【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 H6 Q0 y5 A% f+ W. N8 j, p我另将歌词附在此。
2 S8 }9 H* c' ?+ c' f" vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) T, |7 C9 m# s; i% YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: L% r- ]1 h. aI already loved you with all my heart
8 B2 Q# d8 E& p1 X, qWe meet and talk everyday,
" z' V3 o) k4 l' `, I) u0 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 }- v. }+ \' W6 R! z2 }- T' H: cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 F- ^* G& P5 W2 W7 FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 @* w8 _1 m# ?. D$ f# Z/ PI want to confess that I love you,
/ e* ~, m* R1 t, p8 M8 k$ R) I- Z* P/ KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: S" N  s# ]. R$ _% S) fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 e. V7 s, N( k9 G/ z9 `% V% `- wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, ^7 P1 @) @. f) r( \, Q2 B5 KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) @7 v; Z& _1 v* I7 |& }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( P" S- r& i: ?% X# _Can I entrust it to you?
. I8 N6 Q- x2 c5 c# K& P0 ?6 Y' b6 {Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) U& J0 R" U( E2 \9 v, F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ U3 c7 z# ?# u# d7 L+ f7 b* L+ z. S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  S5 T" U$ T) @0 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: H; ?! ?9 }; N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' ^( U- U7 f, o) C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 X4 p! L8 n7 n5 R# @6 g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& \. P$ r3 _& t' h% H* z8 ?; K& k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ k6 \  s6 i" e& e0 e, W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 ]2 Q: J# j4 h! `% t2 ]. Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ z" f/ E9 L9 a, L6 t9 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 Q. w) R$ d9 b9 \) I1 t<P>但我不会</P>
; ]0 `0 {# {8 B! E, N5 ]) [8 T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! ]3 a1 b- J# Q% b0 u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 A! m2 K2 p: X+ h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* h1 e" T  j0 @9 h- w; O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! D3 Q0 @' S( V: e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 D! K% b2 D7 _; d! |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  g7 v6 u" I  I& X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% A0 y) u6 Z( [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! F8 s# b) ~% e0 g' ~: L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 _* Z  n; `$ x$ ^" X( p$ f6 R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* G9 S0 X' e0 `' ^: z0 i8 ]: r! n% _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) a+ L1 u: ^6 L# {% G+ n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ ?5 M: ~$ ^6 u: y7 H6 k<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% k* E" ]! G7 l: U0 t% d9 F( j4 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  e0 K, l- n2 T3 d' e  j; I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 I: e6 H+ v  P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" U7 k; m0 M7 \& ]3 T5 T2 Z' e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 z' s& C. z& Y  j' r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 _+ A( Y( e! I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ P% r: x: I6 `; S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) W- g7 B, ]+ ?' L/ ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 J& v0 \  I8 A$ a6 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- N: @; N( M/ E# z8 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 R) C3 _+ i) A6 n4 L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) I- m! n- b5 ^+ L. @9 y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ [2 k" C4 |8 {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) T& ^& `- S- k; u( d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" H" X+ N! P, H! [9 A% s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>