【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
8 n4 o. u" P/ F2 zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 K; ]$ f9 N; ?7 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* Z/ v/ W) ~0 W  c1 o+ [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 V2 W" l2 @9 [1 CI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; ^& s* t* B& L3 r& II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ]8 B3 H& w% b8 K7 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: b5 p. N3 J+ Y3 YEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. {1 D- ~+ z1 M2 z& u- VWhy is it so difficult to express?
% c, s+ a. l/ ~2 o! FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' o$ F/ [# p! i4 V4 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) w8 [1 a. K( i1 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 b1 w8 c4 D3 ]* E: @) [1 pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 ^8 M: `' U! {1 C: {: y& L/ _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( h, W9 J7 s/ Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 h' ?* P6 r) `$ m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 \8 A/ j( m7 \9 M! s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" r2 F# I8 Q; a; W$ @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& J" Z! ^, K8 k- R; Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, U  F+ k& W' C4 u. I. f0 u6 J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 |" c2 R* r% `# I1 D+ @) a6 T2 T2 [1 Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# ]3 f2 C* }! W; ]# s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: M  S9 H. o4 A' w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; {* A/ V" g* X/ ]( l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' A: L) I( v; W/ w$ K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, E3 B  L: k! A3 ?* C- j' Z* t! b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ J# i6 j+ t' g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) N1 U: }) ~! I! i" D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 O2 N. y' Y5 G. ]. m! ^; P<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 ?3 H" n, Q* x3 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 R) T* |1 t9 Y5 j, m4 F& l9 ^/ m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ j; Q8 C1 U3 v* X$ W# {- M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! {# V' X' c& Z. B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 U; c( y" Y4 j/ D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ j, O# B5 f3 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. Z4 r+ z) T" V; V+ n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, L2 U1 s/ h' r0 M( c2 p! ~2 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. i3 U. t- d1 w  I<P>But I never did </P>
9 t  `: e: b- a* ]# N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 w. v) Y* A- }' }# G" a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: [0 ^: J* e$ y; A! _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ e+ o+ _5 R  c) x6 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 v# M! K" J9 @' X" |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ Z9 p: Y. {& [  R: @0 a$ ~* R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# m' z, v: C, n+ y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& O+ X7 @$ s) j% Q4 g7 [! N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 o5 }' ~7 u0 ]7 y5 X4 \+ _" i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>