【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! A& v6 H& ~$ \0 \6 d& t" eI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 M8 J" p* N  |( Z8 Z1 fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ B* @! v0 e8 z: ~$ ]8 kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& o' s( Y8 n8 [, yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 y6 X! _! e- Q% P, H5 k$ Q7 NIf today isn’t too late,
2 X# ?; ^) M% Q) X$ N0 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 w/ M7 z; W1 O, ?$ e8 d. ^- I. @0 qCan I entrust it to you?
$ y7 M/ o7 G7 A: l7 b, ^6 y4 rEntrust my love within your heart
! Y2 ^1 I+ I" ~0 r$ tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 m) q+ v5 v/ _& F$ R2 OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( H" n  T2 c7 L( TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 L/ Z# L  N" J/ t" }, [  i# hCan I entrust it to you?
4 a" G' H+ ^8 `3 O6 l6 ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ h# T" w9 b' Q1 _7 X6 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! w6 k2 O2 `' \; R% F. e2 S% i, @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. U4 F  v# k/ S& T7 p8 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ U4 r% b! d2 a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' g) w1 B, n( T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ d/ m$ g& T; t' V/ \! I+ N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ O% y  ]* |$ \, Y( c7 e2 C5 \( n) L7 `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: U4 H  G( x# p1 k( s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. [2 L; _, a% u3 W# j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& A* V/ b7 ?4 W% C; P! C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: N, [6 w- g, z. g" }( _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' t( F  r' Z9 K* t( |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ X  z, M5 g$ f- _; J8 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ C+ t$ w0 k% S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 W# c  P7 O; Q) O( z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: |8 x: a- ~9 k+ J2 f3 ^0 d<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& Q/ a+ b1 k' s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& O* y3 a4 l& S. l9 U9 `" W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& l- J7 E  i5 z) Q3 T4 I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 v" L/ W3 f7 t5 d8 R" n<P>但我不会 </P>
- N' O# u5 O1 X7 Q8 e; X5 {! h6 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  v0 h( N8 V8 D  i# @" h' r& V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 o0 n3 d7 T. K9 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 h0 P0 R1 L$ p, k, i+ s. i$ Q1 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ z: }; p7 v( d/ u, |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. Y: n$ b( f, t1 w8 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 q0 l3 ^% l8 l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# U! J5 A* F- a& c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 L) W) T5 X4 ]+ Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" N/ Z; _% M6 F0 }! O7 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 J0 T; ^; P& I  m, ?) y8 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: }; `/ s. \+ M8 g& h2 p, P0 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  y& u8 E# E2 ~& r7 b" O0 ? 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 k" M9 B) X4 l* _+ R- O/ D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" q; U% `  k# ^9 k4 d: {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>