【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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) i: {- C8 L, y  GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
8 t* E- @- V5 J" ]: P) P1 {深藏在我心底的那句
$ F7 D; m$ _7 b! Q5 S" k我愛你  
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4 B; J$ a# ^( C' h; FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
& v+ C) \4 j, G9 s2 f- o你已經深深的佔領了
+ U1 E  n1 y4 b, u4 U$ T6 a我的心

/ a# [" g9 p$ vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
/ N9 ]* Y: z8 @3 B' z) {* S5 ]  y9 p還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ o2 Q9 R" V' I# J* \I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
* @9 w2 T% L  e; Y3 c4 w( e7 b" M# L搜尋著你的魂
) _- C, N$ f  @5 C1 [我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
, U. j* T% p; _  ~為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
* G3 H6 s1 j8 |But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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& w& p+ d# ]/ c  ]- N1 G1 iIf today isn’t too late,
" P% Z; ~6 S0 k0 d6 I* H* Y4 B% G8 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

3 j1 c  w( E3 ]: g/ M$ q$ c希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
1 B/ ?/ h, I/ R我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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7 W$ y6 N2 r( E不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

' \, t6 J& S; ]( O* B# T. fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
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1 ~% u  l: _$ u6 L+ N收在你心裡
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# i3 i6 i, P" F7 `: h1 W, cLove… just the word love
' {- b/ j  n. W( fWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

. h8 }! z6 s* v7 aI want to confess that I love you,
; J2 \' h: i- i. ABut I never did

7 X8 I& `+ k$ b& O% q愛你 我想要告訴你
$ E: C: P" v, ?: {  m; f  s卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
$ z7 @  Q$ ?% x5 o: ?" S& l" F你將從我指間滑漏

/ O3 O/ F. g* m7 {( b/ N8 H3 kIf today isn’t too late,
2 U1 W' V/ Z; J0 a" QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

/ Z* i* I: Z$ ]# g希望今天還不會太晚
! L& s# K5 y% U5 `! ^+ J讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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* O* n) j' t3 P, I" hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
) ~2 f6 H- Y, c# X收在你心裡

- s+ H) ], r& v# ^Can I entrust it to you?
& N) I+ _) W, F" d% S4 s9 \Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
" n3 w9 Q* d$ F( d6 X. w9 M托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 }( y; T8 w2 A7 e" S2 w- pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

+ o* E) X  |" x! L% ^! I4 O3 S皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
8 M) C! f& W# w2 K2 ^7 b0 Y+ l凝視著星空
+ R7 ?% B3 A5 _' u" R! {我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. i. {& \6 s# M9 a  LSeeing the sky content with its love

, b: \2 E& F' l( E月光映在我的眼底
' x1 s( E$ b, j! z$ n月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
$ b; Q' _$ W& \( a$ `% h5 }. W星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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3 K3 `8 ~( t' i0 w( f7 l我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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2 Z* p( C" K& f' t- F你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
$ }9 P7 k/ M1 |  {! H堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
, J% k4 {/ {; l9 L1 @2 iI really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
3 g. Y; w7 K  a( q% a我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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+ n: w+ p( Q4 y, c9 s% h能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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: D! j4 {/ {& U/ q# Z, ]; TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ u1 q$ J1 Q" j6 x整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
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: `0 t9 @& ^1 D+ Q( w  }我想看透你的心
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& ?  m, d3 R& @. z. Q  q% uI invite you to rip it out
% F5 ~" D# K8 i0 ~7 _1 U( MTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
- r  x$ |& o8 h" N0 \: |: a我願意用生命
  F' n: F# H9 B6 _9 X3 a% G4 F來證明我的愛

+ J' b% ]' K4 m2 j9 J' w" |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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1 n3 m# n3 v- W1 A& t" {6 Z6 C我依然滿心憂鬱
* b+ K- K  {. R你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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. Y) j+ g1 f: L1 l; wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
8 s3 V2 n( |5 ^1 k/ }& dIt’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

9 Y' q+ a3 k) F/ ^這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- f9 r9 }. k( ]. t如果我真有千百張口
4 m: {% z' a8 d; K我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love

2 Q1 q' ]  f' h: F+ e: ^+ V- m訴說千萬個
$ `# I! ?6 h9 T5 A, u4 N9 s3 ~8 `愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

' n$ A: ]% ~, l是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒