【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& \) M2 b/ H% _1 M* n$ J' @The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 s/ d, b( P; A1 @$ u+ A: IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: C  O0 o) q2 I5 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 ^( H6 j7 l/ I/ R, G9 h& dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 F( O# _5 p3 D9 \9 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, Q- V9 k' A6 P6 r5 a; W& XYou needn’t fear anything
7 o0 o5 R9 ^8 f2 W  XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; H, q; ^# @" L5 K! s& \Every other word you utter is love
% b' y; ]: X% V6 a) ~, @* G( Z: r0 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ g7 G' D/ V* v- aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ z( b. z: M: a/ u. bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 S( T5 m' S. K; O, K" _2 N+ A( vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; C$ U$ X% A3 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 |3 M% I4 r: t4 A' LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) u7 H# a, M; o- d) u' e3 ~" kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ i+ j1 `( g: X# I( H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  r. h) v# M2 \# i3 |9 ^* d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ v% T& O5 |5 ]% N. i9 R/ }" v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) [1 n- L9 U9 F- _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 f) Z, b3 U& }, a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ i) Z8 K0 x9 I. l% R" d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 H) [' l+ j: @. n# Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. g: Z: X, x5 M1 C! n: Q: z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 U; U& q7 H9 }! a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: R6 k2 K9 v  A# e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. V& Y& S1 K6 v0 {7 O" p% x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 M" ?9 }( J0 Y0 a9 h" K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# O# A* W* D* s, q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  q% {( ?! G9 W3 Q/ H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 c" u6 G7 {, }/ G0 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 Q9 a7 s* Y7 h8 n! t, }5 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; }2 q% v* X& i' J! X2 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- g6 t  u2 K6 h% l+ n2 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 R5 o4 `* _' q; J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 N$ p! \# s$ w: v0 |+ \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  w5 u6 m; G' `  R( x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# A7 n" p0 D: w! [/ I4 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ R7 H5 `) x3 Q) X# X1 ^2 L6 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" E# z4 q# @: h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; M1 J0 @- Y; N( h! t5 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 r1 ~* p( S; [) \9 A# z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>