【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ B9 I+ C! G  p$ b  L, Z) i9 c" GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 Q6 D8 S, t( S" X! C6 J; s; gFrom the first moment we met,
9 h4 G  T* @' Z+ ]* N0 [' UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; R. t. m- s) Q& \( s! M1 y# aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 O5 B8 Z( k( ~2 s1 YI would probably know how you feel
) n+ L3 u: e$ D, CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 H+ a, j; `8 Y, ?% K% b4 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  C. o' i) E6 f& V  e* q/ G- @If today isn’t too late,
. t& O  K& c, Y8 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' \5 [) V2 N$ N" c9 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 J% v4 G% Q6 ]- ~4 BLove… just the word love
8 M, y7 l; o, I- _+ W$ h, fWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 V. J& v9 H( P- G0 pI want to confess that I love you,
* s2 @: ]5 A$ _# jBut I never did
2 e  R9 u$ M2 ^3 ]! L. yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 I, N, B. p, s* a6 [: B/ ]1 MIf today isn’t too late,
# c3 j: @9 y0 T1 r3 t" Z" ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) r. t! |' O* [5 P* s  _Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 N$ E! q. J$ a9 ?" rEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' m- r" j# y0 B  F- p6 v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  S5 @, S+ l  R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; Z6 @+ B2 _9 F% t  _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  u) x) X$ z7 @0 a/ B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, j; D: O9 g+ K: e0 E$ K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ H! {+ A  d) e! i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 L( m3 K( f; e/ f* v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% L& V3 J0 ?. W" x3 t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& f; W; g( K) q' [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& h: j" X1 u: O  H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: L9 `1 Z! J& f, V1 Q9 {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# C5 I2 H( m# |/ T% c. C/ o+ c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 _! R% N' f! q! s3 z3 n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 @- i9 O. W( b8 t$ J- w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! r+ _% S  W+ c7 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 ^, j/ W7 R# b6 h8 b# D" G  T<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 V) E, J9 F" r& e5 k, e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 a, r9 A; X8 d3 M9 l) W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) G+ d- ^) b8 p5 [3 X  L2 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& e6 n' _' N( N+ y. h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' T& l! V, M1 e( S! u4 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" s: W  j' g5 i4 E/ H! i" a! U) `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" R* v& }; ]: A3 _  @; q2 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. U: H% |5 [+ ^" x: \0 J0 O9 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 ]1 }; F( X; Y' S& Y' j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 Z1 l& V9 z+ \" k% ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 a0 I$ t4 S0 {0 c) v& j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ ?# P4 _% i# U) i<P>But I never did </P>
, E4 M+ m1 q7 \) B( p. I" R, k$ @<P>但我不会 </P>
) V/ k2 W$ ?0 j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* S- w, y/ P' J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) c/ C0 R8 q; S! q7 h" H9 \/ E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 H* R$ B5 l7 a+ s& m3 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ c9 O% s2 U2 x9 y+ n) n+ h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. Z' q; ^0 A, i, T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 I, S" _( |" g3 k9 ^1 V& \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. s0 P2 E' i& G2 m, o$ w0 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 }/ Q  W% t7 ]  l& y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 D; Z: E$ D# n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>