【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 s6 i' J  W2 ^- GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ v' X+ \) ~6 N* P& M6 d# IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 Y9 i4 V; N- B5 ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# P. U( w) X! y( C' ]& |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( l& m% J  b- |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 p! E- w, f6 {9 [3 M& cIf today isn’t too late,
8 C. }  p: p6 O$ u  \- u9 X$ D) cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 c! I: }# p/ G' QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' X7 @7 u7 X7 Z, ~2 r; LCan I entrust it to you?
' e1 }* m& {- A8 N  p( {% TEntrust my love within your heart
8 K$ c4 n7 \, eCan I entrust it to you?
, x" [6 n/ M% w0 ]4 m: P& HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! T4 c+ F5 @( E* t! B) z% s5 E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( f* D! i  v8 Q, p+ J) `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# g2 C3 z3 G0 x! D* V0 i6 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 `- y  t! Q* o" y* r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& _) e9 M* F9 a- R: ~" u+ W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; s( H: B& G5 n" D$ ~8 B' U& J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 I; K8 _% M2 K" q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 {0 I1 P, W1 i; H9 u( _' l/ R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) Q$ u2 W' X* m  [3 o9 z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 J+ N2 M/ P4 F, Y  N! O+ q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 S! d, F8 y9 L/ S1 p, D1 e1 G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- ]" j% H9 c! x, k2 Y0 }+ _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: c8 B: h- A5 d. S1 \) y$ f1 M<P>但我不会</P>
6 s, G! W- r. W+ e! ?+ w) ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( z' U! l# O- W0 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; j: x- u9 W, p+ i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 R5 m7 s. A1 }4 q( o* v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 {" p! d+ b0 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- j, Y! ?& H+ V& p) f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  w5 n% a8 _" B  H  A1 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  x& |8 Q9 }( h& h+ g9 F+ N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 z9 n7 V- x9 V. B8 X5 _2 o% A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  t# y0 }4 U8 F  Q' T% x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; y- ~: |( D! c5 J3 n& A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& o0 ~" l# W7 e0 |% d- ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 g8 _2 N$ k" h$ L1 _2 M6 W<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 {; a# g- I; _3 ]3 N8 {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; F- J: X; F  V) R9 v8 z& L" Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 c- ^: B) x; V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' I! V8 @; U( F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: m6 S" {) x7 h% _! W3 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& S7 [1 Q& R' \' l& u3 i& n: c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: T( D$ d3 ~! t. n1 e% ]# B8 u! G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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5 a& E* n8 w, j0 q* e+ L+ I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 e2 }- t! {9 E; Y, o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& d; s- J$ x4 n5 y2 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>