【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) b/ P0 z' [5 [! y* m* t. xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% l: B+ }- y: n7 {/ }1 II want to confess that I love you,
' n" D( A8 Y6 ]+ }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# H# N8 L9 `0 v/ _6 F: q7 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% U& b% N; {' ~4 y4 z! }' wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; S/ F% Q& _/ _+ t& @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; X+ X3 a/ M0 B  `# A# A0 X" PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 U8 R/ R5 p7 i) s- V0 {8 m3 WCan I entrust it to you?
' ^+ B* `# j, K* kEntrust my love within your heart

2 u6 W( R4 d6 v* n# [0 M5 E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ Y- a* }8 o% A4 |, Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; V9 X. j6 Z4 }# B- {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 s' D: @0 n# _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  H" S: l. p, m% U& A9 N( x7 m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* b7 ^; S& z9 L! s0 e' y8 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 X5 k! @6 K, L: h# W( h1 c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 a5 Q$ G$ H$ h6 s" r8 B8 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 C5 P+ v, ^5 y( t5 T8 b5 o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( D8 A5 |% f' ^  v* C3 Y2 u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* {- ~' ]8 d! X3 m8 F3 V8 r; _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! |* Q# V! g" U' r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 F# b* D; M* r, A& ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ m: U0 v! a" |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Z6 N; c% w2 o) G( ?& t: i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 U; n5 R/ K5 W1 d5 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ [: y, O7 ?% e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( p+ t+ |* ~9 ~& y( l+ v; d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 X8 @" m5 |2 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 ^( P& ^/ M- e9 S1 N& J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# r3 [4 m  z" v1 E1 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 w2 b. E; C4 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& U7 ]$ ], Z! J$ k4 x* g1 Z4 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ?' @0 f% W9 u: x' r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" v9 z- i" ~" a; C8 X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 A( E0 J/ S3 y3 ?+ }9 l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 Z( _# N3 k" V0 y* R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ f3 y4 l( a* R) k# o- h% p: T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! I- `: o- @8 \) y% n, g, Q; f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 x4 i+ j8 D; ?, Z8 B9 n<P>但我不会 </P>
" p3 M1 Q9 ~* k: u! Z0 g6 d/ u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ G) ~0 ^- X, E' N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 Q& O9 u" Z, R9 d/ b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 x7 L3 J* q% L( T3 |1 ?/ s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. y4 x, h- E; J$ \& R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# S$ [9 \+ I) m& c4 A3 J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" j, L, f8 G7 a0 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 @' l) Z' R4 T! r2 J2 [' T& e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 _7 Y2 @) M" l& I6 J8 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 Z2 ~' z. v. e8 Z7 k: `- @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 B' N  B' w0 {( h0 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( N/ K/ w7 ~  R* k. l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" b1 g! X8 @$ V1 S8 T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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