【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 A$ |% U4 V3 x- N. h2 W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 k1 U; f- K3 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 X& X* u* O' p. v/ ]/ NWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# m. r- b* T  g1 r9 R# R* wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  k& O& j% B7 b" j: dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' l1 l* D* i9 D. i6 eI want to confess that I love you,
6 Z) Y! D' I, l) lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: i8 D3 x9 e# a7 A2 h9 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 m3 \2 ?% j% GWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 D3 r8 a" y2 i6 PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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Entrust my love within your heart
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! a2 H' W# V% J8 y: e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ ^8 S* q% L( K% j0 b: M& t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 a) K2 s2 ?0 S" s* c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' C' s) a4 k8 J' ~3 c) @! j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% X( K: S: G/ _9 n7 O0 H/ V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% Q$ S5 y* w2 ]5 r2 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 U! N, n8 N! u4 y/ `6 M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" i; _9 n- p' S. K* Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ Z6 @( Q  v! K1 y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 \, z0 K8 c8 X- l+ X6 O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& L) D) h2 q6 g0 n, Z4 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% W  i4 j" o  n2 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 ]& e. j# Q1 c7 W; U1 \* V5 b- o1 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& E5 K6 h& Q1 b. H6 p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 z: }$ Z$ V* q" ]4 H* M8 g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ i8 ^  L. r8 `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! g( @8 E. b6 `7 h7 A/ \+ s5 [* v# ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 W6 f* ~7 j5 @% i/ r0 A; B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. ?  G# j5 N1 B/ s) C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, u/ Q1 Z; H3 n$ p  w$ k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ?1 }4 R4 V; g' i0 p5 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 t* t, t; J0 O$ H: I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ c0 J6 P5 o% g, Y: I! L0 c3 C: z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# G7 e+ }0 }; q# Q9 k( o/ M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>