【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! a4 e) f$ e8 Z, E6 a: S8 L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, T8 _4 V, B( f" Y! WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 a, a+ V7 N# G  `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% ]% U! ?. `" @8 A- oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 Q+ k$ e) [( _# N& @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( X5 c' s4 X' i6 JCan I entrust it to you?
" o3 v8 ?( D# I) x5 f6 R" K" s6 h2 W1 IEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, k0 S! Y" L) A" J4 V2 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) a0 G8 ?& ?9 z5 d5 C% \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# _2 D; v" p* ^4 Y% a  E% WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 h4 g; \2 n( y3 P+ h6 iCan I entrust it to you?
  U- d8 T8 [6 }, R4 n3 W$ m% eEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

% @5 N9 X* t. w2 ?2 [3 a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# d: n8 n- ?" \  Q9 ]& y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! z: S% E" F% _6 J4 p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 m/ l, V2 B5 U! E; p/ \1 ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: Z8 B# z1 L& Y5 Z+ B% o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 X9 ]4 Q/ j' u$ z6 s; S, j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% ?6 n$ u3 N/ z9 O. A( _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  l& D. J+ g! l: P! }' c# R+ s  j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& U( m3 G2 E  s' a# U5 K7 S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& i$ f0 U: p! {) b1 x. n( Q3 |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) D- s5 W5 @0 L5 A  Z' D3 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 z$ U5 B) G- S. [$ w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 t% F' T$ R( @3 v* ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 U6 |: H( }3 [7 {( q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  y/ e- R  @2 `9 q<P>但我不会</P>
' L  _" h! T- n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  S! n6 v' }2 ]! ]1 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! O  |1 q& S* N5 W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) {1 Y/ x) g8 Z  [# x7 `/ [7 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 W3 X: A. m4 x+ |& S1 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; F" }, R8 m( p0 g0 `" m; d  X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. g, L2 `: s& B1 C5 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- A3 B8 z& ~" [  g$ N1 [2 K7 s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) b5 \( p7 {& s0 U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! Z% c5 a9 T4 x  r% j<P>但我不会 </P>
$ @# l6 `( m& D4 u3 `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 Z8 p, Z% N7 U* e) M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  y6 a( a- @  H+ a1 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 ?" F: e: l# ~, W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 X5 h( Y2 x+ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* p6 X5 ^) E7 A! c4 L' h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- w) Y4 Z7 v: }% `/ o8 T- {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' I( i$ t6 b9 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 U$ j7 n) O; b+ ^' s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>