【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
2 J6 X: `1 ~, z7 X5 H. k! @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 l+ l" B  w" Y% T* EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. o3 G5 ~6 l" I. N  c' w8 C; e4 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' }6 w5 Y/ f# U; MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 Z7 n3 ]0 a( ~. p5 eIf today isn’t too late,
' ^1 p+ v, ~7 V1 v8 f8 c% vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  ~3 p9 `$ E; L% SEntrust my love within your heart
6 H2 j' J. X( }7 B; M6 Y4 n0 _% Y+ fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 e+ v: }1 c; W4 a$ ^' f- @7 @% D! dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 l* B1 R' H: R* ~( K% WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 k/ q0 ]' P3 S7 V4 ]# W/ Y# `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* T! [' C8 ?+ \1 j+ j1 G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 u% [# N- I  b: o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' }3 Q4 W) L' \. P1 J  I+ g- K2 {" Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: c: j. Y, I8 c- c1 i# Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# i( h# f: t; n, ?- L) r5 _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& g+ ]! H/ `1 k0 B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' H) N) N. ?- v2 B, S. \1 g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; J& w/ x; m5 r1 W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. l* a  r9 l, }3 \; e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: M* z* l4 ~# ~7 j& s1 l# \  h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  L% F7 Y5 v3 i; X3 i! u" P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 G5 P( m: @$ o$ B8 r2 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. @! g1 l8 ~$ y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' S, b( s5 w# I( q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. E- }+ N6 {: _9 A) R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ k' c$ ^: ?6 q- O1 Z  S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& Y& f# ~* p+ ~- Q! T; Z2 n<P>但我不会 </P>
* g9 n. \" `0 s+ ^3 ~+ r. v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) ~/ d9 J6 n$ `: y9 h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 J0 y- C9 u: S. e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 D$ u- S) v" H- g# m* G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 T9 N- V! r) X. l, z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; r; ]! d) u! @' Y/ u$ F% ?9 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 ~+ B) ]0 S4 N1 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; T. x) ^0 ]% v  W9 l: s. o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 G. \# y* _  L2 S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' `3 i3 h0 O- [0 P* j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 o! [  n1 {, ?' ~9 Z: I6 H6 B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>