【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; i( t& u6 Z4 {/ b" K8 c我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 v" R- |4 P: y4 VFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 o0 @2 [0 s/ A* u, i9 Q' I( tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 [4 v9 z6 q/ II would probably know how you feel
- F' l/ i6 Q0 rLove… just the word love
# K8 i# t0 [/ j) E, ^" ?Why is it so difficult to express?
/ x) u- F6 h9 P% \; F" sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 x  {9 h1 c3 }; E8 u" {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 ]& B" }8 l3 _) u0 O0 o2 Z2 I# E8 QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 g- T$ w0 E2 M/ sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# G. k" I+ R# T+ o( FCan I entrust it to you?
5 D! a* w& S  _! YEntrust my love within your heart
# V% ?, B/ s, H/ Y& {; H. N  LLove… just the word love
# z( a# i: y) W! m' W, OWhy is it so difficult to express?
' p3 H+ U" X  V9 j1 Y( \5 C2 Y8 P4 MI want to confess that I love you,
/ w) u9 T+ U3 {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. z3 M0 i; ]- r6 d. f, q4 @; h, QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- {6 F- Y/ Y4 \0 d8 v2 ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 e) e& z* r& a- @8 P( m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, ^3 r5 x/ F9 j( l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 ~, v+ ^# g8 a- o4 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& Y! _" p1 `9 M3 ?  f5 Y2 C3 L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  r6 f6 _; `6 c( j" c: \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 s" g" N- E8 p& W- h5 m* O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 F3 ]' J' I# k& ~, B& f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 E/ U7 {* x& m) m# R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. B8 K% s2 \1 ]( @. T% k* y" c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ j- h" {. ^9 Z5 _- M* h& v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' N' `' Q# {5 w2 o  B$ ?9 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; k" S) B  x: B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" O8 A+ C3 \7 y9 Z$ o# v' H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- p8 p$ Y' i4 H" O. `. t5 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. |; e3 k7 l4 t# W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. D4 `& f! o2 M7 ^. o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% z$ i- e6 w, [" ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- Y; G, a1 W, E9 m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 v4 j/ h" S, |9 \$ c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 A+ |  }+ D" Y8 c$ j+ \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( l8 ^+ w; \5 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. F5 m. `: F- r0 }" H7 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 j- w' ?, [6 k9 h/ Z! C6 u/ E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' i  X" Z8 s) O$ J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 S6 k4 j0 `9 e3 n, {4 T# U5 C8 R8 k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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8 D, l  B; l9 w- H; g$ w/ c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; Y  R) Q4 r* R0 M4 @0 l( }; b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' G& A& `5 Q+ |, S! k5 x# ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  Q6 X2 g) c) D- ]. u, T1 D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>