【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( a# [5 W. F$ yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# [3 z0 u3 x1 Y, _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( V! T* R, ^, d7 s9 s8 dI already loved you with all my heart
1 T# i+ F/ }: yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. u2 ?% g. V& q  F) X4 v( oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( Q+ y0 v: }1 _2 q* E: U: AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 m( g0 \  C$ T1 q5 Q- J( O+ b: oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 I0 }, b7 k, h2 u$ @9 v  z6 SCan I entrust it to you?
0 [9 j; W' F+ ]) I, K$ f4 fEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- ~2 T' F7 w. w/ G6 b  WWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 ?9 b$ q/ h  nI want to confess that I love you,
% I. x8 H; \" b/ z( _But I never did
  D4 w, B+ g& g3 X( `8 O$ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! r6 Y' \# f" TIf today isn’t too late,
& l3 F" K, s# QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 E5 ^' f0 N8 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 x0 W" `5 A  K, j5 XEntrust my love within your heart
% U$ ^3 p. u% g3 [! z7 d! B4 ?) B9 ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 ^$ l  P% U; f9 U$ Z" t( U# B& W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ |1 ?5 s( d) P3 Q" j. C* ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. H7 U! m2 p  ^/ M+ s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 c0 ^9 y* F' b$ G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 k* C: Y6 k4 O4 \8 Y( K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; ]+ i$ i/ N1 R7 ^' F) E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 x6 M0 K! p( G& y. W1 @, D- c4 S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 ]& f( Y, x4 K* s5 v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 g4 L! H* q  D9 a1 h: x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- o( C+ J# ^' B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" [5 ^' D6 l4 H  t% x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) D5 T. r$ a2 {& U* N- _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- c7 x; a5 T7 b0 d# T<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. j$ }8 O8 ]+ J% q" _! i* r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& R5 j) J: r; d! M! ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& u% z: U, r. G; l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& S! \( e# t# g: T! _3 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 y* w2 o* d7 Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# w. o, C/ P2 k; g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 a/ j4 ?1 N. p- B) C<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# {1 |: {4 x4 {8 Q8 d, }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ K+ _( h* V& w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! j, V2 {5 |4 S- a( c: O0 [. a3 U: H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 B2 M2 v8 z2 |7 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ Q! U3 |' q8 A) J9 V8 j9 x. F/ k9 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& T; i8 ?4 q6 J& f& i4 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  H1 O7 Y" f) q( y; E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- |0 r. y# I- Y5 f  _% }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, N. [/ B; J; c$ i* O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>