【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# {( h! `! }" s4 c  E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ Z: H6 D  E. v/ MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  X7 U* X7 s( c4 [From the first moment we met,
2 x; I0 D* f( O6 ~8 y8 qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" B' j; Z( K2 m6 h0 W0 }1 zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ f5 H( p, m0 ~I would probably know how you feel
8 m. ~/ k+ r7 O# N6 xLove… just the word love
1 |9 B2 G" g" M* t5 A0 E/ C6 {) ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- A, Y7 ]# j1 w* O  ~3 H  MBut I never did
2 T! ]$ x: g/ T( O. GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 _9 U* D* B( P+ l" y4 `1 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 `; f1 k. c; C; z0 x/ NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; ]( R  E/ g5 o, l% ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 ]$ ~  B' {0 ?2 d5 e8 A" cBut I never did
* b8 \: [' h& uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, @$ p! L# _' @( t# ]; `. v; j) HIf today isn’t too late,
0 l1 _3 ?. }- r0 @; `0 S* z: oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 p- v, d0 S6 {" _4 m1 C0 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, [  u5 z! v- y! |- M) L0 T0 }' MCan I entrust it to you?
3 {% d  D; @7 d; \# t. Z/ XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. C3 J% r9 C3 B' j6 ]Entrust my love within your heart
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# y3 r  X& N4 E3 b% m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 W- T2 K" ?# W' U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& j$ n: `* g  ~1 n3 ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% l  s" d2 O+ U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 C" Q; w: q# T2 X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; [  @3 j: m" z. |6 u; }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. i: w2 V% t+ p; |) f) @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 k8 L# C4 y1 R# |4 n; K# v: S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' H! D7 G( h6 l$ K9 m% G! K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ @  T1 h9 M) o3 k  q& Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, Q8 O3 b2 [) s9 N8 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. h; @& M5 u4 j, ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: V& E' s$ r  s( [' ~+ z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 H& w/ y! X, |7 Z3 b" e/ ^  f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( u; V* x5 e4 h! Y9 Y+ o4 c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( i3 A: r7 b3 w# F<P>但我不会</P>
) Z2 G* w" A" n$ l! x. ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- ]% ~+ f) i' `! X/ u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, \; M3 v) ^' s! l3 C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( B5 @* ^' [4 g! i0 r- |) b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& s* W! {1 J" w9 o, B) {/ a6 V* n% r7 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& \/ J2 M6 y7 y: M. j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, h0 T) A- O6 d& q. h! A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 E3 ~$ m3 Q. g, v, h; c& |6 M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 `1 |. T3 `& K/ Z" n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! U; m  k  u+ c7 P3 h& W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" {- x( z0 s7 ?2 K7 m9 x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 i3 n6 a" y+ _/ L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ?# u+ B( g7 Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: Q% M3 @5 ^* ]! V9 e/ D. S* V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ d% t& P0 _$ s; t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- G$ F4 U" ^3 y& p1 g. j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ c. p$ K* K; b6 a) O, u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& |. ^9 d1 \$ m* v* {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>