【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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9 U0 p6 I) U' t* Q( ~& Q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( [, [& v  r! G: U4 dFrom the first moment we met,
, g' E: `- m: X" [- MI already loved you with all my heart
# K* N3 f( T! A2 K5 h& n2 I2 AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& ]. \1 J- N8 B, k# wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, v1 F8 t5 l- o) ~( dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. K6 _. M4 ~* }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 u8 b7 S0 u! mCan I entrust it to you?
* W, P4 Q7 d8 r; OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ b$ e* X8 C  ?- }$ e0 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
& Z3 W$ {" i7 _1 ^" s$ ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% \5 a1 ]6 D  ^$ r) YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ B- ~7 S1 g6 X3 G: ]Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 u  L  E# l6 _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  [. z' H1 u; z: @) m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 ]4 Y2 X) K% B) _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; x. U3 b; j5 |% b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! \$ `* [4 E, Z& g& F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 P5 c* E8 K. Q+ k: X; |) L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ s: i$ L! r: K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% E! W, j7 V7 m" C) W! r5 U& h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 R' P4 Y0 o' |. r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 B% h5 y8 w, E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 t9 U1 G& {9 ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ @2 `. d8 R; p% B$ ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( R1 q8 D" O) [1 ?; M: d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% ~& F# ?+ Z- w9 [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! [- N; w& S0 U" z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 c2 z: [5 B( h1 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# M0 u6 F1 u* V: r1 Z) K% Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ m: b: o% P" f; B8 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 w4 h* J# @; ~. u) v1 c1 }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% Y8 O; j0 k6 S3 I: P. Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. ]. N2 g3 [8 |; B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& R# d; b8 y, ?' x% N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 }. ^2 n! V* q7 |0 t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# G# }* k8 m3 m! G; n6 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 [! T; a; e0 U2 T  O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ e( G2 [$ M3 ?! ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 K% o% S1 K6 W: A2 J# V3 E# _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 B) E  p5 E, o; }: r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' H% `/ V' {% P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( S( P0 ?8 I1 {; z0 i3 i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 p: e- k4 }& y  b3 ]9 e+ |2 u$ n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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8 B* Z) G9 H7 Y' D8 E; f<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 n( d0 I  Z2 q( a9 o9 p$ W: G  O4 q' P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ h) f9 Y6 \! H: o- |3 Y) M4 o' i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>