【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! w& w2 o/ m; }+ K3 Z" oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ q4 P. c- _* R4 zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 K6 v; g7 o4 |  FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 i. k  c( i3 D( C: \2 f* nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 S7 H2 F3 o; m: ~+ }I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 U+ D/ ]4 G2 m( X5 Y* a0 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 s. q1 p1 ^9 l# O* v5 n/ jBut I never did
# M' R+ d9 k/ q! C( N/ h' uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 U. L& y( m, e) E9 i) zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* [  G. h  e! r. ~4 @Can I entrust it to you?
1 j) x) ~' U% |Entrust my love within your heart
- c$ S" j. p! s3 OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: Z% C8 K1 T" A1 s/ n. H2 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ t; l$ C2 O6 R% }5 \! D# BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 O4 B; K" c. m# T3 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ a% u; x6 N0 N1 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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2 X; O7 {1 y/ V0 m) {7 r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 i: z# ]/ K# ~$ W. k0 e: Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 @. ]% o; n5 _+ y6 U7 |$ s+ K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: P7 A4 ~: A1 W3 e& V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. ~2 t/ D$ [" H3 c/ ~9 H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" B, F: E# V- O2 ]- M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( c( }6 ~2 v) j4 ]2 J. j7 B. A  l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ j, f" l3 B1 E3 j& d9 p# s: K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- _& b* \0 l: X% |+ T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& S7 q  w( P/ O# }/ n1 F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; {1 v; V. J! V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 F8 m7 w# {: X( h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; ^% s. ^* Q5 k$ A0 T$ h) O5 r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  ~/ G3 A- q5 ?6 G6 P  {& i9 F) k6 p7 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( E- g% w' Y/ `1 _4 ]" v) E- z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: K, O; J$ H* P* N1 \7 T; Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 h6 i2 R! [$ g  ]; U7 B+ Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' |( E3 s+ B& G- e* o, \: z( l7 \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' ~6 ^( C) B5 V4 c. H! b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: C( n% z. O2 c% S; Z% ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* U. X; t8 Q" \5 k- p1 t8 P/ r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 m: u2 m+ Q9 T. A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! o+ J& Q3 p5 d' t# z% d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% ]8 \3 t- [) y3 o/ I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 R( x4 S- W. L+ A<P>But I never did </P>
( r7 E3 L9 ?7 ~$ M<P>但我不会 </P>
3 A2 c& p0 @1 a4 [' D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: |/ q6 N% A! K! ?+ p  S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* }$ v4 \4 h. ~; t8 }% n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  {, l( R9 S+ ]5 O+ f! e; C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, o! b1 n% ~& _- X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- v, P# f* y! p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) _% ?) D4 M0 W. m( D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 J6 A% n- J/ g' Z% R, Y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% s- Z* u6 B, B; ^4 x& k0 t& o* C. n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# ^- o; {" z$ G4 ^. g( L/ n* D( Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>