【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 l1 v3 o) N6 V3 k0 F0 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 H' q# k0 Q8 i" R6 x5 h' ^$ DFrom the first moment we met,
* I+ R1 \8 L, m6 c' yI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' V4 c1 ^  n- A) @9 VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, @" O! G7 p# P: L- @I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! J8 k: M  v5 Q3 _3 |Why is it so difficult to express?
! {/ E+ E# D  OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 B3 a5 M3 y' f3 T- b# h  rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  O: b+ e; l- l5 \If today isn’t too late,
) m1 u  z. _( e2 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% K7 F( Y0 X$ S; GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' h% s1 t/ C. b$ l# iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& U0 x% y* U& q$ ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 m* q, Q  S! AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& t* \. E% d5 y* z& q( c. eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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' ?. [: ~* n: e* y) M: N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 @6 H& K+ q' |/ r, h+ h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 P0 o- b% Y: @1 K4 u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, W( W/ i$ h0 P5 Z: ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( t! H# ^, s+ G  ]- j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 I8 G- M4 i; @0 l" W2 H& ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- M# `- I+ a' R- M2 z+ V# L% D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 K6 Y- f$ M4 M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. T3 r: u% I2 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% Y2 G5 s& P3 E( q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  L7 l- i$ e& l+ z; X3 b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ ~) U, a$ f7 \5 K1 u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; i7 A/ }4 V( A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: F9 X' y) B/ E, O. h' Q* J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- d) ?: j/ z& k3 x- ~3 k1 H' E% ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. |, Z. d7 Q3 ?# T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  l2 Z, u2 m. l. [6 f' A! D: M$ m8 N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# ?7 w0 B! X$ Y9 @/ y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* j/ A/ w6 [1 @" }! L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. i" z8 _- F9 E7 S3 v* D/ s0 X: {# k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& U; |; c0 q8 w3 {; ]& u9 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# i9 @2 N( H  u6 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* P& S% H+ B- a: r9 s8 Y. K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ ~) l& {  Q& w. u6 ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. y& j/ o& W" j8 b- n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 N9 k. f( P; u% t, B# C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& V$ F- c$ o( r, b  }7 Z5 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  J0 u; E! v2 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 ]& L% R$ Y$ y8 b. o8 [; e2 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* e  r" t4 @& H5 q% ?/ {6 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 N+ l/ M' C# {* ^4 W' F3 W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! H) J- j* ?+ h: j$ w6 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>