【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
! h/ G' d2 E; n9 W9 g/ S7 V+ K- NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- l) z3 ?/ T* \$ i0 CI already loved you with all my heart
3 i0 x8 B" B4 z. WWe meet and talk everyday,
9 Y/ w, z4 g* PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ k/ T& ]' J1 W5 g* K5 cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 h4 ]% [7 @2 c# }/ }Why is it so difficult to express?
" N, I6 R9 L: f5 g0 {$ zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' U2 ^" V9 c% R% aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 F) F6 R; c0 yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ [' Y- F! L. H( Y7 q3 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" q, d1 p2 c+ b- I+ ^% {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! F2 V; @( j/ d+ {* G+ X% g6 q. pBut I never did
  G; s2 P4 g, @9 S. DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ E+ C4 P2 F, y1 R( N9 xIf today isn’t too late,
  s  s6 [3 ?1 d! G0 G9 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 H1 n% p# f8 ]2 E0 y. v4 F% f+ eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  ]5 G* Y7 N) L0 j3 h7 S  U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' B) W& L) j* e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  L1 L6 j! a' K- g: U! |' R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! N" z4 D  D5 X) v* J( n0 n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& Y. h  t7 W' V4 ?! U- H2 ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 h8 U) a' g) k8 a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. C5 ?' N- ^# v1 c7 e* @7 j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 _/ ^) m- m6 {* P" w$ ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! N* [' K. x" ^2 t! [" }+ W* N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 l0 ?. B- O7 I/ t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 ?0 ~1 P, K# i' K; @( X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; Y7 l& _1 C# E6 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 }( U+ Z# I* c, S  \! o$ G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 c4 t4 r4 K0 E5 U  h1 [+ Z( L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 ?& t: I; M+ @6 y, [$ g9 |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 d) K# z# }% c1 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ s- s* ~& Z3 ]! s0 E- U5 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 n1 X3 b3 T/ h: |, k& w) \; [$ e- A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% H- ~4 B7 ~8 F# P7 z" \) _, v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! D* x9 v( L; ]* h- t" v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, ]9 F' Y% a* R) }! ]& W1 r<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  E9 g2 M7 H# l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% G; h$ d5 u$ Y( }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' ~3 \  h" i1 Z) ^, p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; I) `) p- C- `7 V5 C0 S8 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- z& v2 f1 D6 {/ C$ h# d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 d3 Z& [4 s, Z& e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ P6 [) ~2 i1 d' b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ k) }+ F3 v- y4 @: L1 c0 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) E: o' \# G9 l' T2 k% v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) c, v) v$ G" R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>