【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- p3 J3 D, X+ j! M& f! `& L- l1 V- e我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) F6 G9 |' ~; }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 I9 M+ }$ a; _0 E7 t9 ~) S& T3 F: P+ UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 O# t' |# o. N+ J8 T7 bI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 Q3 y0 v5 e4 \$ P  UWhy is it so difficult to express?
! l# ^$ M$ N9 Y0 dI want to confess that I love you,
7 L5 b  ]8 ]* G0 q3 V0 p1 BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# M+ w, L! ]0 K6 H/ NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 |% Y- f/ ]0 ?+ Z" ]3 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. L% u- z- H# B! M9 l2 L4 p! W% bCan I entrust it to you?
, @7 k7 N6 |) WEntrust my love within your heart
) w$ I' r- f# @3 Z: N$ |4 QLove… just the word love
" l6 V" u% L" F8 r! }Why is it so difficult to express?
: l3 Z, l5 v! UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* s, m" \: }) D7 a$ hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! M) R" @0 x' N( T: t% J9 Z$ VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( o1 L. b( H4 d0 C1 `2 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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2 R0 m# ~' C! [- J2 o" ^* n; F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 A3 Q0 e5 w4 f# U( ^; e: r: b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 K: G/ y0 ]' j* E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( X) ^$ N8 r9 S3 k1 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 \( T5 W7 K9 x0 D: o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 t3 t/ \& P! K- Q1 Y7 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 c  |) ]* j+ I  O( w" `" k4 x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 ]% f8 r; y0 x: P6 G  n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# p, L9 P7 B0 v' W; c* A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 a, O3 }* U5 I2 ?+ \5 k* H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, E4 M2 |' K/ i1 l7 `6 S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 d- b5 `# M7 p' b& r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ P. J2 p" c8 E; A2 _' A0 X- [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ h" O; s& V, l" o: S" q  Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; I0 f3 K" M6 F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 ]' J6 K7 H# r2 r; E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 l: H; k! z- L) M" ^& _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 o' B% |) j: K" b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. Z$ B% e' ?1 K, t+ r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ H# p. h. X$ Z! R; J0 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) K+ Y; y2 O( K0 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 t  e& a2 i) b% m) S+ R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! D9 D* d9 `8 s: V9 o! Z, g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ ^  ^8 f5 N4 J/ E, [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% {$ S7 Z% R& }5 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: Z6 {2 l7 I! v7 H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 ^3 t/ m( E( N; g5 y* I4 h. a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  P6 V+ T+ j5 l+ J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 m( |% w# p5 [1 {& u6 U0 {/ z  _) S' h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. a( d5 Z! l) B, ~6 B' b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>