【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
+ f" W9 H' N" S3 `9 `% z" J6 [; UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, h; u8 ]/ E5 Q  o6 }( F& jFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 f0 ~8 ]% b* V( wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# ^# f3 _' F  {" J3 p1 X0 I" tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; |( Z7 i6 L$ T0 T$ P8 ?% XI would probably know how you feel
: Y8 T1 w" S9 M8 Q+ H  JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 R7 [4 e/ |5 {; |6 E. JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' P+ i$ K, b8 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ ]6 ]7 a. `% UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; A. Z' @6 t$ T# x# Y( fEntrust my love within your heart
4 @. R" N) X0 N( c/ bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 E( G& ^9 k/ `0 |, IBut I never did
/ ]6 K3 A8 }6 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! j2 I1 _& U  m  t; F6 K6 h' iEntrust my love within your heart
: `/ `2 B1 ?- |Can I entrust it to you?
4 C1 ?! y$ |* x' NEntrust my love within your heart

' N' J8 y, n% ?. Y( s( t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) N# O% q- a! `' t3 {# V, V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 e% Z2 u: |5 I% H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: ?; D* d4 o% l- Y) B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) e% v( b; \  x3 Q# j3 T# p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 {( E$ n7 \% O; z* Q9 ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* P( o. @. b+ e8 l* G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( W8 A* ]8 }- o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 y% N$ S/ k/ c: P' |  C! D# t) g. B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ z. h( A& {; O7 K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) W  p# T: j6 B/ ?" [$ H7 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 S9 |2 q6 t$ z( i5 Z7 T  a# E2 k2 c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 ]+ [" a% n0 U# L9 K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! d9 v  j' w" [2 z/ ^" e! Z% `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ Z, {3 J. `8 a' p2 E2 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 p" q# T9 M! N* x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ ]/ J0 Y  M7 P" `. _$ v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 r* m9 ~3 L8 e0 A! `0 f/ r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- t* W; m7 w# u; P- V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! t% }0 T: G7 `7 n* h7 F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 O" ]7 h. e; s7 ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: T& e" e4 y! u7 v6 r! v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" j  f' [9 `8 w3 S: z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' j5 T  z* S5 W; p" |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& g" K( Y, q, b" r9 c' m1 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! h' J& U3 }2 ?- z  ~6 e# ]$ M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 P5 K* y8 \) m3 j, X5 M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( ^5 s% U+ O% c  d' G: ]9 U 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 `# Q, O% Q; c$ M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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" L/ I' Y2 I  z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! a. w: [: l. Q4 k2 o$ @+ _3 h3 ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>