【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 C( o2 F7 U; Y% I+ nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* v, w) x7 X1 KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! f/ C: z8 O8 I" |( p( A: z3 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 a+ L* V( c$ q6 H4 n/ B. }I would probably know how you feel
, H7 M$ k; _& }7 i6 O* tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 ]8 ]- U/ o/ T, ]$ _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ~+ J( g# h  y( cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* O9 _% N" h# Y8 y6 }! K3 Z. p2 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 i4 O7 r% ^6 C, z; z5 \# @/ P, yLove… just the word love
( \: C9 e% A, b; `, s* w# t( R6 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 e. F7 b' L, \% VIf today isn’t too late,
- y2 ]8 l, z: B. i/ jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' X: D4 H( C; y4 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' B( y) J7 o6 s4 h1 h8 KCan I entrust it to you?
: c/ t4 j) X5 mEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 j2 O9 s4 k% U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 Q7 Q" `0 u/ F/ I9 r2 G* u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# `- T! p# B: z# t- |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 R+ g* _9 }: v; e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 p, D( m; M$ a& h: c5 y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 W+ G# `' K* o+ i) P/ B) [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, \# ~8 S8 c. k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; U* Q' M0 I# V7 o# X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# a9 h9 i$ e6 i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: P/ G/ o2 ~/ H$ g! |( n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 H0 f- Q/ P3 h2 \7 V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ |+ c/ D, j! t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 T$ x7 z! u7 P; w' I9 S4 R4 t$ X$ W% y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ p" S. |: ]3 N! A8 L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 h& x. b+ _2 I8 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% H( o( ?1 `% [9 U+ B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 {1 L- D$ f4 p& A9 K8 C9 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 ?$ `, v4 o, Z7 t, d9 E  O$ j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 I4 \3 S7 k3 n9 m& u& h8 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' Q" }! W$ Z2 H, q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) u' q+ f# X/ D5 V" K$ c4 v+ r) u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, S6 r* t  [8 a" y6 I6 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, O: y* }- M  u! Y# B2 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ Z, L# m. B# d* J1 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 ~) v8 C9 E' W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 |- U6 p; g3 _4 x* W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ D. o! A  Z( p4 l) u$ d  u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" U+ E8 c. G" H# z8 h7 X. n* V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( e) e) B! [  J0 Z4 I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, S2 L( P$ M, q( B/ y3 {7 E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>