【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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/ c6 x# i- Q/ d6 ~9 t  ~1 v% s我另将歌词附在此。
' S% N4 J8 q" }- Z$ [# J% eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& n2 b3 T* G5 Y1 N5 Q! MI already loved you with all my heart
. ?1 X2 G/ c8 [' F% `2 H( H# k+ VWe meet and talk everyday,
4 G* u3 n8 V1 pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! V) V, G8 Q( q" Q( n/ sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 Q8 X5 ~- i) S: VLove… just the word love
+ j5 ^  ~9 e" j6 c! _- rWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 c6 b0 Q% H) oI want to confess that I love you,
9 {8 c: w2 w! V6 F% M+ RBut I never did
; R$ ?' N- ]& X5 U8 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 Z; r( q+ L6 C- `- }5 p- RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& T" A9 [% y) a+ r& ^) `$ @. uCan I entrust it to you?
  _& i$ r) ~( JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. E# R& b* ?3 w# II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 @7 U) J! W  D3 H& Z; POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: C% e; e( g. C0 XIf today isn’t too late,
# `, e/ U4 H& z* t9 z0 x! A  [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' }4 E& Q: ~7 o3 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' h/ `2 d& k2 z/ g* d# R5 H" G* GCan I entrust it to you?
; X, j- Y6 N, DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" `- v; u+ L" F! P+ u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; A/ p2 f0 ]' c' v# H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 ^9 Q0 _+ @  f+ ?4 ^( Z" @+ V0 k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* {) I: L3 C0 s; M( t$ w: J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. I1 [- e. ~9 J2 i& W7 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 c3 J3 K# B2 F6 P5 w( h! _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 I4 r6 [0 k( B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- x# \1 N5 h0 C! \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 x( ^3 g2 ?( X# t  V: A/ f, \" {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" ?" @$ |- i( B( H8 H' ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& B- @$ a# d( a  b, U; \! j: W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 N; h! q$ F9 A" v. b' G<P>但我不会</P>
1 E. V( M. r. J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  U! w- j; \* W* ~7 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: T% o- W$ ^* K2 Q& L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 s7 r2 @% Z+ g7 [3 v& z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: C; {. T0 t' T! D0 Q6 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 d: X3 a: K4 i3 g9 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 V7 [3 {! T+ z, f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ J" X( e) d; z# S$ l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 C& u: C5 w" i: [& q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 S& S9 `! A2 c. Q2 p1 u+ v! }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 z. y1 D' K/ M2 K7 Q: P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 M( {, s" ?/ l+ [) y# u- M+ `+ g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 s* x  G- U) n) x8 i7 T4 ?+ u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 z/ r0 x9 }. Q, }0 A! b  u/ e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 C" r  b% |- P$ V7 N- i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

1 t6 d* ~1 ^+ Z% L<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; R. S( M) b- O/ \& h  [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>