【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
% [) b9 S- r4 f% F: E  nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; z1 h0 q0 F# [" G( [# V# Y1 f! lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ q5 c& @3 o1 W2 a/ W8 h" R* eI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 r. I: x3 I" N/ H& `/ WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 \& ~  @9 l/ E  G  zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- A: N( v0 o5 A% N1 ZCan I entrust it to you?
7 L& J5 e; X* x; _Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, V9 k8 S3 {3 i9 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  K, _' [' L1 @+ g+ \4 y1 I. }2 J) JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" |+ }. {$ l# u; nCan I entrust it to you?
+ p: t# L  I* n1 y4 ~3 D8 dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 Z- V* M2 w7 S6 O, C3 h8 M/ ~! \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' `8 S5 p$ w# S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( R$ ^  ^8 t+ l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- G: [$ C6 E$ C, Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 I; u% `# {" q4 v5 w6 D7 S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ d+ ^8 [* m' j& l- v. Z% ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( H. ?) [5 q; l3 C1 f, k0 ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% E  _  h4 s. O5 \7 D/ O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  K, l/ ]) ]4 ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ }3 i1 k" U# O/ Z# F0 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 N5 X7 B  W9 D: s" [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 N5 C! B, \! s8 i7 |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ R9 _: G) X8 G3 G* M# f6 K<P>But I never did </P>
. G4 X/ @3 B3 K% R; b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 `* e  }7 }; o5 L  p% [% ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. R3 o8 H: z$ b$ D0 w2 b8 P/ x/ ^3 g3 K" l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' e& Z% C2 x( ~  @. d3 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 O8 ?: E! \! q5 T2 C2 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 k: U  m( e. i  ?* g4 _; s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 _6 Z, j/ G* S* ]2 |  W6 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 N& V+ @. z7 B" C3 i( v4 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 V  ^! w7 d- p' V: L6 o1 F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! X4 S. Q; P/ ?0 q& Q3 t1 z: n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% c& @  \8 u* H0 P* h3 ~4 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>