【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) e; `9 j8 g8 b2 r8 J2 }4 o& A6 ^
$ L- Q! g# s" a( O9 `我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* ^0 J6 i' B! h; jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 B  C& {3 K( iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 M% t% F8 j( l; q& c$ KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  @( ?6 I& H0 x7 V: P9 ^6 t. Y+ HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- L4 y! ]: o0 r* F! @# P. LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 W, c/ p, V5 @! BLove… just the word love
8 }0 c7 t" g0 ~& V: ~% P) D6 ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( x* N8 {0 R! T9 t& d7 |) H! c4 ?4 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 i. K' i* Z! G( W, n7 o+ \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, X1 O2 z+ \% t+ @) B; yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- q  _( Q& L5 U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" T. b/ _- U; H' K; S7 m+ f  H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 F+ z3 m2 ]" F2 t1 T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% U4 R# @+ ^6 q0 G4 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 U# l  T6 k- U$ b$ {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  V$ z: @% s6 Z' j0 B  V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 K' d2 ]% e+ k& d6 y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" K2 i" Q8 I0 P) x3 w* I- z9 I2 D; s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) f% p9 \& _% D" X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- u3 P; F/ I* k* z% m3 e' {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! `2 F6 G: T  I% A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" f, P4 \- y. |% L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* f1 P* z' K$ B$ }" x, l5 L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, V8 L, o" H) s, P  \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% Z! ?$ Q7 {7 Z9 {' W$ m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* d2 j7 ]  U: i3 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 F! J" q5 ^9 W- {# m# g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 _, f4 R, }7 |7 c7 z( ~/ s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 u! @& b6 ]) {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 i3 V" \* q0 l( O2 V, C  r1 c<P>But I never did </P>
1 o! S; m( f# }' `% d<P>但我不会 </P>
/ A+ y  u/ ^- j0 k6 F: j: ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 o& T) @, t5 z( ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# h3 o0 R' c5 y% `! z7 ]; c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  u) ]/ z2 G9 n) ]! b3 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 Z3 G, g9 c% T; G& Y+ F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* ?# p. l1 [1 k8 M1 N6 ?# E1 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# L; D  B% |! w5 Q0 ^8 K& @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" O# Y- y( A- q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 T" h& X2 C7 r/ [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# {$ c4 K0 M  W6 `" t# X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. Z, T$ {. F7 ~; v3 d* m- i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>