【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 T! e! P% s* q  P$ M: W我另将歌词附在此。
0 h  w) l" k, C( Q2 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ y6 l* L$ [& NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* H' o; y0 A8 o! |- V  cLove… just the word love
6 p' |' B. m+ aWhy is it so difficult to express?
, T, {# a- m# \  s. jI want to confess that I love you,
6 m" ], t; H: X/ ~5 |* d& J* zBut I never did
1 L. W* r. u  \  n, E- E! IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ ]6 D! `- B- P# n, h% wEntrust my love within your heart
0 `1 Q: o4 h# j' S, TLove… just the word love
# z+ }: f. A2 M6 j. p) A3 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! ?$ Q& x: o" LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 J* R* D' z5 R1 T" BIf today isn’t too late,
$ j( ]; F& U3 z3 U& V, a  J8 [3 _- eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) @- Q' {- T1 E9 x& WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  K' S1 m- O5 T5 oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 x5 c. z/ K( Q: ?0 g& g3 _& UCan I entrust it to you?
, c. v) `2 K0 |2 KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: N2 p. m! e5 D" m: u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 C; C9 i+ I- k  g; U  c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 C, h! m8 `/ }* l/ I- _5 F, s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% ?4 t3 b- j' t) L2 G, n% E4 k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ x) P+ Y: B: \8 [* ~5 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 P! m$ ]! o3 D3 O$ f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 g! y/ p0 ^; k0 S: i! Q" W, |4 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ }& K5 P3 V/ H- i' d7 d- H7 v4 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' e( i- h) M  n; T5 p& f# o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" R: g) ]" X& Q+ \. o! Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% \6 K. v3 S/ Y6 ]* L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" Q, c$ V7 g! f6 C+ B2 \- e* b5 n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 U( u9 p* _) E% Z% ]  @' f: L<P>但我不会</P>
. H& H1 @: N4 R0 `& ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ M/ c1 B9 A4 k* _8 l+ y( V8 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( Q$ A+ |( j/ Y5 J$ v% c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! B, d# [* [- v) ]% m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 _, s3 M4 R" s2 I* u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  C! x1 t& x" R3 ]. r9 s# c3 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  P& v% m: A8 ^: s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. J9 f5 I7 X8 K0 v& H! N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* Y2 F9 P5 x& L' R; n, o) @3 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" }$ o1 f/ _* o, B3 r: c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 h8 N8 F3 u" x( ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; X' W; R8 K/ J+ `7 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. ]$ q6 z& W. }) o+ f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- |+ ?, c: `9 ]' l* k+ S9 h6 H* J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" Z' f; M. y8 n2 E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; P( u6 l7 R- u' P5 t8 _5 J) T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 I! s3 I: Y- }: q. l) d- w; R) @4 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 q) V1 t2 l/ @! K/ d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. }; E* I3 R, ~4 g& M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# S! t: b: z" B& v- x& F/ h+ n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; A# m: S; H6 h8 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* h9 C7 A# d% r3 p1 U" a5 W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>