【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' c; q0 h' L% _5 g, I8 o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 ]# A- Q% E% D4 z& N. g. yFrom the first moment we met,
4 S( j8 U) z  @: ^I already loved you with all my heart
' Y; _  @+ j: k: k7 z3 O, R- UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 O7 [. b: X% i( \5 rI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 J7 o. b- p) t2 F& fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% f7 B  w& L$ t  T7 j6 z5 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! L5 _/ z- n& E9 E+ NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- A2 K9 }- q* r7 G# AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; Z3 f$ P8 ?" S2 \I want to confess that I love you,
4 d% D: Y+ f$ s3 @) l( s  ~0 [; GBut I never did
) S* d8 N: y9 G# b: UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 Z, u7 z' b+ jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' \+ R; \! q8 t* I2 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  P; _$ |7 o( g+ M# ]3 Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' D( M! u' N6 t/ m4 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 g" K' z6 H1 E8 L9 n0 q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 k6 I$ l, ?6 s) |. e) T! a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 U! R9 q7 T7 t1 u$ {. f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" s) G$ y, U: s+ A: x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; ]* W+ v+ v8 R* N4 z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ Q+ ]7 v3 _" e8 N2 ?, E% w4 k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 u% O4 a1 V, R8 `7 g( ?  J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ R2 M8 W, u/ D% g) B7 i3 [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# t1 E8 _/ V$ S9 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  z% n/ g* `$ p$ D- f* Z4 T# A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& R! `; ]4 m$ D4 g3 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ]+ l! P4 M3 G% _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 f5 P  }. a2 x2 J9 ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 G7 z9 t) Q, J; O5 D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! L  Y9 w* G- {, Z+ X$ r9 W: ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 k) ]/ v7 B4 n+ u4 }! H  h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) G# f8 E+ E3 L" h$ j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 ]7 l# J1 ]( B! h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; W0 q  L( J' o, H) w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 M6 h: Y" z# I  L/ `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- w" k: y4 R! M) O# q  R8 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 t, M. K, o7 n8 N( x1 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% D) l: t7 _0 {' j4 h' ~) Q8 v6 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 K: a% Z( ^) M4 [- l9 j1 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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5 o8 u+ C7 W7 y: M  b<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" V4 I+ }$ S7 e3 O2 ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>