【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 K4 F& _& j+ C1 g4 J9 x, D' P! FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! v! M! }2 E: V% m% d" e$ PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 R$ d0 G4 Z5 e9 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* d) `& L1 v2 fWith the moon kissing it every night
; x7 Z' G& S  ]9 w" eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# F$ E0 ], J9 p& |' G2 IYou needn’t fear anything
7 i. j/ _7 z. K' ?' n% v( C5 G8 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 V" y) y' `; _4 \+ S  Z# ?& EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 p9 k+ x0 y8 o( l8 V: SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 p. y$ }, {+ P  F* e$ wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ?" z* [6 t* G) n& L& m# II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: d, j) j5 _8 [& _0 _3 q, U; JWith such a tongue as yours,
3 t9 X  ]; x* eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, K0 A2 N) J( n; U0 _8 v- w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% r( K: Z1 y0 d; ]4 L$ d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 b- W% S. T* b% F" ?; F8 `0 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 n, F$ {" X9 v& w# R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% I- R" w& T/ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& D9 ?# E: P7 Q0 l& L4 y) G4 B7 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) M: V% m9 S3 a/ b" O$ ?" q. D! g# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 F* B7 d5 @3 {* t# V4 e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 i/ T+ R  N; w/ q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: z; t3 g, ?) A1 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 L5 ?+ }/ B. Y, M3 t7 O) T' Y* X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Y* ~; S, q# {. h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, r: w1 [, i& I* @9 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" c) `# @( Q% y3 j1 e# U# C# A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  i' d  Z  w/ H! d% v7 Y0 n' n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ G  E" p+ A3 E. l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; n; X7 e2 j% Z, g, r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 u9 S' D$ {0 f; [5 }2 s1 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ F; N" f8 Z% [- i1 M7 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 d6 L. u: y' @  D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! ?9 a: F3 P1 h0 X9 _0 x. D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 R6 |# ?2 A5 u  V6 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 m* S! R  |& @! d& w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 q- M" J" R" r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 R9 \; W( j" ~9 {6 _- d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& A3 F6 s* v' m1 W8 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
: g* d- u. P5 y  w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  H5 A/ m, {8 S$ R- P8 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ c, s  x8 E+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' P9 G* v/ P7 p1 o9 _. _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# x! g1 C$ M4 Z, a, `) t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 N# H- W- ~+ c' I+ e( Y3 p7 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 M8 [' n4 E2 x% M# n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 j3 J3 ]+ S, j+ j: @3 E9 J8 z- h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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