【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 x' T: \9 h" [% }我另将歌词附在此。
) ?2 P2 I" P+ x8 g3 YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 }" w- k) ?! {% H) k1 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 K( {7 t/ O( Z5 a$ \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 K. E% N: }( m! hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; a2 ], Y- e8 y: A, C5 II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( H1 R* k5 c5 D4 }4 ?I want to confess that I love you,
: N& S( _7 Y" D% N: IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ ~( p' Y' T5 A7 R, S0 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 R+ f% k2 {8 D" M, y# z. N/ {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 r+ g/ _0 I+ D2 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
' E' N! `' ~5 ]I want to confess that I love you,
3 T7 q9 w) I4 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 ^- m8 ^; S- \$ C, nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) F- e' N5 n2 q0 ^/ lEntrust my love within your heart
9 p3 D$ f, S- J5 yCan I entrust it to you?
( L. u, N2 K. k- }Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 t8 o4 i7 _" r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; f6 ]' W3 ^7 e, f" d. X4 N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 K. Z( ?7 t- P8 g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% k1 u  N; X# t7 s6 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 u$ Q/ Z+ l! F" Q& b& U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' V  ?: ]; ~0 [9 ]% a, S  c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! {& S' e  B& s  p# j5 R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 K/ C0 a$ N, F2 m6 L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ g( G! _4 B. A- g, e2 ?5 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! _4 s, i. X- N4 R3 u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  ~! d+ J  v: A( p. C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" w  a- P3 z; X* q6 u6 w0 z3 m% H' a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ A) ^8 X, [& A/ x) g0 |5 g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% D! m& h0 P( e2 a, C( c5 c3 p! R2 V<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' q; |! T1 B, u4 s- B! t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 ]- |& e! r" X- \6 r* x0 L. x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& g" i. E% p8 J$ ?& @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 Y% h5 F7 s& ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 |4 ^  @: D; s4 x' ?: }  T1 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* g+ m0 `6 ~6 @6 d) k6 r# D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( ^! y" {! K! d. D9 A" o: C& f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! ^* U* c' j+ S; }/ s( e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 i, y4 n% i7 H! J+ @3 }<P>但我不会 </P>
* u( \: D- D) |0 f4 r; }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ U  Q2 M, q5 @/ w5 I7 s! ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- P( g/ v: Q( i+ |' ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 P1 M5 Y' i) }& J, c, C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# F5 ]0 n& v$ |  a6 W! g( k: m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. L9 A6 o# a$ _9 u( M3 K) M2 e! ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 R" u) t# j3 A$ W) y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  m4 V0 @; R: E; L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 T( q1 }' r0 @. u5 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* P' N$ b7 M3 g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' Z3 j2 M- n: X! N- Y; l! j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ {! `- Y; P0 W" b" I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 G) n: p  W% T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, S& ?% O& Z5 o$ H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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