【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  a" v+ ^, K1 \( s8 @; h( CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* I, N0 P/ |0 _- n5 f8 f" N" |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 g8 Z: c' }/ q; z  N) vI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) D/ @  J8 y' }6 |% v/ c, _4 c" k- EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; D, v' M: I0 O1 L  `$ z" G' k- eIf today isn’t too late,
; T9 l1 F9 H/ QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, ]& L. s3 O. J: ?% ?2 I2 t$ SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 S( R1 |( u! C" w! hLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: y' t8 G/ T9 A  _5 {/ G3 y6 {+ ^/ U, EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& ~7 B3 S6 ~. P/ b( C( KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' P' ^9 b4 F/ {7 h  f- aEntrust my love within your heart
$ Q! r( y5 K+ q/ A4 W$ S' oCan I entrust it to you?
& ^1 M) q; u8 C' Y6 l7 pEntrust my love within your heart
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/ F" f2 i0 r+ k1 F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. u/ C9 r- b9 m+ G& O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! L) ?% z7 l6 A2 ]0 I' S# Z- h; o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, @! L& N5 R2 V0 O5 @$ X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. {: H9 p) v! v+ L$ F# \! {( W6 J# B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  @. K& z& F: M7 I+ r- B/ K0 I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& d  `( [4 e' I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ J4 S& q* l8 ?) Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ a: A- k0 l, e" P5 s/ ?" r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: R; t" a' s# B8 l' K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, ~- o, R5 p9 u4 X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 \! `$ Z# r5 B- Q! A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ r9 \2 y& a; r' `/ D3 c# P, ]* b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 I! Y, A2 r( @0 m5 K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* q1 I4 \, o% ^, s% _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 |7 e* W5 R% ~0 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; T: Y/ x# c2 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 x- |5 k$ r* Y0 \- o' W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
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<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  E& Q% a. n* P1 s8 M0 m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! _1 J" ^% H# v( X" G5 D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ ~+ a- s' Z. s, V<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
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5 J+ X* ?& A+ a6 H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  p0 \9 Z: u/ j5 c6 k4 n2 ?1 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ ^3 O7 ~" L; X1 i<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, r, k/ `4 j% p' y" R0 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. ?& E/ S: R# e: Z: k8 m( o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 _# w" m  L7 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' T1 v5 y0 S, Q, W8 k4 E4 s+ t8 l7 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ F  A# y& J0 y6 ]4 q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, D. |1 H- n7 @8 d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>