【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" \7 D/ K, \: {4 tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) k7 P1 W1 S# G1 OFrom the first moment we met,
' u+ {$ ~3 @( u8 @. K1 _I already loved you with all my heart
. ~  R- |& W( {" o' _8 e+ a! G9 |We meet and talk everyday,
3 h% o1 h" a$ Q: J) E+ dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% }  c. }2 k2 F6 |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) J7 Q' w! N) N& b4 CI want to confess that I love you,
1 q( y- Z6 }8 _" h& T. B7 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 W; G; ]1 V& t6 F5 W- B2 H# A) Y$ GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: ]7 W, I2 w0 K( m. ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, Q8 n0 Y2 E" n3 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
- S5 g# T, R6 [. s) A2 q* o& u* ~6 jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' T' R5 L; D5 V" i+ gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- b, G; J5 T0 `6 j; H0 NIf today isn’t too late,
; V; \, m2 S4 D7 H5 D1 k! QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, M0 g' I' m' [5 s; p4 oCan I entrust it to you?
2 d6 r% u) R4 eEntrust my love within your heart
/ P: L0 {, ^- x1 uCan I entrust it to you?
: t1 b* I6 u% Z3 gEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 G% ]8 N9 M8 y5 @+ F3 D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; j/ w. {8 Q! M8 G7 |4 _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! }0 X; |7 a* W+ {, V+ K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: v! J$ l+ N: [6 s3 i& s9 b- M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 d, @: U, m: n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  F) D% Z9 G& o( o3 E8 d* O) P3 C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# h  y- _5 _( _( P; G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  J2 C1 e7 C# S. U" A1 U1 M<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% r& h, t- e- G# @; D4 @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 y  T# N0 ^1 D) T9 ^4 ~<P>但我不会</P>
1 W! S0 b9 G  N) c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 j9 k) z3 M( z( L" H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 n. a0 \0 i1 s, J, x: C9 h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 _7 l. O3 v& Y6 w) T; k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 Z+ U3 g! J. }. C' H/ L  `3 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! F0 Z/ D' H: I$ B4 k- Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; E) G" Q% _! ^- G<P>但我不会 </P>
$ V& A6 l" i  o$ p4 d8 ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! B) ?# R2 ^% S2 u2 J! U7 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" e, D7 g' G$ c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# g6 C0 M8 ]( d' N5 K, b3 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* m4 N3 L! K' W) `" J. P) I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% H* N' r6 p6 O2 ^( {+ r1 |! t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ n9 [& R3 `' J# P/ |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% a$ Z" I9 O4 d( s) t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" Y7 p( G8 d/ l, d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>