【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! J* u; k  |, ?& B: f- ?  Y我另将歌词附在此。
0 |# M2 ^/ N9 J8 `+ YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  r% t2 |- y- k: w* R, T7 h2 [That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 I7 ]$ G2 D( IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* h8 i2 t2 q0 f1 h8 D; B) G, |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ C* P/ P* f' J. X9 _; N0 ?- ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& O" M3 o6 s; Q' V1 v+ vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' X$ z4 O, J& d8 y2 W' k  o, aWhy is it so difficult to express?
' E' Q) [, k8 x5 _/ nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- ]  f4 K7 @/ S" L1 NCan I entrust it to you?
* j5 ?- n9 }3 x9 b# ZEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" d" e5 R+ z, E0 w% |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 f5 R/ f0 t; t# h- a) n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ ^. W: [( U2 g' r* o0 B9 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' T& U/ \( K1 j$ F8 i; @, V& b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' y7 [6 ]* Q  |, A5 m6 |2 ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ |- I7 n/ A! A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 \5 g2 K. h. r9 S$ [4 P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, m: V0 E# A1 w- P- f( X% \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( I7 h8 z, w5 d" Y- h$ C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' M6 _: b# ~# T4 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 C9 |4 b& y1 g, }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) C/ f) O9 ], A( L  W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 i, ^9 }! z. d2 w1 j( E6 \  v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Q; G- S* U$ ~& n; b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; w4 k. t; c9 J" r2 q% a0 E0 W8 h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 `4 M1 b! {* {4 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! E" U2 F/ f- m( o% ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ q5 w. Q% P3 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# z: z- G1 m" I2 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% T9 ]% E1 `  k, A2 P+ A  N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 u. g5 o' r& n2 q9 X' `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( S3 j+ I4 \3 ]0 O  B- s0 t+ n, L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 r1 @3 ?5 Q! I8 J2 h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ R0 ]1 o+ o" V4 W( \% c: \, E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 V( {1 S' p8 f2 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 N# C' C& y6 f6 ?; a/ D, \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. ~% J  a5 ]% D4 z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 T! B* b" n: [3 l9 b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ H4 g) r- t& J  g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 @; ~# X+ D  _* C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 B: ?1 v) r: t$ c% D/ A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: O9 d) w4 N' j. E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 e$ F9 q9 {- w& B+ O0 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) _" g, \' |# a: ^, Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: `! e% Z4 _/ c3 p  h: D) A  H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>