【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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& L7 L3 c7 L+ n, m4 \/ E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, r' Z9 R& t! _/ z, _$ R, SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% \, g  @: w) YWe meet and talk everyday,
5 ^+ P0 f% p1 B! h# gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* \: l4 u+ R# OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 H6 F# r. i: b* h( DI would probably know how you feel
# z1 e/ R& }3 C. i$ T  kLove… just the word love
6 v. d2 J7 o; B( ~' a( `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 Q" ]; L6 a) x1 i6 k  eIf today isn’t too late,
! d* k8 M  N; II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; G7 U: v" f% D! f& ^4 V' AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  c8 q, {( @2 n( b* O2 b8 ]( i7 W# XCan I entrust it to you?
0 \4 l+ O. e$ VEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 X# B+ w# J* x% x. i+ S6 s' bI want to confess that I love you,
& a; x5 N6 ]$ }+ p  a( Q+ uBut I never did
) o3 H/ e/ k- {5 P9 b; Z' OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 i6 U9 ^, u. R/ H. L7 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 t- p! R- ~: O( {8 \2 o- mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  l3 Y/ @$ x9 \/ nEntrust my love within your heart

% m  @! Q8 Z# P5 E1 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 }( r, d% I/ Y0 F  ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* W1 x% R+ P6 [. ]) \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 w' v  T, o0 ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: {& h8 d( v# B, d4 s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 M  t- T8 {2 ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 Q2 K5 W) c6 `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ \0 h* `/ j( {5 }6 ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: K5 M7 [3 n% n: }, }; |% N& p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 ~: c  d5 l$ r. U3 \5 G, _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" t5 A( t2 j/ Y6 Q* p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 f0 Q' c. \2 @( `& ?2 Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 K. Y: j# ~  c: J* P* m( B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% A( G6 X, ]' p/ H. Q8 T. O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: N8 f1 L% p' ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: J/ ~" ~! e! x! Q3 K2 ^5 b# ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 n4 |, ~9 A6 B- X' r6 n, |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, k$ E1 w$ [2 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! R3 b* n4 M4 d* C: o# m: w. Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 y2 E) f; j' {5 ^2 T6 w: _) @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 H0 D4 g1 X8 }( z2 L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 ?# r4 z/ f# ?4 G3 {4 E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- o7 U0 ~% n) z5 j; Z+ a/ T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 F+ I' @3 p3 {- A0 B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) I+ |" Q: w% n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 `" z) c4 `% I0 P4 Z  z) j0 }/ P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 z5 ]! t# ]6 H* V+ `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 B- F, z4 K3 n  N% v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ |4 Y7 q5 d* u) ~$ X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 o( [/ q3 d2 h$ G  ?: k, O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 p5 y& q5 D1 N& [) s, \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ i7 d6 }( C  c( h% c% V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 `* \/ P: J& K  w  V; n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 l- P8 m" E: G% Z2 r& ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: K" c$ k+ q6 j5 x/ x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" x7 \0 U/ ^4 T  D2 v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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; I7 \% T' h7 I% M  w; M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ {3 y4 |9 p. U1 C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>