【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
$ Z& t. O9 M2 d6 E7 yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 h. h: m. l  K% Q; M7 ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 f( R( g0 T/ H' P9 oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. a. q, q- p- ]! n* E# X. ^" @+ IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; }9 w6 j3 D, O5 x8 YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ k  y1 E% E. l- z% Z0 eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" Q* I7 [1 Z4 p3 h) r7 V/ }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 v- C8 l2 I9 l" z; i; p, bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- m& }2 t5 n. H- U+ JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; k9 i/ ~' y$ m( g6 J/ m9 @% dLove… just the word love
$ g1 E7 U, `5 y( ^6 m& TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  M. L; O* y) a7 x1 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 Z- I7 i( [# E3 R) AIf today isn’t too late,
* O# f; x; E3 n2 I; tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 M! @, I' A- Q& w; UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 [5 A- l2 E/ v# O, V+ q% PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 Y3 r0 F6 b$ S# B<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 T* a# P  T/ [; f# G9 Y- r- H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 M- C& U4 q6 D. O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! w& k( L* n( {( ?1 H5 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 [' `. n& ~3 q+ U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! |' m* G' R6 C6 a9 Z" m$ l% k; g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 p& c, z+ F2 `- l2 q! M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. ?$ V4 a# k2 X# Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 d# t+ J2 F  @: G% F9 w4 z8 W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 |3 ~; W% r3 j' [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% k7 n8 b4 _2 t$ p2 i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 E! m, S) R( V8 {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* y4 n3 p2 m& @7 R! N$ K* [$ x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 Q/ N8 r) c8 v# {; N$ F5 a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 k# X1 s( ^  N& `6 w0 x) h" F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' ]0 f# B- B" X; v: [: ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 x5 _) h* e5 O8 M, `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. X4 I. n/ g* r3 e# N: E. f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 @% P' Z- O8 Y! ]0 _0 p' o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 m. e. p# X( ?+ [$ }* h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! {' }7 I" j' N0 X& Z/ T, \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& t+ |9 [8 q$ d1 B( ~0 ^1 y: |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" m: R- g0 Z. j% V% I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) p$ y& p8 @/ [9 G* T9 W' I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! v) Z, f! Y* _" S1 l  A9 f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( x+ P. }# A# k' Y3 J* G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 Q& y4 L6 J( v3 F<P>But I never did </P>
. B4 y! w( K# O, p& ^# p7 ]<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' k) [- H) S) I' f5 `3 F) s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  h& P9 u) Z; [8 T# `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* T  |6 c# \% E7 w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 Z1 N" M; Y# T" i: X) _% j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 n4 g4 T5 a6 R$ Y4 S/ }# T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 \0 U3 Y7 N) ~" n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% z; k/ x/ v) s) H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 _0 H- T, _! X* ^" O  ^% r 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, D+ G0 @2 @1 |! d9 N8 m0 P" T3 A) q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>