【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 U/ o  M2 \0 a1 Y2 A% SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. @! s; z- g( {, w  {8 PFrom the first moment we met,
# x# w+ U" Y# a  X# s2 W0 jI already loved you with all my heart
* C5 K* |% ~( Y" z: j% B: |  n' ]We meet and talk everyday,
+ a- O) t; v8 ?; Y' L$ HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ I' N  L, k  ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 J9 t/ n/ D/ h# q! zLove… just the word love
* M2 O4 ~) u5 _9 o) GWhy is it so difficult to express?
; W# |" j/ B' KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 t7 `( S6 j1 _0 b  GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' A) Q- y8 _$ g$ O9 o/ dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" u. E$ v( [0 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ^  ?+ n7 s1 {5 F% w6 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, S8 T9 |$ I; r- o% ELove… just the word love
3 W/ H" O# C5 x) @& H, V4 [. LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) k+ Q+ @! `/ S6 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ^- r' z7 x2 O) FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 S* d, B% t; p. W$ w2 @Entrust my love within your heart
, H( Y- F1 z+ R2 ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; W5 \+ K" C* u; m5 a* ?) A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% n1 c2 f8 {- G- H' ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  b) q( |. W6 c9 @* k4 r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 l" O2 ~" G5 R+ ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, g7 C  l6 i, J' D. F6 z3 [0 {7 Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, ~3 z; G# R9 y* O: n. P7 i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% W- N+ n4 o( U+ H8 m* }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. c5 }9 ?; M) L; R. C. L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( x, j8 F+ `. i6 q( |1 B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: s) W  x4 V- H3 P* V9 O0 U; D2 ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 _* H1 C( x$ k. J! I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 H6 k& j4 m6 Q: U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( V- @  z- I3 \2 x4 W7 S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% Q, U* g8 K6 i/ W) a1 u' h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. ]. e# C8 y, o7 u6 A1 I* Y9 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 W5 S; H9 t/ C/ H5 ~& Y) q. G. n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 E2 |, U# U' A7 N  K6 L5 \% G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 u+ X: C  t" {" e/ e$ ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; R! O+ r3 R) F9 [* x5 O1 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' n: o% [/ v6 d% c  p1 e' _( h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 W- k4 i3 m" b; s$ b4 W+ t  {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 c( [2 y3 M2 K' R+ W7 o3 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 u+ P1 u$ E) ~! _; D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. G& ^8 ^$ v6 l3 U. Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 m4 M; C0 a1 K, L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# I1 T4 ^3 Z. o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: U5 C: j) E- r: p0 e: P# c. L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# d6 U1 T; K' F. b: J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: ^! `  S6 \0 w8 z6 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 u/ w4 f2 @: C" r" x" `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; Y5 e0 U' j( r- s<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% x  H. A6 r  f% ~" v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" `+ x0 X, ]' I$ R4 c1 i9 U7 z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 T0 z! w- @5 E5 k0 U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>