【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ w) M- g# y) B/ E4 e我另将歌词附在此。
5 E) o. K% N  v  O% J0 eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* g9 [  m+ ^# l) q1 Z+ lFrom the first moment we met,
& f; M& g5 @  ]0 `7 r# ^! e9 N2 g& ~# GI already loved you with all my heart
; b9 F1 u7 c- N% UWe meet and talk everyday,
! e" f7 ^+ I5 \+ ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ y) F# T, ]% A: VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 e- q9 I: e7 B9 d0 OI would probably know how you feel
# m' H8 a7 d- t* }( t9 F2 R3 GLove… just the word love
3 {* D+ k  B: e( t' V" S' I8 y9 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 `- u* u1 Q& ~7 t) |" s5 z& g7 XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! D) V3 ^; M) t) _9 g  l# sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& Q! l0 ?8 J4 q& N* i0 c# VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) h( Z" p6 m9 h0 Z% nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 s5 H* r& e. p; n( R& vEntrust my love within your heart
! H4 J4 ^: Q* mLove… just the word love
6 }/ m% q8 Q; M8 `* _Why is it so difficult to express?
& m. R. [1 M. f/ ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. L2 T+ c- ^  ~# ]& ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; m% d5 H, U3 ~8 ]* BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' J4 [  l: d4 U2 E, u: fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 J8 R6 @  j; C$ ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, ^# u( V/ Z- x6 r+ u) aEntrust my love within your heart
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& L( Z* ]( h6 u( w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# i* g1 w* R' x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# _' a% B3 H6 u  k7 ]: ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% `' q' H  I2 R/ O$ m6 E5 ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 E! n2 i* Y$ _. C. Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 Q' K" H$ O% \  v1 D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- x  A8 H+ h& j% Q0 R) u" A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# \: T7 E! I6 x, R. r! K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 r6 ]- y: D* E# X( s( D) A4 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- A2 n3 V/ T( c& A1 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 ^. J9 i: H* ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% u+ \: k' G1 d) h# k" F1 e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  d( v- X# [- w% w. f- k* ^, R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 u5 E! z5 d7 C) R3 \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, \, H3 q% z- x+ X# A; @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ {, g7 `% M% W. v, o* e- O+ H5 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! Z& ^9 Q7 l  |0 y  a<P>但我不会</P>
! ^. a; ^. S; j: _  T* F9 q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% |+ }& ~+ H, F, [- ]9 v( k; I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ [$ e2 `9 y- q# n7 {( a8 X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# j/ E- Y7 u* n' a5 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ A$ _* q  q' E, X( }& f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 k( E5 @. r- p; B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 E9 {$ _6 w- Y/ A% i/ Q. b<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! T6 e4 d3 d. n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 [+ ?) n/ ^: v: h" w4 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ F! ?# R7 r# ~9 J2 }6 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" j' J) A& h8 n- ^8 l* [6 M  ~- `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 A# f  j5 C2 I& ]$ @3 z: h. U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! n% b4 ]* Y8 R( X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 L# g+ z1 r/ ?$ I7 P7 l: `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>