【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! {9 y# n, g3 I( k( \: t# n( p我另将歌词附在此。
8 c# K/ v  T& [  wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 g6 _) k. Y. Q3 Z. UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* y! l6 A1 N9 S) {+ L0 l. O9 IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( W' o; N- {  w: NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 y) D/ Z# ]' sLove… just the word love
) W) ]/ l! n1 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- Y. m$ h# G! c) k( J4 a' [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 x- Q+ _) l2 V" ^7 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! ]) v1 t5 `2 z/ nCan I entrust it to you?
6 \4 f/ [; S& e! u* T: ^Entrust my love within your heart
3 T- I  E  O7 w# [- u9 }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 M' v, [5 A/ u9 p: lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, D& C; [2 v6 L4 F. {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 K0 ^! z3 ^8 F, g/ RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ N$ L8 U- ]* j  }: k4 A7 u3 zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ M1 t4 K/ e$ x. t  S: i* xCan I entrust it to you?
3 ]3 W+ j0 Y% s+ ]Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ A' C8 g; `7 J2 A1 W# j* K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# V3 P. u# `2 j8 d4 N2 ~9 }, d- E" v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* f( m' r- R2 t8 ?7 N- {. _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 {+ s$ W/ A% q; y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" H9 V# P9 X" K/ N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 X2 L# q$ e4 a% I- k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# u. L, p, w& h. \% K& @* @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 d" {% {% S4 x: V  w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 K) \/ l8 D% T4 }) w6 J: O) N4 ~) k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 L+ n% p, A1 C( Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) d! P% G7 L7 O" v* U* y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) `+ I& z, V. n8 @1 ]8 e5 t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ @: k5 Q  Z( ]) p' M4 k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ E2 ?# e, S! ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* N- M" P; l$ X0 T1 b6 r0 {* Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# u# ]) q' O8 H6 v5 j: r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: m3 J7 F; k9 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! F" Y: y6 R- y$ `- _' H( \! v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 [) b' y) I% j4 |* [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" g# l2 t# U* H7 l9 G4 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# v) j' b; m4 }* ]" Z4 w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" C% w7 g/ C5 B1 _. t7 N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* s, J" {2 I) }1 }  s' {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: `7 k" k; [/ @  I2 u5 n* W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- o: X3 S: ~2 u: @2 D  ^, [- _$ n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- L& g3 _2 H5 V1 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 L; s% h9 @: R8 F) B0 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  h6 N/ _! u' k' j' `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 ^2 `# L3 T2 X8 Q; N3 @3 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>