【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 Y- E' T9 t! z' S0 b$ u我另将歌词附在此。
; a+ l2 C1 u- m0 O9 MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' o, H, N# q" D. t# DI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  c1 m) E# |4 J" X3 f. FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* b7 v) B2 ?& XI would probably know how you feel
( Z: g& b' H& j' S3 m! YLove… just the word love
0 |6 {/ c: h/ c. L' jWhy is it so difficult to express?
# z: U0 @# \; `; E4 DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ _& {# c. E  `: M: U9 P$ IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" o  ]6 U5 d. [2 r0 c) |Entrust my love within your heart
. e, x3 s# j; \+ iLove… just the word love
0 @! @  c! r. ]8 t, ^8 i( C3 yWhy is it so difficult to express?
) r" G0 X0 f' O4 n5 h4 U' \# G( a5 A$ _I want to confess that I love you,
, p8 k8 L6 R2 k7 {* j$ \& HBut I never did
) a1 M. u: n4 V4 n' \+ iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- k, h$ n3 b/ V& y! Q# \# E3 PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) s! }/ |8 A8 d  b4 l" P* cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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0 `  i$ w) T& ^7 [+ c+ z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& b- t: D: v% U! J; `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' w9 }* C) `% @3 P! t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& `1 B0 v7 R( ]% l) m" o* ~7 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 ]* t( p- q* l+ g8 ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 I3 C9 N9 P! a2 U  ~2 A. {% N+ z! o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 Y. \+ Q% l0 a$ \  g) Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 v6 I8 N) ~% @% i, x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& k& n. w' K" J" I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! m6 X$ Y: ?/ \3 i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ a" B/ {6 v% l- f5 k( P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 Y; ~5 V+ c$ K/ u" {7 m<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 B( }3 s2 t1 Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. @5 F& f( o  J/ Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- ]& E1 y8 x7 {$ y+ u' Z# N! x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& }& c) \5 \# w6 i7 X/ s7 `  r! x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ W1 y6 a- A& Y7 K  t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# d0 o7 ]! W* c: w6 }6 `7 E9 X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# m1 v" }% R7 z6 C! ]# W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 O' v$ S1 I; x; h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 C1 a6 D. G" H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ ^% ]# E# p1 y( C) D/ Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( u' e- n' q$ U9 k7 S1 F$ L  E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' Q3 W* n# ^& r( Y: Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 k3 C) V( n- c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. K: q6 D; ^& Q4 ?, V7 B% l  H! I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( j1 |, a" T* s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* C7 ?: k& G0 ^: w. _6 U+ V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- d( F: t7 o) I3 k" Q* ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" m8 e) z5 Z, N$ c- v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% F8 a# b* S/ K  ?# q6 c0 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>