【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 Y4 }; c4 e) n. X+ c! IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 P9 `" u! H/ k( _From the first moment we met,
: M  E$ b! D- ]3 H& ~& nI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 j5 J8 M* R$ l- JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' Q% h: z0 X* V, p6 ~0 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 s9 c, m/ F# J/ Q4 QI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& Q8 {. [4 v. H2 e) ^- u+ O! rI want to confess that I love you,
9 s4 ?2 G: b# n8 r+ t+ C  R) aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 g6 Z! P" q* d" AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) I2 h3 {% E* I! J8 D  b) vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" x5 D, O: {' l! x2 I0 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- u- a: f4 O5 ~. G8 JI want to confess that I love you,
! L; O4 s2 ]; p# k0 S& A& b# _But I never did
* _; X6 H( w% }" R- k2 rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. N' x" C8 i! i1 @' jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ W  Q2 |2 W3 ?1 u( j4 I4 N6 _Entrust my love within your heart
# p( p" P3 x  E9 k5 c2 t* ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) p) q  @1 e4 K( `+ ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: W* y; D2 ^4 c' C% M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) b% @5 A& ]/ T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 N4 T( i( G& _; n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 U4 t+ \# F1 d; r& X/ B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, R3 s0 B; ?; ?: F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  p9 j, {9 b- _! r) W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ y4 X6 {/ q* _6 Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' |, W( `% x& ~/ x$ N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; E7 F! s2 y& G' }1 I) N5 f9 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 t4 v8 m; O; A3 z1 i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ \% n) Q+ b9 o4 ^3 E( o7 f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; M, W8 f, n! t  {- {! \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% ^1 \" {0 K  f+ O  l1 s" m<P>但我不会</P>
+ s( F; n( M  g' u9 U4 B+ o, h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% x7 m& t7 ~+ P+ ]  a" Y1 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ \9 W; H( K7 y0 e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! a; q6 s1 T* c% m% s6 o4 W  p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ h0 p) e# l" y5 P7 X% u7 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( N; d& k9 _) T7 i$ O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 f, ?- a1 f0 F0 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& y/ J4 t0 K8 ]/ }<P>But I never did </P>
: f$ r' x' c$ w# O% t9 a4 A' R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 c6 h2 c: _; J/ i9 L8 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 H7 B$ x  p3 M: }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. g8 @/ c+ ]& O) H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 b# {" W' |  N2 k% I! E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 u6 ?6 n# I5 Y0 F$ f! v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% v& L' o7 p: Q+ U; P8 c: v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% e! m1 y* V+ _  A9 c/ C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! c) b: Q- m# ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; V& H) u9 s& X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. l, G: A3 f! N! c2 y( h4 s4 s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>