【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% f) |% q2 {: O6 ^, }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 f- @6 B+ b4 b' ]8 Y2 \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 v5 |( \1 E+ b* B& f4 o. E" c5 xWe meet and talk everyday,
. {/ h. h) |) g2 \: m* @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& _0 i+ a% m( y5 a/ LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 q! e0 L& f: N# N2 Z! p; |' ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 k: n* m+ l* S8 l, f4 W3 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 ]  N4 x+ I* m( V6 d- aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 j; i9 H, d! ?% tIf today isn’t too late,
% m/ N; n( p) U8 S# L' UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) g0 j: t* e5 w, }" LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ g, G8 g9 J9 D. LCan I entrust it to you?
% s8 |/ J! o0 Q+ o. ?! ]9 y' \Entrust my love within your heart
2 J* ~0 I0 u0 q/ xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 c' ]7 H; [* n5 TCan I entrust it to you?
3 o# D, M, {) w! n- R" O+ x1 XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 Y5 w0 O' ~& U! P: K$ ?' kEntrust my love within your heart
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( [; M3 ^4 z8 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- _% I$ H8 `7 @+ N. L- P/ I8 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; G6 u6 }/ k/ `! J% W5 |) p  W5 w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# `/ @: I) H" P3 x/ L$ w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% n0 @" o- N& p/ n4 _4 `! {2 c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ u$ f1 a) s' F  f/ s  ]9 T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ H, J# c; Z/ t/ y- r4 y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( ?! X$ r: p) a6 h( I$ m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" T/ k* N9 d! w+ y. l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 Q. I9 K% W4 T- b9 C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 h; ?, Z7 k7 C  g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 C5 t' v! ^" i( m5 m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 _6 G4 k: r* \+ g# `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* k& S2 O1 u# [2 \+ Z<P>但我不会</P>
2 L: B, e) F5 V. b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- u  k; D* Y: p8 D3 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% m, g" t1 V  n& e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 P$ c6 _, K; X6 A3 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ V7 a0 S6 `6 v5 j5 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ V6 T# @, b( g9 v2 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 y; A, [3 r+ e) F3 [& w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- F! U2 D% o( Y; f& i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' S$ _8 E8 U9 b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* E( a6 @1 |! M; V# ^# s. N4 P& ~  E<P>But I never did </P>
  t/ H2 h# Z9 t+ V7 w9 j<P>但我不会 </P>
- k7 ?% x' |" _8 l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 x2 \% t* L  N  J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 V: y# ^9 T( Y& q/ p/ ], q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 S0 p( Z# m7 r. N8 ^1 K. [+ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 j  A% G, d$ }* z- j% e1 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. h3 c# K+ |$ V4 Q& v9 m3 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  P' l7 i2 x" k! l9 B. O3 ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 X% O# w2 p  g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ p8 u5 S9 i5 G% V4 n  O. P5 F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>