【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
7 d8 S0 r& T: U: a4 UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* S# X. ?6 A* S$ P% [3 L  X; vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* h" v% E( ?. OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- B9 l# o8 t/ H+ ?, k9 qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 _6 d% a0 }0 o5 w5 i8 K, yBut I never did
2 `( |; `& n% T: a/ b( pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 }7 I$ T) K+ v8 AIf today isn’t too late,
. J+ ~4 j% V' x8 [: ^8 eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& C1 S7 K4 h5 ?' m6 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' i% W# q" r, l6 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
" c. Y8 V" E8 o3 d0 m4 _/ ~I want to confess that I love you,
9 X0 i! {0 L- j6 I/ [But I never did
; r( ~: [. w. g/ j. d+ Z0 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; [6 _$ Y* B2 D7 s0 J) }If today isn’t too late,
% u: ?( j6 r1 v, d( M4 z0 G' f: bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& A/ W# H1 R; _& ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( E" K3 F; ]  \7 i, ACan I entrust it to you?
# t) ~5 F* u/ eEntrust my love within your heart
% ]/ l* E) U, ~! P- U* ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

0 H( e0 S% ~! A( ^( h! y: F, Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& C2 p7 B5 a: {; b/ X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 F1 R$ ^% ~5 x: ^$ o! D  J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ J7 u, m& C% O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  [( d. `8 F2 t: H+ Y3 {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 P; r0 @3 E9 R  L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 g& A2 b3 D' d# X7 D9 }: g<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- _, T9 A5 G7 A; N: y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. X4 F( [8 S, E/ O' F% ^" T# N2 P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# Z! h! m: a* S/ p5 x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( T0 W* a9 T8 g  k" R1 `6 x: C, ]# d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% H/ N( D$ K- O. \- d0 x0 y$ {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) Y" \2 |$ M% {& o& K4 K4 [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% Q) J5 Q, x* [1 b5 Y1 y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 b6 }6 ]& b* Q% T; f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: `, x. A% X9 Q( c2 |1 v! K- J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; M/ r+ A' ^) Y+ `3 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% s1 L: y4 ~- ]$ f# O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* {* A. Z, a  [$ R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; y+ W. V5 k# Y6 K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  ?6 N% T7 U8 s: L( k; P( q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ S4 L4 N4 R9 z' n3 q6 ^0 g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. s" ?1 u: p* u  e  V6 M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% ^* f9 M$ n' N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 j$ [; X8 b' t' Z, j7 o+ ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 r( B. Q2 j3 D( e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- E& g  R# B& F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 l( ~: W) a& f* V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  l- M+ U0 @/ T, M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 x+ x, z9 e' L8 T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- v# J" n1 b( Q2 v% F/ \4 ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>