【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 A0 y" v# [: l" l& |我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  }* C7 f7 L$ B# _) W  h( bWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ m2 x5 X2 S  r$ {- D5 ^1 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ M9 D' F, _0 \1 o" GBut I never did
" a) G$ n2 ^. h; j- i$ [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* k( r% q" Q( k+ P$ E8 EIf today isn’t too late,
0 I# X- }9 [7 \, ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 g0 I- F% V0 G# j( m( _) NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ b+ q: v# i! i4 i5 p. bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ x6 t  N1 c+ Z# K  g0 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
) x$ P6 d$ i* @* ~. WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ^& o7 P% R+ I7 HIf today isn’t too late,
- f6 B; p, U) m; y: d- j5 eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- P1 i! \  F! Y: E6 W1 h, s, _, lCan I entrust it to you?
4 s+ K  f/ `# |4 KEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  ~( l, }) B, E8 c* fEntrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: W. ~3 A; E2 _! ?1 K4 i7 K# m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 o5 u9 h! f; B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, e- s- F/ N4 z8 U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( m* H. X+ }2 v' y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# A  q- J1 f0 I2 _4 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' x: X( G5 C( j0 z% b, {! \0 j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% E6 {+ K7 z# J1 L2 Y) P. T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 Y* r: S5 s; S" ]: n5 Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; }9 H# v& `  @: w8 W4 l7 u8 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. j: b$ z+ A# F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 P; X$ a1 n$ k6 j, ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( _' c; |, S( p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- O: n$ I# S4 {7 g& o5 E" Z<P>但我不会</P>
0 v4 V# H  k$ f; k6 H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 V4 e1 H9 R4 O/ a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( \4 p9 l% d# `4 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* E3 n# Y5 S+ z8 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ x' j# u: X3 r( u/ s6 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  c+ C" U/ |: S( y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- P4 L/ T! a$ d/ M& g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& U( A% k8 d! c* w* {3 O7 u9 N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 h, v6 ~. A0 }' I  D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' H. s* O0 `9 W7 ]/ Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 S% D7 @6 I7 V  b& l6 u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  p2 O/ c4 b8 I9 p$ q1 C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 J9 i, F  p3 A  L7 X+ @1 P  Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. `% Y1 }& h( _- u6 V3 u3 d2 a) b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 N* h$ |  A3 H* s1 M! O; b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 g- P+ _* u7 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 {, X5 V# D6 Z- M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 l% |" H$ z# S7 S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ N" M: K# m, E0 `" X* y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& P5 S: |; m; Y( }  X/ O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>