【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 U" }6 g6 m$ G8 T' f+ v+ CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 x6 ~* r4 i) R- n* i/ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 G: |# ~8 r* ^- P8 ^5 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ H! N# M# j) {: xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. r' ?6 Z! i1 FEvery other word you utter is love
/ G. j- j) U6 n6 @9 |( _I really want to know just how much you love me
$ T/ N5 S( F7 V: @( G, @6 I+ eI love you I love you with all my heart
+ y4 B( g0 t# q; E4 c" d7 RNothing can compare to my love
/ Y  U* t$ e8 D) x/ S# @) e. mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ~7 z9 K% A; V- sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 ^6 K% g& ^+ H1 {8 b1 [4 N' c+ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 m7 T2 u) |2 x8 |4 v/ KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 C4 I6 A/ t- _; DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; n  u9 }' j" B6 ?! O7 F% v7 o! o9 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( o. A* t; a3 J! L- y6 k# B" h4 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 a, D$ V  z" A0 t: B1 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 G- C  L- J* v' u. g- J! B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& s1 p0 Y! L# U) N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  N7 g2 X% @. c& V. s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% c3 K7 r* m. _: n  \; H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- }7 p4 `% a, S" u6 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 B; T1 L4 G* q+ W" A. g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 O6 l. ~9 u5 [+ B# _2 U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, v7 u/ i  Y. P! ?, a9 ?/ s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" ?3 c$ u* Z6 ?; L8 G& Y$ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ N  m7 f8 I5 h: @' b6 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' H8 h0 U$ Y0 y3 w$ ^! T" B" n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* }5 a; W; D- d1 t, x. N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: D9 h5 O- b  |7 x* D# X+ r0 a; |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. S: c% l8 E" S0 y, j( l- Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  \: F( k) U' M  J  M" s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' S  |$ c9 E4 A' |, ?; f6 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  R: y1 N* [) V9 n1 A; q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ q1 a+ h# K9 I  Q. `<P>I regret not dying</P>
' v3 s+ [! S& O/ V2 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) A1 r1 ^2 D# G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 U8 K: J: Y% n7 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  t: p/ l0 L  Q% B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. c5 r  k5 U7 q4 g* k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# S% y- D5 V2 o" R% j" h/ D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 T* [2 B# }! n+ `3 M; J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 c* U/ j  G$ q2 t8 W! Z( s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 K" t, i; e7 k/ O: q2 O! F( h# L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ d/ `/ F, U. T$ |/ P. k) G4 m! l我请你剖开它
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& e, r: V8 h. V' [1 a! c6 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>