【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# n( D6 C* i  jFrom the first moment we met,
- c' i/ r% }/ ?. I5 I2 [: MI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- m* y  E0 O/ V$ C8 j, \% kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; e0 E$ [2 {/ e9 T& CLove… just the word love
6 R, Z+ v  ?) WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 h- i4 V; Z8 M9 |But I never did
) ?$ ~% ]% H4 L# j6 b# |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* ^! l3 V( }# QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ }: O8 m$ H* VCan I entrust it to you?
1 c: L. b( ]0 dEntrust my love within your heart
9 [# l( p, L9 y" vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) P  q. b- S- N! u% HBut I never did
4 F- P7 t# H3 _% |: w5 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) E! s/ f+ k. @- yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; |$ o( u5 m9 F! f: E3 \[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 ^, g, n) K' B! \3 L: H) F
  ?# }  q, F6 c/ U* U  {) T" I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; Q" P: ^% H, `  u  E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 Q) d$ o- _  P$ B$ M+ b0 m' H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! f3 l  r: G" \6 I0 g, K4 e) p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 M1 \/ R4 {$ J7 E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# |0 R8 C1 g5 {4 h5 s. Q7 ]: t& N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 o5 J- u1 D9 Z" P" a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* ~1 K2 P# E: m8 L% T7 j7 o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 d* L; Y! x3 q) x! F  o: ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! m8 R. W; x* e$ }6 P: a) n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 T" ]# A9 }$ c" z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 @6 @7 ^% U9 W/ ]5 _2 f- }" ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 M, b6 {* \4 H<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: C9 w- d  o8 J' {6 i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! ^( j! i8 Z1 F/ C5 x2 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. Q8 v: S; h0 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 p2 h1 c/ R" Q: [. {# h, r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% r7 t8 y- ~6 f9 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. M0 E2 e/ c( U1 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 u+ W: O- O& d, @; b8 f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ w5 I  n1 A) d/ \4 M# [) D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" L. z( O2 _3 Z( Y, X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, G% V. v! k& n. T# [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, Q$ Q! a  u3 @! |. C/ o/ F6 s<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( p, h6 \& z2 n& }<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 X  ~9 g8 r0 Y" k3 t  c+ i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( w3 B5 c" @, l4 w! l+ }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 E  X0 N* x" `# |, M1 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- S/ d; w7 G: G6 Q0 `, {# y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! b- n# u# a" D0 P, D- i0 \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 b7 J  q# Z8 K. n0 q; V2 z4 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( r. G2 @: D! j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, g+ ~; T8 E. N( S: N) M$ V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. ~9 }+ i# H  @# [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 B' m. d$ y7 {% T9 H<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 G$ S! a6 h9 ]$ u/ e5 z" [6 B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>