【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 g% Y  w+ B) ^: l我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 S: }" M  b+ o% v* @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 F4 p: f/ z8 C; \+ |( Q) Q% B- JI already loved you with all my heart
+ P* X5 c# i7 O0 }3 p5 RWe meet and talk everyday,
3 a( A' K* {/ sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% X: X+ x/ ]  |# y4 {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 y9 r& B3 C" Z  w4 L3 II would probably know how you feel
2 i  h1 N- J' s) YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 L& I8 c3 R  e3 j+ `' WI want to confess that I love you,
8 Q5 Y9 f( Q* q9 O" a* IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ }3 v" g* y( H% U6 K6 @; ?) `# b$ kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: Z2 F! c/ H" u) H" \Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% h8 Y) P  o+ |$ ~4 C6 lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 V, M, N! W( y7 o! OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 }7 C6 S4 w( `5 S' B# oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 m: T1 ^2 M. H2 v1 T( y2 T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  [2 T/ u5 T. ~- L7 \0 A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) Y9 w# R2 w& W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: P4 i: I- Z( E  T9 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 K( a1 x: ?2 r: ^8 _% _( i' V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  [0 h; k# g) H+ Q0 p% l5 d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# e9 B4 x! l, j2 Z% E% H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 m4 M+ {% p) X4 ?$ h. K9 T8 [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! }3 z; Y/ v+ g# c5 }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 o% k( v. E4 O* h5 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 F/ P6 O* k% Z/ h  U9 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 |' N& q! z% d! O3 p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; b7 i# f& J3 |3 J; x7 U. B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; z7 Y: }: c# z  ^; J, R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 R: }3 o  j% [, C' f$ l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; K% b: ]$ }$ Z+ a# z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 `7 Q+ Q( r: q8 H. j2 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 k* z$ d+ e4 J  ^$ o' N5 R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 K; p* B; \# S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 z% h& Y( j5 ^  q5 ]% `<P>But I never did </P>
) m( t; q  I4 m  I, W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, `6 @. G6 R5 S. w9 w* j- R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, C7 d# C9 i6 D5 U1 U4 ~; F! X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# V8 i. F9 ^; J- H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ h" i0 C5 N  x+ p" O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  i/ l( a$ C9 N7 n- O0 }- U& P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- s, W8 `4 y/ U! g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& G7 U  z6 ]3 |1 S  S: R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 I+ X& G; b# ]% V: @. B( U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>