【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 R: D1 s1 B. u7 G我另将歌词附在此。
( f' w, L6 p: x1 q: q" ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ W/ J8 H+ A& a1 O4 e8 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 m  i# T9 {+ j# IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 c8 ]0 O6 T; o* xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 j0 W  V" n. ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: ]: i! S1 X, y. }( d" {4 x% DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 @. j3 f/ @! ~! P' C3 f0 P6 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' k  q% H# e$ W2 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 E" y1 N7 y, ?8 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: }* G: y7 {2 u- D( C$ }' jWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 b5 o1 D0 b! a/ a' f  i! V: U9 O/ gI want to confess that I love you,
1 v1 f. N  ^) G+ }( K: Y5 Q# TBut I never did
* I1 Z5 p: ^. H4 D5 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& V9 A$ V4 Y$ T( V2 s' XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# C$ {) f& F  o7 t5 ^! [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 v, K+ s! g3 i: I. g9 w' zCan I entrust it to you?
$ B' X! q- o8 S4 C9 R3 s; _# TEntrust my love within your heart
2 r( p% O" t# |' d; k: FCan I entrust it to you?
) C4 H5 v4 b0 T; k3 Q8 tEntrust my love within your heart

/ h, F; s8 b+ r& a6 k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" h0 a- j# g: K) p/ {5 r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( x: m" W& Z7 F9 `# M# U4 F/ b0 }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  `+ E8 s  {% q! t/ {$ J4 \! h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 p, X( B/ \. V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 O6 E* \& Z# E/ e% e( B: C& n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 A4 u; |- c/ E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* _" H+ e5 @8 \# T3 D<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. G8 r6 k' c- A; \# C0 m2 n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ ?; ?% [5 l+ t% [9 l3 x; e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 s# Z9 G: j# G& K2 i( ?" @4 O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 T/ a( P/ q- Y# j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ p6 E3 `& W* [. A! i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, }' [1 R, {( Z& H/ C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: X& ^, ]/ P3 ?  E. H) v* d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; U9 b- l. U/ y: p; z- }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. A- z% G4 o* n' @* h& E5 ^6 S+ R2 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# z% D6 `( ?7 F1 k- j; N' g, _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ y% H: W, w$ z' n" x8 X! J* I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 o- X7 {# Z* r9 W4 n6 r- I0 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' i/ A& M7 {% {3 O7 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 G1 O4 _# ?1 }2 R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' {* `4 S' K& J( c7 ]! Q. ?' |$ O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: F* V2 Y5 [2 j1 ?2 B! P: @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 E' n1 \" x4 D0 e' U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, @( j4 B$ v/ r0 c2 L, Q0 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' p; f* J$ X8 M4 C  b) A! }; c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 f3 z8 x- o) ?( r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- K, @3 m6 @; o  w0 s2 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 F4 H' ?/ z2 F; Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>