【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! ^7 q/ i9 o7 S  v4 x6 k( y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 I7 s, G8 W6 E8 k' q" K6 [/ p0 y% }We meet and talk everyday,
+ F8 q+ |" }; r( l# ABut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ ~, l/ g/ H, y6 s  t9 {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 y* F4 Q# Y" Z8 tLove… just the word love
  x  J' P/ J" b" F% V+ a5 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
! W: y/ V8 B. n+ t* A4 h3 H: H4 kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& P$ [$ p% X! BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- e" c  Q- L1 B2 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- O% ?2 i  Y5 Y  R% hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ G3 ^8 `7 Y& V- O/ `% P! JLove… just the word love
  Y* @5 Y$ j1 S  J% T+ XWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ j6 j+ Q2 T( S4 J6 yI want to confess that I love you,
- ~% f/ H, P, i8 ^But I never did
/ M' K! X+ G  f# }, VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ G: g' }  L: mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( o/ f( ^' {$ [/ Q5 H# UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! h6 R. z+ d1 d/ F0 i' w$ R9 oCan I entrust it to you?
& I' M/ Y$ M# ?Entrust my love within your heart
2 a3 e6 r8 j$ K: n- ~+ RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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4 P1 Z( B, ^3 o6 Q, n# R! E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" A' F& H- M3 |/ I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) @2 f3 S/ q! F! ?' `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 r, V! `% Q3 }, q4 R8 i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 g- v5 T; l& F( ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 Z9 m. U4 M  b9 x7 L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! ^* L% K0 ?6 h; {. D! K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& x% j! O1 E  t, ?  l" C9 ?- Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" ^9 v( I' x3 @4 ], c- ~9 I, F1 t  _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; h3 q8 H$ G- X3 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 L+ T8 R0 P+ v% u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* Q5 x% T: y% _7 M$ W. l" f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 L! J3 [9 w) y! C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Q& X( y; M  V8 F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! g8 q2 p5 ~: l' t+ S* Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ {/ ?, o* M1 \8 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& P, T1 z+ t  X6 s8 ~/ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' u5 Q$ |$ d. d# x/ [9 i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ Q( _/ f% z$ f) ^. X( [6 B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& Z" f1 v: U/ p: t9 ~/ k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' L) D! e- P8 u( l7 |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. `$ x: U; C5 H. I0 t6 ~3 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) S$ H+ _. W* [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) e9 {& d& ^2 `" h& O) M% S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. a( G' v6 F) l7 e' B! g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% {0 G8 t7 ?$ A$ h& v6 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% C0 C& I+ m. Y0 G, @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, X, f8 N" b" \7 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( K9 `7 p$ t/ K4 v4 m1 c; |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 M# L+ [9 ]1 u1 k* j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& R4 y" l% _* Q% _% R% a6 @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 J1 _5 X) [$ b& \- H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>