【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; `; Q9 [# p% o" R1 P* N* Z4 U5 F我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ P- k3 B/ {* ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; t- D! I8 O' b  P1 y+ T0 [3 b5 jFrom the first moment we met,
: t/ }9 e4 s4 WI already loved you with all my heart
& B' r6 x  @2 cWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, Y! v& D* ^% h, l- l. I: OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, W; p" t6 U0 X  i. ^. u$ v  q+ \% }I would probably know how you feel
) q2 c  g' y# I% k' ?9 ^Love… just the word love
+ q6 E- }# i; H( n! MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 E% _# P7 Y, NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 n3 O2 X6 e8 {( F3 P6 N: d# SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 ~1 m& T$ u6 \" [+ R2 ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% g' W4 G  ~. d2 G7 DBut I never did
" f/ n  t3 \4 I& @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 C4 S' @4 c$ @7 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 k. ^) P0 F1 {6 b% oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 N( t/ c& b, e  yEntrust my love within your heart
- i- S% D( z0 p0 w4 U; u/ UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! X6 n$ G2 \4 T: t& `! F; K8 d
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! s# }$ |, Z% N6 s9 J4 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 E" _# s. S% i" `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; t) R8 ]/ P! k+ I* \. @6 M# `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 ?  u7 l0 B, G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ i; J: t% F, c( q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! T- p4 B0 M6 l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 u' [; x( ^7 x0 f+ |' P$ u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! J4 p; h) Q! V5 _. }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& a" F' Q+ w$ Z0 d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# n/ E5 {" x3 L/ b" @' M8 r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 `+ K2 f  L; d+ ?( k- d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 n( {6 ]2 V: A<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! `) S, [3 F& h+ K/ m9 H2 a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' d. b( y; O3 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! E5 f) l/ x1 k" R( M* i1 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 ~& ~, O$ l6 M6 }* |) R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, R2 Q6 W5 S  q) P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ o4 i+ [2 u9 `  C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 \% J+ L5 T2 f9 \5 {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 {, U* Z, {8 ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 t" M3 _8 K6 Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* D+ f' ^2 s  d- c) ~7 u# Y<P>But I never did </P>
1 T  h2 \- t4 X/ H<P>但我不会 </P>
0 ~6 H( C4 @5 f; s' u  a( s- r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  u9 H" k2 [7 s8 `( }5 O' ^. B' T: _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ a  p; Q$ T) |- N" S- v3 y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' B1 A; G, x1 J$ @' i% U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% }# z1 W1 Q3 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. W) D- q8 y4 `3 y6 q: y2 m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. X& u# P7 ?2 J) V! w% |  [6 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 A$ Y- K. V5 j5 Z5 J8 g- x' {1 }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 C/ X7 N- D0 i" g5 o+ {# h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* j4 Z9 w) c9 E8 V) z3 I4 j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: V! ~) X! m% p7 P1 Q. C' x+ G2 W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ P- H& N% w2 _9 R; @% g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>