【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ C6 ]# \( b/ M: B) k我另将歌词附在此。
$ e* f$ i  W4 p1 z+ zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. V6 h, u* A  j' q, d! JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 b# s+ i9 q; S( [! sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 x$ ]. o1 b( \% YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ e$ h* Q0 u. d3 ~. lLove… just the word love
7 V: B7 ?6 y, ?6 ]  MWhy is it so difficult to express?
' K* d4 c' F$ Y6 ~I want to confess that I love you,
/ o0 @5 m  L; S9 D; H8 G7 K  cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& a) \! [: `$ t% p+ B. j! g: TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  g8 n# Y. S* A& s5 }& e0 pEntrust my love within your heart
* U* o* [& h9 e  ^9 y& W  q2 BLove… just the word love
, M* Z; o& h, O% X6 @3 M2 g5 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
  F- \1 S- ]0 j3 w# P+ n( eI want to confess that I love you,
- i4 V) ~) x# J; r, j4 }. aBut I never did
& e5 s9 ^% ^/ bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ E7 @% o( e) @3 [; \7 x) I. l3 aEntrust my love within your heart

0 d9 v, f- }3 ]' b7 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 i8 y* G1 l$ s4 F; ]  l# {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  B  h1 i! \4 V9 o" W' V6 R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 s9 Z1 u! v% d; b3 c! q9 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, ?% S$ {4 K( O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ k5 ]  y) U+ v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 p" P. K" o+ K* B. o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 A5 E4 H3 O4 S8 h$ R8 j* F5 A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. P: U7 B0 I" H, ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. o4 x+ N3 u$ k6 M<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% [. m; e& Z9 g, }) P<P>但我不会</P>
0 |3 d# I) M5 r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( R- N' _0 T8 k- V7 r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" \8 l6 }9 k0 u  ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! E1 j" Z3 W, N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 }9 ^( F; \9 N+ C: Y) {" i6 p  i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; i- W7 {& C4 D" Z) n! j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* [2 E6 q( ]- M3 x9 L4 p  q+ K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  p9 K/ K. g2 {+ d' I7 R( k2 v: f* w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 }. p, S3 Y% N) M: W4 ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" E: X! o" A4 u; |* u/ U0 ?3 ~9 B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( Y" {- {5 {1 n6 x+ f. P1 u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 u5 _5 J7 N4 J9 z( o3 H<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 s5 u" N' e! o" Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: H% N, P7 V& K0 m2 W4 A, r! n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 A8 q2 M) H- ?3 B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 v2 A# c* H# d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 W5 y8 t6 a2 L! p7 V2 h7 R& r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 Q2 v7 B/ x$ {: a. a1 C: t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 G( r5 I% _0 N  t6 u9 d! j0 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 N0 Z- H) l- M2 k9 v<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' V! C9 E2 H; ?( [/ [) s" j6 @ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: `0 p  x; {' n7 z/ r1 m9 M: U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ K& V, {* `- Q% p+ B7 T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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