【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 h" p! {5 }3 BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ w! |6 D: s# J  f+ vFrom the first moment we met,
! X5 D6 p! G4 b+ t' S& LI already loved you with all my heart
) g- {/ F* A% i3 lWe meet and talk everyday,
1 z. ~) E3 N- B$ gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ y5 v& a$ |2 r, @$ H( N. D' U9 [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! u8 X( {$ S, W+ r' Y! w' @. iI want to confess that I love you,
# z4 R3 i# e* vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) J) Q1 d5 _$ U/ JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ R- p% b) x  x: G( m, W3 R( EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 {/ p: n+ Y" T1 S( o$ MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- D5 f, u2 k' Z, c3 W8 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* Z: c- e' ~8 w: T7 j) rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 ]( x7 f# G+ k! `3 |( t7 NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) V; c4 Q9 I% \Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. I. r$ o/ i+ t$ ]- U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( P$ K5 @+ R5 M' M9 z' M( ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 _: k) Y( |9 e% A) q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: U& r4 V' x' E2 V. U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ A; C0 |5 G0 g' I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* {. r( d) u; r7 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ @4 q5 P* E% I) I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 }/ m* [% [" d  g. a3 I# N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; v+ d4 Z! C, M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( f+ R+ z# C6 M7 @- l( y, N& e! Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  X, t. w, A9 ^% ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ H. w+ k) r) p$ L+ O1 h  A" {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ^: A5 g  [+ O  M4 J. g<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* \' c- i9 W% V( P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 J% m& w/ B+ z( |9 u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 [) E/ J9 O7 z: l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 _3 ]/ I! z9 S9 H& C* N5 I  ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. v+ E" c+ d' f' b5 W* `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ p: D3 |: h: F+ ]) d5 G. D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 O! I) F' I/ Q, c$ p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 q8 R2 q0 P( m: S$ V, m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# G. S3 C: h) g" `5 @2 ?* A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, }" D* s2 V3 h9 [* W0 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. t4 V) E5 J- u8 E+ ]8 `0 o0 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! m% |6 n4 Z6 l" O% e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# }* d! |! z. b5 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) n; ~2 _/ x) E# }& V: F3 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. \, k; W0 h! C8 |0 {+ ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! h% b4 |& k  h% X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* t! N: i# s0 ~/ R9 O* r2 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) n3 F7 z" [$ B4 i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>