【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
& E4 c) [+ v- O' s. i% JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 y) _1 }$ I; Y2 L" A. FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& [$ C1 d) M' D. V; s  NFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 D% t( ^+ s4 \- W5 O5 R- j. mWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  g% {, D0 V% r6 mLove… just the word love
$ `/ ]6 o" S( W; n1 C8 O% m% P0 q) nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! T9 g' c1 D$ f( z/ qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; A- |9 K/ u3 ]  q# t# W9 ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. h8 X, n! b7 {9 a5 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
. J: l; x' F  ]I want to confess that I love you,
* [: R4 I& ?0 E- gBut I never did
0 a3 p7 R0 A( N' A# E5 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" |4 n3 D1 k  b/ i/ ^4 bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ E; x: O* i# `! b, J# hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) }# _2 L- K% ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: O; K4 z4 w3 r" E  d6 G" l( k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% u) m5 j, G# Y7 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% k* h' j& w! o5 J/ S; I1 ?% z/ T/ W<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; r; E1 B- A  K: A( T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 n2 o3 c+ z6 }8 {* H  D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, J1 M3 G! x+ x$ M7 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* v! ^. S. ~/ [. |# c5 R, q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ q( l# q6 V' C) J) J4 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" _# x: f* I6 u, X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 p) c' H$ |) |, ?3 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# a; R( v* @2 X7 R$ N5 A5 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 {- ?* B' G1 t1 j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 `9 f' \# r. b5 [2 M" M4 _, Y: D! B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; A5 U5 D, P% P5 x, F8 Y+ c/ c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' x6 E7 A& M* M7 I  Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 B+ }+ G; J+ l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! t) ^% G( V* P" r( V! T5 h6 Q" X0 d' m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 a6 C: w; _( a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; ^- L/ C) u0 |, N. y0 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% Q3 k$ H  f* Z7 U7 D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. h4 m/ Z' d+ X, m8 F6 t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; o+ {" P! f# H/ ~' c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# V5 H: A+ d4 u2 k) B8 K9 M! W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 ~$ k( {! @; C6 g9 w& P7 h  t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# B0 j% E1 L5 M$ |$ l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 l7 F' N* ~5 n6 x0 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; [# D. V2 R' d+ b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 H% D( a! y( V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; ?4 @* A, T* B$ I9 _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>