w/ z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, R5 o4 F4 C5 D1 D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& P* A8 S9 D* T  x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" K2 I9 d8 _$ h4 t) d! j% R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 x7 n0 y" @3 p. }. o' N8 T+ I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 U4 f; P) v$ v3 ]# i  R% P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# ?7 u, S6 F- E4 t0 X* D" Y1 K5 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' S( P; i3 ]  V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( Q7 }; L2 {, K( K0 G1 o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ Z8 p& b* l6 p8 y8 M4 n3 M; ]2 \( ^<P>But I never did </P>
" B7 u1 B* L/ m3 }; R0 U) Y<P>但我不会 </P>
9 {: A* c/ X% Z. X8 j$ b1 k/ c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# g/ ^3 N9 _0 I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 w, f6 n* w3 D5 K: L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 k# n; F5 e9 Q! K2 w$ Q/ g: s# [  _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: M) W9 _4 c" A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" x1 b/ F. Y, L+ a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ |& @$ V  o& l4 [7 W  Y( p3 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 ?% f  z2 a& Z" Q, f9 r/ T, p" I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 G1 J! j, U5 c, D7 M  T3 V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ f: j% y: H# B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>