【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 A+ i7 z/ q1 {我另将歌词附在此。
; I) D& |, m2 `) ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) p, K$ t, A7 jI already loved you with all my heart
% S5 ?3 _5 c2 ]4 Z6 t5 k0 w: [5 y" qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- s& q! i/ y  b8 eI would probably know how you feel
5 }7 e2 ~3 v1 P7 @4 f- oLove… just the word love
% S5 \$ |# W; s, A  ~, C! _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( W0 J( H4 H6 l, N2 D1 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: U: I7 m5 t8 |6 n) a% ~3 XIf today isn’t too late,
9 g" N% ~9 D! b+ q5 o( y; O% X. H' [: eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ G" u4 ], a6 U0 V! [, q4 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 ^% l) @( l! `) S8 w" jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( Y9 [5 P( V4 r5 e! P! e) W1 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& U0 L& L: M5 I* QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# B' g4 u* @' m$ DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! }% ?4 m$ N; A, [' D: Y: l( B4 ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 t# R) {9 v: S! l. q$ A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; T; h6 I) g0 g! i) n& c5 S" l0 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ w* a+ ~, x! \( |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 I! |: u/ r: z8 H7 l4 S9 ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- j0 ]7 ]3 q' g0 `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# _" U) z, `- A3 Y( ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# }2 l) J" L$ l% Q3 o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( K* R9 W# Y8 }* C) O2 d! e8 G- {! m' i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 Q: [! C! R2 w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 Y5 I; L; z7 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! p; M  c9 ]) c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) D4 }0 }$ H6 J* @+ y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" Z) G6 ^1 h" W# j, q7 n8 e) n0 e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  o8 K' F2 K' X* R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  i6 j( Z0 a' X1 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' G- J6 j' V1 O% d3 V0 G/ R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ ^7 E+ ^5 x" K/ J' D* {  j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) S. r/ w" ?3 J5 U) Z; m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( V. N- r3 M, x2 S" u) w! _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ [" \! }* G5 N! s% R/ a1 _2 i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. {" W) x# y8 `4 m& C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 x% ]- N% J. s4 s. z* ?<P>But I never did </P>
( M$ A3 t/ \7 P% T<P>但我不会 </P>
+ P( X1 v, `# Z! u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# Z4 l5 q/ _2 b9 K6 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 K+ B$ p0 y" W. v$ Q4 M/ @: H+ N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& Q- U- J6 F+ x2 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ N& T  o8 d, M3 t, r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 \+ N( O0 B5 K# i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  N4 V. t) ]4 |5 l, [" n( c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 y& d4 v  R3 `. u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' K+ K  ]0 H" i; k( B3 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- {# _7 p" p8 B6 d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" O) D' J/ T+ }& ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 k& w: `8 @  A; {- a# f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>