【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 [/ g0 b: U4 E' r我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 H& n+ e0 b" `# \0 OI already loved you with all my heart
& v; s/ Y- i  j3 WWe meet and talk everyday,
4 V' L! q) y: ?. {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 C2 I8 Z  Y; |  @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 S) K  B, y; X* X; b3 CIf today isn’t too late,
* P! p- U( ^! e( F' e; JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  \  D- r3 [" g) mEntrust my love within your heart
4 f! L7 b& e3 o. d6 k  VLove… just the word love
% l8 h; s; `8 S/ c% C5 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 E& {& i; b( m0 M% ^" y( xI want to confess that I love you,
5 R& ]7 B' W. kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, {; c2 e" _8 L& X" aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; A4 Y) x5 b" H- D( {4 I% mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 P4 W. }! C0 ~; [* DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' r  u0 @  B' g, a! y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# t; a0 `5 O  q9 A  v  V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, E4 `. Y! G& L/ J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; T6 B- P: y' m* W6 j% |( _# g; G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 V7 p- O$ \4 Q5 r4 I- t( q  y; I- V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 _/ D6 j' b# ?) J% Q8 }* c0 @- @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  R* B4 x) k8 b4 n6 @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' N; Z/ @- h2 j4 R1 z8 U; M9 _3 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& ]7 M- P2 d6 s$ l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 y8 {  ^. n& a& V9 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' b7 m' E0 x9 [- x1 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 q5 l1 S5 ?3 w6 [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 t& e+ C: l+ J, o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, v) z3 ?0 b" f1 G+ i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 P3 z5 a8 b9 z0 b) L% b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( |8 K; y+ N" w5 h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% w+ g1 |5 @8 k4 u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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8 P, z) V% F  X) k: \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* T: {: h/ x2 @- t; u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, e9 |0 Z) k7 [; _$ e- \* \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 C2 E. J+ [' v1 R7 [& y& }! G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( D1 I# A9 h6 _6 W9 [% E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: ?, \3 _$ ~# z% g# V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>