【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
6 A) O7 e& h( c4 I/ [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" w( M6 ?% B& k/ p/ y/ QI already loved you with all my heart
+ W9 H- S6 G' `- W, o1 HWe meet and talk everyday,
# L9 e' {1 P8 D: X3 v9 u- WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! A! M: F+ v4 n( cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; Q% v* K% N; SBut I never did
8 ]! ?5 I- O0 b8 f/ aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ @) i9 Y3 E9 GIf today isn’t too late,
* Y$ N5 X" A7 D8 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& ^9 E. p) y, x& ~7 XCan I entrust it to you?
  `0 I: Y9 A6 d2 C( SEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 E- g- _* f; s: @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' V: N4 ]$ Y5 ~, \' pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- n) D1 t8 g# g6 l* m. v7 b5 u1 h: WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% \+ E5 `/ H' @; X& i  C8 [% _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 I# Z$ p) R3 X9 j; TCan I entrust it to you?
3 d# s, E  R( o' J1 I; NEntrust my love within your heart
1 E4 r' f: Y3 O& VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 F& N9 f) U* @8 y- [$ p
% I' S2 Y, Y0 g* B  [5 `, E" I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; v& G/ }0 a: N: [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 f# L  x3 e4 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 k& |. W" x+ g6 F6 Q$ ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) g! c4 u8 W7 {6 ?1 m7 Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; e6 k; c% e1 \( n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 q( A. w/ [1 t# d" b) ^3 z" D+ `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! v* p: a' v3 t; ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  X8 v: }9 N' K; d* x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 A* D% Y$ q* W- t' I. i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& b5 Z" f% o# K8 |- Z8 i" W% h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( P) }- {8 B* |/ u; R" b# n% z  d; b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 h+ f  X: ~" |( s0 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- Y& O+ m, f: O1 v: u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  H" s2 Q5 N* A+ D, I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: g5 r3 D! p  v, {- ~2 P! Y: k7 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 i+ k' [& p! S1 V  G5 L* C- [<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; z* z1 e) j# q& `' c<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* b- z9 y" L  A  S& P, ]<P>But I never did </P>
$ @% I4 \0 m: y0 L! [) v$ E<P>但我不会 </P>
6 o1 S, M/ A8 @. @: F$ e! F3 L3 z: ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! P5 i" j8 a% @9 q! A7 }9 `( f2 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, Z9 n$ \# b, F- i" S2 Q8 ~; T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ b% f4 X  G$ [" P( \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 ^3 O/ ]9 G: u- _7 b6 }6 ?: P% J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% W) c& q8 t. X, M/ L0 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  s* J+ }4 q7 i+ r5 T& C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& Q6 Q) ^$ x' K- f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" }, @; W3 j9 S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* }8 v: P% }  [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>