【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& S) t" R: x3 fI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 p" f) i# T( @4 F9 A8 f8 ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: a* F7 q; p. j) X/ R4 hI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 G5 d+ ~7 x/ U. r! u" ~I want to confess that I love you,
; o8 s) d" [5 rBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& d1 U7 T# Z' E6 u; Y- Q: nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; _- ^. Q- a! O$ e' FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 g& Y  v* c% O& u9 xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 B* g' y/ q6 z" O! HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 F' Q7 T9 f; V$ _! bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 _( A, A, I7 S. F/ S3 @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; e3 r5 t8 E, y4 `) w$ v1 Z9 H# WCan I entrust it to you?
# M3 O  X. F6 H3 B! a5 x1 K- n: |Entrust my love within your heart
, {! j( F, ~' r: h  TCan I entrust it to you?
' F/ d9 d. _3 i4 u0 YEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" [' g7 W/ \/ H3 l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 t( W1 V; i0 W9 r* i8 P* x4 A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 }7 b4 h1 I5 B( V' l5 N# Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 ]; D, R' U' d, L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; ]4 T2 T7 K/ g3 b4 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- }5 H6 @. A5 A  b/ G; R" t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, ]4 X. `/ z  k4 M: |3 v& N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ i0 B* t; Y6 G& q' R7 U/ h- g$ U9 a9 k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( ^5 b* R( t9 z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% I/ E. ?! i: H; Q! H# r0 ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& c- i) n/ p( F  W4 H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- I! o, V1 q' z' }' ?! Y) x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, ~0 m9 j% Y9 a: D, J$ q' T0 Q" ~. X( @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  u6 s% z8 V0 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( M$ Q1 q9 q$ y' x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ a( E+ k6 |+ B2 V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* A* A- l6 b+ m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 ^& s8 e1 W6 v! C- M4 L  p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- A7 ~9 }8 c  Z1 Z! d1 b1 B4 C. [- I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ e6 `2 p* h4 {: p& k6 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 K; V' e1 C2 \: }( X8 n. w( v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 Y% v4 u. z4 p3 A; D( M" Z( d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; |- W  P6 F) n5 b. q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- E1 h. M! t( _) g) m. o<P>但我不会 </P>
- u3 u. j" l6 i0 p2 H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 h8 s. u* e: J4 K' c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* X( T9 ?0 v% A+ H% Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* r! [- Q- `6 P# Z) e2 J: J( I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( i# ^& Y0 m& e2 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; V& J4 ~' A: [; c+ H0 k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) T6 u6 x6 M: }; B+ C5 K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 s+ d! f8 S' x( {5 U: Z8 z: u3 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>