【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 b6 X, K3 R, R# kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" w. d- z: U; G7 L( a* a; _Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 O: K9 g9 f' [- H3 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ q8 R. V; u. W9 `With the moon kissing it every night
# {7 ?) z8 }: j1 R2 z* eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# I( b# J8 S% xI really want to know just how much you love me
/ a* w, m, E. J9 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& [- c  [! d% j0 w1 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" Z- w" ?% p" ^% O7 _' G) EI want so much to see inside your heart
6 f5 [) J* p/ V. F3 Y! ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 Q/ m. o; g! U9 O1 h0 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' q$ G7 L0 L# f0 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 q" N( A( Q4 [3 f+ D6 L' h1 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ T" I( A5 O$ [. r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% Y, K0 x% [$ ]+ q4 y1 S8 F$ V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ F  c* d: X. v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 B! Z9 [: S- l1 D* V3 D- u! z$ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* F, O8 c& F1 X7 C0 X0 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^+ S4 Z, A3 ?/ Z+ O3 N, s  B) u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# w. }3 f/ o5 @* S7 e# u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  j0 p' X  }8 S5 L+ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 l/ S: F3 w% r& K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  n: X, l0 D& x" h( b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) g9 z" _/ @! D5 L  \6 T; p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ w0 L+ C- z  V$ {/ r8 P5 T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, i% D0 L2 f- Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ~# h+ o0 N' b1 l- L% {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' {; Y4 o) c* t9 J* z# X& Q& j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 j& O1 F, D5 D+ ~( H# ]" l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 N' x( F! W$ T5 I2 Y- I) l( u7 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 O& A6 ?4 T* p- j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& C9 b* h2 N0 l7 r* I% N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ D& i- {! p7 W1 n: ~; \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 v  V- |% X# J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; X( T( B- r0 r# t! F/ U9 h/ O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  O( w$ r7 m7 Q) ~% F& f7 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. z9 Q, c! \+ D& e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>