【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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) u! Y5 d! C2 s' r: a, ^我另将歌词附在此。
, C' {; R5 ~( ?! L4 n* ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( ~, M9 H, L: F8 V( |; NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ j4 V2 A4 T/ D8 A/ k) B# I( cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 ^% [7 |3 |& [$ e+ _0 G2 c5 ?5 NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# V" m, F3 [/ Y' I) B8 U6 NI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' ^/ q/ g# Z( n, k9 O! xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 x  a  `8 ^) _6 ?2 JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 y- y9 C' `% UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) B' a. Y8 u. v" QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: P% _8 Y0 f+ O# I% w( X% @& QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ {4 l' ^: z$ R5 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& y4 G) n" M! m' A* nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 ~: ~9 |/ G/ y3 x, j( n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  j( q7 C& i* u( ?; Y* K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 g( X$ Y0 m6 o, \/ I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# c8 O1 L% g+ l9 Q2 ^$ F9 m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 v  a7 O7 D1 u6 D1 n) S% v' D! P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 a9 ^, Z3 W: I% k! J1 U0 k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: ]9 v; c5 B" C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: x/ b% c1 h2 Z# D' ^( u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ }) ]5 D) c0 o# F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( b+ p1 P3 f: t: t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ i8 g7 {/ T6 e0 D: ^2 Y  M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' \% ~+ P7 e. Z. J) y" [6 v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; @, a; p9 C. k* M3 M1 r0 G; O; G<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 Q9 R  R+ h) T. W( a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 ~. S: T. I" r; V& g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 \7 f: U& H/ d4 Z; ^8 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ r/ z0 Y/ [7 ^4 I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 U: j9 Z, @. e/ [: c- y! e, x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 X+ Z  X% \1 h% \2 v9 a5 T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- Q+ m/ r8 L; p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 {+ \) S! T5 c  A' r/ |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 n% h3 k, h& p8 x/ {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' W5 x0 X& R5 l5 e5 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- q' G9 |2 j3 f) R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# _! T* V5 i) q( v8 e9 |( x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# y5 \, m- c2 I4 G4 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 Q2 i4 g  \" S# }1 `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>