【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: o+ w. C* L" I& xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# o5 ~9 m% O( `! {+ v9 Z) F! `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 B0 E1 U/ }5 JFrom the first moment we met,
; H1 I% E; a" d2 F& |* TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; }* @6 j) ]$ ]2 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( d) s8 \1 l3 f( f$ E" dLove… just the word love
& l- }3 X' C% HWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ i+ l6 i) R* s$ h6 H- lI want to confess that I love you,
0 G& R& d: B9 i1 e% \* L6 NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" Z$ w& N& D; F1 o: ~' ^4 aIf today isn’t too late,
# h% h. Y9 i% d0 i( T: kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 O* P1 s& ]6 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 \5 }  V& {+ f6 g' B! C, XEntrust my love within your heart
  ]6 R% N( v* n. a7 nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# g) Y- c* D6 r3 A& m; x! Z; ^1 wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! {1 w, o2 g& k! |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. O! j1 Z; @6 j5 ~- d7 i3 NIf today isn’t too late,
, b1 Q7 J0 C, hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; d3 B/ Q6 o6 w$ A; [1 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ k7 \' I0 ^+ A1 {* ~0 d0 k: s2 WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) z" g2 d: r( \( E- B3 K- g" XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ M0 f/ G/ [" }2 A8 W5 K9 G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; |) W* R7 X: r+ x/ F9 B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, T1 E3 ]. r+ I% Y8 e* ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 ?! u- u0 M- r' e6 J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 Y, b& ~; L. a( k# w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# Z2 K8 R0 {! L; O3 G/ c4 [) Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% a( N1 C0 j+ x; H! C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* x, ?5 z" u9 n5 {' a. t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" L% P9 U6 h2 B  ^+ j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( I, b, H# B7 e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ x: M+ H" f% e; C$ y+ F5 u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 ]7 F8 ?  x& ?6 @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 k+ u% Y9 i1 U6 D; c4 ^: L0 r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 n: \9 ^" G2 j$ `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" E6 d2 c$ c( w' ^8 k( A7 o  A( j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' ~/ X8 ]* }9 P3 A  E! Z5 g/ e7 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( a' H. B* b( m# v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ C2 b' J3 a+ r3 ]; D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) H6 F* I1 h9 W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 U, u/ U8 l$ r: Q7 N3 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 \0 Q. \' X  s8 R, O+ w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 ~0 U% P3 d* Q5 |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 Z$ E  F( q8 }" [' A% ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 J) ?6 a* [+ g6 B  {6 f/ o) o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& k: G* O; _/ H! g6 R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# g2 Y2 L3 [* v' {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, w8 V5 z/ ^3 o% W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 F& F$ R0 b: o+ P2 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 A! _5 @2 r% N$ P" I& n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& k9 M' F( i. I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* X1 ^- I, O$ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, o& o8 O( n5 R$ a' k1 @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>