【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 |8 J% K1 J& V& F4 D/ hFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" {2 g" X; q7 j4 BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 k: K! H2 v' \8 s+ O. Q4 QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 L$ O* i# P1 HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) `6 ?; T! o6 d2 l2 f: yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 {5 V- L. N/ X. ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' Q0 s/ |2 Q. s" o5 o+ R4 c3 cCan I entrust it to you?
! |$ P, k5 i& c/ x. k" Z4 e2 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( g! y5 s: d4 |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 h  Y; ^8 j$ t% U+ t8 vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% g$ G* y0 z4 o4 ?  bIf today isn’t too late,
+ _& o! L, e* z! }4 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 Z- V! d( M! lEntrust my love within your heart
2 `; ^: D* }- M4 d3 L1 tCan I entrust it to you?
& N, g3 D1 J) J! m# z6 |  v% DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& h( f' o  l, i, O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 o$ K" S' [( f6 q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 M6 z6 l* S7 y. k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 M; F# w1 v7 ?* v; D7 g: a2 j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 q- \4 E# R- U8 A& r$ r/ I" h* W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 C! ^8 v; Q3 i. \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! z- ~# Y7 Y6 x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! z/ z3 O! w$ P& F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ w- v3 Y+ y1 B' ^: G  y% y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- U! a, c0 d7 j( M! r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' X9 h. z; B& E4 `, t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, v3 F0 v& \$ J& g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 m6 K: Y8 D6 C7 S+ p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# U& u6 K; G/ v3 ^( ~9 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ `( t4 z7 n. b2 a8 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 V% L. O* U; N: W% U2 \& t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 _5 Q6 K5 d) v: ^, P<P>But I never did </P>
) H7 L. ~$ N* [+ h0 P<P>但我不会 </P>
1 R' g1 e! n7 q8 ?' F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: L5 }/ P' _0 N$ n: n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; `, \4 @2 J$ p6 n  r6 J5 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: m9 h& k! V1 \  r9 m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 r/ \9 k: K1 k+ s1 H+ J5 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 V* h7 c$ m+ r. T; _/ {  s' m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& V" k0 b" b0 n( y' d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. {6 s7 D- ?$ ^7 ^. a; x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 S2 Z5 H3 \! M4 t; H- d: x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 h& ]1 i9 [6 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, O, K5 R9 G. y: x4 q" x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, y5 n" a6 ^! B: ~) [$ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 V, B4 a! }+ w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 \0 T5 J, r. A  Q8 p, x  u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>