【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 l. V, {2 R2 Q2 `+ G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' q4 J  X# t2 H0 b  k' W  wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) h1 A/ y  ?$ p9 i7 @+ RFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: I9 S/ |3 Y: I# Z4 I' ~* qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! T( z! k$ {! S( I% sI would probably know how you feel
" l7 u4 q2 ?" P/ Z8 D  b4 vLove… just the word love
8 W$ o$ m9 y# v- fWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 d1 o. U+ c, A4 N6 yI want to confess that I love you,
& Q" C, @' T- x/ ^' XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( g1 x  c7 y: \# S0 MIf today isn’t too late,
( M7 l# N$ k1 y7 ^& h! L" O* DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( V$ ]) B! x. v8 o6 x  V+ c$ \Can I entrust it to you?
9 K9 f: G$ R# L4 MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' l' X( s" h& y7 A" hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ D. j! b3 f$ k' s7 m* u$ J8 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ]& k. a# u' YIf today isn’t too late,
4 P$ ]. C0 k( J; F: `5 iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 ^9 x. }5 i, m. ]3 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  {" _  z8 f, CEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 h" S' O8 i3 C0 ~* O% f/ w! g! mEntrust my love within your heart
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9 A0 L6 x. _/ o8 t  S4 \! I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 [: I3 A. b/ S! O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 K6 W. y; r1 h" v) x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" F& r* \, k  N$ o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ g! M" H  R& N6 ~3 v! U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ y/ |+ f% y. [, l- R: @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 O8 t- s; ^  a3 R; b  ]2 r. N- o" b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' C* ]4 P5 V/ ~) o( u) d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. n5 t3 A* P0 Q2 {. u& t0 T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- X; c, _3 _  }7 \: `% E; c' M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  _  `5 Z* w/ \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ w6 J9 @. l4 U; ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 f6 A  d, m/ P3 z, {+ W! i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  V3 A* e( P) _/ C) n5 m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 z" b" h5 V* J9 _- N9 N. _" g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ f* X2 s- a8 |9 I  C4 c6 M: P) N, |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' V& L7 g% e% T# p$ I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, r# e0 F& J* e7 g3 S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 h# N9 V5 a4 o: W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* L4 e  {1 r: u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 x$ O/ O$ O0 n6 r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 A0 y0 A( }9 q- t% O( J7 o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. X& g) s# }+ [! S" Q8 Q) ], E1 c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 _$ o0 }1 P' O6 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" M& A3 O7 L2 o  R. U& O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) h# |! N6 I+ G2 L7 x' O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% L1 H: \3 H8 P% @& I6 D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& _* s/ L9 U  C; q+ L$ k% o- t* t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 v/ `, `2 S6 H& C- d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>