【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 I& b2 N9 Y# G+ VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& `7 a5 v" c4 ~! Q6 o0 [; k5 |& SFrom the first moment we met,
$ {, ?4 Q0 A7 o$ Z1 r% I* _) L1 dI already loved you with all my heart
. \2 Y2 }8 z" Q& k5 _5 D. aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( g8 h, p7 @5 s; g" s; OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* B/ Z3 ^  {6 y+ A! R' [, fI would probably know how you feel
* R8 G4 P8 y1 \/ R0 J) oLove… just the word love
! T9 C( k' F. d1 r* |3 \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 [  M& l) U2 B! FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ x3 N4 ^" ^4 C0 R$ m+ ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: x/ o& M7 J2 Y: CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 o5 M9 b% `" v) f9 p9 {; a8 ICan I entrust it to you?
& P6 s. }9 z: ~+ U3 y/ S' E/ C/ W* yEntrust my love within your heart
! [4 |3 c* o8 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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' o( M2 H) T$ F! ~* F8 I6 f7 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ N: v7 }/ G. Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 q! i8 d& T% d) d; c$ W  ?* u; H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, b! m, n- G* C5 `) \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ P: P" W! X' T  |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& u! k) m* U: E: J$ `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% K6 W' R& A) f' w3 n0 G& e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% j1 U# |) Z! W( r  C3 [- P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 W! I! ]1 q, f6 v; E  p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 P; {0 y. C( T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, M/ N( ?& B+ }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  Q( ?; k4 F3 g/ l% t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ O" G! N) e/ C* r# ^, y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ l& B) r1 L, [& F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, Y; Q: @7 F! U& w; x2 I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ F- D: A) U( Z$ c! R1 y3 A: w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ L% t. }( f' A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ `7 G' J% s% F& t3 D$ s* C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ ^+ |) H7 u5 Z& @4 a( B& }) w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- B  X; z$ n6 R( L# B7 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% w9 c4 ^! n: E5 x: h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 z0 Y  S2 p' |4 `; {8 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 }" P+ w' S) p$ X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# O1 v, L$ B% c0 d) H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# f* V$ j, s; u. |. b* _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  R  u* j- }3 D1 U' U; {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 c5 T& }& ?& i% v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# V" d  \) l" E; d( ?' N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 C3 U* X' Z1 @- d+ x, [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* X& d) o4 @/ B$ @' {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ c1 @; N8 b# D% T. s4 a* O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: T3 Q3 C, K( K1 A9 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 g6 f$ Z. ]4 }# p  b  j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. \, Y4 |( L/ D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ p2 D( d( P! }- G) Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ _5 e$ s5 q6 z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! V9 y2 `4 E, A* c7 [) ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>