【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  H% o) Q& s* O+ m9 ?我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& i+ }' ?- }' ~/ gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# T% q; o7 }+ i7 g' q* K; Y; TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" T# E' |5 V3 A0 oI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 e+ H* `7 h/ h# g$ U8 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
, ?" q, ~1 U( Z1 j! j6 h5 G% I. lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% D8 B! B+ M" |) V# AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- }6 O% Y2 i  WWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 h" |& M- @8 @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% ~& p4 b7 y( p. e: |, n( ^$ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ {) x$ _) H' {; Q7 I; ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  D% k4 p: P7 P: p6 i+ j9 eEntrust my love within your heart
4 A$ a8 m1 K0 c( @Can I entrust it to you?
4 K( {0 B( n, D7 z, Y8 ?Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 M+ n/ K$ a9 G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& p9 o! E! j' k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 B4 x0 D, j  p0 [8 j; S' Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 Z; M0 E4 \* E) b8 n5 }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& y5 h! B; U( f5 ?8 u3 t8 O4 w/ k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 s9 T3 F, r2 C6 z9 u* ~0 _7 K# {4 P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  I- c  ]( g9 R2 V+ x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- }7 ?9 j9 G$ x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 A; Z- R, Y( F8 M" u6 [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 g2 a1 H( r) C# @  N5 K% ?  L' M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 t; ]1 N6 U, t1 ^0 j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x5 R7 H' W, ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 R0 a4 r+ E$ T- [# h* p7 y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 ^7 l  M1 `, A6 W' k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: V- L/ r+ l: B3 q5 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ Y# Q" n3 y! n0 q. I8 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! b3 j/ ^9 m+ ?4 J$ M9 j( X; Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ V) [6 z! g, p  e6 A, d" H* x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 `- r9 p: F* x6 R% ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 i* M  N% Q# i4 i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) M3 Z% c$ x% l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 S9 _+ n5 y' Q3 e<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. K6 m0 E! h+ {% G& C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# _" L0 g, ^8 |9 y/ Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) m" d- x- J+ r) R3 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 M9 `) V' j6 B( R5 Y/ e: F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& Z5 @5 v* R3 \- W# f7 S+ k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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. s5 ~  j$ ]. U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; D7 l! `% g' \1 d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>