【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: d+ D9 O0 @: ]6 O) BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ ^8 o* Y% b- g% q& v1 XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ f6 O, Q+ z8 ZI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 t+ h  i) f  |' h! f' ABut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) g2 h3 ^8 K; _0 v* PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' ^; g% Q) ]" X/ ~0 PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 `, X3 v: x  _9 I- XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: E5 K+ C& G, u9 v' ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ p  a8 c4 P1 d3 s; E. q# F1 Z; ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 o9 q, w8 i% ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 S* m* ]: c2 j8 bLove… just the word love
" o6 d9 B! V3 r* \) U/ _* mWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ v4 @6 |% `5 P+ I' mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ D- b" b# \2 u) f" {( Y$ S' u' MIf today isn’t too late,
3 ~$ b$ Z2 W1 c; w# X' \8 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- J6 B0 x7 l, R7 V/ }: bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 g! E$ J3 f& n+ ?, s+ YCan I entrust it to you?
, a9 X. t& I3 I$ I) ]Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ B- D1 n; f1 S; }* Z. l" u1 `  q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% c! f+ _  X! V! ~+ F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 F9 Q2 m+ t8 P9 w2 k3 X% i1 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' N( {* D& ^7 P6 [4 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. W7 N, l7 @" n. ^% s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# d; g+ V% r  s7 l1 `  N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* A+ J" R' v# j+ A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 m. A/ X/ m6 T  f; }0 g- ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ K+ k3 D) p2 ]+ ~, i: Z- F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 K8 W7 S, E  \6 b) x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- j* Q8 U( U! D# ^4 I2 s2 \+ }/ ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ }. _6 x4 I, F4 C) b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, q2 Q$ o3 S! p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ M% f& a% P* L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& ^6 K" ^9 S7 D# l. R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" q3 g! h) U, X1 ~: e3 N$ a8 H5 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" {) n7 s% ~  e$ ?9 I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 {9 h" f" ]( \6 m2 U/ Y) B9 O: K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 t7 v  z' t" O" g, n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 u  i) U, u' v7 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! G  k: b+ o! Y% N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- h) D6 V5 ]: \+ V5 Z/ {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 u7 ~  c% |) K) ?* ?1 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' {0 s4 H) J6 C" S) }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ T: c% f$ e$ h8 k4 k( t+ l" I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ K) |4 L2 {( u% q+ Q8 G: N9 W: Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: m, x4 G- {9 g$ ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' e1 n8 r9 m8 y+ y4 O0 w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* W8 T8 P4 h5 f/ ^/ ?' o: Q0 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  U) f# T4 s( W' W5 K7 |. g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# i( f$ F5 ~8 V2 h" `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 C1 F' q5 i  z8 W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>