【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 l% _0 H" l0 m3 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 T: {6 \3 t7 b! r: bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& \: z* ~& w" ?& y  `# I6 z( Z% |) [The sky is happy down to its soul
1 M+ E! p" I/ U8 R7 @" _With the moon kissing it every night
, u( R7 _1 z3 c7 b& g4 B. T  YSeeing the sky content with its love
( ?7 D6 K9 I: m3 v: L# ^- ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 r5 l- g8 h2 v- t5 OEvery other word you utter is love
4 S  H1 O- i" i5 H% @1 u# C( sI really want to know just how much you love me
* c3 `: A4 s' G$ T  u( s, Y: xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 h# ?) V0 j5 P1 P5 H: VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 `4 f5 d/ G. E0 }: [' a' w1 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, n3 N% h8 s3 G% _9 M( f" tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- k7 r, m% B1 |2 ]5 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# v) G- S6 ~- ]% D- Z! ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 }& T* V2 E9 q# R7 B$ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, \& {5 y5 n& w+ F+ l1 Z: M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. |3 M8 ^+ n' C" ]! e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 U$ p0 T2 ~" L! K. I/ h: |. r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ?4 e& F+ ~* K5 `( r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 B5 ?( y( i& Z3 {) i* q. @! H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ m$ f% @  R1 p7 [% u. H; l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# J0 b+ M  B  X) g1 {1 P# b' q, G<P>你无需担心</P>
2 \" Z3 ?- S# f0 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 F4 M: k, Y8 s& J6 o3 V) \1 C, h3 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; t& o- Z+ B; B$ b2 ~- ^( L2 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 [) a# L% F# u! a/ r6 D8 z1 [9 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( }, Z0 O* g2 {+ Z$ w! t3 t. |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: h! {6 e- l" ^8 w1 K8 f0 }: z% h! B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 n) y5 {0 q% ^3 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 y5 ^; T* b' y# {* Z! U% `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! T/ \( _  \9 X+ o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ w) W4 p. A9 @! W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 {- D$ A2 @1 z$ U) U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ [5 S! m3 z3 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  M8 [1 S4 S* T% ~: a. q% R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ N  ~) J( j3 r6 V+ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" i' k3 s- h1 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 A$ i# Z8 Z+ g# W: u" M: N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 o: b- k4 V5 e7 Q/ i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: E7 W4 U2 u& X) f9 n+ h" J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 n8 c% J1 ?* } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>