【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; E2 H" r( i4 r我另将歌词附在此。
% \# [  r+ U( z* L, E, Y; n  L; _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 j& M1 U* O# a6 ?( D3 ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 v0 [" a3 c' lFrom the first moment we met,
& y1 H. S6 r: ^; P, o4 g" J* OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. F! t" T* ^) F- k) @7 i) ~& tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 a' G# x' \- X; p% S! W- U  W" hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 O& r& m1 u# N: s  a, N! m, oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) p  |8 t5 D! L: b$ II want to confess that I love you,
- o% p5 r% z  B: O3 ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' j4 P/ `: J; F) ~2 e+ CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, R5 r: B+ Q3 e0 IEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 O7 b* a. m6 c1 O4 P4 ]6 R3 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* x6 ?( C) m: sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% T7 C2 i) X  u1 v  u; O% ~. OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% v& R5 S4 O2 \( j/ Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 E, p% r5 j% g7 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 w; n8 n/ Z$ k8 k9 V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" B* \; g9 R- a. L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 ]6 M" t0 y; d3 X, L; k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' ]0 m, U! r" b% {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ M2 I8 x$ H. V* B1 \' J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 ?& m) X& q$ H) x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 G& g4 c+ S4 ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( ^9 Z& ]$ {) n1 C. l2 o/ K& j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ a8 o. ]5 v* q6 W0 T; l8 J' Z. }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 g. D* o/ P+ R  s' Y* Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' G+ y  [9 r6 ]! [5 g<P>但我不会</P>
& v6 w/ |  }' l3 Y' R: g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ o& k8 S' l9 l2 h2 \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  L# m) c$ s- L! ]; N5 ~  @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* _7 O/ E. f+ M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 A4 w" H7 Q7 D7 N& s+ [: z% F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- |, G3 ]6 S  U9 k" l9 c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ ?5 i8 w# Z0 X4 P7 \7 m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; ?0 I# p# L# Y/ v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' p$ D8 D* a. g' W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 @% T1 P/ M9 _7 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" G' z5 Y% U, \/ i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& k% G' P' C: ]: m: E$ d<P>But I never did </P>
- Y# q7 `$ K0 T5 q# G9 X- {% [7 t<P>但我不会 </P>
+ g: d9 j9 W  [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ x% r) D: \" s/ j. o  r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% E1 `& k/ x6 W* O" M" i  @: e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ?" ?" A# d3 V7 g0 R% A  ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; c* _- T# N* L) i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, g! W' p8 P* @; d9 F1 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' o1 O* d% n  y; Y% Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 S0 J- x9 Z9 ]1 j' z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& t6 t5 c: \/ @2 \) L1 p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ U, w- X* @3 i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>