【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' B8 j) v( P& |* H+ K- s我另将歌词附在此。
3 C* `4 J5 n9 M6 l' s0 YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; Q) n  d5 C# g" M+ {" [That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 h8 h0 ], t! D3 }7 z( j) ]0 uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ F7 y2 x9 W5 F4 k8 L! H. \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" c0 ^2 {) F9 }3 ^$ v( H" AI would probably know how you feel
$ i% P+ K9 i+ T% b* u* LLove… just the word love
6 n; y( q) Y: l. ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ ^  V9 N6 ^3 w6 G4 KBut I never did
; A$ N% ~' i1 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' k( s5 ^4 H$ m: UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: X9 w* U7 d1 u* m8 {! X" tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 K3 S+ z- {9 M8 {5 ~  ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ O' I4 @: P8 ]- P1 S% W: [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 T, m  D& j! K0 f6 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ ]+ {7 {8 d! m% aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 H& l4 V! V+ a2 W5 u% l[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% n, N$ R3 H' F  W1 I- V# d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ f- w2 t, a0 V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 F7 C; @3 m' r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- A/ v# @* ~6 d# x3 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, D- G. B" k4 U+ p6 }& Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- ^: U$ j5 a0 r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 f, ^$ X" J+ @6 |" y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; Q* B' c6 K9 l& L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ \3 l  D5 U; o, |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 L- y6 ?  h3 o9 ^2 `1 w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) |! Y, N3 z! J2 i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ z0 U8 t; t- G% y* O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 Q5 G2 \6 C- ?% e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; G6 l& s& Z) W<P>但我不会</P>
! a+ }& R, |& G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ {* P6 W. Z& x' f. P. L1 `* B1 M- {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 u1 w3 E7 s& q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# _& g( U+ _# d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) ~. ^7 ~# _" Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; j! h! P  J: B- G9 W# F9 G! c" z5 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" L4 [- B4 Z. N4 U1 K. a, l! ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! E, f$ ^- k0 V2 J( P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) s2 Y7 ^, q. m) c$ E7 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, J3 N; h) Z" i& K, H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 l. P+ ?& f/ F. |+ m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x* n1 ^  I" E$ k. |/ j1 \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 z1 }! \: S) X5 l3 M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& @$ b. n; S& i# e8 O8 A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 v2 \8 O7 z: L6 e% B) g' A7 v% n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 p& L. Z& a! O- X" j5 L; I) l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  t! J' n; X, y1 K0 a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 `. Q6 [8 t/ I$ \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 r7 r5 k3 s- O6 w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" v3 w5 S) I9 C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. i0 l0 p% S) J) }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>