【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ z2 V6 ?- o+ ]5 R9 g% cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% E2 K" u4 u0 d4 }  p/ n8 AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, Y. H. M0 b2 Z( d2 Z- y1 b; p  |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 R% Z( U  A; R5 W8 F& v& NI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# c7 T. T* V! A% C5 D; }( P- `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' u$ F$ _8 C: z6 p, k' sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! D- L, ~" r& f# H% ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- E& r8 @; m- mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 `, e) J0 Q; v& ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- u/ |: L) c  H" Y3 NIf today isn’t too late,
9 |" M- K7 m% F, nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 [9 ~5 j+ M$ O; M5 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" t' `4 P) y/ J5 b0 J9 aCan I entrust it to you?
. \: i3 v9 v" @Entrust my love within your heart
: s  N1 s  J  S+ ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 e/ B4 I, s& ^7 I: c: P, F' x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 X$ o' m1 X+ @0 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 ]1 R; {% h9 d5 i3 l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 X" t) C- b5 d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 ~8 N. [4 D1 l- G4 n6 R3 H5 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 k/ @- e- Y: C& F9 G/ d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& c6 `( Z' n6 ?2 `, n6 \# e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. l+ u5 A: C% s9 o! Y2 `, C% \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 D- @+ u! T+ i, ^; n+ s  _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ l; z* @/ F" W2 n; b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 ]) s9 Z0 x8 ~8 Z+ w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 `. m2 ?+ q$ N& G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ j6 Q; Q: W+ N' x7 @* n  l+ j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: U% d, U, X* f7 P0 ~4 g/ ?/ m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ }. x( _& s# ^- a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 c. [9 T/ B0 y8 L5 G+ c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' T+ M. W+ \. S2 @8 k  l: \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  P( @; F  H' q* {3 j  R/ Z1 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 p8 o+ h* ^- w) H9 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 V- u; @: p) Z7 C5 O$ H3 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) s/ S+ s  k8 f$ ^0 H# I4 Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ M; Q0 |3 y, {) q  ^2 H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, h! t3 p# D7 Q<P>但我不会 </P>
. E& ]. t6 N! \# s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" F/ S8 F$ R+ d* N2 M1 [- y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 q! B4 \+ D: J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! ^" ]) }# _2 }- i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% t. @5 z1 @: g: V: b. v. y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 T5 W6 ~; O1 f" G, }& f/ \9 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- S$ P4 C. K3 }' X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- l& C; l9 M% x, k+ @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* w' R6 n( \  `2 _5 I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>