【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 g5 e! ?3 s- m3 ]( q* o9 Z2 b我另将歌词附在此。
5 s$ {9 d9 s5 [8 }* U7 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ O7 ]4 z$ d4 C0 H) w: K5 P. HI already loved you with all my heart
: g8 H( v( ?' zWe meet and talk everyday,
7 ]0 ]( Y  @( l% B, o: rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 ^/ W; r0 J# _) \Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) _) ~' f, b% q6 [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- l( X" F& W9 z; q" M2 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# R# w2 ^8 O, Q( ~; M  m1 DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% M3 D2 N" r2 V- K8 x. [Why is it so difficult to express?
5 L2 q: }0 R) f& e7 U2 f1 AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) W2 U) V4 d2 q/ J+ POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 ^0 n+ r0 g* U; RIf today isn’t too late,
  ^; o. c+ C- O# nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; t3 F9 k' Q  z1 W! XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 h* s3 }. l3 }$ ~. u2 yEntrust my love within your heart
0 _5 T; B+ Y) J. E" r: eCan I entrust it to you?
% X- |; E4 I) ?# R- v4 x6 k$ P5 KEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 l7 P- B+ Q8 r- Z" H, A; g, P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ g- A; _- Z1 H: t2 F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 b8 {5 A! [( x! S8 ^- i8 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 _& j4 y. Q  e; E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, w  C1 F3 J7 T; a+ B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 Y1 k' N2 L% W  H) m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 _4 J- o! y- m8 r( O* {" X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 u) ]3 D4 O) u/ T5 {1 e<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 `! ]. U, d* H" j; i3 R. `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( O+ Q' W( }- j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- k& o5 P. d' L<P>但我不会</P>
$ o) b, g# y% B5 k0 |0 K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 r1 {5 _, e2 {1 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ O6 s  K4 r9 e3 s6 o# r/ s4 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 F* j# c% \3 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% q% @5 [0 Z$ q- j6 x1 G% n  O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# H& e2 P/ N# w3 m- C9 J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 ?9 d! l+ V0 f1 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 x: p0 J  [' w: J; U3 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* q; }2 F5 l/ k" I8 U% Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  G# [. r& R. Z6 P2 J; S5 J) _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% n- K5 }, _" o" W; N* U. J<P>But I never did </P>
6 H9 W$ O7 O2 v- ?0 l7 k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 I" C# Q( @5 k0 [0 y* e9 G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% H4 T1 G5 ?# Y/ \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* h3 g& }* |" y1 s; Q  n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ @+ J. R# U0 H. Y8 k' V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 Y1 t: g. ?( j0 M3 _* R6 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 w# Y  Y5 ~/ ~1 w' R7 _) `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' i0 ~1 Y0 ^2 R/ A& I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 L0 A5 i/ C: \: D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 W5 ?& A6 G& I( C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>