【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 A* [0 ]* B, U我另将歌词附在此。
3 V. A3 k! L7 U6 Q- p" T* mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ r# F" R' @/ Q- J  YWe meet and talk everyday,
7 p0 \0 h# X% G4 G& |! H. z5 nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ W+ {& k3 w1 b1 Z7 K* H  q( ^8 F+ P6 vI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) h: M8 o2 |! O  d6 i1 ^  _. k' F! I/ {But I never did
7 w3 Z2 [' [- l/ sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 k' ?, Z( {/ l) B' n" i: B: BIf today isn’t too late,
% u; A' \" j) M0 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# ]1 e9 E& _+ K4 O$ ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ A6 g) c5 L; ]1 w4 X  U- P% ~- _7 {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ [" g- C6 g' y  Q) W% k& V/ r- _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 j1 o1 T, l( N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 d: a$ F( r: t1 A3 D4 G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 Z$ U) [7 s$ o& l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 d- I& b+ N8 o' o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ v# T3 M5 |: s# R  H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; J. _1 x2 D5 k  F) I1 S+ k; Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 q# j& S$ D( |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& V: s& ~* z. M8 a- _% l( \4 k* w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 [& k* ~/ P5 p. \& U, M<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* u" s3 |- M  h0 T  G3 k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, \% W: c' k, X& D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; [. `0 b$ e+ Q$ c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ N2 N, _4 k- q1 \# c8 a. [- Q9 F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; K6 D6 V5 w$ O9 e: o3 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 E0 a! K* {4 N' M6 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 z% z7 z& q8 j! y# j; A0 u1 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" p& Q5 _% T: q0 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ t2 ^7 `' {4 |' ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 f4 U) A8 t# w- D# W. G( M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 X9 d! l  s2 C* z, \  T7 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 S- E7 H7 W) G& |2 s9 Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" c6 ~7 D! @0 B. G  i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( T* e" K) [# c/ v1 g1 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ G# m) H7 d7 I; u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, m+ ~* ]8 ?$ T; o( y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ I5 E, S$ H6 @) m1 B- @0 `<P>But I never did </P>
# X1 k7 N* I* P  Z2 p+ f<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 ?$ l$ n  G+ H% [  S8 F0 h: e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. D; N; v; s) u* b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 o0 L+ D) ?% W1 w1 u, }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) Y, d0 |3 h" z9 M. L7 ?- t7 c( D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 y3 l3 x9 G0 W5 B; f0 }) S& n  k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! o. I; ?. {8 v* Y* u2 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 l6 U: h0 A8 E4 }6 L' s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ h$ a5 I- c, G! m- H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- _2 O1 D/ E0 s8 {3 A, D/ ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 P! [# U9 k2 n" j8 Y* k. h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# h% `! O5 f7 ?$ x$ v( V! o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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/ u5 y  t' L( S" `6 A. N$ y<P>

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" {1 q, U$ s  O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- K1 k" k- |, _  J, i0 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>