【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 @/ m4 U8 s$ S; u) J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  I& L; X) N) T$ M7 jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 ?! F# c8 s, Q9 _I would probably know how you feel
9 r3 n1 s$ @5 D* p' WLove… just the word love
/ f6 W* b" f) ]* EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 I& G" u. l1 U* w# cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ A3 w0 g$ m; G4 S4 D- EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- F- h7 Z5 N% x! h/ LEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% ]$ _" `* j# g; l, NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! p7 Q1 z, u) H4 lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' E4 K# ~8 `, B5 ^& a9 ?6 Q3 C( mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 r/ l4 \* r! j* T9 CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 X: E! a! m3 ^- L
. ]5 y( S2 j* G0 g9 ^: L0 e" [9 x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 r/ I0 r5 ?0 K8 g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 ^9 [1 [, Z" e  w( c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 o$ G$ P9 r' W3 q3 d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 l# g5 l# t2 d# f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 b9 \! ]( ~6 i  q' h5 P; p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* m  n2 a5 a) C& j5 t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: i# X7 x  L' z% I, [- z  B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: D& U$ Y" ^' R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 F9 d) e- c2 ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# ~. c3 R$ m, t( Z3 `* c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ q' `4 h1 b/ I5 @+ T9 c7 k# ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% V- w. u9 j, m3 p0 y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 v9 O9 O0 L9 A0 i4 V5 @0 t9 I1 y6 z/ P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ ]6 @: Q" \/ a% }: J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( G- i6 |$ |8 G3 U7 M+ j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, {; W; }7 h4 G# q) H( e: g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! r" p6 ~& s3 m2 e, W/ D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" L% l" c" I0 e) _9 Z8 _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% J' l" @* }1 P* ?4 ?& [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( ]# t( }5 J- k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 V" p" ^/ I8 Z  z- x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 v- n  }( g' }4 |  u# A) a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- x- k, A- p) J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ |  K% s" a8 {* Z7 M. ]<P>But I never did </P>
8 A. U0 E' ^/ F  ]<P>但我不会 </P>
( d& F. X4 B0 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( ^+ }, r6 f9 ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 A8 Z* r2 x8 H6 [- L! p9 E& ]1 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ^* |; v# g9 s0 h8 a. U0 {2 ?3 \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. ^7 f( a& I7 D3 _: h& q4 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ Z% D+ f3 L2 m3 `. k, J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 B, E1 r- @& K6 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ ~, T( @- I. o8 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( l( V7 r* ~4 e( w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' g% d" u8 x6 x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% \. v0 Z  I, d& u, `0 U: t5 [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>