【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, j9 b) ?( |% E7 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 V8 z2 |0 ]  U$ D7 H  l8 LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 A9 Z5 z8 Z! P0 n* C6 C" ^From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ Z7 r: [# C( k- I. WWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' f3 }9 h; j' I: Y* g5 N! rBut I never did
% K2 n+ O; {5 Y, e8 a: h3 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* y/ ~/ u# I  d: pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 t4 [( E* K- [But I never did
4 m# a2 c7 {- L3 d, F0 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, x" ?$ N, r" |4 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ u- }5 @0 g, h, M4 j8 `. t$ k7 S* p( jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% J4 p1 |* a, k4 m) `! h% `) Q; mCan I entrust it to you?
: L4 G) v6 ?3 @; e" `: r$ E* aEntrust my love within your heart
. P0 B" d3 e! [. N; _6 y+ UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; s& |' q* B# Q, y% d8 m  e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. T5 \& U, c) R" q6 A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% k( {/ C6 \7 J2 r$ h& o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 h; o' @" J5 a2 x" ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 F( f0 _1 \' _- M) s% ]7 L& l2 W<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( U3 e, x! R, r5 c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 H* W+ j! d& E& T4 i7 z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 G; r: f* s  P/ q: _4 v9 f3 Y  j) n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 k  [4 M3 a- i: a9 M+ l2 I+ h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. A: U4 G7 _" K( ~+ _. l/ \( l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 ]& U+ \3 d# p<P>但我不会</P>
: y6 o7 b2 D6 d7 ?4 X/ d1 m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; {( g4 B  B* q& N) L" l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* L4 c& O: ^8 M# K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ?6 w, I# ~$ k0 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% S, y* p& Y, @: t$ s, i) |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 Q! z! N  s+ f7 g  x& Z1 o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( @8 B, U  J1 P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 V6 c$ U0 ?4 F% j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ X0 ?1 l) C: A6 U# {7 S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# i0 I$ `6 K1 E  z) [; W/ m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% f* ?9 T5 E! ?# m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& B+ F5 d: N' V* O7 D# X1 V# z- l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; F: o4 y9 j1 A' s$ h4 ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; _, [; ~8 b5 v) Z/ E, o: l, m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 T! p+ H& L/ \: G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 x! K* L! G0 W( ^$ }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 s3 k/ }' d% s5 \9 P, |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 ^$ p( s! O$ D$ a" I6 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 h! j; J) `; c( g! l! t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 i/ e! h8 }) h9 H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 L' N% o- t/ }8 u4 G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 m3 V. m* v. T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>