【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 h6 A7 G3 `# j, [+ Q我另将歌词附在此。
3 w# T0 g! D9 o2 a  Y& vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" Y: c$ O/ {8 d% c1 BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( m' s; W. ?& t/ [4 G1 p1 e# ]6 BFrom the first moment we met,
" b" t# g' R: I; n5 M1 yI already loved you with all my heart
8 y  f2 A6 f0 z. j3 ]/ J4 B( BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& K8 f2 b. |! G/ ~6 d+ zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) A4 Q2 J3 _& y# ZI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 l( A  S$ V9 r' r/ {& M2 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 A9 g# X2 x/ c3 a8 L; NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 i6 S4 J* d0 {+ ^! t. u0 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 h( K! V& }' @& o$ JCan I entrust it to you?
& J5 S1 j7 G0 kEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  ^; z1 p0 J8 C3 C4 ^1 F9 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ q7 N4 C: x$ N  A3 P* pCan I entrust it to you?
/ F8 e& `5 [  M* F4 x+ D: UEntrust my love within your heart
  c8 O- ]  [4 y7 J: v- e! g/ QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) S, t3 A- k3 i; ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  b3 A( l4 d$ W* R- u" W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; ^- w# }( `5 x4 T9 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: J3 A7 S. C" C* g( }1 R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# ?: y* \* p0 [1 D# D! L3 O( ^* c- f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 l( u& v# E/ H% z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 F0 W8 q" h2 y, z/ J* @  Q' v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  Z+ X8 E7 U+ K) p, v: j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# |" ^- R8 @8 J) j; P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ W8 W1 V/ x# o* S2 {/ `/ P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 q- L" m+ D1 M+ x) n6 |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 h5 V" d: [# V1 C0 Q4 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ n' {& ^5 Q7 {( K+ s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 Q7 l( F  a. k8 o1 Y" m( a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; S' s/ x  r% A9 E! D% Q  S! q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% s, _. R, f& G) A/ P. r" B0 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 b" Y$ N& H" U4 K4 I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 [- n" x( x) {! S' M, t( H3 T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 [) j: l1 n$ E6 B2 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- d. }5 O; i! N& S7 ^5 m" J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  @. }( A6 G% w4 D3 W6 S/ W5 r0 z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; H8 |3 r9 m- _/ _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! k1 l7 Y. |4 k1 X& [7 p' w7 k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ G  a7 o0 l& T0 c/ r7 @0 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 _; r3 W8 D7 @% f- E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* g/ z9 c- A. z1 a0 {5 l4 G% Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* B6 O4 s  p' i- e6 \. s" o% o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 \- t8 P# v/ u8 Y% v( S/ Z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 C) L- L2 d6 i. k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. Q+ v+ x/ f* ^3 G* Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 r' l/ k( g5 L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>