【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ d" \$ S, s- W4 k! A/ Z; N& b9 Y9 ?我另将歌词附在此。
0 E. r; @+ F1 L$ }$ @/ A' gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 i* _  z5 F! U' SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. g# O* h; U- x) }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* y( O% u& A# c2 OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 {: [$ C! s) J7 NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ F4 V: W+ Z. R5 L# U9 TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 Y1 b* j% ?( i( I: ^9 I, W/ HLove… just the word love
: N" z6 q9 M& ?- g% D& h, oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: B+ B7 W6 ]! I& e; C4 LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 \/ I. i! ?7 g$ S$ ]/ qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 N: w% h& @+ T; yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 x$ H$ y9 b7 e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) [: R- j9 W% j0 {+ r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 t( B( J% ^' {% N$ x1 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( f+ }+ x4 R  M6 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- a( S1 i7 O/ u3 s2 d) ]& Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 b; P  Y8 W1 |& n5 f3 ]4 X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 i0 ]) A/ q% D4 D* S0 ^3 l8 R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! \1 [, o" j4 |; r- V) @7 s& i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' Y1 T( }; y1 z0 e5 {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ d3 j: Q9 E. ], I- F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. v6 l' f9 Y" U) m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 w1 x, E  K3 @' ^' q( n* y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; E2 Y) B& `# Z& H! f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 n9 D( u; O# N1 {& `# F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) \/ n/ b2 d6 k5 H3 _  h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# f( l4 v' J/ l' T( w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 k- r: F. c! q! `5 R- n! L6 o<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' C/ W. I& S# k6 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 O& Q( j! q+ ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 v, h# W( J# T8 f, }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% X+ k2 M  v- N) J0 H# o5 K5 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* W2 g+ ^5 w" x/ `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; i1 _) @; t4 }6 G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 D1 f: b# z4 T  W8 M. z5 h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 f" @" W& j9 t* L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' [, d. ]/ K0 z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  z) t# K9 j3 Y" s$ t7 ^9 y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, P8 V: o, Y8 W! J/ C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& U4 f7 }& G( X$ P: F2 z; R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( E0 ^5 n( M- Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, J( ~, C5 u/ x) l' X" e, E! Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ Q% u; a& R1 A; K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 ^+ J( J' a9 v: ?* k2 H3 ]) o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 g* |9 E( B1 C4 \' Z1 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 F( k3 G% L$ v; A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* I4 g( B* \% R, p; W5 I, l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 C/ O- z7 I7 J  t7 ~  y# t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& B1 q: {. D/ u1 \; `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>