【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 c1 r9 i* L6 R5 P( G( h我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" |0 i( z& x: [6 j4 ]  m/ tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! v- C) o9 u' Z2 a0 MFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- p# |1 G4 }1 I6 q( W. u7 R& k3 gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 Z6 Z2 ^! b1 W7 _+ c5 f! k+ PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 J6 F/ L& T2 \1 E' h$ gI want to confess that I love you,
, _3 e% s9 x: }2 f& [# WBut I never did
' b# d( C8 b1 Z1 }% ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 R; J$ C/ @9 H5 f6 {9 V4 |9 x2 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. f! ?( N. D8 i( B7 q  T8 L- Z# ZCan I entrust it to you?
. q/ Y  q; c! K5 |1 K+ \2 `Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 X- n4 |9 T& A; t: L% C# n; xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 G. {/ n5 Q* ~0 L  F9 D& [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ ]( r7 e2 U/ pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 X- h8 V: S2 YCan I entrust it to you?
: l& I  N3 U4 I3 i# {Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- h! r8 i2 N3 w' Q& o+ X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ ?5 G( K; A; ]( }7 d' S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; [! p  a& D" P0 \1 ~& s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ t# n( q9 ?2 P" c/ D' G9 U9 U1 ]) |+ s: c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; B4 c+ }2 k) B, M4 H1 P<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ P  o  s& Z0 A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! P! [6 Z1 [( c4 @9 p' P3 y+ |9 z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! O+ X/ @6 \2 l# {& B! a( s; V* ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ @) H4 `. F7 }6 _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 o$ c) q; n3 l# j  F- X) {<P>但我不会</P>
  ?9 n' l3 x1 j5 `6 O( K7 u  M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( }; {( ?+ ~. G  ^! d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! G7 N. L4 ~" {4 r% ?8 K5 C; Q! v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# y9 `& ~: W& q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, z- O5 y0 M2 \1 W' z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( E7 H4 d5 H. d! ]) }' {& `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- b+ I$ O: x+ }! g) l) B, P3 D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# M" z" L" _  A3 t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 o+ I$ g3 v' L$ ~5 W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% w) ]9 _0 }% O: ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 c) n& i3 {3 f" B/ R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ M8 y8 b( X( w+ h; l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 Y! J/ c$ c9 {; ^- n- V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( Z1 ^( ]8 A1 ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, E, `. H) j; x( Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' P5 [: j$ r) X( K) J" }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) e" ~' O, N* O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: k' v9 B& Q5 h. m& m8 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  A  l1 E6 d+ r5 f' `! h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ z' g" R8 N" ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 A' @4 k3 X* h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: H( @2 ~$ b1 x( _0 j% _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>