【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 S1 O  F6 @) Z: _- k# U" dFrom the first moment we met,
; f1 R" d5 L+ Q( o+ Z! p4 SI already loved you with all my heart
$ x; k! d0 e! e9 eWe meet and talk everyday,
. Z8 o$ ~( Q# FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* Q  F6 ?  U3 z8 g4 L) aI would probably know how you feel
6 E( v% N6 B3 u" g* f/ d1 GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. ?0 [) e) i, h9 l* j2 ~' f, TBut I never did
% E/ C2 m8 X6 N8 s( [/ wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 W" @$ I1 c1 V5 l  nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 C' k3 X; s# w( A4 d0 l7 |Can I entrust it to you?
% a5 N7 u& e1 L$ }) v7 pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 O7 j9 {2 m6 V; n4 cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# q" c) u$ f: j* A6 c9 e- eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 V2 X7 S0 s( a8 P5 ]8 |/ j9 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 p% s; i# Z) F2 E( j. r, e2 a$ ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 B$ I6 _0 C+ w+ pEntrust my love within your heart

. }7 b9 z9 z4 [& z8 g" u4 G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ B9 H: c5 I( ]" C# l, W3 k9 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 q6 H' P  m9 k2 f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: f& j* l* a% x, ~- k3 V2 H) [8 b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ F% C4 w6 _  a" c+ \6 V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 K6 r. b9 t/ U9 R1 I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, y1 C% o) T# I1 G4 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& b: E3 d1 A2 a* ~1 u, {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- i1 n! E1 m5 H# f) I1 X5 h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  U' D  Q" C8 E  v! {: d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% P0 S* o" D2 x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, Y' N* ?8 T* h3 [. ~2 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" q! \$ L; c0 n6 Y8 L) k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; F4 u/ l- @, A2 `" F/ y! i, ]4 k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 C: H: L: ~' }1 `; ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* b! ^3 t; k# e$ D: n$ J! S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 v' T; ^1 l6 g- O% `; L6 C8 j6 O9 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 e) u- A  I0 b% W& e' @5 K, q1 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: ^7 J# w3 h) j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) ^' {  c* ~% E- x& w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% {- X; Z* I4 \% O# a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 @" M& E, ?( b; O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* w8 Y2 x6 |& H0 r6 s7 b6 |7 N) t<P>But I never did </P>
! `9 {) J5 C4 M) z3 e- @<P>但我不会 </P>
8 _. W1 F: {  p0 |3 w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( |. D8 H4 Z6 h! o& S- j% E- _. x4 T/ F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* \4 p9 F% S, I$ ~# T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  N" x( V. Z' H4 v" [- X2 p, l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) n1 J. e  }. _# U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" f4 ?3 g3 m, X6 w* f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* C3 d! C+ D& u4 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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8 M, B/ p+ S8 b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 I( R9 K2 @/ y7 e3 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# I, B# j: l% w! @. d! _3 ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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