【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
: o- _- k1 s( JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( k6 o8 Z7 g& [3 m; UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& g: ~: e4 q* I2 K/ k2 |0 jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ y- V  h, O( fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ t4 _9 b% Q; r8 n( oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) m: a7 k* l8 s4 T% c7 jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. `2 y$ N; c" i  v* GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- R' P( R8 g' t8 ~* S) q8 F* M- dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- r! ?/ ^& ^* v% @1 L8 o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 Q% v; r, A1 l* {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 h/ u4 y  L/ d# U1 ?7 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 ]: O/ d4 O0 g& c$ b" s' f' U) g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 [" n) Z9 B9 H, v, J: t; b' G$ |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 Q6 I1 V! B7 I3 L: N1 D. W: ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 s  N# h8 z8 R' d6 ^9 Z5 B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 n: W, R% _8 |) f. e5 b! G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, _+ ^( n" z/ G0 i5 I7 x! e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* y# N. t) N/ n* G3 R$ F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& Q5 s8 a: v+ N, Y& C4 g& k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' B4 u6 v; `( ]1 D. j3 n% X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. T4 U6 }% y9 X( W# K/ K& q* }- z<P>但我不会</P>
9 [. H- m- U( b  o; Q6 \& R, T" h  ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ e7 I6 e7 C2 R0 ^/ }, T" _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' ~* M7 O0 S  }. q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& m$ L% L+ G! C# Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 E' p. T0 g( V* I- S% t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( y8 P: V/ h$ Q0 H( E9 W0 F! t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ u% R2 I3 }! P2 b. e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( W. w' f* P5 X4 R( F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 r5 H6 Q, V5 I$ d. F<P>But I never did </P>
2 {0 I0 V: |2 P1 t6 p+ x, {6 L<P>但我不会 </P>
% o; S6 D* v5 z8 v; h/ P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" }$ F8 {. L8 S! L: n; x1 t, l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# o1 ?" e; w3 R% h" u3 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( `- s! z9 r& W, q. e0 B% H/ M* e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 S" D7 _. t3 W3 |4 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. _/ V( Q* t. S) \+ |7 U: Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- {# G) n. i# P- F: I+ X# v. d1 h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ p, i& W! N0 u% f+ L% ^/ t$ p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 g  [1 N4 s  W4 [/ \  N+ P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) O4 N2 W# {) b8 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>