【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
/ \3 o8 v6 y# P$ q- J" @6 P+ YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# ^! Q: \' @3 I$ kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' x5 W9 j) m! d% f3 }; OFrom the first moment we met,
. C, [( V' K& L$ zI already loved you with all my heart
* |5 U% D$ f( }, S5 N" n' _) B. dWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 M; e  g, r  ^" EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 z3 _! b3 \$ ZLove… just the word love
! `5 d. t: y$ ^' @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( o5 k2 i& l  l9 |3 {% {+ S/ ^( fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' E+ @1 h8 h7 ^  o, }/ [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ M7 I  p( Q0 L" E; p$ WLove… just the word love
- n2 C0 K4 {* xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 m7 x, j2 ^' j0 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; j0 [; H" k% H: f" H  bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 q1 u9 J' x! R) E4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  o9 _$ w# H, [% H, gCan I entrust it to you?
5 x/ r/ O2 X+ o! u& sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; N  u  P2 `( ?7 D7 ]Entrust my love within your heart

2 b9 z$ t* n3 E7 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- l$ g* z' ], _! d$ _" t. o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% T( {( e* x$ v) @% z7 C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 k+ O6 ]# S- g' A: t' F5 b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 y* V0 t3 F: p' n0 Q! v4 x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 ]# C1 A3 `. J3 @7 ^$ [  H0 t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 M! S2 i3 _7 |6 `' y/ S9 _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 p' B  Z2 D$ R; Q* B! \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 U$ w* o/ {$ d* T# j6 _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# X) c! q2 {6 T2 f, N- Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ Q/ i1 C! B! m. @8 u$ r3 v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. [4 f: U) N" Y. f9 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; K& _- Z3 c7 b( \8 `9 ~0 ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ l& |3 T+ X, V6 g! e" s4 H& ]/ Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% A8 ?, D0 h4 D( G0 {& B" {1 D& s, @" V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 P4 C0 {6 z, [3 t2 k; ?$ ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 J2 a9 x5 j1 c+ @4 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; b8 O* a+ B9 ?& N& \- @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" q5 k9 T" g; w6 C+ D4 ^* w* e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- ]5 L5 q6 ^0 \! e- h8 [/ t& [- I1 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 v( Y4 e: Q" ^; @  }. D9 g3 }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 }  e. ]9 z4 h. P3 u. S! @<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. |2 F" i1 j$ J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, Z/ y  g; ?* l; G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 B7 d, \7 j1 p  ~# T# M& \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ ~& a& z2 V6 z/ N, s& {" R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. b' D" e; D; E" Z, W% H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 ^: E: B# y8 L% T$ w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& a/ J0 t* u$ }' T/ x0 H  j+ Z$ Q1 e* F( K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>