【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: |+ o! r, I8 O; I2 e0 K我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 `& g2 Z/ j5 E- c: e8 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 ?' P8 Z3 O" Z$ `7 j1 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; S, e$ B1 y; J( O7 A: m; KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" H3 S/ i1 @/ {. ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- T* o6 R" r" u( B+ e) K; L% H5 SI want to confess that I love you,
# F2 m+ k) B) K# ]7 @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: Q1 l% ^' [. E$ B3 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 m4 U8 p0 Z% F# A6 @# uEntrust my love within your heart
8 _1 J4 ?: G; |7 X" }: u, F, XLove… just the word love
1 W& |3 ^) C% @Why is it so difficult to express?
( J8 E% O3 X. o: SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- g: |8 i$ X% b0 m# ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- B) h' f( n3 {  c3 h0 ?$ T1 b! C7 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ I- v8 `0 o* v0 l( L. E7 m4 oCan I entrust it to you?
9 G5 G' _. O; W, \8 w! ~$ VEntrust my love within your heart
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- T# L" a/ j8 r5 K! W5 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' w8 ?! W9 ?" ]7 l$ Z! U5 s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 [" _- X7 S+ g: }$ e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 F8 W) A- D' T& b  J- \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 `0 _/ m$ R% t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. m- r8 V7 K7 i' A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 l3 u/ w+ z6 U* a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' K/ {5 s7 ?3 A; X8 x1 C& S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" ~8 g: K. X0 }6 o% r4 X* g* W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  I  q/ U  v4 s0 s4 {/ Q% ~9 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( m9 P: |3 n! q) B. O+ P4 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( |. f- |2 ^1 T; m9 J) k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) M0 B4 ]2 [) h# w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( C2 n! S7 v4 o- S* P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 e2 P! ?9 L$ a8 M" U5 s8 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 r  Z+ P! h& y( I: E: Z- l- y/ t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 a0 [  a/ Z0 j3 [, W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 o& u, o% x0 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 Y; B- d% G9 \+ p3 }8 Z4 K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; T. @3 L$ D( f7 P5 \! `! T9 c<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' X! z  p  a  g. ^  @4 T$ U' R0 h5 s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ^$ x% S) @& ^. r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 Z" C! g/ }  s' D0 L6 B+ A; \- e& n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% U( h; X3 W6 q9 s) Q* n% w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) [, B! @8 l/ W9 Q/ z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. r4 o6 U! x* e+ u% _. U" q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* ?5 ?* p$ }+ b( g6 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 S0 d% l0 N5 R% z3 _. y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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: I. D" r* h8 ^% Y- f8 t2 M6 j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% r4 W8 z/ ^- @1 i3 v: P7 d! L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>