【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, C+ B/ x( f; i+ y我另将歌词附在此。
2 R% q  F7 }! y3 }6 W) ^& x. sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. X$ f" e( U% Z( d1 X8 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 ]. I& R5 ?" w4 ^2 E6 {We meet and talk everyday,
0 g7 Q$ M2 b  ~0 O- E' u* Y: nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 c; z. y1 R! L% N2 IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 @' ]2 I% K2 e. ]9 ~" G$ r1 ~6 v2 WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 q7 T. l3 r/ x* \+ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' k2 [8 n0 r, w6 BCan I entrust it to you?
1 i1 d% n1 I, z3 J8 vEntrust my love within your heart
& p) s( s  l2 X' l- w% d3 }  xLove… just the word love
9 s% a& }- f# d) bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' F3 C2 I0 ?  }& V2 z$ sBut I never did
" b0 d# a) G, \& COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 M6 R* V6 q# X" R$ ~: m( hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 x# `+ ~% s) PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: [1 T3 u  o4 b0 w* BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% m2 Y- `6 W1 n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' I! H/ g& G5 m$ D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* {$ u0 M! b" O/ T3 S8 v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- w( H# E* s4 |- E. Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# y& c& Q  Z7 m3 R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 }' e7 o$ X# _2 ~& V' B2 A- x- i4 Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 j/ {, _& a) M+ N6 s' K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& H2 p5 X6 E1 V# A+ k: o3 a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ A! F/ f6 L8 i2 C( e! S* F5 d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 h3 F: o+ v2 X! r, u$ H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, P3 j/ g+ X" a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, ]8 M" c! s: t7 P$ l( Y& J  \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) X& D! C' \' H* X9 V' L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( |! y: y1 T/ p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* b' `' N) D: u6 k* r. r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 _, i1 G. P; G<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' j& [2 v  Q* N. l0 U$ J+ F3 R2 ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) ?8 m" m7 \/ {6 W/ M* w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 `5 N$ q( E7 |  @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- ?: }* O- q; l7 Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) d, |8 f/ p: a1 r  V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 A$ d& i& K2 g( Z: ~0 }6 y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 N+ {1 A* f4 l. Z6 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! l) t9 D" Z. S2 |) V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, a. U2 V, I2 }1 p" u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) l) i+ C/ Z) X# p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; B  j) L+ f9 a/ T! S5 a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 @8 _4 `  c+ g2 t6 k- P; o0 X2 }: E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) S) }, h5 y; O1 p& H- s/ h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: c2 H0 N; F8 g" {4 k% [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 e( W, d+ Y# l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" f5 h2 {& _: n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>