【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# l3 ~: [" l2 Y+ G7 n' G& QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 ~5 j' n3 D2 J( I+ m" uWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  T( W" q. P! `. `) y6 UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 l8 W( F5 B; G2 ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 x, m6 c# q" l' pI want to confess that I love you,
. Y' [- w0 _  g# p" |7 vBut I never did
* H' S5 f$ \2 O. v* HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 f6 q; v1 @: u3 Q. }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 P8 `8 E( k- |7 [6 P% bEntrust my love within your heart
* z* {/ l) k. |! i5 B9 a, {9 @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& \2 w4 C- H9 c" i+ vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ R9 W! k, F& L& qIf today isn’t too late,
  U$ e: d8 t$ P$ r- g+ _: `' I) w1 u9 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; H9 \' \: H1 J9 \5 N0 F5 ?6 lEntrust my love within your heart
- V- _+ f2 k/ S: V! I$ WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 d7 Q0 }+ E! Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 a4 D3 s/ X6 W  }* x& F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  d. y  R% T. e* `7 b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 E7 ]( m! V0 n6 X; A2 z! K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 v2 ^$ T( \( M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" N0 u+ c# {9 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: u0 J0 k; Z* d* r* F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 i- N, _& }$ y; u6 c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 S, O+ k, C; X( y! j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 _9 {: y  z. A3 @9 k% X- \0 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' q$ D* D: s) b$ w1 x( g+ S0 d, \. A" v) K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 t& K' d% v/ k  _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  A9 {0 {' d' A, m' N2 W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, g' h/ z# T: B% l! o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. B/ ^$ A7 ~. r; T2 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 r. C% F/ F5 }$ O; r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 j  z  ^! |  a! _7 R( O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 |& w$ v. b4 @! g: I% b' J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" n/ D7 \3 R! ~( N$ D2 Z6 o<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& a1 y$ Y6 U, Q- s0 N1 H8 `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 ?7 Q7 n  ^$ k0 g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( Z7 O% F3 A7 f5 Y& \" e) |<P>But I never did </P>
8 O3 ]0 e6 C, H+ W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ p4 r) L4 X& ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# Y- i% o7 p+ R  g& f0 H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' A, T( N& L% t& Q/ p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ Q- x0 E5 R4 I. v+ z4 U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ }5 U3 j6 B5 G) p6 k' H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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4 x5 p! s7 C6 {. W) S, ^+ C& o* D- s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, w, f. x  S8 ?9 W  B9 D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" S' w8 v% m/ n0 u6 O. a, |) L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 A9 w$ ~) g3 c' A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>