【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) t  R& U! w6 {( Q* u. G3 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ {- `% v5 C; P- BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 \5 Z, n7 h+ e2 g% y: l" G# tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 X7 _+ U! g: v, B7 B8 P, zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; M- p% ~) O( j% VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- h+ g  y9 ~/ @- U% T1 g6 {, Z0 yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; e7 m$ g: c* C9 }6 V+ t# d! `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ Z+ U, e1 H2 v' d! X* y9 f: LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% m% Y! K5 f; q7 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) c5 {8 j8 G9 Y; s  u( ^7 [" Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" i6 w/ m& W6 L3 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 l0 O6 `0 O- t$ l6 Y" [' f3 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 i' l6 r/ d) t# g2 q7 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 b( t& Y( C, H/ z1 Z# L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 e; V9 T7 P1 d& i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, K! c/ n( ~3 N* ?+ I. y& ^, V. ~5 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 J, P. V& C  f! i* S5 n0 \) L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; Y- q# c2 @; ?  o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ M* c9 R( C/ N; E# C9 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 f4 A% b, Q1 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% T6 V( P- I) A4 r# O" Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 _; L( U: O+ p3 K) F$ H2 i9 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. {# U. r0 e) N& G9 |, Y! h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: S! e- u& t0 Y% L% b3 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: L3 o  r! N  Z3 o2 t$ _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% x7 b: |. O0 a; |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- c/ b0 R& ?% e1 }: x2 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ e- \( E& [6 t! k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 U1 y; `' T  v) Y. Z$ u# w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  f- ~, I8 {* _2 s5 Q: C" L. _3 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>