【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- P5 P' ~0 Z3 o% Y$ ?: mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ F+ w' {, Y) F) H& aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) }0 N1 D) {" K" b# EI already loved you with all my heart
- k" V0 l! j1 ?" _9 }( J$ a$ zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ N( d/ {+ Q" M% h+ j: ]Why is it so difficult to express?
5 l- d/ M% d; Y' u# g0 NI want to confess that I love you,
3 G: J& c+ [& VBut I never did
& v& ?% t; K/ M0 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( X9 E0 B& |" K+ M2 X/ ^/ O' u2 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) w5 ]; J8 j2 L0 L& LBut I never did
5 v: |+ G. H% f/ ]; e6 P$ }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 u) k* ^9 {- a! l" O( q/ ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ d# O) ~+ N' s5 D# y) ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 y: L. h9 ~9 W  WCan I entrust it to you?
9 ^3 ]' p8 r* D$ MEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  f2 E7 L, H: F" m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( E8 k+ K0 T' b1 m: h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- v4 T0 L4 v5 L/ k" z$ j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 _5 S7 f# k1 ?" |# w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& V; Q, z5 h( z( `  ?# f7 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- r* v% A4 w1 j' B1 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ u9 M- h  l2 ^) {  o  r/ q2 G; j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) |1 S% t- F- M- j4 h" q4 B  w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; n9 t/ [  q1 v# ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& r. x4 H. N8 q2 Q# Y5 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! L5 o) B2 _! g& M# c' O# Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 m! e4 L) s& I, S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" W/ ~5 x! X  v* a. Z* U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ F6 R$ E( ~" J  z6 R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 _0 @7 F" S& K6 |9 m8 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ d( f3 X+ ^# z# S5 F7 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 _) \/ j9 D4 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# u* M) W2 e- ~/ g" c! \2 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& C3 `% V+ z7 a4 U, C! x8 L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ `# ?* Z' j" _9 E, ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 d1 ]" z3 j- E& y$ v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 V$ Q% w! v" t1 i0 m* I/ d* s5 ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 w1 Y% [' u/ V$ ~( P+ N" f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 l0 g2 Q: c( B: c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 r. y3 C$ a% N' r  y2 B2 I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 V- U7 W$ l" m3 `2 Z! j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 f- V+ Q9 Z3 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' M4 y9 `: ]& P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 w: j$ ]7 \7 d% a9 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  }; X" t- J. @# q- s$ u9 ]5 ~- g  K; T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ m0 R2 L5 ~5 N/ w% A9 n9 v# K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 K3 _& X' S+ a+ l1 a& U' h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ H: g, e8 Q* g- K3 u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>