【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' H/ f7 g2 @8 N2 PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 {  \( c5 A1 R- f4 O9 @# NFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ A8 ]8 a' o: s% x: o& G7 H" aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# e5 R0 I/ o. @) a4 x# |" GBut I never did
% C. T, |3 N% _- _: j/ fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& W% ~7 H- g, _: ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; [% H+ N+ c, ~3 m9 x; hEntrust my love within your heart
$ G- f3 A' }( |  V( {# j( [Love… just the word love
0 l  ?  A1 c' d: t- _) q" Q( d, \Why is it so difficult to express?
2 q' \6 X; M, I" lI want to confess that I love you,
1 P6 S  U# {6 d$ RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" p+ s1 n6 Y  i. |" C8 |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ]' E6 M' D1 X$ x( |; ?, u- KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 ?0 E* `: t3 p) V" y, O* T$ k( DCan I entrust it to you?
8 D. y  h0 i; d+ F- C. N2 Z4 U0 }4 jEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 a7 Q3 s' o, O# A5 x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. s; e2 w% j0 M! L5 ?8 d9 |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* G/ v" O6 r! \! g, v& ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" y+ H: O' W8 i% N8 T) F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' y! `. _- [2 Q5 t. B4 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) c* E- K; t1 o! w3 X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; m% j1 m1 x: b- u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. w& X  s9 A3 O8 n4 H4 L2 [$ }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! P/ D! V4 D* S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 l' \1 x2 n0 y$ Q" R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 f3 ?6 [% i* m, D9 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# W; l  c# h  j2 c<P>但我不会</P>
5 U) {6 l" s0 g; n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  z5 P) T  ?! b7 N1 [) \& ~0 Z  }<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% `$ |- D+ S( N- B" ]$ z& x4 z) r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 {( }% [- b2 E8 z" z, _" _1 o" ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 u' s7 t* c, N& S  N$ N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( s7 k5 m, T# j: r$ O8 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- a% r6 J$ a& R# |, l- L: r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% R. e( k0 A; P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& I7 L% x5 o$ k& {( e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 B4 P; |  P. ~- ?) O' t, @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ z1 s  z0 D1 Z& X0 ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( f; W% ?2 S  {+ r5 v1 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) B+ ?# F3 r; F- i  R' F; {<P>But I never did </P>
6 X2 z% D" U, |/ t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 G/ v4 ]& C1 q- v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 u1 C4 Y+ f6 g) ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 B$ t* U8 G+ m& G- ^) r" [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 M' X% O, o0 ?& F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 q1 M/ A3 N$ p5 ^' \7 j0 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  ?2 b- t( K  q6 e2 @1 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* a/ I. @) W# x5 a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; i) e3 v, y( P/ R& p& n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>