【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ Z$ G1 w  T6 O. `7 c9 c8 g我另将歌词附在此。
# k; l; k5 c  p0 K4 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ m4 T+ q! x+ W6 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; @$ O. w0 L5 ]2 j0 Q$ d! R9 XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, `2 z6 u9 @  t& ^/ h4 j* kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 O6 c4 g8 W* I3 G" jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 c" C% _2 B6 q6 o* Y8 z+ dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, b9 Y3 S/ C$ ~' U  NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ X- L+ j. |# U$ n+ V/ N9 jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! i5 k6 B* w% q, L" ^  u. O% xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 u% G! k7 P4 S$ M  E' F) ^I want to confess that I love you,
  x% L0 ]5 M, ]! [# V% WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 B' k! G2 @, K& xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ H' F# y; K/ l! X) F3 W. _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, d# M  E2 i6 {& e2 F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 A0 K& F* @5 ]$ H6 N( o+ Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) z# E& V2 a1 e, O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( ]1 K- V  F6 X+ @% Q0 k# K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" |) B0 H( d0 Z! h  n: O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 n$ u, K2 E$ m! f% }, U6 ^/ Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 o6 Y! R9 {* w; \) Z9 S8 a5 S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# A6 }; G- {  r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! y5 t+ W2 k' H7 x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ a: G! A4 N8 R6 |* O/ R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 {- [( @7 _/ C& g. g8 `<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  T/ |8 H* l' \9 p+ g7 j" c2 V7 z" e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ R4 j6 n4 a# j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: y( i- [. s" b" Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ K! i) N2 N4 w9 i1 s. x0 L& j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" Y  W' n( m: q7 u" T) k) V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 q' @( P; I) _  g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! `. ?  [: \$ y& U0 D5 K) Y" k& ~- b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 }/ Z% A% x1 E( ?2 C! u1 }: R0 O9 c<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* b2 x# D, K+ ?$ F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  f; ]- O' d1 z2 Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ~' Y8 l9 b* X: v& a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% E! _9 q, _& s9 T9 N- u: X  W! _8 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! |# Y; W% q3 D4 G! L- U/ l5 O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 \9 ~/ Z% C8 F4 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 u  x) l  }3 B5 f6 A4 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 e: e) Q1 S* p, R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 G7 Q2 t4 K3 Q( o/ L- @3 n; o  A) R 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' u1 r4 w# W: r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: ?. D" |, v7 x8 T+ `7 Y$ V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ v6 Q5 `8 z+ L& W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>