【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( i& O) [0 Y$ b- q2 u4 r! p1 ^- c歌词我附在后面。
- I' P0 ]# P/ \' U, O6 I  a5 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 u2 r3 O; ~4 t( i. @9 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! d+ S+ p5 z( E/ ^; uThe sky is happy down to its soul
! y2 [, T- s7 `With the moon kissing it every night
' l7 V8 D6 T8 Y9 }1 _0 ?+ b; ySeeing the sky content with its love
1 I+ [# R- a% V, e9 E9 }- M8 v/ V% KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 w  H) P, K% M- s+ qYou needn’t fear anything
% Y' m- `. J/ R  z1 b4 Y. w. DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ r- @/ g- d- d# AEvery other word you utter is love
; U3 o$ u2 E! _$ e; [2 s6 xI really want to know just how much you love me
4 ^# `8 b. ]6 B/ P* e1 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! |  i; c" ?4 L+ W4 rI want so much to see inside your heart
0 f6 E: V8 D; {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 b  M( N& b4 Y8 Q8 {I’m still filled with fear
: V$ t: {6 `/ H5 X( W! _" O) lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* M! C# B" A' |* Y. T7 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ L: H' N- \1 ~" \1 m# b: J* M, d% J3 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& J' A5 }7 n! N2 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& U1 k7 k3 v( R. M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' {' Q2 F# \3 S, D* h. }0 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 {( q7 w! g9 Z- w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 W6 }7 K6 w( K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ B- t5 F4 P* ?/ X2 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 @! B5 ]. u% v: B7 s/ G: T* p7 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" I5 ]7 N# `% F# ~; T+ r; l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( p( P: k$ r4 S# T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 w  k$ Q5 O, i9 ?# ~" s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- x8 j4 |9 {9 `' a7 ^! @* a- x6 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, ~9 P- E( F, N4 B/ E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 ~- p  \- q( t; D# r  ]. N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. i) U4 I- f8 Y& @7 @/ f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ~0 J7 _% ^$ I9 J- N+ `( y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: h5 u% A& E' [9 p* a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" H+ v* L) @0 h' s7 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* S3 ~" M; m; F" \6 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 Y$ _0 V0 d& [" E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 z5 V$ d1 o+ C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 Y1 u; I8 H+ T; [- a* Q! T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" S/ I9 i, s% T% s2 A* J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( S0 m- B; |, l1 F% O+ i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& @2 U+ i6 ~1 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" |- o4 u: d' I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& H7 ^4 F* y  z* S  L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 d* v; h5 g3 j; E, q5 J  o+ H8 ?9 V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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