【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
, t) J' `% ]7 s7 ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( K$ I5 Q! K- _* ^" E* HFrom the first moment we met,
' k& c7 c( q; Z* W# k9 @$ a- bI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ O' B, p3 h+ J0 e2 X1 ~7 Q0 DI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% g4 c* ^5 U: s% a1 {. P% zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ @# V" \- ^/ m' L6 P( a( \8 |7 PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. c  \# H7 y8 fIf today isn’t too late,
7 h, c  q2 J% kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 z) s0 f8 F* uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  \+ a& d0 H- N* y4 i' LCan I entrust it to you?
% Z/ v0 w9 W, U8 t  ^% A* S% }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! A) D) }  Y1 K9 @; L* LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 G1 L7 \( w+ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 t2 Q9 C. y: O' vCan I entrust it to you?
" L' i1 a* [5 ~/ W% P; cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' [8 N+ h" F" `0 d4 j& N7 i- t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( T% _! ]9 \7 m9 A3 [! Z1 q( y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- [/ J$ ?2 i* R+ B% a6 Q$ }, l# o5 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ U& i* G$ t) w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ x+ I7 d' ]5 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 d/ ?8 h6 d7 R) ~; u: w0 ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 V2 }0 f# ?3 I3 s, h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 s& A% o9 p& o: x' D<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ _: z% D. [0 j6 d4 x; G6 J3 U; m, _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 n9 u  d" p; y3 C- I' T6 ~/ q9 S5 M6 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" X8 `4 w* p5 {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  w. M% ^- ~2 J' Z  p- e<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* C) P7 f3 e9 z5 S( y- \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 Q: P$ K, d. t( o1 w/ ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. _# i& }, `; s, c* A; v; D1 R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 n+ \3 F5 {/ C+ A- O3 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) z' w$ o/ r8 W) ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; g6 [/ j  ]  ?, [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( [8 E4 A2 ^) R6 k5 c, f. S# X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 l8 x# h' V) r+ S8 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 P, \% ?* ^& Q! l" \% ]+ n# [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 L4 R( z, R9 a# z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 m* ^% x% ]4 y& M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ p! W: _5 P+ s# Q7 R4 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 E. M* P6 u1 d! D* i* r" L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& `" o% a  S  l% r+ H1 ]+ L( g, Z9 |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 ^. o" J. p- V- |2 r! q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 B. T0 W+ t5 m& h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 S" m* _0 R) j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. r0 d% [- I3 ]7 Y; s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. X! ~0 v8 ^* l! L4 M- x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- i( r* q' g2 C7 u2 A) D2 D6 N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 j$ D7 o  \, v, w6 E/ {" W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 B. U8 ~8 @+ H4 k' B9 c5 ^; G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ ?9 |( J2 d/ H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' J6 R. C8 _. `( K& w4 s+ ?* Y/ x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" N8 z9 {) y& }5 V6 \1 j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# ?; X2 f3 e  x2 h; Q2 ^. I* t  R7 q4 [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* D6 z# U" k+ I' L! T! S6 {$ x- v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) W$ O# `4 }, z& Z! }- ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ P2 m! [: |6 R9 F: t4 W4 \- p6 N. d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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0 W5 ?% M+ N% ~. C/ N( t4 s( X<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( F; V! K" o  C7 D: _, Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>