【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 ?8 }; B& U% H# p4 _5 r' b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 ]6 r1 ?  v. s5 M0 ^I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- a( c' X! Z& |# ^: `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# ^, o3 w. \) cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 ]* x! a5 w9 j* u% w. s( ]8 \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! [9 s9 F7 p. s7 s, d; ^But I never did
4 c8 {) a8 o6 r' a" T" ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 F, Z& ~/ M2 F; v+ KEntrust my love within your heart
/ _8 m. h$ U% P2 G" sLove… just the word love
7 i+ w  g. I! r  F" q/ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 {7 c+ p2 G+ h/ d1 H4 oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! ~/ f% h: r& g; N6 z' t" SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 h& K( I) y$ e, X% U9 e) ?: b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) L# T. y0 p' U( g+ o# [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( l6 g. w5 n4 ^5 M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 G/ b/ T( T- T( ?& o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 F: S. Q1 J: w9 q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( E% H4 s% q5 z" @7 E; l6 W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ p! T, m. b0 f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ E) P; Z7 p' @# z1 C; A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ j9 ^4 ^( O5 t1 v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# g' q) s! o0 B, _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; T7 v- c3 v( ]) r8 P+ i, ~: l- o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 n, }0 d; C6 \8 P# d+ c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& J2 s  S6 n' V: Q<P>但我不会</P>
2 x9 h& v  H; S+ E8 P1 i  z- |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: Z; E* o: ?9 B2 l) f& `: u" n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 o6 x) N2 ~0 q( ^2 V3 [8 B  t6 G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% A' k0 {: N0 v/ [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 G# n" R8 Y6 }. {) S4 `7 L: E: h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" o& V+ ?+ l2 I0 e0 Z9 M2 o1 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( K1 ^3 s: y  \; V. Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. d1 X4 q% {3 V' Q9 r% S% _6 N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. E- _: ~0 [3 x: u+ b( g5 S: o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 A! e5 \# \' A' i3 v: _: Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' J* A3 d6 X4 Z, m: Y  l, F# P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; v0 b- Y" ~) H2 X. h) x0 k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ x% j) r, Q3 ^& t* Z* d# d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ?4 G* m# {/ ?7 R) a$ Y5 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; A8 e( T4 }. K; u2 b2 ~! z2 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 [: J7 s: R1 _* @% j5 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  C7 i# b* n$ Y9 U% @7 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; G, [* O" d+ l) v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>