【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 A8 I) m7 Y$ b, Q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) M$ i! @5 a9 \& h' b% _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: E& W8 A+ r+ X0 sI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# k$ P8 ^  c+ b% U. B8 o2 a2 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 N1 U! O4 T4 g" A( f1 T( w4 z' O5 O7 WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ N4 i+ O, x$ p( gI want to confess that I love you,
0 [% b, c1 N" r/ l: ~; u9 YBut I never did
& p( }3 a' R9 l: WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) c6 j, b, J! [7 eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" n& k9 C$ n4 X* B$ T& {- cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 u) v8 k: _6 G- h( F9 i) p6 ?I want to confess that I love you,
" y6 c4 \" o2 T. EBut I never did
- n6 S/ J$ n: ~; nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* @8 Y4 L) C2 B5 [& _" _& AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( h0 a( L7 j- R& f; w8 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 B1 d2 W/ v+ W- _; U( v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ o5 h+ H2 C9 o8 f2 }  Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 T/ ]5 l4 R0 o, \) @7 g/ Q/ R$ s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! o& I- L0 s) f7 b+ ^# t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ i; n3 I$ V8 ?1 q# ]( U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, ?- t) y6 D/ K6 D: P( g( r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! q5 u8 N$ w3 D) r5 c* ?" t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# d% Z3 j' I' S' w: Z( @4 S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* o- Z) U! J& M4 |4 V3 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 z+ X' w( z+ L5 t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; x0 o& E" l. c1 \  H9 q4 Q' l5 P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; @. ^7 x4 V* ]& j2 g  ~) Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 J  A% P( u, M; q/ X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 y: V% O7 H' B4 ~) ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 Z' r# j: \. t# j' j; z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 M9 `# E, o+ B/ G7 c9 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 g5 N, M0 b2 y+ U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; F" @: g2 f) }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- }0 L8 D; X9 O+ T4 r1 T# g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ v) H3 [3 q5 [3 m* Z/ l8 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 q2 x; |5 n2 Y1 R* Q% y3 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  X. i/ w2 k* L/ x  a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. G& F+ D7 t. N' W* Q6 h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* H9 v6 y# h9 J! Z$ F" ^" F; i  Z" I<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, A7 p$ a1 J% d1 u' Q. b1 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  O% Q1 l. K: b% S2 p: X) k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. {3 E  e& e; ^; R. p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 G, L/ t. ?! y4 f# r3 `" K, z7 f  r# a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  Y+ |( N7 |; U" _9 G$ z0 P) \4 K( S9 o; [" i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 e& ?* T" f+ `' {& f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ Z" w6 v& [6 j) N1 ~) J. }# F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. q$ i) A2 g3 _" _" a# V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 E$ P. b  p% [; }% S9 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! w4 i( ^0 p9 j/ w: X7 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 v- x4 ^+ l0 f5 K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* M: k3 J* K" t9 W- b+ J, l2 p' X# q7 }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 w( L& \' q# _7 ~+ q( `/ a- I; d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ z8 B! S6 w8 a' p" }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>