【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, f; S' V, V# ]. L% }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 U) X& J5 s/ N% f. J+ FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( n0 \+ ?* y5 }2 L- u% ]From the first moment we met,
- i! x2 K) T$ dI already loved you with all my heart
. p1 M) b9 s+ ^) \$ I( EWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- e4 V. f" D) i* n+ QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 ]" F  b. q2 v  B6 s7 A5 A( vI would probably know how you feel
# J; l- F3 ^; @6 L* WLove… just the word love
; ^( z- N5 T/ _) ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: {3 @$ B: c4 c7 R" HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  b+ _: U6 y7 U# |8 x6 rLove… just the word love
" U: x# X  _. ?) ?& ^- n8 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
# g3 E* o1 _" T, W; n  m& BI want to confess that I love you,
% _& Z/ Z8 _8 @0 N4 EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ o( T: Z$ c8 Q' K4 N: iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 J: e3 c, F/ o1 z' tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 a) {8 U2 |0 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# a( G' C' t0 I+ K" B# M" e% P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) }5 D  K# E( I  w! I$ p7 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% S# ~9 A4 t; s/ C/ V) D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' h; b% y: B: s4 n' y7 l; Q  u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ K* U5 O2 V! H9 f8 R5 ^5 L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) k# C. |& r  \/ H* D4 G) c( W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' h5 V7 |" m- U7 ^6 [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 h5 c" A  p- @; P0 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) [! n2 l% i6 @6 T% N. I) e' k, k; @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 ?! v7 _+ G  z2 e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* M- ]5 L; Y+ x$ P( H- W; p- g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% g" [! k# ?1 Y$ z0 Q) N' L& b" c1 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; o+ k! A) r) R( O+ ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ?4 O4 y. b* j) d4 O: w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 b7 O- l& H0 H( W8 [- c: L5 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 m/ J, V" D' |- ?$ u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# Z2 m' a/ Z% Z. S1 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 d+ h8 L% y! J+ j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- A( ~) E. H9 f* [; q& Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, U* d# L  ]% d! i% L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 T6 m( i, k6 y+ T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 X* L+ d, Q6 B" e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 P7 u- Y% Z7 k( \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 d# Y# ~: K; p( x& Q7 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 W7 D6 S$ L9 f& v/ e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ t$ t* Q: g' c" Y. T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% \: Q) e" T8 ^8 u( N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' m5 r  I: I6 `5 c7 k& U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# M* k% y2 x# T* ~5 j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 x+ j1 W3 {1 ?, h1 t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* O- c$ x0 p5 Z. N8 {
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# B4 q8 D/ Z7 h7 `$ m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  P9 t+ u8 K% m3 W  t/ Z. W! X/ S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>