【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# y0 C  ~% G( u8 N& [. H, D7 j3 Z, @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 _* X" N1 z; d9 D7 n) j# _' ^/ N4 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 e1 Z# W1 x) mI already loved you with all my heart
+ J3 r* g/ z% U: f  VWe meet and talk everyday,
! T- D1 F2 }+ |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ u. d0 b& p& e5 o  \/ l) O# MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 Z2 Q2 f2 w8 M7 W/ {2 Q7 cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 U8 n3 u/ H& u  Y$ _* g; \; FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, x, Z( o' e% {7 h- WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ ?/ h' F% ^0 K3 nWhy is it so difficult to express?
! W* \8 H! _/ O% e; x: R" Q2 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: a6 O1 R4 }- t' {, j- qIf today isn’t too late,
  w$ ~$ p- n( \! ^. W1 a0 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( V  t8 C: p8 s0 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# e' U# X& E) W: i3 JEntrust my love within your heart
: T# G/ I3 v" z4 c% JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 b: _1 F* g2 X8 y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% P" X% Y) b9 h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, ~, C! W1 b4 n1 q/ T: y4 ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' J9 q$ d6 y0 N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- Y8 _3 ?2 i+ X: d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 {- t( Z% p, t0 y( _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- l8 M; _9 A7 K, [% u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 v) \3 w/ F/ \' u% v$ ?( Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) g  Q" ^7 F* G! b0 x. n! D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 C2 n: R) X3 C/ [  C; e1 l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 \* A' c$ L6 B5 I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 ~1 m9 a5 S' c7 A' t6 e% N/ H  J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( m' w# T; \$ S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 M' \9 f3 U% b$ N( K2 O  V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ M& r: a8 p! [5 `  f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 J( x. \1 j0 N. H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, \: {. d. {* }# [5 r0 i* S<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; K5 F# c2 T( O) v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# G! ~. a3 |6 k  D- A# h: x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 a( e+ `  ~5 n" u2 r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: |' n6 W1 ~4 k, A5 i- |7 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& ]4 |& _( u: \$ @$ M2 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 V" t( ?8 e2 R7 }& y+ `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 D7 K' R4 n' Q' w! Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 V0 i6 W9 ?! q+ Y9 M# c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- E; k% r  {0 L, q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 D/ g( y9 H( c6 T$ ^  Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 g' x6 |8 \  n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>