【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 @: k$ X1 }4 B" }/ cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' P/ k/ e! x9 Z  _- ~- CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; i& e! m; G. C6 w9 e' gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( X& d% E8 z- ]$ ^9 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 w( y' {/ ?+ h4 ^. V2 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! R0 |6 q# O* Z; W9 ?- }Every other word you utter is love
; Q  W. h" T; m% O0 v8 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ P( I% z! V) yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" I( x$ d. N6 fI want so much to see inside your heart
% s4 N0 j5 C% s# ]/ oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! _* q, F8 G4 H0 MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. b$ o+ Y6 ~9 t0 u* i8 B7 {: nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( G; j! t7 d* |" k- T2 ?9 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! o& z: [/ n  f& |; gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 O1 \$ h9 X: L* d$ y3 q" T9 p3 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 y" g* R0 a$ E! r1 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 _  k, N+ ~% B2 [- u3 R. o+ |% b4 t/ K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 g1 ?3 o' K  I! D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 v' \0 k" g6 S. D# G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- N$ _* t; U4 T% B+ v; R9 `* v/ q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* Y* J% _4 P0 w6 M6 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, y6 V+ G4 U: ]5 A) I: O  G& }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 X7 j0 S1 s0 W0 O/ L7 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: r7 i: X' ]+ k; J, y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  h( n6 f4 f& R8 e/ |7 f# `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' E9 ^* q7 C' {5 g) L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# w  v* N9 F$ O( E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ Q; J- A3 ?; f, g& A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ^- r, ?( q7 F8 g3 |( a4 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( F$ W" m8 k2 l7 y7 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* X/ G( B% R9 K& h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: `2 Q, h- r7 g4 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 i) x2 I- |7 E& C8 h* ]+ t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 i& p! @& g4 R) |) ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% e0 M% J% Y0 n8 k, W5 j! @% v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ T! x9 N1 O7 l, j+ e$ E/ s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ `) }* c) x- _  ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 g/ k+ R7 B5 n' ~  U! p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 m3 M) r3 t% w. T+ e+ @8 D" `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" r% N' B: Y2 C2 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ g  f1 ~  S( T9 I2 |) R<P>I regret not dying</P>
: G2 u  w$ q" ?8 X6 v0 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, M. D9 s2 i! f& |# J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 I  q  v1 s+ z$ |( E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, G& R8 R& f  c* r" o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# g! k$ K- F6 J: O! ]% C8 B# x& T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>