【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( {- D2 r4 @& B+ G2 l1 W& Y6 O* I' v我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% `4 y3 g2 i, ]# ]( ]# o- RWe meet and talk everyday,
- h# N) {9 u6 i$ K. m3 E+ [* aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 U! s. g9 r6 f) h- D; \  rLove… just the word love
7 M8 @/ v+ t2 l: S7 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
( O& L% w0 w6 S3 s, M3 iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 J0 h& ]2 C. e( ~7 \; RIf today isn’t too late,
! \+ M7 R3 v- F4 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 P1 g: e$ t9 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ e7 x2 _. L9 UEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 S+ e6 {* s) Y' q# SWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 I% P2 o! E/ ]' oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 t% c! A6 j- P6 A8 ]% }/ @4 c9 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ a$ i. p; _* f% u% s& CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ J; Y5 `; h$ T: @6 P+ f# A# q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ O1 P7 e) ^; E) F; m! P  M) r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  m' s* P) N2 e' @1 Q0 I( q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* F: E/ r5 A1 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ P: t& T! Q( C5 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 P% b/ l! y4 y% c8 Z; v5 P, n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 C; n1 y1 ~2 O0 `. h" G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. e: S) t1 R4 b! I6 C- i: ?: C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, W& N) d& x1 i0 W" [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 w. t" o9 D# W& [( p, c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ e0 Y7 `0 g% D  v4 b+ c! a2 k2 |8 s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 x% y  a6 n, ?& j<P>但我不会</P>
8 W2 Z( I8 {# g( b4 y3 h4 j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 S. x3 s* `9 d/ \* C; ]5 P* ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 [6 F) A. j: |! R2 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 U4 E, {; Q  U0 Y$ v! M+ Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& Z' Q0 {5 t3 m1 E+ r; ]" I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% i. Z8 _7 Z; |4 g* X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  L4 a8 ~! Q0 f7 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* l! W( X0 S& _7 a$ O8 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* L1 p  J! G& @: H+ O6 d, e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" x* {' i/ R- V& H2 x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 ?6 \  ]6 z& M) y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ `1 X9 T' N; T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: ^0 k+ a4 V1 p1 w% ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 b  C' H0 y6 q5 h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# y% I. r. y0 `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 p: C; W6 ?$ X0 b8 y4 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* a2 p; I- D0 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: {, |6 o  X( w% U( n% m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( C. g: C8 w3 w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! ~: G7 e8 w' C0 {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ i! z" J7 n+ ^2 W; j+ [& t) L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>