【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: M+ o% U- o( o7 j( W) F我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 ^! B3 T1 x# L  p9 E7 ~0 S7 @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! P$ G/ x, P% N  l5 }  eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* z& [, a( c" t$ l9 v5 ?* j5 `1 FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- W. L  G  \. }' l# e2 iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ F2 @8 m0 u. h+ _I would probably know how you feel
- n4 N. f9 V! lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 c3 o; k: r$ ]4 vI want to confess that I love you,
" R7 G, q' |! F* x+ B8 VBut I never did
. G. ]2 N* u' V" vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 s6 T  g! y/ S3 OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& [. _6 W0 t$ F( B8 [  zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 y" A& S7 ~3 l6 X  \# ~Entrust my love within your heart
' p% N: }& W3 N4 z9 J5 |Love… just the word love
& z, z9 b' [- Q- fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( d# `! N6 k9 O; V7 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 p0 U! g5 d" v9 U( `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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. F- J, H. D9 G' e* P! s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% v+ p1 ]0 j# J9 f3 b' N# n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) R1 Q$ j+ ^* B2 p7 C& ^! L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 d  ~+ ]4 V# t) c& }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: W- f1 o* k1 e, r$ k% Q# s1 X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- Z, V# [+ X8 X9 \4 C* F; W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% B0 p' _  R" \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" _# q, [: A: T+ N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( J2 O' x+ t' @& i3 K/ C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 d) k4 E/ O; F' |0 M8 e' ]+ @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) x+ U0 H% d8 N: {# U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 F0 m/ y; e! R: h3 {' F; C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, D( f; i' N/ n. k# m1 e  O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  s" s; H+ p6 U7 a: B7 G0 N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  V3 i" L" `' G5 l4 Q; h<P>但我不会</P>
/ t; R, z1 u& P3 H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& W1 L5 f$ O& i$ H- U9 @& \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ M+ j1 w8 ^! E! `, b7 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: ^7 y( a1 L/ w" L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# E& v- A6 \/ d& A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! Z& v) U- k2 T  c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 H, X( x6 m/ v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! F) r  S' P/ W; g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" _) Z& C& P' \6 e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 M& s2 R( F" {<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  x& u! A/ z+ `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 h/ A) o5 a; ~+ {& ?9 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; |$ u. z/ Y- W7 c4 U4 B  X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 N! E) }5 }# ?- G" N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% ?  G/ W7 ^5 l0 `. z- ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; C% x9 o* E& w7 z, V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 S' W, w2 Z9 H7 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 y% D. m3 l: K3 s6 B5 ?9 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 {1 M; z4 A+ [! s0 e1 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, J  U0 A2 A& I  `, z" X7 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) F9 q% C( u3 W! ]# o5 O2 ?这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 U# I# W( H. j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>