【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- n, F- p3 B( ^* e2 {) z9 B% v我另将歌词附在此。
/ x6 g  f( A" E( c' aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ e' k: Y/ W+ [7 G# G* T6 [( h9 d+ mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ r/ W, h# d7 _& hFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& A- ~. G: h' m: \) \0 G) M, WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ {7 L  L( ~3 ?. G- h6 `8 {I would probably know how you feel
0 ^  I; F% u6 O# \! }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" W: X/ T3 A5 n0 fI want to confess that I love you,
2 E- O% T9 U) E4 y9 p9 ?But I never did
' G* T8 ^1 O' S; Y; Y  B: k% YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ i" _0 {1 k8 c) G( P3 K( l+ u- K* ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) |5 W, [! i  T3 w* x1 X2 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 C: _6 _) C7 s2 T  C5 E* zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 M. b# U+ _( ]/ B' K4 e" oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 m9 h1 r; z4 {$ I) o3 t* H6 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ~' r; \2 D* N) bCan I entrust it to you?
4 N) s" b# p1 sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% a7 S* j  n. n& l& ZEntrust my love within your heart

5 q+ t" w4 t+ l$ ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ w& i: H* X1 \! ~/ M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 z4 x+ v0 y* h6 ^' u- O/ |. T& s, F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  X# c. w5 O3 o- B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- \; \5 z( T0 r- k9 D* u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# s! u4 o) {+ q6 [+ d) |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. D2 Y6 a3 z: E2 ^& Q. ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; v, L, U# l; @0 d) C% O# Q! F7 {$ `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, G0 G5 T, W, w7 q$ j& |$ L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ d! t3 x2 P5 D! H4 w( |& o0 S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' W; ^( k+ s  w2 M7 q( R( x, [& V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 t* X; m7 y- s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 |. ?8 j& i; [% h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 W, ^2 E! b2 L# [+ w+ o0 f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% F+ E( u4 J: I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: C& ~& k/ B- `& f& \2 I# P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: n4 B; Y2 n3 m3 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. g0 H8 d- T5 Y, k7 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# i: }8 s3 \# f5 o% s( }+ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 p3 T: j& S! J" c6 A; \% ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; C3 s5 b: B+ P- u* g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 G% \0 A, u2 B8 p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# L. P& K% m; K2 S, q0 |  Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: L1 Z1 z: a; ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" N/ E2 K3 n* a4 S. T' `2 ]5 A9 U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, p' W/ `' a: n5 G: _0 n<P>但我不会 </P>
1 _: R( s, e2 T. O) q+ U) M; u  _; e2 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 R# J: l! V) [3 N/ T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  P& p1 R9 }% T$ b" x0 @2 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ p& o; o/ K5 q" k- w* j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 h( b. K7 s9 }9 p* Q. \/ |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& M2 u, }4 \- G$ q5 T* V# w- T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: p" k8 S4 ]# i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' i7 \! \1 |2 m$ z8 {; D( l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 N+ D0 P6 c. U; `6 i. d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: t- A9 X( `$ w; z& W: ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- s# P- w" \* A) d+ [3 R+ ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>