【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 t) q, _: ]% }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% ]* c5 d( H0 |3 P5 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, E: N" E2 l# Q. J% fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 z, ~$ s. @8 O5 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: Z& D4 _( h5 y8 ]3 L3 I, m+ h+ S- fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( @* P6 m5 l3 I9 }. KI love you I love you with all my heart
$ V+ D* W" f& I0 x6 {2 t) jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" @! x; R1 H  \# Q" xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ D& d, P% i" [0 F* }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( S7 B8 u* E6 T) w+ z, K" dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% j+ u  k. Q5 z% J4 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) T" ^4 Y( N; Z1 a9 k3 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  r& K& k  x/ R7 w$ \4 n, s5 a, I8 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 H9 c9 t( V4 Y5 J7 F' N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 u* o6 u7 O+ I- ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, r& e* q  W+ t0 k7 s( D. N; n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; R1 }- S' a/ `. g  I8 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 |9 G4 C! y/ }+ `5 v0 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& c: p0 R- t! T/ T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* }% {7 F* B1 @$ N' |" {4 C! C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 Z; F% T7 J! ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& W$ e$ t2 X' L$ V' S! L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, D3 ~- C  Y: h2 k; [# |& ?7 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% |) _4 H" S# ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ t. f- S4 G' O! Q+ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. H% R/ e$ o5 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: W. Y# [( c! B6 E+ L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. o2 t9 ~7 E+ d/ q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 t* L' z  \" g' g! `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" P; j2 K3 K' [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: C& A- S! i! @+ `2 l, C! J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" K, s" s$ I" f4 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' t% ^+ z2 W9 ]9 F- w5 t+ R4 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 b% c/ U) e/ r7 J% U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! A5 y) m5 P3 L8 E: F. T) d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, p; q0 d6 P$ N' y. M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ?3 z4 E# F) B) O( d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 ?: \' B$ O6 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 A. S1 k# W' a; S  E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- C0 l7 u5 k1 C/ Y1 L6 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
- R+ k) M2 e& \5 W' g3 Y: |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 O/ m; y% m2 z% K3 t8 h9 s( s2 q5 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 E6 [2 O5 m! c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 U8 Q; O- y3 D+ G% z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 S0 S5 I3 ]( |; c- U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 c! v" C) S$ ~. V9 O6 d9 @- X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! r2 [/ o8 ~9 ^& }0 [% I" e2 T' p. T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ |% w- T$ W/ c1 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>