【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
- f2 f: k0 d/ _- B0 ?& X) P  Y

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ W% d( K% f4 [4 w" J1 ?1 W$ {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. J* U# n$ o( M$ N- ]7 `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 @' K/ A' T6 B$ {3 L. N  N  JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: l6 k! X% z- hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 d8 k& Q4 A& G& _1 bEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) `$ s( p4 u- ?; h' r8 I! y, KWhy is it so difficult to express?
. |; S6 A* u, s5 |I want to confess that I love you,
; ]9 }- [' O+ n/ t' w' xBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- \2 P9 X4 T) QCan I entrust it to you?
* `8 y6 P  L4 C( ^& O5 DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# Y! `( N% |3 b; v) }) U. c' [) i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ ~- o7 D7 j4 b, s# F9 ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, {2 v, g4 T! p4 N1 k; ~7 i% L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  F( ~( o+ C9 v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! [9 |& R1 j0 p# [8 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" g4 M/ \5 {; |! \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 D: O' e' m; q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- z! n# i7 V0 Q# ]1 N( ^" y4 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! I2 F" F7 Q5 n# N' ^9 @0 y  B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: K2 p; S! J) f0 C+ I7 C4 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 V  P- t& A: [0 ?5 ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# k# |$ P7 }9 M8 d! p, ]& q7 j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) f5 w$ Y) n2 T6 h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 z: i  U" c: |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  w$ }% T8 k0 t% Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ w0 o' Z, K, o! o' w. u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 h+ D3 k* C+ B0 o5 h& T0 _: P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 n2 M3 e4 _% b+ ~0 w6 T7 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 X* v5 R+ R( c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: X! ~" K( M6 ?- W5 ]: F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- m, c6 K/ i0 }) s% s5 ]$ F6 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 T% ~' L8 ~- J5 h/ n: Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 E5 N6 |* Q$ p5 L' e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 B* V" X, s9 ^, Y- k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# l2 A& n6 P) I! ^" M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, e2 [4 r, B/ [  Z- W; {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. P5 x' [3 ?8 B6 m' I/ f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  H0 Y2 n% W: n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, ?- C, y5 u( k$ [9 B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 I( }& \& ]7 g$ e& o' E+ K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( i/ }2 e# I+ |# K# d) b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  r" H% [: w( b3 v
" Y% q6 x5 g; _4 w" e6 U+ q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
( R/ W0 c$ K/ p" a
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ D+ W' \6 W. E: }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

' V, N2 M0 x/ D) x2 |<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 Z7 l+ m! n; @) H/ n2 z3 u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>