【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
8 g, S! ~# P) S% tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% P  x* _6 |% N5 F5 y' f, T1 O+ DFrom the first moment we met,
* j5 s+ ~! ^% N. ]/ j; W6 EI already loved you with all my heart
0 V3 d. z# ]' D" [+ C, D& _9 }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 ^0 ^0 L+ ]% ~" l9 p; b, O; nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  f: k" O, F  \5 O( \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 t# W. v( Y: a, X$ Z2 f' U% xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 |) Q3 F0 H8 ]: t% k8 @Can I entrust it to you?
& V/ L" |" A9 L. pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% b) X4 J2 K( y$ }0 Y8 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! s& i, z0 p# b% }$ tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! g) `3 G: i/ m0 UIf today isn’t too late,
! C# I/ _5 ^7 m; u+ v0 i, vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& Q* n! W7 o% J% hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( g0 C% ^1 P6 ^$ ~: ^1 Q) lCan I entrust it to you?
3 d7 C, z6 }. mEntrust my love within your heart

2 y- l6 r  o# c1 f6 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 J7 S+ A1 A9 }7 _$ j' f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 w- \, q; T3 e& X! Z* T: [2 t; \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 j* d' {, \: E9 Y+ f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  ~7 V0 y# ~: b) ^: R. H( y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- S6 j8 u. N; H$ S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 T3 a6 J6 @- |+ \& |- V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& b0 ^8 n3 C% v/ J; l! B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 z  t' P0 J" |8 D+ h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% a4 ?: u8 S5 H# E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( b) {9 X( s8 z0 Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- H2 v! b( @, u. q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 S& H4 ~3 X; c0 j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 A( S/ i" n# u& r/ E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 e, V! @. _% L0 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! A  x% J2 X( q8 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; I* L; x; X+ `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) v" R# E; F$ a* @: w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, A1 n& }7 `1 s) o2 V2 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 x! t6 k  w+ C4 Y2 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 ]( U3 [! B4 a' u3 m0 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 G, k7 C( G+ i/ R6 ^0 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- |$ Z& |8 h1 ^" R; m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 f5 q% I  l5 M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 d: l9 `% A- k. u. w/ t% H1 U: R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) a# y9 ]8 b* y, ?# D) R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. |) {3 j/ G$ d9 I3 J: K$ b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% j9 I! H# V: d0 U- ~) M& \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% Z+ @1 V; O8 ?3 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; J; j' _8 U6 C! R4 A# K: l( u9 U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( W- \: V8 |/ w" {( Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 q; ?( {+ X! g! y7 j1 c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 h; t3 N0 t" M0 V( L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  [; j. ]" C: u% V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>