【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; L2 d, s( j( a" n: Q  J' G  @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& b* {3 \1 b% H/ Q) OI would probably know how you feel
# w  K: C' b' _2 D0 @" w: A4 y+ HLove… just the word love
1 C1 G7 N+ W. [7 A/ w5 y2 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
) a, i. Y, a- F3 NI want to confess that I love you,
$ T& Q$ Q$ v$ ]3 P0 p+ A/ N7 C5 d, v/ aBut I never did
6 Q7 A: Z, m  c* f  G: }9 J: V/ BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  e4 b! M- z1 P. w& s- {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, [, j# W0 g. f/ fEntrust my love within your heart
& u3 X9 ^3 O# kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 Y* I! G0 ^2 L2 f- X9 U3 xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 G, R+ f( p+ p3 f. NCan I entrust it to you?
  B; Y% q: C  ~+ z* N2 W, H) X. I5 l/ aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% m2 ]' \+ S# w, D, a( eEntrust my love within your heart
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* i5 q/ E6 b0 B, t! P1 i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 O' h# Y# E  e! V) \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 a0 c& Q  s4 N3 g1 r+ I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 S' ~3 [) V- t& w' A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 k- n: R* d7 f4 k( y9 p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 ?/ c6 W* S2 |8 t+ r0 h' e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 T5 l% K; N- ]% r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. g4 [0 a& C9 |) c7 I) v( i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% A; P9 b7 t+ a/ t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: V5 ~) S7 T! `( V* q4 f. t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 l# S( x/ M; b- L2 v  u* F9 e- e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- K5 o2 r" ?" I5 R6 r; A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; F3 t* i5 D9 F% P* M9 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) y( Y4 _: x" Q7 |( _& t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ |, a' J  b, x$ B3 W: c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 X! x6 V& [5 x" e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ m; Z; D9 i! ~% J8 c3 y  ?3 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# F, j- I1 E  Q3 w7 F8 J$ R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 {$ F% e; S! k3 E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! k4 k. K. k& d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) I6 |) }1 _& i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ p" h" S! f( z+ R, d/ \4 b9 E& K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& V5 i! ?1 P. j& K+ b: g# X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: `3 d! @- _2 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 G8 X& F% Y9 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" G/ e5 D3 N  h! M% R% G1 M1 |3 C' {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ K& U, U# t. O9 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  I4 m, N+ ]/ y; A2 B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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" R2 z) x  b( d" ~' g; M, D! m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) E9 x% I7 D( {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>