【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 w! D1 x; i0 T& F# K- z8 B* J/ x! b! AI already loved you with all my heart
0 t: H- [, e- rWe meet and talk everyday,
5 y, B! a: \" v) e7 h* j0 n; {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 I/ |! p9 ]* D6 ]/ h& e* G. |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 `9 U5 Q- A( K7 m* m- E# M  qI would probably know how you feel
( S3 r2 z  n0 t9 s0 ILove… just the word love
; g( C+ K$ D- a  P2 _, g! C5 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 e3 Z6 ~# d2 x$ ~- f6 o+ u0 |6 }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: E9 H- i* m5 o% Y- G# JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 n6 @. f; D1 Z" t- Z- wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- T2 Q7 `' x' WCan I entrust it to you?
; i% V- r& f4 W' mEntrust my love within your heart
( R1 q& d3 m! z+ h" F, t3 n1 r! U0 b+ XLove… just the word love
5 L  Q' k5 `7 J, b; K1 _Why is it so difficult to express?
9 i- k( z/ d# g6 ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* \5 E1 y3 a5 T* k  i1 [) mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 V& t/ x% V8 l6 v( \6 o) A9 BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! _& j  g, ^: t& U' F2 `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% Y. f# w' k' S' l+ n4 bCan I entrust it to you?
$ V$ i6 x5 _7 l, QEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; w/ Y! K0 c+ [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 T7 I4 a' s/ o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# \0 |; H  N& E9 H5 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: \1 L, d- ~3 |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 C7 G9 A# T/ ~/ ?4 c5 X0 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ `& T* @* Y% C" _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' D* x( P( k0 H$ b2 F; {5 G. P. ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 _- m) G% B8 C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ @4 T5 b5 |$ D3 H2 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 ?& `" {- ^7 G, _; T6 T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: ^$ c, z1 A  |) ^" A) E/ G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' J5 w: \% y# F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# N7 t  a' W+ h: q# v$ Z9 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! l9 \, D0 Z8 d( I# a& p: v! a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 W; z2 P) i( s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: \: n% c+ x4 ?- w; \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% l3 A  U) y# V' }" C$ w9 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ^0 X7 N& y; L$ h$ c& X4 d6 M& @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 V8 P: J0 F# ^% e2 |+ Q) ^( I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ t- g5 p& {/ S5 I# D7 c- x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 G/ A2 }8 j& U) k' u* `<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( m* H5 G" G' ~3 ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: O& F  L7 b. J) B9 S3 L/ Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% F" ]3 p$ l" c- B: M/ R' c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# o* y! q3 K6 v+ I5 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- L7 H$ N4 b9 u+ Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" K8 b" c( k  M$ @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 D9 c2 H4 f/ Y5 N: l" o/ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& @+ X' g5 F& ~* |" t' Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. h$ e. {! L* K" L& f9 D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ O' a* e3 {  G* h( w4 J; P0 z1 F, S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' v1 m) Z! `! Z8 W" W3 X/ b* o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 N9 F  T. i4 `- h/ ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 F3 ~# r7 c5 b  F3 {/ W. S% p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>