【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" D2 j$ {7 _, B0 [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. V8 D! Z' @9 vFrom the first moment we met,
- v, x3 ]' J2 f% V4 U4 M8 kI already loved you with all my heart
! L% z9 f  X2 r  _4 i% TWe meet and talk everyday,
# u" Z% Z2 P: e( ~1 UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 }$ w7 U7 u) G/ _2 {! zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 H1 T* Z/ d% _- fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 c/ g6 F3 l4 @4 k  t! g1 zBut I never did
3 z$ w% i3 X  N- K' M9 ]8 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* t! b9 X# B  o) HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. q" M( T3 s1 t, _* u; dWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 z4 e* b/ k( O& t' xI want to confess that I love you,
& H( I) o2 D2 bBut I never did
. L* O7 P! I/ y; ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 ^6 M% P! b, ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  Z5 Q3 ^  h1 @( p7 X/ {" ]( x1 Y0 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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# B/ a, @, @" y& {; q% o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- `* m& b5 F! i# f7 W  N2 b  d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, ^! [7 S& \9 s5 j  A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 T: g! e% v* K9 `1 N) b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# H  Z7 ]0 v- i' L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 }2 R* q6 f9 Q5 p, W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 _  H$ T6 c# W: s7 R5 ]4 m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 C+ a2 J3 ?( W$ ?( D5 k+ G7 J# A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& l* |& r2 ~- f9 i4 I) y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 d% L: [* t7 j! k3 s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- H( @; R& c* z- j" C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 p7 ]$ y5 ]* K# W8 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 Q/ U4 G. V' Q- N5 @  V$ N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ i# P5 L4 G7 q' V' F. G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ `) i0 O5 K% l9 ^. A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 [2 \* v( M1 v( P/ X) V$ @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 p- `: _0 q2 f7 t0 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& q/ _, H/ J& I" Q2 Z! o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 g" J& `" }! t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ e' {  L- E% Q/ B1 Z+ O<P>But I never did </P>
$ R5 |# U" X- O  l/ _# k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 R. v# z- J/ m* c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, F5 \) Z: r) ]6 ?) U* p5 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, z: X+ ?2 N+ c$ N1 w( Z. L) m9 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ V9 n" d0 s9 C/ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 ?; a2 [- i# `  K8 |7 J4 W& `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, K; Y: U0 S  ~4 q+ H; `% ]3 G' `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, N9 H+ r- j; ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& s# I" i2 W1 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 m, ]# x3 L! ^5 V0 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: d5 T$ ^4 i. }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 ?* [3 z1 j. A* ]: K; r- V* L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>