【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
# d1 K: S% U, F  f, qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% o7 N2 L1 v# b# p( C5 m1 iFrom the first moment we met,
4 u8 m& W2 t" e" jI already loved you with all my heart
8 B4 L/ l+ |4 KWe meet and talk everyday,
# q* h6 _8 P2 g% }& ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& ^1 @( V( ?; X: A- rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 R: N8 y. t6 \/ P, h; B' t/ FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( @& _1 ?& P# k" y/ TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 L/ a$ @& r' x, }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ m$ m, B) ^! ^* t  TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& s7 v: j, |! {: _1 p+ GCan I entrust it to you?
& W: R6 H  w1 _2 q7 ^5 R- qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' u. F7 P% }) u: qIf today isn’t too late,
0 Q( r) z! Y4 M7 B! WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 Y0 ^) k% h; S2 l0 L2 m& l0 `! Q/ \Can I entrust it to you?
& M' t, t5 @) X3 q1 y2 a2 {Entrust my love within your heart
2 R4 r1 C# [  S. e- d7 R6 x  n0 KCan I entrust it to you?
' z4 x9 a8 [( W- T+ z# }Entrust my love within your heart
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! p8 e" K3 ~3 P7 M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 T  u( u) Y1 w9 z  d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 v  P$ }) q0 V+ H% T* I. {# f! w8 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* {8 V- t4 Y" x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* |, ]9 G3 q5 L' ^4 z/ k* \, a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* {  z$ e7 x- L6 G& q7 T# e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: M+ D3 l7 X& u/ U8 f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 P* o# N6 s* o9 t8 f* t% x& E+ K' `* N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ ~4 g' f4 a0 ~, c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 @) d1 n) \* q; }1 O- y3 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) q1 p$ N4 W1 i1 e; U% ^: h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' X$ ~# j- p5 v( ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 j/ V1 H7 g! C$ d" i5 p5 y( }( e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ r% P+ v* ]( U* r8 ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) a; s' U  s- ]4 i" T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, d! o# y8 C- N& T4 g+ c# J4 s" S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 _% B" N+ D* x/ `4 R4 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, g1 H4 u, i; z+ N' Q( Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 b8 _  A5 H" `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% O7 P8 j  a# i8 V0 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 r# Z' c* g2 w0 B3 c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  y6 b3 Q3 Z  j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 @( x& N% u! l7 B0 L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! }; i0 X3 ]- c9 B/ X  T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 h, @* p4 H2 n. I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  n+ A0 Q+ ?3 u+ h$ r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' I" T8 G; q8 Z. a4 Z! m/ e& |( C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 A4 C! S9 K0 Y5 @4 R* V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, j* y7 }( a+ Q, S' P! w. ~$ P! r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 j3 |' O: B4 A, b: {. P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 ^6 b' U( Z: K  r) w" V8 ~5 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Y7 L+ l. R  L' e& X* d) j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- @7 B, f3 S3 u1 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>