【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 L0 L3 {1 E/ x5 c+ q歌词我附在后面。
3 Q/ M4 c9 Y0 w+ g' H& bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! h9 c- G5 U+ g0 x9 d5 ~3 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. q; ^7 y( E; a% d0 g! P) h* U/ YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  P0 w0 m4 u# @1 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ I* [! L/ I2 d1 ^. ~- I& bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: ?4 B) e5 y3 G2 @0 h' r: DI really want to know just how much you love me
2 F& |, V$ t: |: v' |1 BI love you I love you with all my heart
' F( }6 `, W: p! ?7 ]' s9 ]; CNothing can compare to my love
1 C+ p* K* h3 z1 K; kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ W- y5 r5 N8 ^8 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' D% g1 L' J. QI want so much to see inside your heart
6 e% q7 _# \4 t( l2 m% C8 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 h8 |( Y+ A3 @" kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ?# R4 ~! u. g, R$ i2 RWith such a tongue as yours,
) R) E* l) D+ sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 T! l# M; f9 n1 {7 X$ @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ d+ B+ t4 M0 E/ U& \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ F( n$ |8 }2 i1 O9 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. g( U4 ~9 k% b, x  N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ N$ l" l* H$ \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 n2 K/ B, E. e# [4 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 [! _% i( F7 ~0 H$ p) O& z6 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& H5 F, B/ j: S: J( ^3 x5 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ w$ m1 y) A4 a+ z9 R! u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 w! {- f- j, @: \( q7 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! K& P3 ^2 d* U! J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 Q" {. N3 X; q; a1 F8 s' K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ~0 L5 R0 Y: P6 D' a; Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; S$ C8 T' W% L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# H/ v" S" {7 S9 Z( ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  [$ p8 B- \) X; D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 A; C; R: Y! i. i0 g6 D6 K0 m  F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ T9 t3 |/ B- O5 n) q/ ?, {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- l. |9 m4 ~0 W  \% g7 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" W6 T, a+ l% C) z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& b% [- e! e4 G9 f8 b- Y& {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ?# O, |/ L% C) }0 D% z! f" A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' d1 @! [# X( D% y8 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# _7 `. R, @6 E* d( h; F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% c. b, [3 `* {# C7 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 \& k0 b* a# G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 L: H) w- H2 d0 d' v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 {, g9 I  C) Z' c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& M6 ?1 F8 J4 ?2 ^8 M) h5 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# s/ a, }! i9 I1 P3 Q3 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ h; D# v  ~5 k! n. g$ F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 S+ W0 g/ q, U2 v3 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# f  Q( s+ S* M7 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: P) g$ `4 u) j! s# R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 _4 V( V) t" g- N, \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, I# V* K6 N4 J. z' }( Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) _+ X/ ?& P) ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>