【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" n4 }, c1 K5 {$ M" A6 @4 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 R* m4 V; Y8 [" AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, S, b7 K) X" Q. P, \% r4 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
* Y1 t! `- s0 S5 Q  Y) w1 {With the moon kissing it every night
4 z5 v, l) T' a% f( ~, u/ S7 vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# e. n# H. ], a8 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ E! P- n3 G' u' N" a& [: Q) Q& aEvery other word you utter is love
9 p! V/ E' w; d6 s3 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 R: {  I! [! B$ v' ]* N) _Nothing can compare to my love
/ e- {9 w5 z" }  }% o5 ^% u- h" sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 J( N$ n) H0 b1 {4 n, hI want so much to see inside your heart
% A( m, P" ]  @7 e9 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; v2 }7 _; A- T6 N; R, Q) p  Y9 nI’m still filled with fear
6 M4 E* R! G- R, k. {1 j! GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% [3 g" @2 x, D4 v6 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. i9 i7 `- I, n9 G5 }With such a tongue as yours,
8 F1 L. s# [) F: w* LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% K0 I9 f: o$ F4 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 ]9 W- _6 Y' \) Z7 b6 k% k: oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 T, e8 g/ F( t& {; M8 ]$ w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" v6 x. X# n: r) v+ K- \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) @/ @& f4 ]; A! y3 n6 x4 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 j4 I5 R( E7 g* @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 k7 t. z2 W/ P0 R* J! K6 F; t* `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ |" B1 V( g/ U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 i0 p) e7 G7 `0 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# `0 B/ P/ y0 v( E( |, @( M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. L3 f" c9 ?. d9 w* f& U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ~) @6 \8 Y2 u- ~; ~! g9 R5 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. d1 y4 E! \, P& m. k2 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* O2 `; X/ _4 P2 m( c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 M) ~' H6 _% t+ A/ y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ V5 ]& f6 l, K( r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 S8 T% V9 z( G8 c( E+ e) a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ]- c3 C3 J; a; N6 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 a1 Q- n5 D5 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) T' @% D9 z) u- D  R1 V6 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 \: c: K: Q2 L5 K2 W& t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 i# e& x7 S; @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# {: o3 Z4 f4 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: b& B; ~6 G" v: [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( p5 G8 G+ n. V  K2 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>