【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 m1 T* P. {+ U5 `5 y3 L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" k" B% h  c" M( _# e! r1 O% AFrom the first moment we met,
$ G5 `' M+ F  p, H; n/ @I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 t: m+ |5 f2 ?% k  J2 ?# {: M6 q4 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. L: p9 _. m; {/ sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& g1 K/ J9 ^& A* w2 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 Q& N, j, j& k& _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 n6 s8 u5 d3 L: N: N2 vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 f+ Z: o6 S2 z# T1 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. l) `5 T6 _% q! XEntrust my love within your heart
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3 z4 A4 J9 k$ Z" T; h% D. u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 i1 j6 m' ~; c8 W8 q+ t  J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 s3 u( i# n0 H6 `8 [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; Q0 ~! ~) Z+ h9 O9 j( U( e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" s) W9 W  o( g+ J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 i; o- K; S2 @( M+ A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# Z3 q2 N* [1 w6 _, }* g<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- w' z2 s; o$ [9 D3 V) |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 }3 N+ V1 ^* }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& K4 m7 Q! g0 l5 |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) B8 w) G2 g$ P1 i) e3 ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* w7 l  f" F' S<P>但我不会</P>
  G6 n1 D7 {( n( s6 K- ]1 o) S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: K7 _2 J7 \, g0 h' u, t) x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- p' N) `& Q, L+ q& h" C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 g4 N3 Q& g2 g/ s$ U( K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 ~, w' v2 H; n6 g+ ]* N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% t' |1 \, _5 T, c: p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 \4 Z! d/ P7 [" `! I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' G/ N6 H. w) x/ z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 f/ u& K' ^9 J7 e! R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; I9 {) I4 F. o4 _- P$ @9 o/ J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. ?1 y7 H, M/ `1 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. q3 ~$ m# }1 s. n) [/ n$ R4 b: |2 d: T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' F  Y( ^# G7 n. S, q  K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 [* l: E4 F! {4 h' x# ~4 U, t6 u2 H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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% r6 o4 G5 j5 }* F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# Z$ ]+ X7 Q3 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 {1 N2 `' k4 X9 J  \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 s. k, W% ]+ n8 D5 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ d0 R( x) ^" D2 i" f- o% }7 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ a' e. b- u( `4 W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, V% m) f% f; J; p5 z. Z3 H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 `' _7 R  f' w2 u% o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ P+ h  W1 U* Q/ C1 u8 b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>