【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: I" f/ U7 a+ R我另将歌词附在此。
6 O6 u* u! X, M$ J: _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% U7 w+ z) e6 d  |4 x) BFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% T9 g$ b& X) x5 w- h. w- q! h( eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* F0 T6 v+ p3 r6 P( }% `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* i- z( }$ D9 M2 k2 \& n8 `I would probably know how you feel
1 \0 L/ C+ g# M$ W7 rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; l2 {- |3 f3 G2 h9 `7 h, p2 ?, m5 EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 ~  f0 j& J+ lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. v; F9 ]! q' O  _1 A2 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 _3 J9 L+ e# q5 m1 t- C5 {3 h( KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 h  O1 E, r  [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 u; ^) [* S5 c) Q3 q( LCan I entrust it to you?
: N0 X/ H7 C# [) @Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ H( Y& h- e! j' n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 z! h  N! L. u% q" S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 Y6 Q- f# g- A3 ]  E' U3 k$ E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 l6 V( w, L" B. R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% ]$ f; e' V/ V5 `  n* {9 a1 V( T8 m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! G- Q/ D' }# |$ L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% p3 I$ r+ j4 N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 A" l+ `8 v  R% c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* Z% Y  N+ J& `' F, ^1 \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% V9 W. \) N1 d3 _, d, P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 U7 G& h! U; h5 e! Z9 E  [5 \& p: ]' n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* V% z9 R) ~! Z- W+ y$ x: {6 s. \, M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 y0 H6 B- \( R/ Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% U5 v  M! d# `6 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ Q( P  z; c" w9 i- m. ], v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& H/ e8 k* f# j  W8 H- W. z. F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 u% s7 v4 x2 l. a0 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 l& _: }' [. P8 _- d3 w7 K4 I. c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 r5 C* q4 _* J1 o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ?1 Q; l0 B" q/ L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  q" L3 Y8 w! Y! j/ p<P>But I never did </P>
3 l& W2 S9 n  [+ b<P>但我不会 </P>
0 [1 u) w/ I$ S8 \( D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' \- M) U$ x  g6 j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 n. L- Y8 L5 `, _! J8 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 }7 C) @, r7 o/ h5 H  c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 r5 N; f' K% B5 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( I% {+ k4 u" E6 K) Z+ s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ _! y+ z. A& B+ R# v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- Y, t) R7 a8 E- K  N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 O! P' N$ |, N6 A5 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 x$ v# x' J9 [- K: ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 z  c  z! ]9 t0 c7 G( d( A! ~! P; F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 @# B" I6 U$ @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>