【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 g, c/ Q' r- C+ G8 Q. P我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. y4 p5 I& Y* z$ u+ X; RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( w) `$ Y$ ]9 k  l: EWhy is it so difficult to express?
  ]2 \+ e6 m2 ^" O, h0 q* AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. |. }; Q2 D" D0 {' U" @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' S1 U( N" K! b( p# `0 t) d$ JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# y8 q/ \$ o& F" e, j. S* zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' ~5 t* ]. _/ ?/ I1 uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- R0 M" S2 s% u  ]- yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 d% b( y# [# O/ b" ]$ NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 z9 m: V3 o: [1 i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( c% Y( I# A6 \' B7 n8 L# w- [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  T8 y5 z5 d) x% E! `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ w+ L8 A( n. I  k# S) O+ S5 S) A' ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 Q% F4 H4 t; [. @! \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' D  N) |: B- p  C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 |- l9 O0 s; k& Y! ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 O& J' C- D! e; C( e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ `$ k/ o: M  C, l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; l3 @3 U3 c* l1 P' E( u4 A/ u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( L7 m9 h8 j. t( O1 k<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; z1 K9 c9 ?/ ?) Q4 q3 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ y) u) o  T. Y% |' w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 x. R$ F- n$ G7 k: |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% y# p6 u1 V9 E, y* k$ Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  Y, y' d! D) Y0 o+ s9 s) r3 h; K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- O* L4 [$ n7 a# p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  q9 [% o' T5 Q4 v' d3 M. `* h8 H6 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, ~0 q: c; ?: h9 O8 P0 t4 z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" v9 Z2 N; f' H; R0 G6 j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 `% j1 K. k5 w2 C0 ?' q# |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ a: S8 o# J3 `<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 U' H% q9 I# [$ M2 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 S3 g* B# l; r0 M9 S, l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 H/ r' j2 @  B- ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 H( y. e8 T+ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( b2 Y9 X; [$ a& Q4 r: R9 J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 v/ u  {! W. y& N7 l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" T) c: b$ Y4 d/ M' I1 d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  r9 D  C0 A5 t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>