【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! D3 u. n! N+ X# U3 r) [# EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 |* _0 f) i/ p8 K% TFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: G( b2 A& |6 T# n7 a2 WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 d" v  F* Z. r# B( SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 W( j  h) V& ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 {! B8 @  D) I4 J  i2 O) m4 E% w7 u6 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( ]. o7 L, B  z# h0 r0 Z# G1 I# QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; ~) z5 n& j+ ?& `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 s7 U- A$ \, U4 A' {  yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, M/ M" S2 O3 H" R! W5 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 y9 X. j# b+ |% u: c' o8 o) L. FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" R/ \* N& k- e  W5 F! y% u/ IEntrust my love within your heart
# H7 ~1 A, d) {% U3 ]- G# [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ |- S- V5 v) ^5 s/ I4 S" ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 X' T2 t8 p  o' V, p- y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ R6 ]% S$ M$ A/ _( d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% p$ P" }+ b  i3 ?; i7 Y) y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 p# a! ], N8 C) ]' R! u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- @) g# E8 Z2 B6 T8 t# d7 ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 L; G5 p' x. I& C% c% n  A4 s+ s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 f6 I2 {/ z- f7 [4 ?+ t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! ~1 U6 H; D7 W, G$ e5 o& Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ G$ f) x" D; q8 p( a& @$ H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% W7 w3 |# s  a& l7 I. _7 q' |8 ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% X  w5 K: B% E) `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 S" X" g- O0 [$ f6 n$ b, w! d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ W2 K' j2 ~8 ^/ r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) N. S9 ]- @9 _' g+ l# n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ Y+ T, u/ \2 P. z3 x" y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! }5 m4 y. H4 U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) Q$ z9 q0 L- S+ T( Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 H; `7 q  `1 c, G% t* t& H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ i! v5 H, d" C% x( l7 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 b: v# G0 j4 T$ ~# v  r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  i) k1 G) }% p8 s8 {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' v: B" C0 G+ D# m# C/ M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# s! }9 q, e4 M- l6 j2 n6 I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 d& F0 X$ T7 a6 y" o<P>但我不会 </P>
( ?, S, `9 _5 k* o! S0 V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; D/ X  h, v5 ?! F! \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, z  U$ y1 F4 B4 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% _6 V5 E. @, Z. i+ v- Q% k" J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 [$ u+ Q  i9 q7 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 h7 ?: k4 Y- G( J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ], Y: A' A! x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" Y0 n4 S' z" o, a% l& v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>