【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# ?/ w1 M9 l. }6 T1 |/ `我另将歌词附在此。
% j: a; T& t: R+ B$ zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ n1 `. O2 c  E% D% TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 _' i: S5 @9 T( Y* QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( C! H5 c0 i) J* s/ O) LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( O8 ^. B! Y9 L) [5 V1 ]& b* _" F% iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 K( y4 e3 y: bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* P3 C; |7 }" c+ r1 AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 g+ X! L) b: {  t; CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( ^: h0 k' E  t: n( [2 i% GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 i! v( p/ Z' PIf today isn’t too late,
. _, I- N2 j- B1 v8 ?2 s6 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 D+ t$ D7 h  S6 S' }5 J- C) m; a7 bCan I entrust it to you?
* T. f2 ?" K* r3 a; FEntrust my love within your heart
6 [% m& [) I6 t: O& z4 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 Z# t* q5 s, N2 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ p/ p' x. Z, G# D9 w6 K: n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% @6 @4 m0 A! J8 B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! Q- O8 \6 T! [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ j9 a3 V$ d3 {6 U1 _1 K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 N& J& t- p- }' }- Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( e2 ]9 ], S* A5 c$ J+ p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  T/ Z( u. E) K0 c/ A3 k7 Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 X! r/ t# t- C4 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) q" `- `* ]& X2 G* |  u: x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 Z: Q3 F  }9 i% D2 O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 z+ a. q9 n" f; \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ s* W8 F( y! G3 q1 Z% f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ l' J" t2 P- Z0 A4 @) S2 U& A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& M( ?& [- a; [0 q( z' n- ^<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 p6 R& ?3 I8 G" k; ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# f2 k2 T3 ~* D* {1 V7 m$ w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, G* |" Q" v! K' `# Y) R6 w5 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  y# F& k3 m9 ~& w3 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 X7 {0 ~* A! {# ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% a: ]; L' x4 e# j! s& X5 P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' e5 e. _' D# Z7 q: L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 f3 h3 p  S1 o# l/ L5 \5 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; O" B" |9 q5 q8 b% o3 O* b  U1 s7 d<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ ?. K& a' r% o8 G<P>But I never did </P>
/ d  U4 p2 ^/ U; r<P>但我不会 </P>
  i' |$ J" a  `* A+ j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 n; `, u5 A# J! a: g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) n7 t; D' G8 ~8 A( r) j/ Y( \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 N3 @4 ~7 U5 a$ b% I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ r- O% M2 H( z; Y/ I$ H6 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 M/ @' l( y- F$ K4 q& J: `- G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# h5 ]8 l+ N% p4 l) P! D( u% X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 y5 U! d0 n0 b2 x* _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( l* E( @7 s! h5 w8 ?
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 {* e" X6 O! k0 l3 G4 Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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