【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ b$ H2 s2 \0 {0 N% VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% H$ [" _# R2 E+ ~From the first moment we met,
! s# g  Z4 w. U! A" C* YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( l1 o7 k5 N7 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 {& ~- m2 ^. D% @- V6 OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  n& u1 E& V0 R# J  ~1 S7 [4 A. qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 v' \) n: R  U2 P! L" G" }% @Entrust my love within your heart
1 Q# b  z- z- _. JLove… just the word love
1 Q0 m+ C6 |! f+ KWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ o( _; S3 G" d3 iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) V! y% \, \8 L( N7 ^* `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& w1 v1 {) s  y8 }( D7 x$ vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ^3 K4 v5 b! ~Can I entrust it to you?
5 J# e# v; ~+ ZEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! J' n- f2 e$ C7 E2 BEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 K/ u+ y* H3 |. ^0 B3 p9 F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 L- h( P! g6 n. }( M7 q% O" p5 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  f8 k: X/ s" w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' j1 |9 \! g1 s/ I( r5 A9 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 l5 e/ V: _7 Q6 r; Z4 E6 E( Q% T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# B' y( f3 d, w6 z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ J$ _9 ^( v/ E/ S2 |; u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, G" k( w+ z5 ?; G- J8 \+ g: ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 g; ~( ~) Y  C8 y* a& v  `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 q  X& E! H" T# D% Q, y. I- B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ {' ~7 u& w- i' W* w1 l# a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' D* i$ v/ C8 U. f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* X; l1 h. H% |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( b5 Z. h  u  O; y+ b2 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 n9 L- E% c+ L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; q$ K  Q$ w. r' O3 T4 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" Z4 C7 d0 q9 F; ~$ M% k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 ^, M; t8 J  O- [+ G6 |2 I7 s7 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  K% F( {" E( B4 |: N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' o; l4 j2 i3 N: d* J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 N  ]; U; e2 O* w3 v6 s<P>但我不会 </P>
& I5 }& ~" j( ?9 x- ?7 q/ w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" B2 z. F; {& a4 r3 }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 Z+ U! z, e" H# Y& ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& n$ V2 e# D% p% k* \, H" s* y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# E0 n7 p: P! a) X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; o* F- R/ g4 f0 Y5 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# T/ ?* ~4 J% m& i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( A0 n+ i' ~1 a6 k" T; W+ }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 r/ P% ?6 H, t, {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! y3 n. D  @5 h% {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" e1 Y# q" @% ?: f0 N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>