【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
1 z- ^7 s3 F! |. [& e6 l+ oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 O6 K' A, v2 n" w, dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 O* E0 \; C% {6 p+ O) z5 gWe meet and talk everyday,
; K/ p+ R# n" o  [# O" sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' n* N- n8 x1 u* DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* R8 y; e% [+ r6 c4 ]I would probably know how you feel
& R* I" J1 q6 ?* aLove… just the word love
5 J. y6 @$ |- S5 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 H( J- V+ r1 p; O2 N3 E5 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 L7 L8 r" m1 W  ^- N* J5 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 x2 d+ }/ V1 d& I7 K5 H) b: {: n  d+ UEntrust my love within your heart
) K* z- G2 O& T: q3 w5 F6 Z1 JLove… just the word love
3 q5 V( `4 T4 _& r7 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. @! N" @- T5 l* W! WBut I never did
# h6 g9 e9 L0 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 r! N% L5 K" fCan I entrust it to you?
8 S( E! ^7 A6 M0 s7 [5 e2 nEntrust my love within your heart
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  a8 o: z: ~- w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 q6 C2 L; b5 Q' `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; j8 q3 X5 O8 H* n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 \6 {, `6 F" T* ~: l( y/ F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 K: L4 P5 N. Q, A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( j" f8 B# G- f. u; r4 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 c7 R7 F! p$ Z! T/ i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 P7 @3 o2 p3 C. d0 b* u* R& \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* h( q* x* l4 `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 e6 |  @0 o) n* \3 H- Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  j$ A  r4 K* H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; n5 B  A4 e% F/ \" h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" f6 A5 d" ]9 G. q7 Y5 E7 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ A/ z4 a& q( D* B2 b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 b$ G( k' _2 ^7 d/ ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 Q  K( A; L2 V. C. Z) r# L) f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: I; M/ L+ E5 \! H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 Z. n$ W3 e$ Z. g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 l. _, q+ H  s- U6 p: `8 ^( U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' J' e1 D+ B$ v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 V* W' U; [  b, b4 I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 N- w$ \2 u* b& S9 j$ A3 |, P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 w4 M2 j0 y$ X7 `/ X+ Q7 X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 g( w) s. v# i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ D# @2 I- N* a; Z, F3 G5 L' r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 z1 w0 l/ V$ a. w7 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ ]  ~# J' E9 l8 K4 u: m8 I5 z( K. Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! U8 R6 R( N. A4 Q$ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 C; |' h& m8 g% S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* Q' e8 \8 w% W* t: ?; }3 \6 R. v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 g* v) S- f+ i$ Z7 Y# p% h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 z- v+ [- k2 _, e3 i4 R7 f; o% l* A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) R/ @, D. L( d2 I6 ]% {, B5 c4 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 ~; e$ u( t2 }$ h, W) Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>