【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 @5 G9 E3 d$ T2 J' ~+ X0 a- e/ l我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 r. ?) E% U6 sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 {0 k: A+ ^: `! ^; }1 Y+ u8 C9 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 I2 N: T4 }( Z4 I- h  pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ a9 a& v: A' P6 F3 w9 D6 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 C9 J1 G. _/ c  J8 ~$ J; x- f5 M4 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ \+ m, {; L# O3 E# z' F& @% A  mLove… just the word love
# T& b6 V( H7 z) j: G* o; C7 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
- p& L% L2 S: n0 A& EI want to confess that I love you,
6 O5 h1 H# K. W  n) w( RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, u* S5 @1 Y5 h0 I' P5 I* RIf today isn’t too late,
0 |- z5 |  U3 z: H  i) ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  E. A5 Y( U: l9 w" nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ `7 Y2 t0 m8 H' ^& B. R7 ~: Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# `0 N9 P/ y: ^" S3 Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 b$ h  }0 Q$ _! q- u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, P# f$ q8 l  `0 t- l& |$ U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. x1 x5 ?+ h. Z* Y, ~1 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ S! w2 @2 s) D4 `) w" d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 O3 {" H9 q5 ^. M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' V  {, H  O* W  J9 d# {% y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, f/ a, A' G$ {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& b8 ?' A( J; b/ A4 T  q9 e8 ~; y0 b6 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 A0 p- O/ F; c0 F: k% A5 _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( t# L9 z) f$ W5 L* p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" U3 ]) w" J3 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: z' @: d/ `- I& I0 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( ]6 u  j* S- q. G+ d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ i, c. D5 A+ B$ Z2 H7 ?' r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 T" P( w% J% n4 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 ~9 T6 i7 l6 U+ Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: Q9 W0 Q6 S7 \6 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! \3 q4 K* M9 P) n4 g1 L. E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 b8 ]5 G/ n$ W  o5 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& n  Z% e  Y, Z' v7 u5 X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 A, x3 V/ V: m/ x+ |8 [3 `, L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 C# Y! m  I6 k2 T8 I6 h% ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& Q9 h; a. w/ l  R; i# z* _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! Y+ a% @1 |9 b+ z. J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, d( G3 N/ @% s/ p* e- j6 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 i+ y( ~: i* M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" c2 ?1 a; t( O6 {/ Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" B/ S1 ~  s. q: l9 r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 h) T! j/ h, P; j' _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% |3 y! n& x* {. l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" `. U6 @1 J2 \( k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>