【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
5 H+ l1 D# D5 H1 I5 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 j) P( v/ L; S- h, V- W- L2 a. vFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ L1 x7 x# n/ G5 V1 c# I8 pWe meet and talk everyday,
3 d/ G* p: M2 f, e) t/ TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) N* W, ^  `4 X. ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 b/ L3 R0 b3 ?4 T" l% r! `4 gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 `* d' P2 x4 ?7 w6 oI want to confess that I love you,
& m6 w. M& Q/ P, _8 |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ V1 `: p, Y- t: N6 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) Z& m) @4 Z/ W* QCan I entrust it to you?
, X/ c& s; B1 s8 L) A+ ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( _+ ^3 A, z3 c5 _& k  D  RWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ ]- A3 `- G* _0 qI want to confess that I love you,
) J6 a. F. A4 P, bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' q" c( s* c1 W% r( d+ o' HIf today isn’t too late,
! l, E3 `2 V: Z+ K/ S" w/ x- zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, C0 {4 A8 q8 D" T: s$ q" }. D) W* tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ E7 u" j+ `: s+ g% V& A7 g5 V8 ~Can I entrust it to you?
/ S3 ]4 r1 x! [2 u7 YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 H: T: `: Y8 R4 a. PEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& c/ |- y; f. H+ {5 v0 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* ?0 r  V0 d" @# t) E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  N: ]: B+ h* w1 s/ Q2 N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 k, d# D$ O/ r; B9 P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ J! c7 N0 L1 T9 Y8 J6 ?/ r! |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. V# }! {1 F! ^8 y1 K% ~& C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 `6 d+ X1 o3 h* K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: l! v: n& q8 V! U" b) O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- S) g" \0 R# n3 {( C5 `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ d8 S6 a8 ~: ]+ E" a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 v  ]% D& J8 t% a9 b1 W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 G0 ~' C: F/ X) u" W+ m& {  Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 `. @. M# N% f& H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- S6 a/ i9 F% v* h; C" _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  }8 W4 J) x$ v3 ]/ ]1 E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# M1 H5 D' b5 T+ q- b% |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, T: H$ `) d$ }  H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ c$ S) F4 _: j0 A' J  |0 z+ n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# }: a$ B$ I" i0 ?% D8 P2 V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! A, Q+ i( B# z% [- s& X7 D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ \* M, O8 |! U, Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 U& x! z( _- z4 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 J; ]/ @6 B' F9 |" m) m) ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; M8 \6 m0 t+ k) c2 x1 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 k: F3 z7 ?. P/ O$ ~9 I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 a) O/ I8 o% a  C/ q; P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 o' c; n- {% O$ R# X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 z  Q% {" l( Q# s7 t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ F' R) |6 q5 Z" i5 _0 S) d; M; o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! h0 e7 K4 L! y2 P+ ~! F, ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; o% g8 Z$ s4 C+ U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 l" q% \/ d: @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 S0 W6 I4 N' y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- S( O, J0 ^1 i$ i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ V( v( M7 _1 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' k* \  H% i5 v% p" _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. V' N' k4 a; R; Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 ]" E0 k  S5 t" a! d( I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) A9 V5 c# x; _. Z0 ~: f- p8 b. n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& }/ x7 f+ A& E9 j+ h1 O& Z! ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& O* @1 |; u. A: d' p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' w/ w  d2 R& d2 W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>