【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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. W, N% `: t& U& a# n. q我另将歌词附在此。
3 A! b( B! s# j0 l9 \* GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' n; L/ F% ?  `9 j2 x7 eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  O3 t* k" W) V# d+ m. vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 T$ @" @6 }' ~; jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( E& j( r2 a9 f+ v2 z9 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 Z( x& g5 n5 D/ T) `9 s) ^I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 H# a  B& ?! XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ S: M0 Q  M6 _& ~" e: t, b( lIf today isn’t too late,
/ j( P0 h  I8 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! T6 B3 C( G9 ]7 @/ a$ W9 ]$ x& c/ MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ l5 O' _# f# E( m! _* hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- D! c* ~4 a/ N1 p8 T; EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  m* W7 H: {9 v4 k$ T0 aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 n0 ]2 \5 g$ b" _8 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 i; n3 X/ G  Q' I" {7 @  p3 sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  T) F$ r  x/ nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- S8 C. }& F7 p* M0 i) [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* L, K9 m. H) Y, s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 h8 R6 G& }0 G; L, W+ k* J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 [; W( \$ ^* |) j! L( ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' s) A' [- P# B! A" I5 b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) k5 h! g: h! Y6 @  I% G! K7 c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) E9 p1 m$ B7 X5 q7 M: {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  W0 p/ M$ W5 _* e. @4 [# @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ ~4 o, `3 R1 m7 M+ d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 F* k( j9 R  V5 [1 ~" W: r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& _8 l5 r3 k2 G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ e( ~: L1 Y* r) y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 p9 X" h3 o% g3 ^  p0 o<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% C' z1 [! E- K9 P! R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# _# t2 E; W2 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# o/ e( t5 G: o+ T/ R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 b0 l" g4 Z5 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. c0 j$ {! P6 Q/ L5 v: `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( x+ a1 K6 ?% K8 j6 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" @8 w' U3 f9 B  t8 s$ ?+ w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ _# N8 G7 t& [$ I  `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- ]* c% T& B& E2 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 @2 ]* ]' \3 m! C/ F4 ~% J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 E/ b( j+ F; h/ P% L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 l& H% c& C4 r+ ^+ C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 l# E# B9 \: G6 x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ D2 g2 [$ s$ \! ?+ x1 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( B5 f) o- G; @6 d0 H0 B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 o' P% ?3 F. s) d- p! }) E/ ?$ T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( E( x3 y% X( |; R- ?, ~' ~- b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( d3 J2 S  Z/ V. R' o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, s1 ]# ?( q- J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, K6 I( V* |0 u. a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; |" V" z' f& d2 n- h4 q0 X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. W0 x6 S! g  G. e7 ~, s; k8 p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>