【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
. d' w6 e# b5 rvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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1 U$ t* u6 `1 m" ~& O: AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 i% {5 ^& Z# [; Z! \凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
) j1 m0 J) P: ]4 ]* h( d- N看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
; Y* Z& d" L( C" q; dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
% ^, r1 S( F3 B% P3 kEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
& u4 a2 b! }: LI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
( w9 L! }+ {% {% P0 MI love you I love you with all my heart
4 P& c" }+ E9 x3 C爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

+ J! e/ X5 @$ ?6 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 e) s9 i; U3 q- g) v6 q9 A能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
' S2 Q+ h; Q$ `  g9 B我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 o' H8 \$ u& a% p2 ~若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
) a% U$ k9 T3 u0 G3 ^1 H3 r/ lI’m still filled with fear
$ U' I- O( [  g& Y+ m' e9 m* J4 H可我依然满心忧虑
: C" P) r$ [6 M" gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
  @4 T0 s* L1 K; {) v- y7 lI regret not dying
% W" j* Y# g( |. V' u( L真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
' o) F7 u$ A( U- Y/ ^. X我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
% o# r* f+ q" A' d; `- P/ n$ D0 C也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
, W* F& F# A$ m& v. wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
0 R3 E2 B$ I+ e3 k( \% ?4 ~$ ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 B  u/ u# p$ ^/ h. k! B2 E若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
( ]$ m- F: n! U9 O" @  P, O9 o向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ {- O( ], J( Y" q  q6 d: o; J从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- K4 J4 Z: y- K2 H, [$ h+ C) y爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
# P6 z' y9 e- H1 B/ m9 U7 h; d) BFrom the first moment we met,
9 e" i6 B# n# X8 T. V2 z对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
$ e8 k, Y( Y7 Q, jWe meet and talk everyday,
' E( t8 V& Z+ ^& K' Z4 ]; C7 U0 l你我每天见面寒暄
1 q% s) |! g+ B( V3 sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 Z3 Y$ b9 I5 C2 c/ s: ?: J奈何从未谈及内心
4 M0 J0 R) r1 K5 u$ B' t1 i( G) `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
7 `) n$ z# n) n: L6 R% b7 TI would probably know how you feel
. m# G/ m6 `$ w6 D7 M, t或能知你心意
8 h9 k% N/ n# \! n3 F. V* Z# T4 WLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
6 q0 k% F7 d. s' H+ IWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ }" A$ G4 @- \4 k7 z+ C为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
7 C& D# L: `" L4 M( D# OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
0 n" J* _3 `' E  z, W. ~& i% L假如还不太迟
) i4 Y! ]( |  @! Q. F/ |9 O1 N) T3 aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* M/ t. M2 f- X8 q- T今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
( R+ Y3 _* h+ B5 A: WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
& w& p$ l2 F$ T. e6 CEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

- U# N8 [' t' @( x2 U0 g3 o' Z9 iLove… just the word love
3 l* B/ D. y! ~+ p爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
; _. L, P7 x- l, G我多想向你表白
But I never did
1 a+ C% o" \* q9 ^7 ~& m1 Z却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 C1 ?3 z. o: S, AIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 b# r3 z5 w$ P不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
* s( v: `% o  T- q$ b, A$ k可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

( N" O6 O/ M- @Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
. E  k5 I. N: k+ V5 W5 T# P4 e. dEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
4 ?5 @* e# R' o老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
) P1 `4 F3 O% W' P老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
! b; R5 ~3 H/ }6 O. R% {刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

" X) u4 e2 M/ T, U7 M$ U不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。