【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% Q. K, j; B8 s- H3 ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! W) B3 v' w7 tFrom the first moment we met,
& s/ y/ E5 a/ {7 v: h9 {0 k& U  CI already loved you with all my heart
# C9 U2 r7 |" ?: DWe meet and talk everyday,
/ M5 x; @' N6 G. ?- ~' `+ XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# S6 [+ s% h. V: DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ V+ ]+ H. D6 }0 k7 Z/ t/ hLove… just the word love
2 i* X1 b! k1 `8 T4 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- F: L3 |# X$ u) n8 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 Z% @! y5 A9 F+ wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, M8 B5 }) k7 V3 M4 v0 c# VCan I entrust it to you?
7 r$ w* i( N& aEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 c6 k1 g7 y8 u9 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 q! O1 c% y7 W) w5 f9 nI want to confess that I love you,
* i! ?# x: U& tBut I never did
- k5 G, w- I- U( U6 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  w! F4 F0 j: |0 `  h, sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; K0 D9 u. E0 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 l" t: K7 {5 E' d* s+ TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 y- E. W. l3 |0 }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

5 ~7 H4 \7 }, i6 C8 o) c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ]5 k0 b5 [3 V! s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, B5 m* _: q* |+ b# F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ x( ?2 [& G+ o" Q, ~3 b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 ~! t8 b; b& m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 `$ I$ u+ e9 b: o/ F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' H9 N) [5 N) ?4 X$ V! J- S& g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& [6 h8 C/ g* _2 D# j9 M* |$ M+ r, |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ n/ `. U* }+ n9 |8 e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& h1 h& U& h) F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. ]0 ^6 ~* ?7 a* N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 ^% T" K9 w7 g- x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 ]7 O% r4 Q9 @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 O3 n, `' d! U+ J% M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, U, h1 B7 c3 a8 i2 a<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ t. g' q: S* e% i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, j" D- C; R' }: l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! m( a' _/ y- A1 g5 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( B1 R# C$ {8 W6 S- T, M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; [4 Z8 z( U+ U& r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 S7 [5 P; W3 N& [) G  i" u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* e+ M- @, X1 Q/ |' a6 k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( G" z1 t! s, I- i& G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: q3 ~8 s. x8 x# H; o# c2 ]& c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' ~- W3 z2 ~5 K8 |+ Z6 r* `. G<P>但我不会 </P>
1 u5 D: q# Z) \" `. f% X- p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: s: o* U  w9 S$ b- B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. W* d- E! I% l, B( i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 A1 a5 `! Z$ R; s9 A- A0 d0 N! X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  [% o& B; s2 v. W7 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( d8 c! R0 Z7 P, h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 i5 _6 k8 m- y2 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  P- |$ `: U0 d8 @0 l) j0 M9 W  G7 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; V* o5 B7 p8 d+ r& I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% x; C' L8 c/ i% P! G4 r* n% {: @8 k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& r* w8 ^6 e' \% e3 s1 B5 p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ w, \0 I* K3 |' [* D* p. ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>