【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% s% o) H; f2 [) |# p" `; bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% B5 _, n! G, lI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. D. U# r/ v# @! RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( W' |( k# ]8 b2 ?7 r0 o' LLove… just the word love
9 N0 A4 m- r& C& S# b0 m* IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& B# ?/ Z7 }! ^" W/ \) ^1 D7 h- XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% L1 y7 |- W4 L- k9 r% vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% i' P5 B0 {0 c  R+ ?& H8 `* N2 p5 [3 l7 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 j* U1 W: [3 d9 y! E4 KLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 m0 Q& Z% w( k: _But I never did
. f- F; o  O4 u  h: ~- |! WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: G. B9 U( P2 ^0 O' j. u( |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- @$ [' G. ?+ W% w4 h3 ~6 m7 Q3 JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ _8 ]4 Z2 p, u* j  W) u5 w& FEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* |, l, ?9 w" S) H4 y" ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 O0 c" k+ N7 D! K- B& G  \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 h2 K# p4 O# z& o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' k4 u/ B; E, w5 i$ Y) r$ Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) k  w. H  {& }4 B' {. i' P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 U' _& @1 v7 V7 U3 E% l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 w) @# a8 r6 \4 b% r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 G- |/ G' b! w4 o/ k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 k# [% l$ F8 \  P* ^/ y: _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: z; S$ }& A( `0 a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- F* @2 @9 P# D! p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x+ Y, \* ^* C- W) F( b, D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! _/ C  j; d$ y% N/ ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' e2 B6 F' G& G<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; u5 T5 b+ S6 H, e4 K& I- q  o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) H2 T- @0 N7 O, X4 _( Z2 z. X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* F% ?& O& q- k% \3 Z6 ]) M# G! |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: l5 [3 \' S  k4 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. |/ n2 A' g% n' R" q% {, f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, l" Z# e5 l4 Q( j9 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ x( m' H4 V) p' ?3 m/ O, \! J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! y6 `! o7 L+ f+ q  y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- m  A: a) Q$ r2 e. Q% e+ W2 B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 T3 {( b3 O- E; K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 c; L: K! [' P8 i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) I1 o* E6 P- h1 z<P>但我不会 </P>
6 m, V8 Y, ~9 E6 ]# B( S3 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. X& ~# ~0 `. k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 _( L/ F9 f* v+ _/ I3 }* i7 y) F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ Y* o! R5 h" V. j. N4 v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  J! K) a! A0 {5 [: o+ s8 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 d* G% U. L4 N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" e0 [$ h( }3 t2 X5 ?: X- z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" z6 S8 m! i9 J; U& H4 Z- o: z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  O% W7 N  U; V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 K1 R( q+ @' w' b9 [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 z; p3 d9 h* a2 g8 M$ H- E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ i9 t% p9 k6 Y$ n2 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>