【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
% M+ G" j- i2 Q9 MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 y9 l, t9 ]3 D. p, L5 R- R% Q4 h) ~From the first moment we met,
  q8 |$ A9 R- Q9 VI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 K3 q" x' [" o( q0 bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  c1 B* ?' F2 YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 P0 ^& T% n0 I1 T3 g& aI would probably know how you feel
4 ~6 s2 x1 z1 P, yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' Z% X& k3 U: E/ w6 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ Q7 ?8 i' n, ?" ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% n3 _1 u* R1 I% u. XCan I entrust it to you?
& v" K& O# I& b% _  tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ v: O! O3 o" ~8 y3 }+ |: [Why is it so difficult to express?
1 D$ Z1 I+ Z0 o' KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" W. }0 P# D% I  q( AIf today isn’t too late,
7 \2 Q! {  U* z/ P; [8 ^; ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. u# ^# Z6 P& }0 i# i4 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ b" l8 ?' q. m! P2 S+ [# X0 eEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  Y" b8 B/ F4 N" Z* k5 Z# z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. N4 W8 y2 v0 [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ @5 m. W, ]' x3 U8 p# G( N) m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% o0 @" W- i5 e# a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 m) c, Z6 }+ a9 ~) w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( \% C) G+ k0 B* Q, a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* v) R' c0 D% R) \3 z& b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% r# i/ e, z8 ?2 c$ S; {' P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& A  O. w3 Y' G; G7 m# `8 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 g/ X, |# `7 g: P5 \7 l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 w( C- r3 V+ c7 u" B/ j/ J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 t+ ~: G3 O! x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ e& D2 A3 a  ]3 a$ M0 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  }" V  J" V% C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# ?9 v2 l& k- r4 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# P: t. m1 d& \+ _7 R7 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 B7 Q! ]6 S2 }" g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; h9 ~6 \+ L& k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 j% k4 q6 F  [) h0 s9 D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 r4 |% u( Y) a: @<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ C9 O" o7 B# c, U: {- T9 G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% L" v% _8 w' \! e% N9 Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ P) n9 I3 `% w4 v+ @- V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ `3 c$ ?" J1 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) l9 R4 ?3 p3 D- B! y* f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- Q2 `# u/ D/ ^6 P. P/ X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 [9 ?8 k* \$ J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) |( A! i5 i) A; H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 Z' ^, S9 B* |6 }: J7 Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. m) h6 g, p) E$ t8 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* P' N9 c8 s; q8 m; l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>