【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 Q' X  [6 i8 cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' f* E; e6 N7 d, J* bFrom the first moment we met,
/ a1 \% H5 y/ l  D% S" D# O7 }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 G. c0 c: u7 w' ~* Y$ W: w) CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' |+ t  X3 I& N$ G) N& aI would probably know how you feel
/ ?% [8 [- e& C& a& ^6 _( u8 JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 u9 L/ p, W8 j3 f) BBut I never did
& f: o7 w  n6 W% ^8 O) D! zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* {/ s+ k! q" ], Z! }4 a1 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 l; ~( N1 Q, y7 |; e: MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; `. W- C4 m) f/ n2 f* q8 HCan I entrust it to you?
$ x) E% X; I' q9 a" Z) iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& w  ~  R$ K; C; `) ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, q3 _( |# e. G! c; oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* Q) O) R+ _, v! t2 Z. H9 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" I+ K8 W2 ~& N& N6 U; Y; hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- X2 N/ l" r6 |1 I8 D' S! a6 |" ~7 CCan I entrust it to you?
2 `) G' F8 o3 `# L, }* |% GEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, C. F, n3 ]* f# B# ^7 A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' D7 [- _# M! A* Z4 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- s& n) C4 m# S% z! i& L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 h3 s" r) f7 L4 \- ]0 C+ N, j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ _+ I3 {5 K# G7 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* c4 h- B6 b9 N# j; q& a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  e/ m0 {0 ?' I. L, b' s$ D* F6 C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 O8 \% u5 i$ U. u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: ]  i4 Q' b1 m- d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 v& ^' Z, z( |3 p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' {& I' X( ]1 J1 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 T( I3 e2 @: w4 x6 W, U( g  L7 I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 {& o# w$ O  p& i8 E3 I/ Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ E8 D4 U. b/ o  v  q- O5 E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 y: d* n8 }0 m5 T6 ?1 |& w8 u* u<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) M8 L. Q$ O1 u6 S: Q2 ~! O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: k2 u, d5 Q3 _; q1 m# l  _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ X- P6 P# |4 d+ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' q7 H. b1 U, K4 Y& g, [8 Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 M; _8 X$ y) H. ?' l: l1 f. Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  x; S% a$ B: s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 N( f% O( \8 ~) H/ b* u1 r8 c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 z: y, u# I- V7 w+ [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% k4 o. t: J: r; ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 v$ h4 Z) e' v# q$ H0 J: p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( m+ `! U* z: a" N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 I0 K5 }9 o, d. Z; L& Y% O6 U, ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# Y; [$ f. g" C* A1 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  v  d0 h; @9 m! A" U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ A! P- Z5 ?8 Y& L, U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" d6 K8 A7 K4 g 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ V- w$ Z; ]% O. i; T3 f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" C: E) O, q) N) p3 U& n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. F: b/ E9 D8 U; H3 I1 P& n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 H' t, I2 H, D" g' i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>