【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
% |* N; B3 U9 ~& ~/ V- N, ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 f) D- n+ M& Q* @! fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 R0 i  g1 p# d4 N! mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. E& f5 k5 P$ H  i' VWe meet and talk everyday,
- n5 ]& z& h8 i. [% r/ pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ O& t! n$ R: E* D& H9 a, G0 X% cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, s/ S, E2 i/ I$ }* x! |9 {7 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, b5 X+ u6 |: _/ FIf today isn’t too late,
. G; `. v/ I& ^9 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. K5 u3 |( [; t# h- M; @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ D) {/ H* P, {- s( IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  S8 V2 A5 N5 x' h: {% F# HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 |  e. a+ F% O1 t7 FEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% s' z! l1 j/ ~7 ?  ~- t4 uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 v' Q3 w; Z/ s' i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 ]3 }1 b" l' v5 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' g. t8 R; Z! N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# F4 b- g( ?! T0 v, v0 ]- j$ l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 t* I3 E' ~" ?$ g! R( f6 c2 p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  w$ g& G7 O7 m1 q# r( }- p5 g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ W& `5 o- Z; Y- ^; x4 z! q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 U: }2 I( I6 U$ {" V2 K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) X- k4 a6 Q' a9 R. O7 C4 Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 q) z5 y; Q- O. I7 \6 E4 I7 Y& H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% Q9 L5 Z- p# q  y, h; J  G0 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 I" s! B) ^4 h3 g- G0 S1 S/ j- i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 Z2 n3 D  A; `% O- }& _: |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* \& K8 p9 a- U' `8 ?1 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ p7 i" F; A. h- y6 y) `( ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# E5 n! |: x8 e( K  b7 ], P: r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( ]  T3 @; A* [! Y9 [+ N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 d( Z- K$ ^* t% {- q3 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- E3 J/ @3 I# `9 z, ~- ?, W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% |- [! O2 ?9 B8 T' }: k" ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 e. n( @. R8 _6 f, [$ x$ W4 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ n+ ]- I7 q4 ~3 \( z" q<P>But I never did </P>
( D, I# d6 `& v' o( a6 w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- U  Z" J) Z! n: e( C4 K- @: Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& J8 o( F7 t1 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) N8 ]% Q  v4 K; ]0 I" c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  O* j: }) X/ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- H! `0 [& s+ W7 M- G- C) Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& w! V$ {: D* q' A6 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. x) \% t+ n3 C<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& j' i* T, {; D/ m8 v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 _3 b% S7 V1 ~5 u7 S  B) L这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 X; q3 c1 l7 |$ s! ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>