【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
, s+ e  y( d! q7 Z. [+ V8 OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  S9 t% h" n+ EFrom the first moment we met,
, V' T% @% f% W  oI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 h1 q) l. y- C% y& qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  P- i2 j9 Y& i  x" ~Love… just the word love
0 t2 e9 A  U+ @8 K# X1 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% C, t6 @& t- x% u) f, h# m+ `, k# gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 N( I+ ]' u- Y; KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, ]$ d1 m" U: J1 s; U  D$ ^: i' WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& B( B; M* Q7 I( p: p4 mLove… just the word love
( D. L- K. U, }( o6 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
" E/ e$ X4 N4 e# [3 |0 mI want to confess that I love you,
6 S) [5 ?- Z5 R9 H( Q! N* i1 nBut I never did
8 ]6 G# Z5 u8 U- }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, |1 |4 B" T' ]  G2 k9 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; x, t% q# `2 O  D- k7 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: v* g# I& t5 h; X- @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 D) R# c8 t" q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 E& q  @8 I/ p* ?2 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ X4 H9 e- \: o& _$ a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% Z& U" D/ G* J! {8 G5 x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 M7 O6 z+ M' `; G0 D! N% u% n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& _6 v- }: b5 ?+ q- }5 t1 Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( {: o1 {7 q% G5 ~  s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! ^/ W4 G& ~5 b3 G% B( _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, Q" s% _5 q7 m. g1 w. ?8 ^<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- L% U: }) }/ z7 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 B' n3 D1 r6 M6 R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 w# l" z/ z5 K  x! a* F7 q, b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ X2 D/ m' q9 |# I5 H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. \5 N  [/ u: ?. h* N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 Q; \$ ^' B) I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ^% e7 d; O) t1 v4 Y) R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( R) t9 b! C: }. z# R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* E% h, f  G7 w. \; B8 k" ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ R. j% H. h& A8 Q) ~4 `9 m& J<P>But I never did </P>
* |0 t/ Y, Y: L$ G$ d. u* C<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; h2 t, V. J$ m8 ^; }& B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" K; V" g) c& n& p9 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( w2 G& F, u8 X* j6 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& g) Y7 {1 b  P7 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! ?0 M7 K+ v5 U' I9 ^* n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  `: e" y- L! |+ H1 v- J$ o% X9 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( y' {) g7 A# R4 R8 e1 Y+ N3 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  M1 C4 j+ F# ]& J4 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 u6 Z6 V- v: \, M' |8 _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 s/ u; e$ c: X8 d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- Z* H! R0 j; e, [( _8 k4 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>