【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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! e: G0 f. S& |我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 L8 l# e# d  e' Z$ wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 x& l! O1 b" `6 d( J7 OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& z) K0 R2 U9 j7 Q, Z" TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* D, w+ f) R) W1 I% L) P+ ]5 h9 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! C  @' Y8 X3 gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' C6 k4 o! M* C# ABut I never did
7 [; V4 z5 A6 K. nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 a# W2 d; R( T3 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; R: n& N; L. J; b5 b, z7 @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& y3 @9 \* s7 j7 \/ F9 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 T# \9 {$ M$ T2 \* B& m/ l9 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' D# m% P6 O+ i9 n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 k, o; Q% n6 n+ I! ^4 w8 E: [# y& S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% S* P9 l& F0 ]9 V% L$ l* h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 }1 U- f2 R! c! P8 _. F+ T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 o4 ~' Z; C9 s# G! X9 P$ X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 Y; b6 Z: @' m- W% e3 A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: L7 y5 S' N- y/ V) P5 A! p- W4 l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! k1 L/ ]( c: {( i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 j3 Q* [5 U* ~7 ~7 T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 ^- [1 C% O/ P' ^  D+ d5 B* I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% R9 X6 s$ C* M2 I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) A$ b/ ~' e( t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% D' R" U; {1 w& Y& Y6 a& ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& P* l( |0 q% J1 c( Z9 h3 n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; o+ ~1 m. c3 ?. `. D/ i6 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ^. x0 R3 S6 m8 F/ z& r/ d1 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( h! r" v( M& g$ ^+ i- b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( `: I# M+ P7 a5 `  t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! b6 \6 D$ l+ e* x/ p. o7 e8 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ q" v/ Y! y& K/ u/ O/ v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) E! i, Z5 b. ~/ y$ o<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 X& T; O- C& c  N" U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& v; Y% P6 [$ E5 ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 W! U7 i# B$ J6 L, k: `. w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 h$ I( Y! j! _: Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) U! t+ y. C$ f" [. L0 m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& |' ~$ S, r4 i( u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" G: T& k5 q4 M+ g! p; k# x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. F$ T& K- J8 q& Z" A: H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  N# R8 l: [5 K& _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 X/ d& s( d4 [0 c. C) m5 P7 y: [ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* T9 q5 k8 B7 O0 G( k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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0 r# M' e( Y* a( b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ `. m, ]5 @1 s8 |$ a7 L2 y0 ]8 `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>