【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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4 v5 H" e; @; `$ I' |8 c我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# p; S6 V6 E4 S0 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& O/ L) A( u* \* A$ lFrom the first moment we met,
) f" A* S1 j: e# c' f5 dI already loved you with all my heart
' E  j# n/ t$ w$ A- f; I' EWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 O7 m8 n) \+ X; G6 F( Q  s1 W1 uLove… just the word love
9 K! i, ]/ N& A9 ~0 F2 B' t2 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ V& w' o$ Y& B5 hBut I never did
, x3 N: r; s4 P% U- K! T& T# LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 L2 s0 a; @# M; CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ H/ e1 Y% N3 E+ FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 Q/ }. p7 U, u( o' b9 ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& y' \: w/ y; o+ |I want to confess that I love you,
0 W. l, f' S' E  d1 l1 MBut I never did
7 t% q, j7 M) O4 bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 N0 i4 Y/ i3 z, w1 U! w& NIf today isn’t too late,
0 `0 d: }& p8 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 b5 e6 B7 v/ Z! {& |) lCan I entrust it to you?
- g, }" p( |; E6 _( EEntrust my love within your heart
6 B4 N1 ~$ Y( r& qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 i! A3 c4 Q( H. ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 i. R( c* T* L0 [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 v  T& T  n, O% i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* H5 u; c' G9 ^8 Q; C, h  Z! o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 \5 c7 ^) Q1 i1 n. `# y$ K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 n4 {$ o# X0 N$ q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ \4 W& _. ^3 i1 c/ D+ n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 ~; u9 T: c' M2 X; d: {! O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* m: c8 J1 L$ ^1 @2 m0 c" B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 h- |: H) @( g$ C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) ^6 A4 O* F" p7 r/ }' Q* B9 R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# L( Q* |! b  `/ N' X2 z* Y) \: A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ K% U6 k- G+ f5 |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& `) H7 w- v. \1 c) K* N- `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 H- @' {9 M( A: ~! V$ [<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; w' ~6 |' t+ H" }% j& x1 G1 C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, k! O% b# d7 Y' |/ l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 W+ G+ {1 y% `# X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& N% I. g  r9 R, ?4 ^4 E6 f% i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ h- A: g, a& t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" l0 L6 J% T* E, ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 a- e" N2 Y6 e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" N6 M% _2 s9 p: N% n# K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' r; K  H$ ]5 L+ W2 S$ j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ F+ Y; }7 ~  g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Z/ n# u8 y. s5 R" w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; n0 B. I) q" f0 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# C) |1 y$ R! t1 {( Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- j0 [6 |. @- N5 d6 Q9 |- K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( g5 q0 R) C; Y4 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ~  N5 j' T) a- S9 j% F; ]0 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>