【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; g# O* N5 @: q* f; CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: S  Z, ?8 Z4 l' OFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: @& H4 Q" ?* rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ `; ^; t* `$ Y* E' C$ Q* BI would probably know how you feel
, b* s9 s7 ]; l; S' f5 VLove… just the word love
6 h. L  ^! H; B/ N; \5 z% GWhy is it so difficult to express?
  z1 ~8 G1 |, n' \% wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 U2 I/ u' O4 u5 z0 K  e( JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) M! f$ I0 x7 G# S+ lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ f2 y' h( t" [# b" BLove… just the word love
0 B* |) ?0 o& T/ X4 O3 F  yWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 B# x% O, U7 P. z4 G# M2 LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 [9 N$ X; }, Z1 s+ Z" SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. K# K9 s) J2 D4 N3 aCan I entrust it to you?
/ \8 i( l1 L% U0 p4 @) \8 qEntrust my love within your heart
* q- q3 a& T( [, wCan I entrust it to you?
+ }' L# {1 e% G3 B! IEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; q5 L0 V/ r4 ?8 [% G0 n+ @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ P$ o+ V4 _5 C" p/ q% V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: \1 I/ k# f) r4 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! n- \% h' X$ s8 m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" y! a/ I5 |% h+ K& x' t# _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 L& s" [8 X# e6 W7 T( N1 W4 c% Q0 e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& {8 _1 G& t  j+ x% L# M6 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: x$ d! B2 U, T( l1 y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( g& v: {* w3 l1 i- K$ ?, c4 r- y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! z  x6 P8 W3 t* L  e* r7 x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& J1 m4 N% R* w9 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- i. ]$ a/ W2 k<P>但我不会</P>
$ @! ~; ?. F6 y4 J! E: h3 C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 h$ n4 u9 a3 H) o% b0 b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 `$ {, d+ A1 u8 Z# p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" y9 l( r9 C/ P" w) H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: R! A9 X; `; B8 O) n$ f% c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- ?2 K/ g" r% Z4 _) ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 p$ y+ P2 f* [  ~6 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ n$ G% p; ~# {9 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ S4 G8 ^8 L4 }8 E: }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' }' A; h) F' }7 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ x" {+ P; n1 P- |  c: e9 S: S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 L3 O" I# ]2 _0 l+ P! h<P>But I never did </P>
7 e8 U( e) v1 T<P>但我不会 </P>
) n' ?, L2 {' }: C# ]& w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. k* a, a, h1 J8 c/ h! c5 C% E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; T7 Z/ p9 O% D5 M  x  K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 {* @% c( x$ z% D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ |6 @! S$ N) S1 G7 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 Y" E8 E" B8 ~+ F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ k/ V* [3 {& p2 c* ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 d9 Z, J- ~( @0 I3 K. m& J0 W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ E2 N3 k, a; H! }4 b7 @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- t2 _6 ?" C5 c- e# E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' ~/ _2 m7 M0 L: g, r! Y' T; V1 h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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- I9 b' P+ K0 [2 B1 O<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ Z3 o/ {1 ~: S1 j- q+ n! e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>