【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
: D. a& j  x- L/ }" LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ A9 _9 P, {' v4 ]1 e; vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, T" z, N# ?2 oI already loved you with all my heart
+ ?/ u% W: }) G2 m' dWe meet and talk everyday,
& r: ?: c6 s$ O- wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 u3 I* }; a1 PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* I& ~- x) d/ k: l8 E/ ?Love… just the word love
) K% z8 Q; N5 I* N8 _Why is it so difficult to express?
' o& |' l$ a. e. i2 @" E) ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ E% V! J, f7 Y1 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 e! x$ S1 n5 `- {& ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* f5 f9 w6 r0 p5 z3 ?4 r  g( [5 TLove… just the word love
+ N' K7 g' F8 M0 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* [; T" T5 k3 g$ G* JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 h* x1 H$ E8 G3 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  g+ a- D, K; F% ~* ~- f/ CEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 J4 w7 Y; f/ Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 s# F0 a1 f  P: Q' y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* n' y% b$ ~% B: [$ ?% {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  S; x2 z% @( M4 e, Q2 s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' c& G  L4 I! N) C) v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 Q4 ]1 H1 ?* H/ |6 B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ U2 E: C! p7 L. g$ ~* B$ E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- |, v4 z+ {9 C# q7 Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& X+ _# V2 J  e7 Z1 L* P3 T2 R1 r* ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& q4 w' m/ n9 e4 f' \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 b& g! B" b: a4 D+ z2 J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 X( M0 Y( S1 b  P6 B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 ?$ ^1 X0 a8 Q8 A8 ^9 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 q1 y6 R2 }! Y& _' @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 i  k, L. e! p  t% X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- p1 E5 |1 g$ t1 @7 X! H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. l9 b) |: j! D9 e6 b8 h# [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 L- Q: @/ d; R- m7 B! O# Q8 Z* Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& f. V9 u; w1 v, f, L9 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ ?9 l/ F3 p0 o- U1 G  e% {$ ~: E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, a. I6 g2 Y2 Z7 p: M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ U: }3 r' x* T% {4 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 i- C8 ?. X6 P1 ?8 F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& B5 r. J, b$ R! }7 y) a4 L; [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( Q' v5 `" G, n8 h9 Y5 o7 `3 |' D! T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 \# X: j+ j( L4 G<P>But I never did </P>
7 A, n; [+ A: b- j* ^5 ?" L. Q; g! I<P>但我不会 </P>
# c( J; P: @" H+ H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: N8 E! A3 d6 G' O+ x. A$ u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, b& N1 l. Z* a, h3 L+ r- E9 I$ r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 z! k) X3 z' f& }* v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 s1 L1 ]6 F2 y& L! W* M8 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; C8 ]* N7 M$ _' t' k& A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 O  W& a5 _% p+ K# e0 Q) p$ F' n: Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 R" e8 x  z7 m  a; ^3 G- O# { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) E' ?6 `3 p' h" v; U) y0 `+ F# Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. S7 i7 {4 z2 {5 k% F4 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>