【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ G1 T$ k! G' p( A% M2 U7 _我另将歌词附在此。
; D8 O* b+ p% }  T! gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 M" N7 p0 y/ ^( IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 K- C/ [+ c7 M2 GFrom the first moment we met,
# a( s/ T3 x9 @9 @/ e/ rI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 ?8 Q- x4 w7 X, L+ vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! {) {! o2 x! C0 F. HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 z8 f4 N9 L* v+ gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% s! H. g# E) `! X9 c* s9 G' M8 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 j6 K7 C1 S0 ]. }& z/ e. p; AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, Z5 S2 ?% t% @% e9 Y  i- m# CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* c6 |5 Y- |7 }; M; R. ?& Y3 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 o; S9 s& D/ z# j: TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: h! C8 u" n1 y" PIf today isn’t too late,
$ N0 L% s3 K  [! pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ l  `0 h) Y3 Q8 D: H' [5 z- N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& g& Y/ v4 V: V: \- X" c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- z& P: n: ]! a& X4 a% z- n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, V0 O+ G* h2 I8 F4 Q: @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; a; M6 J* r6 Z- ~  b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 V& f# X1 k8 Z9 [& F3 n6 U* r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 d5 ]! m! S+ o# u2 ]5 @5 p  E8 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' J3 n- S4 x+ t, c2 x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" @" ]/ @0 r" d2 z( L  D. h( r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! u" y9 i5 M! @+ c+ U* x$ C* m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ |* d+ ?7 Y& G" {  @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  y2 I" N: i1 L; `  R7 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ l' h" b+ M7 Q3 m% x; B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* u, D2 ?" u; }: ?2 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* ~# g: ]% [) Q& V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( X6 j9 N1 m7 E1 q! I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ d8 y$ M- ]& |9 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. s8 Z) k0 N. [9 L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, m: v4 Q: `! V+ H: c/ C/ b; g7 L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! L1 ~" B1 u( t3 u1 s; B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 F: M! E7 o1 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- t) c8 z0 ?6 f6 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& J! b6 ]0 y4 E  e. i1 m0 b, Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 r* m) |1 b7 k! ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 z  O) X& g) O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 m7 L8 H" F, j( D& b+ B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 u" N; J7 K$ D8 e! D. O5 W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 ?, o, m. K: ^8 ]$ L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 e. z9 P8 `" r" ]  }4 T, @8 j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! m, q6 p& I  Z% l) k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>