【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( P: L! s- j' w3 U; \; C) z1 z我另将歌词附在此。
: e5 X  P7 P; ?6 d$ h, m5 RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' H3 z9 Y8 l- Q" F% [1 S, a- d& zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& }5 v7 J, @, N! ]( BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' L* N8 H+ g  K; mI would probably know how you feel
* U* W/ z, S9 x5 R( |4 R! NLove… just the word love
, z# p3 {; V) x( }: mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; N5 x& H6 [$ m, xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ J/ e' G9 B4 g5 d0 _4 s8 {: u0 ZIf today isn’t too late,
/ v) g5 k$ v/ j0 {5 }8 II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# o5 [$ w; m" y" ]# L4 A4 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 Z- k) k8 N0 }7 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  `( b3 e2 b8 ~5 t. E& E9 q& tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# w7 S# T7 P9 ?- Y8 `& D8 eEntrust my love within your heart
8 A  {* k/ |+ W2 Q$ M- o2 q$ gCan I entrust it to you?
: q+ k6 z" ?( ?& A9 _; yEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% k; U8 p3 v  s- b! M$ o! ~& X: m8 @: }, Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 S" [7 D9 H, D0 s1 l6 G7 ~! T) [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! M1 w4 P. a1 R( h0 A" o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 ]; h! K7 l" i6 S% ]+ P: ]/ |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 s& `0 u2 q0 o  v* Q% d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 A; f" q9 m4 v6 i0 B+ t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 p9 W- i9 @9 c1 [% D- \  q8 q/ V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  ?8 n& I  K. D. l6 u2 Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. e" [! J1 l& P& k; T8 B- d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ w0 ]9 F% G( o4 I6 e0 r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' Z, ?4 P7 f% p1 P, r1 B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* f: l+ U% W- @- I$ B/ }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& _- b2 H0 {* P+ X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 R3 K& u5 c: E- }8 p3 @, d9 M8 q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! ~( [  k. p+ P<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ R% r3 u, Y: K  b* C' w" |" ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 f; ]/ k+ M# M( u& D& W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; e$ n0 n& T5 U# `" Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. Y% }0 Y* E* U; s" J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, F% F3 ?* p' l" b* ^# T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! E" F, M1 G0 B8 h; d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, R" R6 [: Y# F( |7 o6 k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 E% }5 K- p$ D' {<P>But I never did </P>
  y7 b' f: f' l4 C" [4 j<P>但我不会 </P>
6 N7 ^( t' {8 t% \7 t3 v2 z. h, H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 q, }$ \4 ]- Q$ L) w+ X% ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: R$ \! v' Y% X, S; x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" f2 t! Z3 Z  k, J1 z0 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! O/ b; n0 f' [0 M/ V* C+ D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; K8 I, g* v, d3 ^. t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 h5 q& ?; d0 n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: d& m$ S. g* X) [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 y8 |# L) `5 a8 @" `' b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 H% b1 a' i' r: c8 I+ T$ z" g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. k) ?( t/ D* O1 a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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6 ^' o/ h" c, l7 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>