【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# y- G% U6 X7 q+ ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 s4 Q% J: f9 K" OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 W' @' f3 c0 z3 M/ W  N" c# GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: ~8 _; T0 {3 I. |6 B, K0 AI would probably know how you feel
5 o8 E, R( ~) y1 k* ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) l0 Z$ j/ ], I( D2 K1 tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; M9 j1 {* O. L. B* YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( i2 U$ L. H4 Q" d9 k4 q2 o0 aCan I entrust it to you?
* k9 E9 v* \& t5 m7 s- hEntrust my love within your heart
9 A, A! ]7 ~0 ?# p0 H! O4 MLove… just the word love
% K+ J* L2 |2 F) V* ]0 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- V2 _% M! t* I, b. jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 a: n9 E8 e+ vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( u: r" u- H" L8 n6 HCan I entrust it to you?
5 b; T+ T0 r2 k: @: m- o+ REntrust my love within your heart
/ y5 z; {$ h! E* GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; Z& h7 A7 l# ]6 h+ X2 S" j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( A, b/ E6 J' Y( x% z( F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) D2 }- |2 U# }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" B+ u8 n* u' ?) M$ ~- j2 Q' Y3 g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; K* ?1 g9 n& u) X& j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 Y6 D" F) k+ `/ k1 A4 b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 ]4 {5 A4 N8 ~5 ?: j  `1 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 \: J  ]3 J2 v8 }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ^: z% \* m# q! \+ t9 D2 M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" b. a/ ^! B' V5 N  G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 q% s* J- Z; Y' v* Q. |& S7 |<P>但我不会</P>
: ~: O$ i+ }6 y9 Z% _4 E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! l' ]. ^0 u" }8 v( w7 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 E- {. a9 a) f" r7 ?2 I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 X( v3 H) O# w4 e" D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" ^! M8 @/ \$ i' l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ R% I# h5 r9 L  H) T) z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! h" U, r1 X5 a. P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# J8 q( R/ F. H7 v% t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 }" [* j- L% t3 i0 h/ Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ t- b. ]9 f; u3 ~% y5 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ P- h6 {8 P9 B' W& @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ]% }# |* K7 w! X% Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  z6 Z8 g& K) s2 D8 s0 v7 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 O0 {- j6 b, F4 S& W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 S/ k5 x# C- D5 Y  p& T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 C4 R3 y  n, a+ w/ i) k4 _' V* y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# B  Y. K/ \( {% w/ a( j1 w# `0 [6 ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>