【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ F  O$ s+ |0 W我另将歌词附在此。
+ Y6 B4 a* ^- |. V% nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, B6 c5 N: A. |% s( JWe meet and talk everyday,
1 t! v, x- e0 ^5 ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( G4 {. H; l! n+ I, H: k. mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 z. W8 Q. p+ }8 u4 c1 sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& p$ y) G7 R5 }% H$ w) ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 M# W% I0 M( ?* H3 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( z; q  T, A/ H4 H# M& bIf today isn’t too late,
) O! k2 D/ l5 O4 [. X8 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& ^) Y# C1 q" C' PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( L) m  Z+ ?# CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  ?) q  M! N/ O/ S6 TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# N* M1 G, ?3 J# p# zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ ]( J5 w( }2 M- {5 T4 CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 y. B. @; ^/ J, Y  Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 ?8 n) c% Q9 y" V5 R: O- `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& [2 P8 @' g- t- B* v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& E- d& t! N4 Y3 b8 S) [" z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ N. l  ]6 \4 ]5 N, y3 f8 g7 `6 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: e) l( p  m7 m' J$ a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: S2 }& d) q& ^9 T5 h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: M+ w5 ]  g7 T- S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' D# W3 r7 P( g- \9 p- B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) i+ O& A& ^3 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) Z! _, i8 e8 p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ T- S. d' ~# P4 X2 o6 x+ S' {! y/ I6 w) d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* P' k3 _5 G, x, h  Q. U; K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! x' E9 t% m/ U- {8 `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 r0 O' f/ z2 a6 v. d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 t0 f2 P! I. ~  J* n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' C# k/ ]7 X8 k4 d8 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 |5 B7 z4 S8 q7 j: R' u+ v4 h3 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 r- a. n% _# w7 W. L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- c1 B  z& e. ]6 d! h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! U) v% C5 o! o3 U) z. A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* y7 E# C+ R/ n  n6 q8 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& [' s% S# b2 u5 l5 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 g" }) q" Q$ C2 b% Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 w: o; [' M+ u+ I<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. h3 M3 `% ^3 L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 b7 c/ @, Q' k" N* z: m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ^% F7 Q8 A% I% W& ]+ d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. o/ f- u$ F' m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' m, N6 u8 J$ V& V  ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) B. ^0 C) m9 S) c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( d4 U% Z% k; l% K) j+ a# W- [2 k8 J1 E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 H9 [3 A; W  ?4 ` 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# K; V; u( W4 C2 _5 v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>