【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, N/ [9 ^4 ?5 h8 z. S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  G! M4 g1 h- c# }We meet and talk everyday,
5 b, S+ U4 {4 `+ T! OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, V9 j/ Y0 i* {. b; n' e# ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 ^$ ~# r: G4 L& `) Z# GWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 a& Z( T8 K: t5 YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 N; e! e* V1 |; A  u: v! a( Z6 jIf today isn’t too late,
; L; P" j1 M( E, b" ?! m5 n5 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) t0 M: F6 h5 N! d2 P* c# w" zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, T- ^- r' r  S+ I: [, Y" T: |# ?# GCan I entrust it to you?
+ `% X9 `9 A5 |7 M/ a& {2 a! u/ j3 B6 |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  U! g* H- T& n3 E1 K1 ~& WBut I never did
0 I! b! `# _; s0 g0 a# zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. F+ Q/ z4 R; I5 }" @If today isn’t too late,
# ]+ W9 }4 X! u; ~5 }7 K- x" gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 n# b& U7 B* c) l8 V, c+ LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 M* Y* i# t0 l9 ~0 ~Entrust my love within your heart
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0 F! w' T* x  {$ [. y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 _( N: @" W' w/ o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 m5 e3 k9 |0 M0 {/ }% ^0 m/ \, ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ _( R  L& L* j( M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 Y4 ^) J+ @1 ]0 m5 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ a2 n- `- u7 y. c/ h- A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 a( R  I8 z. ?; Q/ W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- z: Z& d8 P3 ^+ g$ C- o9 h. X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! ]/ C0 k: ^, L: _. _1 R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 r/ \" B/ [7 H+ I$ l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' J% S: L. E% r: x6 E0 t6 u- a. z# U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; y* n/ C1 E( I' S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" E* s# C9 h; C! P; J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' g7 ~" h' m6 k/ y/ x3 a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: k$ I) i9 s- y3 w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 `& i6 y* A3 e<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ [2 e3 c7 h- F& F2 B; X$ }+ T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 b0 y5 C% w3 o- [4 N2 R# l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 u( h2 F) A4 R' L3 y6 I# Z2 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; @, R& p( T1 r! @0 F0 C% ^, \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 G" k5 f+ R1 r" |6 I9 t" g. d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 a/ _$ Z9 J% @3 {% P; _% W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. T% }' {  E- J8 U$ W8 X5 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 p* u5 j# P! d$ e1 F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 n$ R9 X: w7 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 T) l5 n& ?; {# p9 j5 F: `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; G8 ?1 p9 D5 b" {6 d1 a$ ~0 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# K2 _- W# `3 K6 N) L* J, u& Q8 @8 ]1 T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( A3 Q8 @# D) @  r! |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% y! ]) n9 {. ]) d, V2 B4 d2 b! J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! S) e0 m" v5 {; s- e! h: {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- |9 e  C: g& F% A) m8 [6 ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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