【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ `5 U3 S  H# BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, n! S- Y" V7 U2 BFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 L; T  @& {% z* [$ K) h. m! pWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 h6 A$ t, Y) F2 x) TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 \! W* u7 X3 ~; bWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 K! n% _) {0 J" nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# u* }/ c8 Q7 j" z9 f0 n4 ]3 O3 r' {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 `( s8 |" s  S: HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 U) L9 U; M1 ?$ ~Can I entrust it to you?
5 a0 N. K2 t9 @6 U% z% d9 ^% X: zEntrust my love within your heart
- _0 c. S: P9 P- ULove… just the word love
2 n. V/ m* f- T/ j8 y; z) NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 o9 o% Q( O9 _0 r9 p4 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 P$ f- v2 c6 d! G1 D- LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 M, Z+ ?: i( |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 k' ]6 _% V$ Z8 Q" Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 V9 g' ^& Z4 k) e1 O- o$ A" b" {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 F" ]2 E0 d3 T( r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ z% q+ H" S7 x4 F: P" \: q: C0 h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 y2 y, f1 L1 A) N7 g; T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: t: p" p" c9 K+ ^% N- G! h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 o$ y2 v  B% r2 T/ ~4 l. y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) |9 ^2 H- ~8 a+ Z- d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 V4 d6 |# D) T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: |% R7 H; l% n' x+ v+ l( {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' M9 A8 {; a5 x+ y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' v/ @6 l9 P, U0 a7 F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  }7 f2 M' B. z7 b  r, P  p<P>但我不会</P>
( L! d& r; V0 i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 O  Y4 w" P1 x  `# {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; @* v- R2 B1 ?% {, J" o( n+ i4 v2 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; @; e# V7 o3 T( K9 P: h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, B/ C/ W" B* f8 ^3 Q( M2 S- Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 O; |2 ~7 A1 b9 a- z2 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. @; n. F! l5 w8 W, Q, @- d, @4 x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 t; N) Q! W' ~9 B% J) h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& m$ V2 t! t9 \$ v& Y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 ^" X  `0 {, [( I/ {2 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' d4 u" q* O* Z# {5 B# f  _3 w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- U: Z+ h0 K5 Z  n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 K' a- I/ a5 E+ p% ]+ f) q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 q0 G; v8 X" f( R4 S9 C; T% ~* V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* R5 \8 ~& x. k* f& p9 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: m% p1 A: `8 n! i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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: @/ Q8 C# I) j& R2 j, u. g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>