【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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/ k1 j, b; j4 EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( k- z6 B9 [1 qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 A' g" S" v* s* {4 h) w) b  ?+ NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 p* E( F' T- lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  q$ U+ T( {$ yWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 `& U8 G& i2 N8 U. fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; w+ P6 p$ V6 o6 D; D6 p' cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 h) r# V. |- ~# R" i( [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& J) U. |7 C% o/ d4 I, |+ t1 gCan I entrust it to you?
- p4 u$ M7 }  N3 TEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, s' D  a: y; }$ w3 m1 jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ w; g( }3 W, `+ JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 ~, e5 V) c$ S- Y* a' ]4 fCan I entrust it to you?
+ q* q) n( s; X: T, s1 q* U3 hEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* g& q; L% Y- h0 c% u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 d+ i, O1 W$ u* L0 c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  C" f' R+ a2 Q8 s- z6 p. ^2 w) k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, ?1 C4 Z2 L$ s( G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" s& L- s3 P0 e$ E6 x1 ]) _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 t6 u% O( r5 E) T4 u. t( r2 u4 R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ P7 Y: u$ m* \3 |6 i+ Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- W# G; J2 `% J8 w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* q* d, t/ L) y  L! e* z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  t! o/ ~! \7 J, M5 F+ y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! W1 P3 y- C* X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ L# R  L  q# a* W3 q! ~# \% B/ Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) w& `, t: w" x3 w# D' N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# d' U( ]# s5 U4 F7 A& }) c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( o# C6 P1 a3 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; N  @; b, f$ y- R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 V7 h) G& j( L, p& R# k; t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 u3 s! A6 P* l# Y: l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 N! [' _1 r! X' [( I9 k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, `, X1 O; p: l- a<P>But I never did </P>
& }7 Y* v6 P! h2 _% p1 \/ W& }<P>但我不会 </P>
0 N  O. w. o4 u) f; C5 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, R, b8 Y' c& ]5 {+ S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, s3 K3 Q6 o) l1 V7 Z9 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 Z+ O% b% L1 l7 @1 p0 ^' I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( m# D9 ~2 I1 r( ]" W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ?0 z0 W0 n0 J/ Z. C0 Q5 f$ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' M* ^; Q* a5 K/ B- Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, q% H# O& K3 I1 p) A' i8 A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 H' h, ~  P, K; I) l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) H, {8 L9 b* @( b/ T! u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! F, A& o# r$ f7 y, `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>