【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- O& ]2 y4 V, T% A3 T  aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# e6 H$ D. I2 k/ h8 [, lI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: a; a3 Q& Z/ j3 S4 KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- D# `+ q. E; eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& G% ]0 R$ f/ u; |. V" j3 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% Y; b$ E, I. H! iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# ?" U, P8 X( v/ mBut I never did
& m- X6 m: V8 i9 X' e* lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 z. S5 S0 q* x2 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ Z2 E/ f% S) NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% n9 ~1 r- J3 H& K* ZEntrust my love within your heart

3 X' D( Z6 |( I; U; ~( ?) r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* F+ b) R/ V2 b, r8 }0 W% A  t! x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ e) V* @& U; X* B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( u4 z% i3 l7 M& v- v  g1 s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( K% U: x6 u' H0 [; ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# [( H1 J  j0 N" R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* z6 C! O$ |( w/ H! C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ z: g8 ~. K' l  m9 [/ w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- M1 G- X0 x1 n) ^% O4 U/ w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) q9 n' O2 Z# {) V9 T0 I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ g, p; Y7 a9 s* `* u" l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( p9 ^+ Q! Y- G8 J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. q* ~- y. E4 ]# X0 ^8 b$ q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 }9 P' D* Q$ {# R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% q2 B# l+ {+ F) c/ C$ T4 ^" T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: J4 z9 N. C( J$ D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ [7 r; }' b0 ?7 _6 ~& a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ s4 [; q7 u' t" ?- E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, W( a6 W$ w+ @  n- `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: N+ y  p) t7 J6 j" g* C5 I+ R! d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 k; \0 w3 O+ d6 N/ A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 x6 M  i* Z5 i: l3 }6 r- I  s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 n8 m) x5 m9 ~! M- c0 K  Z3 Q' b0 _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 p' p$ ]5 J9 d: W; x% ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 A( k. b8 E5 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 b6 v5 V1 |4 U6 J# j& W# z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ o1 h* J: ~. `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 y6 D3 c. z# }; I/ U6 i/ z( B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 P- t/ p) Z( O! n2 s" x<P>But I never did </P>
% c( j( J9 F' ~7 L<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, b/ N( F# @& f1 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. x- n/ \  n( _. F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. U# q1 m& ?/ i8 h+ g3 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: D+ }2 x9 p/ r, S4 ]4 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* N- t5 V3 M6 x- b1 z0 I5 l- @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 T3 h0 o( k: e' L# ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 G9 r% k! u, T" a. `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. k+ A- N0 \4 A5 U7 r 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: S% T7 L0 i9 p/ l# ?这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>