【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# I1 V" H% U9 C1 x我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ p* C3 v* b% J* T- I( WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, ^! _# @) B6 _* f( `# Y. Z4 {7 rFrom the first moment we met,
! N4 ^5 D# ~" j$ W: ^) TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& o8 n& U- Y! S, b( s" s. LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% a8 Y/ v+ z( j" s7 ]# P  f( d& `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 A" ^, W% O( x$ R% d# nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 j( K4 T* P, P- ?8 z- c+ _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 y+ C$ J0 `7 f# t1 O  B& mEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: A  x: ]9 R) E% t# c9 VI want to confess that I love you,
; I! ~: |8 @3 ^/ `  ^* CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 F& a% f  ]* I9 \9 G2 O1 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: N. V  z" z1 L; x( V; tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 A6 @7 f2 \* z+ n) HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# h. J$ [  h$ {  y7 h+ \0 i! TEntrust my love within your heart
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: T2 s  o% P$ t9 l1 Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 V- G( p# e( X. w9 ?) A: R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 R# |( N) B0 ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# ^% f7 S; t  o; n6 Z2 G" Q: M+ }: _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 F; O2 H, G  [7 T: n0 G, T0 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 a3 W1 R- t3 h( V; }5 K! h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: A6 \" s# F9 ?# e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- |* m+ J; J* v9 B* ^/ K( s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( M' S$ Z6 D: K" ^2 m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 q7 c1 t7 J* R8 ^8 k7 w" G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& B! J7 X3 L& h2 Z$ I& x' e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ B& x3 U6 A8 f: v# [1 U! _& y* Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# C$ S$ Q5 F5 W$ ^9 W1 [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 O5 [+ X7 x3 g* Y5 P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& f2 i" q; Y0 c8 }% n9 x' u8 d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  N6 y0 ?( ]; L- K' o( Q2 B" V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, v; [" r% l4 a. ~! H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 {- m* ]0 E$ \1 L( [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ a+ t) j' T  [: `6 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ {5 P& J: b0 Z7 [9 v9 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! C, e: _' _% s1 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 L7 t' v7 ^* Y' i8 u# \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) q3 V' I* q& d. ~8 u/ \5 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. k7 N9 a9 `2 @" ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' j( `( u1 J% M+ [) a8 t<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; C, c  R9 j. A. X( H2 q$ t6 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' c8 l; i1 w7 x6 j9 H/ L0 {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( E9 z& f/ C' U! u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ n. ]) r- S2 w/ h: I) V6 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 i; b* ?0 J3 y7 y1 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ |8 |7 I& R2 b( U8 ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 K4 }% P+ B; f* \2 n; Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 h0 [2 [1 u) J' ~+ ~- o0 h; G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 t, F  h: D* l) m4 y/ A+ |# f<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( I- y0 ^( J5 ^& Q$ M8 n+ \' m4 y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 a1 {% w2 W, C! X6 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 Z4 l) s0 J  f$ I2 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 f$ P( W5 Y6 w; `  O) [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>