【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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: Q: y( b& H8 Q& Y% q( h. q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 Z$ h! a7 E# D9 y2 o1 j: w) v% RFrom the first moment we met,
1 b% v# K6 O6 u0 w. h7 w8 GI already loved you with all my heart
( m9 b% K( S' f, a) `1 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# @9 n7 U, j: E0 fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 b" X4 ^: z2 g2 A* zI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! d9 l  e1 O8 ?: aI want to confess that I love you,
: B, f/ ~' D8 X. k: ^2 z  mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 {) J; w7 D+ o* YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" W7 L: t6 c; g0 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 L- S6 J1 b4 \* CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- {5 S: r$ E+ t& N/ uI want to confess that I love you,
. l8 x9 D, N, M0 U! oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ N& T% X8 n# M! ?6 v; F# X4 XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: a2 F( k9 K9 ~( {' }Can I entrust it to you?
4 F  E* M8 o- ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( w/ o8 w/ u. W" v% Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) S8 ?8 ^% A2 m  T) k5 D* x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' G* g& U; l( P# K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: a1 C3 i0 l6 T9 i/ H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 V6 M5 Q" g- @( n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( ]3 b$ U; V( L" p- t0 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# N, M; e8 Q# Z& I, }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& \5 y) ~( g* _- i, k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; N$ w% r2 s4 y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ Q1 d+ K2 w4 v6 x9 z% v1 N' y9 M$ r' O<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 c* B! D5 L- \3 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ @5 L2 {+ [6 F# `+ W" N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- u: Z" Z- B2 ^$ e- x* J! M9 b- \5 @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x8 b0 B9 R( \$ ~# S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  o; V- ]6 I6 R% b( C  `, L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# j. _  B, M. E) a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 L/ O0 l' v: D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 [3 F- K8 Y1 t7 ^: F/ T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 p( L  U9 e0 Z" t. h; G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' R! W  ~9 X, r) R8 {& F- b- ?* l4 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ P6 u9 _: g1 A5 ^& \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 @' C; N7 ~; f3 {- P) N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- }- h: l7 S4 B! h7 E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 s4 {0 W* P) v1 o# X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: F5 q  _( o2 M' h" @0 u9 c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' L4 Y' z" s7 ?  G+ V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. `5 |- l; C9 \- F8 z8 R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 u# s. `4 S/ c* m: x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 l# \) L/ N# f8 r9 J4 p9 b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 j, x4 S2 I% a" Y4 E) X, E# D* R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& v/ T) ^$ ^/ C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 Q) a& }- ]4 p1 W, w$ M) u1 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 m/ u% b3 W4 I% J" i9 Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ i) E- |* }2 _! _! p! w) P9 L) i5 H$ A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>