【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) ]1 M5 Q# k- D# e; U% d( bI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, ~/ K; y2 ]. n& V) D; l2 P2 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ @: x1 O+ a" I% z4 L5 L; }I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; ?$ \6 S. i! a7 p- l% AWhy is it so difficult to express?
( i7 I! g& \; |7 }I want to confess that I love you,
, B/ J- u; [0 b8 ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 l, a7 J- \! x8 p( |Love… just the word love
$ N* Y8 V/ Z; U2 Y; c+ B7 xWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 h: s6 p% W' _) g5 xI want to confess that I love you,
6 y+ x  p% V# w" u% eBut I never did
( N% l# E% f+ u3 J, \4 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- }# r& b  p; p9 }* T" }- XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* T% G) j7 t2 p5 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 ?1 v. `5 P/ b) sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( S4 i# o9 C& }5 C; U3 u) o% J% I) WEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* K" L8 g* K6 i% }. G! ^3 R( x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 A; H6 |% o9 ~; q1 V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; T8 `1 Z/ g! g( A- [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- ]+ O" ]! I* K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# e" J: e0 [. P! I: B. r' K: x/ F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, h6 X8 T, N' a* V9 `+ q3 t9 }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 t+ t( ]/ I7 a; C6 ^" G9 x' {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ A" ?9 a" c0 M7 x# ^" A; [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* w% _$ ]  f7 W  h" k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 p$ O' ^$ c% e# G) P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  @( J0 t+ r3 X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; M5 n) G$ q8 e" Z; ?: J. i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. `( `$ M) _1 [+ q7 d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* a+ s# C3 g8 ?+ {/ y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 h* W6 _, D+ e; g1 Y( H0 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ @1 e! Z" Z7 [" Q/ e* ]0 \- _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( X; D2 ]. h4 W* Y' I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 R3 z. L4 P6 H( i0 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 P6 P9 P# @- _2 }9 @, N1 k* E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: g5 k$ B  `5 C* Z9 ^6 L( b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' A: k9 A; K6 l) x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 |/ c0 k2 j' M" d& B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 g$ w9 c7 B6 r  k) \) K* @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ ?( f1 n- ?( M7 K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 ^9 g6 V' x6 ^) R# W) D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 _5 \$ G3 b( s. H/ }; L$ _; F/ ?$ w<P>But I never did </P>
$ s- _9 l9 }' @/ j5 e( y<P>但我不会 </P>
3 m- f! D* y1 v2 S# ?( o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 j1 M2 x9 I& E' j- {: }! h! Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' Y, J! J9 \  L. u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# ]% c. K; t; }, p; Z* c/ h( b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* U$ B' }4 ~9 ]' r+ _+ S' g* g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" ~7 g; W% v+ L& ^, W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 ?% Z/ u8 x# |: Q" L+ i5 D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; F# e" a. _5 n+ s$ [# ]5 |) E" Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 W0 X7 m0 h8 y# `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>