【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- _; h2 ?6 O; Y+ z; F' WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( A& g7 ]/ m, g( {5 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ h8 F( D; M8 o8 B. D6 @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' i+ w" I' n0 ]7 e" RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- }# }+ q! \& KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 `" C8 x: D0 m: wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: Q7 ^+ c$ V7 a& S) t, U* I* q$ rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 ]3 ]+ Q" R$ j( Q; l0 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  ~4 y' F& D8 n  c/ FI want so much to see inside your heart
' n6 o6 d6 _! D& U& B" lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. z% L4 q7 i6 ]! r& a, h" d8 n  SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& N1 }4 d8 Z1 h+ k) `0 rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 j( Y6 R: A, b) r; ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 A4 z! y9 q) G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ e8 m' ~7 W$ m2 a" e8 f9 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 q% `. M# A6 p  M7 o7 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. F+ M1 R" E$ a! r- J- E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& g8 _5 A; C5 Y" _- ]! J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  h5 m2 |& U' P; ^* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( c3 L+ n! V4 g, ~$ G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ a+ [4 z( y9 {; T. u& D4 ^5 \1 X8 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 Z% f+ H, \* q7 h7 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  A7 N: }2 X1 V& {( W4 \) H3 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 P0 z) |0 g) I& M; D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  n: s0 |' y+ U# Y! ?1 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 i' [4 I4 S" \: h+ a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 g$ m. d7 H+ T  x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 D2 z  {, h% Z  A. U- c9 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; B4 g1 H$ Q/ M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ n* t8 p. }9 }! F. s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# h, @* K( h3 x5 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, S* L$ P: ^/ G' Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 D: }: C, f& m' I' i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; d, F, Q. k+ z2 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ P6 {, N& T" L( P- _2 E% k1 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# l* q0 r  j/ N$ N: ]' Q8 l7 Z4 C9 M9 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" F# e4 t1 L0 A  x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ Y% k5 F4 q7 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. v4 X3 v) `$ N* H$ L+ a" j+ Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ I! K0 r8 U( {# b( e+ H我请你剖开它
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' |  y* q5 E* w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>