【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
- D# k$ l, p1 _1 B- m7 L0 }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' P8 E0 k5 G# x% iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: x) b! h! U# {& q# @I would probably know how you feel
. P/ B( B( _7 SLove… just the word love
* C. Q7 A3 ]/ x1 @& k# ?/ h" J* S' IWhy is it so difficult to express?
# H' V6 ?3 h1 E8 z; ~, I* iI want to confess that I love you,
  p5 a+ U( z* Q8 e6 n7 \# kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 M1 m5 _4 p# P5 ]& gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 W/ E- h' v( U3 R7 nEntrust my love within your heart
  [" J0 S3 m; |3 q4 L7 t' I( _9 b% ]Love… just the word love
3 f+ t, I% p* r6 Z$ |Why is it so difficult to express?
$ r: s8 w7 }6 c  ]4 ~I want to confess that I love you,
) g) J% C! _8 ?  [But I never did
; v7 t( ?" \; B0 N% A3 w; BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 Y2 |7 D! R3 Y! U" I: a# wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) Q/ l9 O9 ~2 sCan I entrust it to you?
  p* K7 b) |5 |: h5 GEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) ~& `4 l. t4 A6 s9 Z$ o/ UEntrust my love within your heart

. p5 X) ]; X7 E8 L+ w2 }% Q& w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 P$ ?) u2 m6 v* F* X5 ^" _" y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, x3 C3 S3 K# C. z" K2 u& n. ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# r5 x* [/ G, f7 }' P! X; v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 B( e! \5 j6 s' X! ^. w& H( S- o3 [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) {# K0 l. F7 R; a6 G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 m3 B, M4 b6 B6 k7 L9 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 O0 n# m7 F- u2 q, Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" e4 O$ Z9 L1 U* h& X1 o  F/ c& r6 V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 ?4 @* @( w( {5 K$ n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: H# i3 n: G5 r4 `# h/ n5 h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 l3 Q) F% d, u# B; Z% h<P>但我不会</P>
6 A4 w: o, r$ B- f# @, u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- j. I7 U7 K8 n3 G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 B1 {0 N1 i; b) k3 V7 n+ `4 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Q8 t! w5 T  u+ u4 ^8 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# T8 o/ t& v2 F8 w. o. h% U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, M2 Y. b4 F' F) g) q9 |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 q. p6 S0 I+ t- S* q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' ^. ?/ \9 _5 v0 y  v, Y# V+ {+ B& Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# ]% Z/ ?" r" d1 z7 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& N$ e8 f1 d* i, t- v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% Y% r( E0 f' N$ A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 b$ R+ [4 v  g8 b, }! b3 ?8 K8 R7 }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 B: O7 s7 l$ e, c+ X3 y/ @' ]* a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" y/ s/ E3 p+ |8 U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, s2 V* d- y% Y9 f$ C8 b8 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  f% n& a' v! p* q/ ?( z( D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ?. @" p3 V$ C$ g% l& V" r; E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, v, C8 r* w. |# y, u: e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) S) M7 y5 ~0 Y  q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>