【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; X+ G7 @% [" F7 k- X6 s3 v我另将歌词附在此。
, n3 M/ h( x* D# ~8 U8 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: m" C" N; J0 D% eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- B! L, q) @8 O# e  V' N$ vWe meet and talk everyday,
4 J! r8 y. _- ]5 w8 n: H2 xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" i- D- |1 d7 b- YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 g* N/ C/ t$ F. VWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 [+ ^. O* O. K9 V- I( uI want to confess that I love you,
8 D; b8 i. E) R- y% D2 s2 gBut I never did
5 A5 P  w- a( b% L, k! E1 r3 W# bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: V1 x/ o8 r9 c: H% }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ q( e& M) y; r( t+ \, ~0 {! NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% E5 X+ Q. v7 @: y  @+ V. ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 c7 y4 z  j5 Z4 `( z! lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 h" D; z* o8 j# f( |" QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; O# T. I( G' B; i0 Y0 b2 [. MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. f% y. E+ d3 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" I9 N" n6 s5 ]5 W8 YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& m  Q$ A) G' ~2 k5 B, }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ C4 U. n6 t- D: j: Y( v4 L6 F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! f0 o* w6 a* v3 O5 F' }+ d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 p* d0 z3 _1 \7 W; O- |: z& A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' S2 Q0 l) [; x2 C; K/ B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" @6 o( j6 C9 i% V7 }% @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 K5 Q! I+ J& |$ Z( I' ?. l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 h1 h2 Y! e( U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 _+ K- P( c3 o+ s- B1 r  g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( I+ B8 k" K4 x; Y! K5 T" @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( E' F# ~* j: j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' I2 L7 T( j9 ~; T<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; Q4 t$ Z& b* w9 H<P>但我不会</P>
5 n5 H) s% L- `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 H6 m: m4 c2 G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( u$ H! v3 ?/ }- g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 G" k3 u+ ~. M5 |' m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) D- t- Z: Y: S, U& G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# ^# X* E" q  W8 E0 G: X9 r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 |4 X0 c9 b! v( R& Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  n/ N- E) w3 L0 U3 p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: {* ~* P8 ?& d' g* N' {  l" w# R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 G, ^( d! Y5 I" N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 `% i$ J6 @$ L7 _2 [+ j+ c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( @5 B: |4 ~3 K" u# I6 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ g2 G6 j( ^, f: ?- q( `. m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& h: a- T! T8 c  T+ V  P4 Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- Q* l3 o# j- g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 D0 u5 D9 _/ ]$ c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 h) L- n2 b" L4 B6 B" ~+ ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>