【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
2 U; y$ c- C8 E$ QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 t+ l& \6 M2 T/ ]& T, i5 eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 w6 d/ Y% D* n! NFrom the first moment we met,
" c) b: d& a7 D" ^I already loved you with all my heart
: S' i- u& B6 P; IWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( a% v8 \$ @1 F8 n1 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 z  O( s) M# x) s( MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 Y5 z4 c5 W* @! U: M% ^2 kIf today isn’t too late,
2 Q& }0 r6 c( fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 b7 [3 C" F* @* s  ^% C' UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' B  y/ P: V/ \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 V* A8 W  J" W! h1 M6 u! ]2 M- M% `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. z4 {, Q+ C( U& F" NI want to confess that I love you,
1 l; V; x) y- }* A2 n; W7 M: N5 tBut I never did
. b0 ]! Y* }* C! o! k9 `8 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, a1 }9 {0 u* z- {If today isn’t too late,
6 y3 n4 p9 v) Y! ]2 `7 O( xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- b/ X5 h* p+ ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, x5 d( i6 E* K4 W; T/ OCan I entrust it to you?
7 ]* ]" ^1 S+ X; x3 h) e8 ]$ I. UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% T2 L- I7 O1 j# X' u/ }3 M7 h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 `7 S+ v9 \1 Q/ }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  I7 M- ?* n4 e' i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: b1 m1 r) g/ t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. ]6 j' j5 z1 t( N& n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 V5 B. T0 |( v. Z( I: j  r& X5 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' z- \0 K4 h. ?7 R( r0 U6 p! l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; ?  f9 \. v4 D7 r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, u% Z& \  A$ ^' w& u5 F2 ^1 d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 Y* A4 n  j3 U. N; ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* C* M) _! v. {# n3 X( P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* T! x; Q; u3 k5 M$ y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) }8 L8 E# Y  @, E4 a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 A, `; h" u3 k0 v; q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) j, G4 T# R! Z& i( ^) \3 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* y, W* s; j" D( I: W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 c$ H9 ~, j6 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- x; Z) `8 A0 h6 q' d2 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ F4 n% ~) m. q. m+ n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# _" L+ }2 ]" L: p# ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& G8 p/ f, m  U. w2 E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 ^3 n+ a! c. ^$ b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" d; v! L5 C+ L' T2 U7 C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 M2 e* x7 r" L' h4 c% j4 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 o$ }0 V( E/ s; _2 t" i; |0 S% C  ?# S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  z+ J/ j, Z$ z# N; A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- `' u9 _7 D. T, R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ `/ j4 H5 {" D" T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( n6 a, W  t" ?. |* k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 c/ G8 e4 o  _( W& C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 W% T, f% D4 I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>