【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  ?3 H( `+ Z$ O我另将歌词附在此。
# I- m9 r. e9 V4 q- CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! a% ?. v1 \) t6 G5 Y* U( y6 _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 v+ ~$ W$ P2 J9 j$ l) eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 a/ o5 ~5 ~$ b$ \2 F7 A/ ]) xI would probably know how you feel
3 W: t" o. p& Z/ `! k% oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 g) i: y$ Z# V% A3 MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' B  o8 y( Q) `4 jIf today isn’t too late,
- Z; C% ~" s; Z5 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 p2 G; L# t2 P7 j8 m  U# MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" @5 ~, U; _6 s3 K0 W" c8 L/ M  KI want to confess that I love you,
1 ?+ W4 U! O/ y8 f* y$ U/ fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ H0 W4 V( U, E; r$ }  @4 V" tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 a7 I& K- @8 T3 j) J! W0 d% e) `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 |- f! F6 l; H7 G& J6 FEntrust my love within your heart
! U1 M% R; S" x5 M; b" u+ U5 C( eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ Q& T7 t) r# s1 E) L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 E* w. @, ~9 Y$ H. n( g. g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 H+ d: f% B9 t& J$ [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 O/ X( T' _5 I+ `2 l8 Z: h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  k. H# Q6 K+ L5 Q9 X6 N  D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. T0 \9 |8 C( X* |  f! \/ G3 M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 u* N: c9 u) K8 i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; V( c$ [- G/ I6 e4 w. m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 J5 ^! c& o8 G  I$ Z, `! p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 d8 o. x( ~9 g, B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& H' \  J5 y. V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; C- X/ h# i: O% p  T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 M0 k( f: }& n0 f# Q; S; r+ q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* w0 r6 ?' \# h' ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; b7 [1 f5 m' P2 @. G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 g# T3 T/ O8 ?$ E  c. x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- I( m# s" g# R3 |3 G* j6 Z0 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 `+ q/ k3 _( u* M5 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 C' v5 m5 Y% e& M" d! Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 O1 |1 v) R+ h' `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 h  i. v: b7 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  l3 U: J7 F" J  h; F% m0 q' S& }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, P8 t  m6 ^7 s0 G/ G" i% w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- U; O; y2 @6 c. E/ {) e0 {- r3 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- r7 d3 j- K$ C" v9 B/ g+ O<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 G; W) M" j) e9 ~- F- s4 w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ M3 L- x% e  l: ^! V) [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 X8 v4 ?4 V$ l* W; }, l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" F9 w3 G; A  l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: M% J' L% B' X) R& \* V5 e) Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 j  ]; T, A# `+ C( G8 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, v/ K) l% O* Q) B4 l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; ~) `' x8 l0 s" @4 Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' h! ^. z5 Q3 z) v: I1 ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>