【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" q3 H* m$ b! y; w我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  ~: O. ]9 i! g. R& N; S% MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& h8 X* X* s$ x3 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* G  t! b8 U  `- |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 D5 X$ M8 x. r6 p3 V& s8 k- ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& ]9 S2 r* x! x, LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# l' a; ^$ G: J$ JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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( b8 O% ?+ e7 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" D  `# \9 B$ l" U: x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! ]7 [* O9 p& c5 f+ |4 J0 s9 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 R2 o9 {1 B5 l# Q3 d2 @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 c% Q" [$ Q8 F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( E( \2 L1 t/ l/ \9 ^4 E6 w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' m& C' |3 }# h+ H: o2 A0 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 V5 p6 b4 m7 b* J7 s: c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( n: |$ B+ o" J& |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 |/ r2 z1 B( s4 y& t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: _  Y: q3 v8 W6 y7 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 ~, w' _  A6 ]4 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 M" @( U& H+ p% X$ D8 Z. n" h5 l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; s$ M& j% t. @8 _9 \6 i, W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 q+ }8 A; F% r  ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" I5 U' b) {+ o3 x4 G7 L% Q7 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) Q9 W4 R" k4 ^$ v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% Z/ `/ v8 j% }  k: v% l) W; I3 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 _# W2 E; p- m9 h. G" X2 J0 u0 m3 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 i4 v. h2 _7 ^1 M4 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 A: ^& `  u0 h- m- X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 H" c0 K8 W# [5 G, b3 H5 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 E6 D; ^* |! P. a4 K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 R4 m( Z$ L4 c" w( B- h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: H) h, R% y- k1 ]  [$ ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 _& v9 ~8 M! @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* C4 h  j& r" g  ?. v; F# u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& c9 {/ {- z0 h7 o# z; Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! h! W9 I& f9 Y6 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' h/ t6 P  _. @4 J0 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) {7 Y. E' |5 [8 f. A9 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 G3 L# u6 R# g* x; }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 d, P+ [" N" y: z  j6 v) U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  O$ p+ M  S8 c4 l/ j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 `! z% l' _% B  A/ G9 e7 a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 x1 z: s3 m5 Q" h% r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" n. k; l- j7 t' y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  y' N+ x3 z2 F8 D0 ]! B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>