【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 J6 w4 D* e% _9 L1 g; A6 U: u我另将歌词附在此。
" n7 ^* K% I2 x+ qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* U% f5 x% @, A' v% p; _+ f1 JFrom the first moment we met,
* p, E' X- t) o) ~I already loved you with all my heart
* K. f# [! A, @. M" i, u! f" RWe meet and talk everyday,
/ s; w  I6 `, s1 z# V$ Y& w. @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 `3 V* K9 p+ u  }8 M5 U% i( J) B0 qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; ]4 L2 v$ [2 q. lI want to confess that I love you,
2 H: e: ~$ }5 d4 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  i0 X# _% e# G+ g1 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( g4 [4 k+ v, l+ S' _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 d1 D4 L6 O, W; h. H4 r3 e2 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
% p( ?6 b# o- y) SI want to confess that I love you,
2 A$ ~3 j8 h+ x1 L* ^6 r5 O' g5 iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ E) [, H8 w* ?# K7 v$ EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 _3 f  C( _: H' YCan I entrust it to you?
6 o% f( s! U2 @  vEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 {0 z1 h: g, m( ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& l& a3 D0 Y2 ^+ S/ Y0 X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 z) R& y' x! v8 g6 [" I" u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 r7 j8 z/ R$ A, l9 D5 B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 P1 d$ S( L: t  l0 M# u: K8 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ o% \4 |- I% ?" c! ^) \6 S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 g6 L1 u( L2 R/ E4 Z) V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& z9 n: C+ s. A& }6 ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ E$ g+ s: z- A, L' _% i9 J! V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( X. H) n5 @/ X. b+ K5 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  L$ m6 R3 [; Y* S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 ~. ]5 ]2 E% S/ i6 M4 Z: k0 }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ E# q. E% V. Z# B6 O" t) m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. ?4 L0 u; j/ c; Q% I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" l- ?( d- M( F7 C( K7 c9 C, o4 {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 i" o! Q$ |; T- n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% K+ L) r( x  I* R4 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 x, G' t) T. }; n8 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 r( R: V% z( V! W2 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ C3 V0 M# A3 x- e  x; r/ ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- P) ?: O8 q3 G( ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( v% @7 G% M8 }9 I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- V, T: Z( G2 p3 Z  u. ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) }' ^# [, A6 b. S  f9 i. W- U<P>但我不会 </P>
/ E) f# `# K- `7 n& _8 f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 p% `" Z, \; b$ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ^: y& G% T9 S+ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 t& `* ]1 g6 H# I8 `9 K* v' W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- p8 v' \$ N" ?( S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 |4 y! q" ^' q- G5 ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 G  w0 }7 ^) U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 G6 O$ e. t, N+ L9 L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ g4 {# N9 f, E$ z9 S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' V1 y. Y9 E4 o- r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>