【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" r; w* \% o! r  g' i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; e- G+ r/ E/ k1 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 B# D4 S3 i$ b- ?+ I3 QWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- }, g# _; n" EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ _# e: [; @' c) x3 D; |7 w5 F3 fI would probably know how you feel
2 }7 ~3 w2 A9 ~" N2 E) KLove… just the word love
/ d) A- Z6 d8 L3 P/ AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# L. m+ U. F. S' t1 _5 e! ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, g1 t/ {  k. V" ?3 Z4 M$ ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' T# w2 Z7 B' Q) l; }+ _  OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 q/ ~- g* Z, `& e# yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 K( L, Q4 L# e  W! Q$ \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ }+ G, d' p  ^9 C/ c# rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! P! M% G/ p0 R( rEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- r: g2 X1 Y, }% z7 ]( U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 @' V7 y! b$ p( A4 _6 D: L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: j8 O7 E/ H( E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( U! b# V8 ^9 r& x7 k( g9 l" y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) @! w$ P" n2 o( m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" Q) y8 A) d: b1 Y& b' x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 ^0 u! x9 D2 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' Z( R8 v' w* D$ y3 @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( w, o% _3 Z, L8 _! h' _, a8 r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! ^# J: m" @0 J; y1 Z7 X6 Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 y6 y! x! E# J6 E. n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, o( H4 O2 H' ?6 [, B3 m) J* J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 W, S1 x& R9 I- R( H. `* ~# k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; `' c' E9 D5 w7 |# [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. R+ M' ]7 i! y& J9 G4 |" p; ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 r3 P% \) I$ b$ c/ c. R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ T  n* L+ Y& C7 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& `$ J6 f' q$ ]9 G4 s0 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# A! s/ X6 O8 ?/ V0 b6 h2 e/ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 F9 n+ r6 R1 ^! U' K# ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 o; E  n" j' c6 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 o3 a" q  I6 d8 y7 K2 u$ }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 I' u0 b; y: x$ Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ w3 h* O: c. {4 S; C. |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: c- s* q$ k, G, `+ _: h% u  u* J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 x+ d  z5 m) P. O+ V4 H<P>But I never did </P>
1 q( g7 G) f& F<P>但我不会 </P>
, @) a  l  \( b3 g. v! i% D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' ^1 |5 O, Z- Y9 q# e: h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( q6 c0 p3 d7 w2 N4 I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# M6 ~- n- D& F- ~: C, {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) @- ^- y" r: z. F  u+ `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 X+ l, q4 y, \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 a6 b3 q3 |  P- p$ f/ p- h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 i8 ^) d( f* k( V2 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: J' n: ]/ r6 x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>