【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 {% Q% ^: f7 ^, h5 ]5 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 o  ^. T) C" V) \0 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( y& q, d. S2 ^% Z6 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; A+ ?/ N6 i% E* \4 I1 Q7 s; OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) B* C1 Y8 L  @/ V7 i( SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. G; p& Y( g# k: ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 G7 P* [" L* }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 c  K* `1 s6 r6 @; T4 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& c* A7 d1 ~& D/ SI want so much to see inside your heart
+ r* D* Q/ R5 k6 ]6 \7 q5 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; b7 D/ `) `% E+ l% OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 f% U# ?1 w  G6 YI regret not dying
5 @6 r5 G! |3 k# FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 D- o7 e" D: ^% dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 V7 \- `) ]" }8 {& a, _8 G, gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% s( j! j: j8 N6 N1 m1 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% ]& O! [" V) a& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# N9 h. P6 p# j3 I4 y. q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 f1 w- f- r0 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- o6 ~& K* a. ^6 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( @: |+ H. M$ L5 s! ?0 W# W3 O) I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 u6 V6 F, }" J6 D9 \2 S$ H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# h; x! ^2 M6 h  c$ `0 _5 v2 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  o4 U  C- h" T$ ~7 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# Q% Q! h8 O7 Z- E; F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 u" D( t$ A# O. X4 M. p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 F6 ^1 x2 X$ \5 C8 G* B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 p+ D: g% J. H# U+ A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. D  @/ C' p: w" @. @8 I6 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 ~* \3 t& X: p6 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- S1 \* j; J7 l( [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 z5 u) `7 T% j( O% o8 |) Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# o9 `3 j/ w9 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  s+ w  l" e) L2 H4 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 t. N/ m* m0 s. v, p2 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" g6 ?& `* ]5 J( q  W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 q( }: Z* d( H4 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" H7 O) \( M% Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 u! {. y- j  n. N; r4 y1 q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- S1 Y( q! D  T- M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>