【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( n0 s) J7 h0 O! a我另将歌词附在此。
7 \8 U" e4 t# p( NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" t" ~# [* o3 Z  P& qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ y- x& n5 E  `' WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ B' X8 D. ~- X& u/ e. c8 zWe meet and talk everyday,
3 p( j. W9 ?5 t7 UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 r) L* ]$ y) w: |I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) `' `! {$ I! t5 L% v5 T3 I; L. \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# p( i0 s% C, |8 h, _4 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& E3 X6 p4 Y* _3 O! J4 c" PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  q: {  s2 t9 Z( o- SEntrust my love within your heart
/ r  c: J/ M0 i& Y  dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) x, n3 A* J8 P  ?; \) Z9 n2 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) n/ r& |( `. g' h9 [( s+ U" R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' Z" @' v- N2 z6 s. a# p9 J0 W8 c; l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: G8 b. ^. y* s+ L0 ]; O2 u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% H- c/ ], y; N- N9 j( Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  t2 u8 I! D& T2 F6 k2 J7 o( ?" D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, i4 @1 q7 n( K8 [+ \0 g- P1 R  @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( P; _$ T- E+ Z* j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 f) ]2 {, ?# ~+ e! }5 c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  W) h/ x2 j' p. l: C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 ~9 I- F5 G, v* h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, G* {" Y, [3 v& I+ f, g' H, s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ z8 k8 p5 N8 {  R" y% a6 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% w, f8 Q. e6 z1 U& Z! V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 z5 \& Z( E# a+ n1 _" p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) n) T& M& ~7 ^' u) N: j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  b8 i3 G& p. T5 x8 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 {; }5 b9 N6 A- F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; A5 g4 x6 w# Y7 _3 @* r$ d1 k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# D* [; o1 ^8 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; i( x1 ?) T- T3 n; v* h8 a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) ]* @9 G& b; p8 J7 s' `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) o( P; f# T7 _1 C( E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 a8 C  A. K: W6 C" H( }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 l  g. f$ M. h4 E+ W4 f8 E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  p8 A" Z% D2 R0 d; N8 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 N' P/ X/ l8 X1 u- C<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 d; N( |# V" r% ~; {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 O2 p/ ?; Z5 w/ [) F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( Z+ V1 a! f- X, D! r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, `8 p% g$ h" z& _7 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 O$ l' j( m% H2 d( P+ x8 i- F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 q" B. q. [- n5 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  H% Q$ L" Y# b% J; x7 x0 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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) C, C9 Q8 ~, n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>