【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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& ?. j  C) v( Z我另将歌词附在此。
8 X4 V( H, z  x0 k: _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 _. N0 I" p( E' R4 xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* K2 }3 M  A1 h9 C: b1 P, ~6 ZI would probably know how you feel
3 h; R6 C) o# g" r1 z- l4 i/ dLove… just the word love
( ^3 S1 I2 u' f- ^; ~& DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ g, ~0 Y0 m+ Z, L! L8 L" I* {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 ^  A# d; V/ A) H' F: b$ y6 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% R# b) f9 o- y! N% ?. q' oCan I entrust it to you?
2 l+ O% h& `  [* B; P, {2 aEntrust my love within your heart
7 ?8 a, p7 b' |" a+ d9 N, J" iLove… just the word love
! X3 v+ J  q! c* R$ B3 E  s# {/ FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 T8 p! H0 p1 L  w6 h9 _* ?But I never did
6 Y) P, ]& Y  O4 ^5 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# T1 ?6 N; U. W6 T- VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ k1 K& O, |: y% v) C0 z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# @! v8 h0 n) M* ]- [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 {8 \  q  Y& N7 c" I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 d0 m* y  S# O6 W: F( |- c3 W$ G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 K! g1 C# V% Y3 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 Q2 p" O; U( x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% U6 Y! e; M, x8 }1 D4 N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% v+ O/ a0 J* n) U7 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ e! H2 H2 W, o) f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ V* q6 [. v" Q' w6 G2 X" u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 s% t: d% I1 c/ M% A8 h1 r' e- l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# E9 P. U( `, M& a" @* u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 t/ K" }: I4 P9 S; z<P>但我不会</P>
: }) j+ ?6 G8 h! z% C$ y/ |1 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& C( Y0 l( y8 D+ f. C+ Y; C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 T+ }! q* n# e; H" v7 l* n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 k7 S7 A* g  l6 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ h( j" l. v  U7 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- |  q, q) k- E. w/ v/ H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 h" p# U6 d# @# q& Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' N) ]. p) C) x) M: z2 c' Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# @8 U; f) T8 v# D1 o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ D4 d, e2 X0 i. L# Z/ Q# }) J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ^2 F# m' f8 @: j$ B; m2 L* e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 F: ^2 v0 Z, {1 b! T. L0 s; y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 E2 C0 U4 B) ]# @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* j( H7 f7 H! J1 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& d9 [4 j5 C( `% x' x+ w! d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 P' P1 h3 L1 G) M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 ]* n, |# d- N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>