【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 h! o% Q6 s, K我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ P0 p, k4 k- Q" f& kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( ?* Q9 H$ ]9 o+ V" i6 kI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 a/ p! |% q' s$ ^  ?( RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- z: E  M) m; O# {0 ZI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 ~/ t+ |! d/ n: ?% e* XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% w* v# N7 h6 h( J- n2 U+ W& JIf today isn’t too late,
  R0 n2 v; Y) r- W% x8 x  dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ g' M! k) Y5 U/ D8 HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! e% t2 O( W: o1 T& FEntrust my love within your heart
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, C+ ^8 \# H1 a* G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 H( Q5 B* U# {* m2 z3 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( v; |4 u  z7 \7 j4 T  N% X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: e& c8 `* q; j; v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. t) @1 |7 r+ H2 _5 V) N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ d( E0 |/ b/ A; A: [7 j) f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 {# v& `* {1 W3 Z! Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ s, M8 X) }0 n: ]! [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 v0 \  a* c/ a4 \6 F8 |% R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% i' r+ d  E$ u, o2 g' D% w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 \0 Y- r/ P, ?( U+ \<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 D0 ]" l# [0 Y" p4 r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ e% m$ u, t/ r( G9 M8 o3 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 }' g# K0 R) L. j# d2 j9 }3 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 i$ o- m  d$ ]: k% b6 j$ x' x3 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ ^0 Y# Y3 [3 C! `/ M, j4 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! R' y( I  h& E! K2 E) v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ G3 {5 D6 l9 k( F8 W9 T9 F' ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, u2 D& t! B$ q* w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" d$ f7 n- o% g# ~5 [( S: v2 i; D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 O# c, @" d" e0 o6 h3 s! `<P>但我不会 </P>
% j# w6 `  c/ Y8 ~* T- c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# ~8 u! Z3 H( x# ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 D. ~6 @4 C$ ~! g3 p( a3 @0 l6 _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, T8 k) M. z4 ~' H; b- d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 O" R0 k  M: s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. B' ?3 s& F& y3 ]$ E* j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 G2 d* g# }8 v1 ~, _; F* n5 c% e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. v( t5 r% t- W! y: F/ V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>