【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. `# D( t3 q0 d. T. z% |: f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 T" K7 e7 C8 A; g5 ^, U( LFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, J" Q. k2 v; Q2 yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 [7 I4 ?& [9 m6 AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 H8 q! x" y( b$ r7 Y: uI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' J# y' M: [0 y# I  e) s& g( rWhy is it so difficult to express?
( i8 \& ^- k) G* L1 [# N3 V% nI want to confess that I love you,
1 Y% g7 Y+ Q# t) ^7 OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, k2 J* [0 y8 {( s# F; f9 r7 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# Y; y6 U2 s: k) Y1 aEntrust my love within your heart
+ O  ^6 E& ?0 u$ Y7 ?9 @( [7 n; `Love… just the word love
4 @; z  U  l$ RWhy is it so difficult to express?
' B- H7 }$ O& C% f9 r3 k& gI want to confess that I love you,
, l) [1 H; w, r) ?& c( P/ BBut I never did
, U* g. H2 D) b0 X6 d* G3 n- jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ v. Y7 T  A, _1 N$ Q) `; IIf today isn’t too late,
/ \4 Y4 z  E" i- kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# J* V1 j/ N& q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, x2 O2 C$ V% U" B/ h$ g5 e2 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% Z8 k' B2 ]: j) ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, J' u5 Q$ s5 P' ?8 }1 b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 Y* o. K9 d. t5 r  w3 X7 D& [& d& Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 h4 x2 \8 Y% I) U' z" y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 r2 Q! L9 a8 u" ], N5 n6 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" j# \9 I7 c- p' ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. C! o! [# z$ {6 w! q! s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 t  |7 A( n- L. Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 {! d4 G. x4 J5 H* V& C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( w$ H. n( y! a& f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ M, n( A- m  X5 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  E7 R4 u+ i1 K* G6 N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' C& W- R$ X/ N4 @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 c, e" g  ]) T% [% C8 o& n9 Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& c' r0 C+ M3 j0 |! C+ ~( _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& {7 b! H9 e6 ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 ^  r9 S, t% D6 N( I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# c1 ]3 W. O1 }+ i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( t; w6 R) a5 \. E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! V1 e9 K: f# q1 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) S+ V) E3 k: v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 }8 R- n' M6 Y! c4 Z+ g' a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 Q5 Z' E* r8 P( B7 u7 d! F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 P5 U) y" K# P. U. ^! P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# i% _6 T+ k% L: U# w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 W$ D# f3 l* c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ P& }8 ^0 d- @& d7 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 _% z9 {* U* d! C& x, x- `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) f  t& g) r2 C2 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 |, ^4 f' |- c; E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 }3 D" u0 O. Z+ H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 E$ e; ^8 J6 Q' R' T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>