【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
/ S- }& M; |" ]- ^% WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 @$ C' n, X1 @& sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 j& s3 |* ^' {5 Q, ]8 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" z! ~) q! D7 g  E% ]$ h0 rI want to confess that I love you,
: l% V4 Z1 Y# M7 }, Z! [6 i% aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" U- l# S& X, P8 b9 l7 NIf today isn’t too late,
5 I$ g# d; p" L) @% {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ v2 j, P& j, o" y' ^Can I entrust it to you?
/ \9 W/ M: |: CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ X) g$ @( y) b' L& j, `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. d) I2 X0 E5 W$ I0 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  f/ F8 z1 V; Q9 B) [9 U3 g; y4 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ s) o% W/ S2 a0 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; ^; O2 e' }2 W6 fCan I entrust it to you?
: P! X& N9 C  ^( @9 n; @, hEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* D8 W4 {! I7 Y; m1 t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) R% J( ?$ w, A; }) D2 c1 L2 ~. x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ o; w* w. g7 c" q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( s& Y5 k- c3 E8 K5 X; Q& s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 @2 S& r9 H5 m/ M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ y& b4 v, B9 J- _4 n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ L, m* f% P2 O8 j3 U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 |) k1 N3 y% M6 G! h' S; S+ Z. J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, Y4 m; {+ B& q% I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) I. l$ \- Q8 K  }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) S3 X7 g6 }( p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) ~: r+ ]+ [% {; o# T! O: b, l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! j. `- l4 B  Q+ o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 ]9 T" B$ o* {5 V4 s9 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 E2 ]3 l3 x5 g: ?  U- a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; H; f( F6 ?1 ]$ C$ U7 a; B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 m$ B8 M) J0 }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 p9 e5 W  U- S: n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) A3 V; k, h3 E9 l<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" p% k7 \2 g( d. D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 D8 C7 m/ G7 r- I4 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' j$ R% I! W/ _' G  F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# ^4 Y7 k3 [- e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 p7 z3 D( R  T6 e9 F) s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; I  M& l# j6 ?: L2 U$ G: C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>