【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
4 d* y6 L8 z, t8 \9 JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- j) A0 `- {8 }" g4 WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ j% G% D5 i5 y6 L6 w$ gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& N1 w' Y' r. A' f" Z) FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ m5 M5 F) F- ]& nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 \; z; w% F" y- SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) X/ t: [; ^9 D# B# r1 V5 zIf today isn’t too late,
) ?$ X  H9 A  T: Z4 q  |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: o5 {* X# `: T1 ~2 x  |6 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 i8 r7 k1 t& W- mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 ]8 _# @5 s8 A) ^# j5 BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 w$ L" A1 [& II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ r2 s* w8 k3 K1 ~+ @2 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' ?6 r/ V! U) b  {% L8 W3 u# ZCan I entrust it to you?
1 [7 X1 B" A: E1 ~/ w6 Y, Y# A0 }+ `Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! h& L9 v' B' f1 `5 ^8 S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- l, L1 R, q; E! @' k$ J: D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) b& }2 d5 D# K6 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 z! C0 b# H9 C- t) [3 l7 {; \0 M$ |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 S: @) u, A  R1 p: N$ {3 i/ X3 L8 J( g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( \& q% g" a, G( e3 p+ P* g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ r4 D0 {. J: ~) F4 ?3 \6 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% f4 j* }4 v) n* B  E+ X8 f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 F4 w" ^5 g3 ?; k7 M. b- a# V4 C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ [; a) R  u- M# k7 e+ w. o7 p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( r* r- n; _$ p* Q1 i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  k) Y& Q/ o! {9 T7 R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. h# k# p8 b4 Y2 ]9 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 x. s& |7 L- o4 {5 }, K/ W1 ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; F9 `  U& x6 G0 [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ Z1 L( }% W- x! y; z: }" h- I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 S# ^5 V! k- Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 B9 ~# q9 B) }5 c+ H5 W  c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- E4 c. A, q# I. w) M* |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( t2 t2 b- |5 O; S  y# ^' K& l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 ^3 C" H9 @8 a; S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 }- q4 ]7 J$ f# D2 x- V  R% x& X4 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ g$ |  K" e. F- e& t1 t; d9 I2 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  j) L; V) \% R" a8 t9 {9 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 @6 ]; z9 U) ?" U* j( K. A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 h) P% z# J" P* O8 o* M+ L# ` 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>