【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( i- t5 b6 w/ O8 b7 U: p; m0 FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) O1 ~. j2 ^; o7 L4 U5 tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' E4 K  q6 j5 o5 vWe meet and talk everyday,
! F4 R! M% G$ _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* g' q  t# U) T7 Y& ]) J1 \, XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 e% w4 L& A% t; |  sBut I never did
4 i% I8 w* z5 c* ]1 L0 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& J& n! P( `+ s" eCan I entrust it to you?
7 C" [) ~# y4 q+ h# Z2 o+ C9 U$ yEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 g! `* C4 P6 J9 J6 fIf today isn’t too late,
0 q7 A/ Z6 L* H, y+ w; r9 P$ UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 D7 s+ [) p+ {; z' rCan I entrust it to you?
: A. m8 ~: p! V5 YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" ?' ^0 |& r: q: x6 lEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* p6 l& O4 M& `# U/ `0 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  {0 B: b% t' m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& B$ q1 V& F3 @  {$ x! T" |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" O, A, N6 L2 j2 C. o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: a& l' s! n, `6 e  I; Y' M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 ^% V+ L8 r1 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 O( R! R: X) Y! @, j) _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* `  L1 P! G+ y0 }  M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- l1 Z9 X9 W! {( i0 s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 }: r+ \7 g( @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 c, e6 Y& s$ l. X6 c8 ^9 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- n& e' m# l2 ]2 Z1 c5 g( v, o% b3 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 m- ~0 R8 L% L" p* k7 O$ @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 [, }7 ~2 t3 s" _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 s; p4 w1 G$ l, P% ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( s0 P; q8 o6 A. b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& E& `1 R6 K: C8 ~. T/ P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. p0 [3 @& Q  V/ u8 L9 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. t2 O% G+ q4 \8 }2 W& v) G0 a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  o# F# N+ z  Y) R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ ?: i% U/ O* r" q0 S$ @: Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# ]! O" I! t  ?$ |9 u7 l1 N$ b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) h8 I. L' ^/ q) y4 N: d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 u2 F) f! m( [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. M; m3 P" e& H' r0 c/ q8 g( p6 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 U- E4 r5 A( S  X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 t3 V8 f% ]) G8 ]5 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' j' [0 M8 G' H# ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! a" _: G( d( ?. [3 e8 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) B7 \/ Y: t9 i( ]8 J/ o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* n3 Z7 x  n, X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 p/ o4 v3 d  z+ w( o! x& _<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 B; h9 r7 S# m' {$ A4 ~, q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! A$ S, d' _2 o% ~, c; n7 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 `; K1 X2 @0 k! W2 ^  }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>